Visitor of Unreasonable Size

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An unsuspecting planet learns firsthand that there is alien life out there. This particular alien life is ridiculously big and seems fully intent on wiping out their entire civilization simply by stepping on it.

2,000 word Commission for SpadeTheMouse

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She appeared without warning. One second the day was the same as any other for the innocuous planet with a flash of light she was just suddenly there. Lush, striped fur along with facial and bodily features marked her as something reminiscent of an upright tiger save for a few unique markers like a pair of ivory horns atop her head, strange gem-like growth set into her forehead, and the bright green coloration of her fur. And she was very much a she from the curvy proportions of the body left on full display thanks to the skin-tight jumpsuit made of some alien material that seemed somehow both fabric and metal. Though there were a couple of details outlined by the material that showed this girl from space wasn't entirely girl in a few key places. But all these observations were secondary compared to the primary detail that separated her from any other form of life on the planet. That detail was her size.

To say she was enormous would be like calling a lake full of water somewhat damp. A quarter of the entire planet could see the living alien landmass of a woman simply by looking up as she towered hundreds, maybe even thousands of miles into the sky. Of course, with such absurd size came equally absurd weight. The moment she appeared the ground itself buckled beneath her paws. Entire mountain ranges worth of dirt and rock were displaced and shoved aside as the weight on each impossibly huge foot dug footprints deep enough to shame all but the largest of lakes in size simply from the weight of her body pressing down on them. Earthquakes rocked the surrounding countries as simply the presence of something so impossibly massive put unbearable pressure on nearby fault lines and caused the ground itself to shift and warp out of desperation to compensate. More than a few cities suffered severe damage or were outright destroyed from the resulting quakes as the singular act of the impossibly enormous alien simply existing on their world caused the worst earthquakes in their recorded history.

A playful, almost eager smile spread across the muzzle of the titaness as she surveyed her surroundings. Tens of millions of people watched the horizon with rapt attention as they saw the hazy silhouette of a living land mass in the distance planning her first move. For a few moments all she did was raise one arm and fiddle with something built into the material on her wrist. Briefly, a glowing orange light show of a holographic interface appeared around along her forearm, indecipherable alien numbers and letters peppered across its surface. Nodding in satisfaction to something only she could decipher on the display the alien tiger dragon hybrid closed the hologram and lowered her arm. Immediately afterwards she did something so simple that anyone could have done it. Something that billions of people did thousands of times a day across the world below. Yet, when done by her, this simple action was akin to a cataclysm the likes of which the world had never seen before.

She took a step.

For her it was an effortless action. Nothing more than the first step of a casual stroll like one would take walking across their lawn to check the mail. But to the poor, primitive species down below that had yet to even leave their own solar system it was something else entirely. Multiple entire cities, or at least those that had been spared the worst of the earthquakes, found bright daylight turning to pitch blackness as the sun was blocked from view. Their sky filled with the soft paw pads lining the underside of the alien woman's foot, each one alone big enough to cover an entire city. For an instant it was like the world froze. At least, that's how those few people looking up in disbelief at their replacement for the sky overhead perceived it. Then that sky itself fell down with impossible speed and all at once they were gone. Ironically, it wasn't even the impact of incalculable tons of foot flesh that wiped the city off of the map. Rather, the wind force created by the displacement of so much air as such a massive appendage moved through the atmosphere effectively led the footfall with a solid wall of wind. A wall of wind that smashed into the ground like a bomb then blew out in every direction as the footstep landed.

The second step had as much impact as the first, as did the one that followed immediately after. Each impact shook the very continent itself and left blast craters from the displaced atmosphere around each new lake-sized footprint. To her, it was a casual stroll that took so little effort as to be almost energizing. But for people so small that small countries could fit underneath her feet it may as well have been the apocalypse made real. But while multiple cities were being wiped off the map with each footstep the giantess seemed completely unphased by the knowledge of what each movement caused. If anything, the slight smirk on her lips showed she was amused with, if not outright enjoying, the devastation she was causing. Any question there may have been that the destruction she was causing wasn't intentional was wiped away when she focused her attentions on one specific city.

This time when her foot hit the ground it did so with far less force than before. That didn't mean it wasn't another natural disaster in destructive scale. The impact was still powerful enough to crush anything that wound up underneath it but it at least meant the wind forces of displaced air rushing from underneath it and the earth shaking from the impact was merely disastrous not cataclysmic. It was the only reason that the city that was in her sights wasn't obliterated like all the others when she carefully spread her toes to frame it between two of them when her foot landed.

For the people in the chosen city the temperature rapidly increased by several degrees from the sheer amount of body heat radiating off of the titaness's toes. Walls of green fur covered flesh towered around them in three of the four cardinal directions and darkened most of the light that would have come from above. Briefly those in the city held some fleeting hope that it had been some miraculous stroke of luck they had been spared. That maybe she had missed them on accident and they would be spared as she moved on. That hope lasted right up until more weight centered on the front of her foot and the giant driger leaned forward to stare down directly at them.

Her direct attention was intimidating and terrifying on a whole new level to the unlucky souls of the city. While they knew there was no way she could see any of them individually at her size it still felt like those titanic purple eyes of her were staring directly at each individual person from their perspective. Her lips twisted into a more obvious grin that showed off some of her teeth as she savored the sight of the city framed between her toes. To her it was empowering to a degree that couldn't be put into words unless you were in her position. How could anyone properly describe the power rush that comes from having an entire metropolis framed between two of your toes?

The feeling of such strength, of such overwhelming power was addictive border lining on erotic for her. Feeling the land itself giving way to casual shifts of her weight, feeling the atmosphere pushing back against each movement she made only to be effortlessly shoved aside, hearing even the tiniest murmur and hum of amusement under her breath boom through the air like a roll of thunder all was a constant reminder of the absurd level of power she had over the land below. And now she held thousands, maybe tens of thousands of lives entirely at her mercy and ready to be wiped out with a casual shift of her toes. It would be so easy for her. Hell, it was taking more effort to keep her toes from twitching and wanting to reflexively clench back together than it would take for her to stop spreading them apart and letting them close in on the tiny cityscape between them. It was literally more difficult for her to NOT destroy the city. So she stopped resisting.

The city was given barely more than a minute of reprieve as the giant green-furred alien savored their situation before the walls closed in around them. Tidal waves of flesh bulldozed across the landscape and scraped the city together into a small mountain of debris. But to her, to someone of her size, the incalculably massive ball of compacted cityscape felt like little more than like having a bit of sand between her toes. What made it worse for them, what made it better for her, was that there was no reason for it all.

There was no purpose to her being here. She wasn't there to enact some grand plan or to take over the world. There was no order to demolish the planet for some space highway way or anything equally absurd. She wasn't there to conquer or evaluate the species or anything like that. She was just there for some fun. Even the planet itself had been picked entirely at random. Dwelling on that just made her smile that much wider as she thought about how helpless they all were. An entire civilization entirely at her mercy slowly being wiped out underfoot simply because she wanted to have fun. And they couldn't do a single thing to stop her.

At some point the planet's inhabitants tried to fight back. The first few barrages of missiles fired in her direction impacted a glowing blue barrier that appeared just above her skin and clothes at the moment of impact. When she noticed, however, she immediately turned her kinetic barrier off. The next barrage of missiles landed on bare flesh and cloth, packed with enough firepower to demolish an entire major metropolitan area. If she hadn't been watching in anticipation she wouldn't have even known they attacked. The missiles and their resulting explosions had no effect whatsoever. It only amused her further when they brought out bigger weapons. Soon not just one, but dozens of nuclear weapons were detonating all across her feet, legs, and some even reaching up to her knees. Despite being the most devastating weapons the species had ever created each one was lucky if it even left a visible mark on her fur or clothing. A couple that were particularly lucky hit a sensitive spot and actually caused the titanic driger to itch a bit. It was humiliating in a way that couldn't have words put to it. The entire planet's combined military might, enough power to blow up their own planet if they had ever gotten to the point of trying, was barely even enough to cause a few scuff marks and itches to this alien invader.

Once their last wave of nukes and the resulting explosions died away she finally spoke for the first time. She only said two words, two thunderous utterances of sound that literally shook the ground and created visible blast waves in the nearby cloud line from the force of the air and vibrations coming from her lungs. The words were in an alien language that no one on the planet could possibly understand but the mixture of context, the expression on her face, and the smug tone of her impossibly loud and deep voice left no need for a literal translation. Everyone on the planet could guess what she had said.

"My turn."

When she started walking again there was new purpose to her movements. No longer a casual stroll but an intentional stomping strut that slammed each foot down with more force than was necessary. Military bases that had launched the nuclear weapons at her found themselves smashed into craters with such force the tectonic plates underneath cracked and created new fault lines. Entire countries soon found themselves being smashed to pieces beneath feline paw pads as she mercilessly wiped out the source of every attack launched at her with little regard for how much of the surrounding area suffered as well. It would have been impressive she had not only spotted but memorized the source of every missile launch at a glance if it hadn't meant the destruction of the surrounding landscape. When she was finally done at least half of the planet's population and a third of the landmass had been wiped out and demolished respectively.

If the planet could have managed one big enough they would have been waving a white flag of surrender. But they had no such thing nor any other comparable way to communicate and offer their surrender. Not that it would It have done them any good. After all, Rain wasn't there to take the planet over. She was just having some fun. And with roughly half of the planet still left intact and inhabited, she still had so much more fun left to be had.