CFS 1: I'll have Rice with dat!

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#1 of CFS (Character Focused Stories)

This is a character focused story. A benefit from my patreon which I tend to advertise on my FA. The general gist of CFS (character focused stories) is that they involve at least one of my patrons as the character focused in the story, thus the name. This story feature's Zdarlight's OC: Rice, who my gnoll torments and devours! Fun stuff!


Fluorescent lamps hung from the ceiling, several tables stretched outward, a mini bar, many people sitting at the tables. This modern restaurant contained many creatures of different shapes and sizes both patron and employee alike. Amongst the many, a large gnoll wore a barely fitting casual suit headed toward a vacant table alongside a Pachirisu. Both of them sat down at the table as the server headed off for the moment.

"Hehehe, like dah place I picked out, Rice!? I think it was a perfect lil' place for us!" The gnoll spoke with a cackle. Hulking over the Pachirisu sitting on the opposite side of the table, the gnoll stared at them intensely.

"Y-yeah it's pretty nice! Thanks for taking me out to dinner, Loquie. I am going to need to look through the menu a bit." The Pachirisu picked up the menu quickly and flipped through the large pamphlet.

"I dun' think I need to look at dah menu, Rice. I already know what I want for dinna! I'm thinkin' this place has some lovely lookin' Rice." Loquie slobbered over his lips and a deep rumbling growl rolled through his thick throat. Rice whimpered at the sound, reeling backward.

"Wait a minute! T-this place doesn't serve rice. Y-you don't mean me right? You wouldn't be so cruel as to set up a big facade of a dinner date just to eat me, right?" The Pachirisu's face twisted in horror, ears flattened to his head.

"Haha, of course I'm talkin' 'bout ya dummy! I thought it would be pretty clever. I know dis place didn' serve rice, so I thought I oughtta bring my own! Anywhooo, since dah cats outta dah bag, yer goin' down dah hatch!" Loquie stood from his seat and climbed atop of the table on all fours. The Pachirisu wildly stumbled out of his seat and flung out towards the ground. "Awww I just love dah intoxicatin' stench of fear!" The gnoll wildly pounced from the table toward Rice! Pinned toward the ground Rice looked up at the slobbering beast of a man. The thick heaps of gnoll drool spilled onto his face.

"W-Wait, we're in a restaurant! I could buy you whatever you wanted! It could be on me! All the meat you could want..." Rice's eyes watered from the sheer terror beating through his chest.

"That kinda meat doesn't squirm! And dats so damn borin'! I mean ya got a whole life aheadda ya! Well not fer much longa now!" Loquie's long tongue lashed out of his mouth, spit rattling between each word. The thick globs of slobber continued to coat Rice's face!

"Oh god. Please don't kill me! I mean people are watching!" The Pachirisu's face was filled with sheer horror. There wasn't a single soul coming to Rice's aid as the gnoll slobbered over his snack. Loquie's thick jaws latched over the Pachirisu's muzzle. The gnoll lunged his jaws over Rice's head, engulfing the man in a saliva infested abyss. The Pachirisu pushed with all of his might against the massive gnoll but it proved to be fruitless.

Unflinchingly, Loquie swallowed Pachirisu's head. The sickeningly loud slobbering sound bellowed out as the gnoll gulped again. Slippery, tight, compact, sickeningly smelly, all these senses the Pachirisu was forced to endure with each undulating pull. "Pleashe!Schtop!" Rice's body thrashed wildly still far too pinned to do anything of much note.

"Yer taechst ish servichable!" Loquie comments with his maw still stuffed with the Pachirisu's figure. Another sluggish, indulgent, gulp, Loquie's throat continued to bulge outwards. The pokemon's head and shoulders now firmly locked in place, his upper torso followed suit. The gnoll continued to greedily guzzle down his writhing meal as the Pachirisu's torso vanished into squirming bulges. The slimy, clinging, slop stuck to Loquie's whining meal, each indulgent swallow reverberated through the Pachirisu's senses. Swallowed, snarfed, and slammed down the gnoll's gullet, Rice's lower body slipped into the swelling gullet. Crushed underneath the tightness of the fleshy walls, the Pachirisu's nose scrunched at the stomach's approaching stench.

Plummeted into the pitch black darkness, Rice curled into the caustic trash compactor of a gut. Loquie sighed and patted his paws against the squirming sagging heft he now carried. "Ahhh dere ya go! Right where ya belong, runt! Now squirm nice an' good fer me! Hope ya enjoy an agonizing death, mate!" The gnoll laughed after his teasing words bellowed out. The acid spewed into the caustic chamber, the fluids sloshed around the Pachirisu. Rice winced with agony as the juices seeped into his skin and began to chew into his body.

"Oh Arceus! It BURNS! Please let me out!" The muffled pleas of the pokemon were practically squelched into nonsense from the outside. Loquie with giddy glee rammed his body into the ground, a booming CRUNCH bellowed out. "AAGGHHHH! Why did you do that!?" With a raspy voice Rice howled in agony. A sense of numbness ran through the Pachirisu's body as he weakly writhed within the compact pit. The inside and outside of Rice's body burned, every inch of his frame, sucked away, sapped into heft.

"Wouldya shut up!? I'm trying to enjoy yer fruitless struggle and yer ruinin' my mood by whinin'! All yer doin' is churnin' away into sludge, not a huge deal!" The gnoll squished his softening stomach roughly. A rattling SNAP ached out of Loquie's greedy stomach. All the muffled screaming and wheezing noises of the gnoll's snack ceased at that moment. "Aw fuck, ya died way too fast, runt! I wanted to feel ya squirm a bit longer! What a damn shame, guess I gotta eat some folks here to satisfy that now! HAhaha! Who am I kiddin'!? I was gonna do dat anyway!" The gnoll spoke to himself with cackled delight! His stomach softened down the limp sack of meat while he stood up and looked towards the other people in the restaurant. Loquie licked his long thick tongue against his chops as he walked towards a table of people.