Haiku Who?

Story by Pyrin1701 on SoFurry

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For those that dont know, a haiku is said to have 3 lines, of 5, 7, and 5 syllables. While japanese language has more traditional rules applying to haiku as well, I dont know enough about moras to attempt a more accurate description. Visit your local Wiki for details. Anyway . . . whatever . . .

Slowly, progressively growing haiku story . . .

Copyright Pyrin 2010

Orange sea, so big

warm and cool, bright and welcome,

The Sun sets, darkness . . .

night comes, holding all

watch the waves carry me off

where is my warm place

island in my sight,

is it my refuge, or curse?

we shall see truth soon