A little too obedient...?
Nothing can go wrong from making your mind-broken slave a little bit too eager to serve... right?
A tiny little blurb I thought of that would be cute, kinda kinky, and also hilarious at the same time. The one off characters are named Brandon, Edward, and Villain (yes, villain).
Brandon: E-edward! What has he done to you!? You must resist his power! Don't let Villain take control of you!
Edward: B-brandon? I...
Villain: It's no use, fool. I've already trained your precious Edward to be the perfect pet. There's nothing he enjoys more than to obey my every command. Allow me to demonstrate! Attack your former friend and lover! Kill him now!
The mind-broken Edward's ears twitch in pleasure from being given a command, and the dog pounces forward almost robotically to deliver a fierce attack with his sword, intending to kill. Brandon adeptly defends himself, blocking the blow with his staff. The two lie at a standstill as their weapons clash and scrape against each other.
Brandon: Please, snap out of it! Come back to me! You can fight this!
Villain: Give it up, already, fool! His mind is too far gone for you to reach him now! He will be an obedient slave forever! Nyehehehehe!
Edward: I... Love to obey... I'm an obedient slave...
Brandon: No... Your brainwashing is stronger than our bond...?
Edward: B-brandon... Obeying feels so good...
Brandon, now kind of annoyed and upset: W-well then why did you never listen to me all those times we fought over dumb shit! You never do the laundry when it's your turn to, no matter how much I nag you! Obey me instead, asshole! Get on your knees or something!
Edward, ears twitching in obedience, falls to his knees, dropping his sword.
Edward: Right away, master! Ahhh~...
Brandon... and Villain: Wait... WHAT!?
Edward: Oh... Brandon, love... Master... I love obeying you...
Villain: TH-THIS WASN'T SUPPOSED TO HAPPEN! YOU'RE SUPPOSED TO OBEY ONLY ME!!! NOT JUST ANY RANDOM PERSON!
Brandon: Uh... Um... HAH! Evil Villain! I've foiled your plans! Now quietly surrender before I have to use forc-EddieCanYouPleaseGetUpOrSomethingThisIsReallyEmbarrassing >///<
Edward, wagging his tail like a good boy as he springs up immediately: Yes love. Anything for you master.
Brandon, flustered: Eddie, please can you not!?
Edward quickly begins shuffling off his armor and clothes before approaching Brandon seductively.
Edward: Yes master... immediately~
Brandon: E-edward? What on earth are you doing!?
Poor Brandon tries to fend off the good boy getting his hands all over him trying to knot him, while glaring at Villain.
Brandon: Villain, what the hell have you been doing with my Eddie!?!?
The villain, who has been watching this exchange the entire time, scratches his face awkwardly with a slight blush, having his... other dastardly deeds exposed.
Villain: "uh... I.... Er...... Well...... That is.... CURSES! YOU MAY HAVE GOTTEN ME THIS TIME, BUT THIS ISN'T THE LAST YOU'VE SEEN OF ME! AND NOW I WILL MAKE MY DARING ESCAPE! NYAHAHAHAHA!"
Brandon, still struggling with Edward: GET YOUR SORRY ASS BACK HERE! I'M GOING TO KILL YOU!!