Fall of man dawn of a new age chap 1 rewrite
?This story is a work of fiction. . This chapter is the introduction of the world I made up. No
hate E-mails, just suggestions, I'll read them and think about using your ideas. I do love the state of
Washington, that this chapter takes place in. I am using it because I was born and raised there.4/26/07
Raven Fox and I decided to rewrite this chapter. We are also going to rewrite chapter 2,3 and 4 to add
More plot, and get rid of the point of view.
Shetland
The dawn of a new age Chapter 1
It started because some groups of people wanted a type solider that will be loyal and follow
orders and endure long time service in combat zones without complaint. That we were complaining about
sending their sons and daughters into harm's way and being separated for long periods of time from
their families. So scientists set up a lab in a city in wash state to create a disposable solider, by
combining animal and human DNA. They were going to have two species dog and cats. The dog types
were loyal and follow orders without question. The cats with their natural built night vision and being
quiet, were going to be scouts and spies.
The project was a success. They tested the serum on ten test subjects. There was one deadly side effect it
Killed five of the test subjects. They decided to move the test, to a better equip facility. But it was too late
The place got attacked by an ecco-terror group.
Wednesday the day before the attack
Joe wakes up to the sound of his alarm clock going off. He gets up and walks to the bathroom in the RV
He lives in. He puts on his contacts and brushes his teeth. He looks at his reflection. He is 35 years old. He
has dark brown almost black hair, green brown eyes. He puts on deodorant, he doesn't need to shave, due
to the fact he's half native American. His facial hair grows really slow. Joe packs himself a lunch and fixes
breakfast and watches the news. "Same stuff, different day. That idiot should have never of done that stuff
to that country. Well I didn't vote for him, I voted for the other guy. I wonder if they counted my vote?" He
thought to himself as he watches the local news. He thinks about his time in the navy, living six years in
Sandy Utah. The two weeks wandering the western United states before coming back to Everett
Washington. To live in a trailer park.
Joe locked his RV and got in his truck. He drove to his place of employment. Witch is a large aircraft
repair Place at Paine field. He parked his truck and showed his ID badge to security, while walking in. He
went To the ground equipment repair shop and clocked in. Joe walked up to a red hair guy who was an
inch shorter than him and his boss. "John, what's the plan of attack today?"
John turned around "Joe go get lift tuck #354. It has almost no oil pressure. The aircraft mechanics are
Saying the engine is making a knocking noise."
Joe flinched when he heard the word knocking. He got three quarts of oil and got in the shop truck. He
drove to the lift truck. The lift truck looks like a large u-haul truck, the box part raises to the door on the
Aircraft. Joe checked the engine oil, it was a half a quart low. He topped it off, and started he trucks. The
oil pressure gauge reads 20 psi, after a few minutes it dropped below 5 psi. The engine started knocking, he
Gave it some gas the oil pressure only went to 8 psi. "This is not good, I think the main bearings are worn.
This engine might need to be rebuilt." Joe said to himself.
John heard a continuous knocking sound as the truck pulled into the shop. He saw Joe get out shaking his
head. Joe told John what the gauge was reading. "All right Joe, drain the oil and save it. Remove the oil
pan, Call me on the cell after you're done. I got to go see Josh the maintainece supervisor."
"What a way to start the day. At least today is payday. I just love going to the bank. I better call Shelly to
Find how's she doing." Joe looks at his tool box lid at Shelly's picture, along the ones from calenders he
Bought of the tool truck.
After work, Joe drove to the bank to deposit his paycheck. He times the people so that Shelly was the teller
that helped him. "I would like to cash this one million-dollar check from the lottery. I'll take it, in tens and
twenty's" He said to Shelly a gal with brown hair and blue eye wearing glasses."
"You wish" Said Samantha. An African American female sitting next to Shelly. "How was you day Joe?"
She asked while helping a customer.
"Went well, how are you doing?" Joe looked at Shelly.
"I am doing fine. What is that smell?" She replied.
"Eighty five octane, with 10W30, topped of with antifreeze. Still, want to go to the movie tonight?" Joe
Looked at Shelly.
"Yes, but please take a shower. We are taking my car, but I don't want to smell like gasoline?" Shelly
answered.
"No problem, just deposit the whole check in my account as usual. I be waiting at the cruise air 2" Joe said
while walking away.
Shelly sighed and shook her head. She's been dating Joe for two months. She's 38 years old, for a medical
Reason. She can't have kids. That's why her first husband was abusive, and left her years ago. She likes
Joe because he is not mean as the other guys were to her. He may act crazy around her. She knows that
he's trying to cheer her up. She only saw him mad once. That's why she'll never tell him that Roger was
abusive to her. She doesn't want to see that mad look on Joe again.
Shelly drove to the trailer park where Joe lived. As she was walking up to his RV, she hears an electric
Guitar playing. She recognized the guitar rift from the song Smoke on the water. Joe liked the rock bands
from the 60's and 70's. She knocked on the door the guitar stopped playing. He opened the door. "Hello
Babe" Joe said.
"Let me guess, casual dress." She saw that Joe was wearing a plain shirt, blue jeans and tennis shoes. He
Nodded, Joe didn't like wearing dress clothes.
"Let's go. Do you want to see that movie Eragon?" Joe asked as they walked to her car.
"Is that a fantasy movie?" Shelly asked. She knows Joe loves medieval and fantasy movies.
Thursday the day of the attack
The next at work, Joe finished removing the engine out of the lift truck. He removed the intake manifold
And sealed off the intake and exhaust ports and steam off the engine so he can start disassembling it. While
Disassembling the engine, he noticed the heads, crankshaft and block needed to be sent to the machine
shop.
Joe spent the rest of the day cleaning the engine compartment of the truck. He replaced some of the wiring.
Later on John had him remove the automatic transmission, so they can exchange it for a new one. Shelly
called, she asked him if he would go to Gas work's park with her tonight. He said yes.
Shelly and Joe walked around the park. She liked going there, her parents took her here before they were
killed in a plane crash. "Joe, I got a surprise for you. But it has to wait til this weekend."
"What is it? Can I get a hint?" Joe asked.
"Then it won't be a surprise. The hint is, that you will like it a lot." Shelly replied.
Joe looked at Shelly. She is five feet eight inches tall. Her long brown hair stop's in the middle of her back.
She is a small to a medium build, with medium to large breasts at a 36 D. "Why would anybody break up
with her? There are hundreds of kids in foster care that would love to have her as a mother." Joe thought
to himself as they walked around the park and talked.
At Lynnwood, near an office building. A car was parked by the loading dock. A man got out, he walked to
A bus stop. A city bus stopped at the bus stop, the man got on. Five minutes later, the man dialed a number
on his cell phone. The car blew up. The explosion destroyed the loading dock. The explosion damaged the
containers. Four of the five anthros were killed. The fifth was slightly injured. His cage was marked
berserker. The containers vented their contents for the next four to six hours. The emergency crews didn't
know about the serum being vented as they fought the fire, none of them saw the large wolf running away
from the ruins of the loading dock. Only the office section escaped damage.
Friday the day after
Joe went to work, noticed on the way that some areas were without power. There was a big wind storm last
night. His place still had power. He called Shelly earlier. She told him that she wasn't feeling well, she told
him that she will take it easy today and call him tomorrow. A bunch of people didn't show up at work on
that day. He thought it was odd, he just thought it was due to the massive power outages in the areas.
After work he visited his parents and older sister. He told them of his week and that everything is going all
right. His parents and older sister lived in a mobile home park, his older sister lived across the street from
them. He stayed for a while and then went home.
Saturday the extinction of man. The rise of the anthropomorphic race.
Joe woke up by the sound of his cell phone ringing. It was Shelly. She asked him to come over to her place
as soon as possible. He replied he will be on his way as soon as he got ready. He got in his truck and drove
to her place. He had to maneuver his truck around a few cars that were stopped in the middle of the road.
He noticed there were hardly any cars on the road. Joe was at a stop light drumming his left hand on the
door when he felt something bit him. He looked and saw a large wolf running into some bushes. " I hope
that canine doesn't have rabies. That was odd a wolf running on its hind legs, it must be a performing
animal. So it might not have rabies, but I better call animal control when I get to Shelly's." He looked at
his hand, the skin was cut. He briefly felt ill and his hand throbbed for a second.
He made it to her apartment complex. "Where are the kids" He thought to him self, as he drove in. It's a
Saturday, He usually half to stop his truck because they always ask him questions, like when he going to
marry Shelly. He knocked on her door.
"Come in" said a voice.
He walked in. "Shelly, were, are you?" He asked walking in the apartment.
"I am in the bedroom." Came a reply.
He walked to the bedroom. It was dark. He turned on the bedroom light, and saw an anthropomorphic.
Tricolor collie laying on Shelly's bed.
"Shelly is that you?" He asked looking at the anthropomorphic collie laying on the bed.
"Yes, it is me. It started early in the morning. I went outside after I called you. The neighbors are dead and
there are people like me wandering around. Joe at the moment, I think you are the only human left here.
Can we have sex together, that was the surprise, I had for you today before this started? You might die or
change." Shelly looked at Joe.
Joe looked her over. She has grown to the height of six feet, and had the features of a tricolor collie. She
had a slender long muzzle, her head was mostly black, with a ½ inch white stripe running from her nose to
her head hair. Her long brown hair now had black hi-lights in it. Below here muzzle was white with a thick
long body hair that started below her neck. A large tuft started at the top of her breasts fanning out on her
cleavage. The front of her body was white, with long body hair ending at the pubic area then the hair
changes to black and shortens and goes back to white at the middle of her calves. The way Joe can describe
the black color pattern on the rest of her body, is like she was wearing a mid sleeve shirt that was open in
the front, she had some tan stripping throughout her body and face, her tail was all black with a white tip.
At the moment she was only wearing pink panties and a bra. The bra was made for a gal with a small to a
medium build with a36 D-cup, not an anthropomorphic collie with largely a muscular build with a 42DD-
cup. The bra was ready to break. It was stretched to it limits. Joe felt an erection starting between his legs.
"Yes" He replied. "I'll have sex with you." He took off all his clothes and got into her bed.
"This is going to be different." He said as Shelly took of her panties and bra. Her breasts were firm with no
sag, with pink an inch and 1/4 areolas. Her pubic region was almost impossible to see through the thick
white hair. He saw that is being very wet and dripping fluids. She straddled his hips and grabbed his penis
and sat down on it.
"Don't worry Joe I'll gentle." She grabbed his head and stuffed it between her large hairy breasts.
Joe had sex with different women throughout his years. But sex with an anthro female collie was different.
Shelly's body temperature changed because it was very warm. The other thing that was different was her
being covered in long hair. After a few minutes, his hands fondled her furry breasts and felt the rest of her
body. She has grown fairly muscular, not like a body builder. Her muscles were harder then before.
Then a little while her vaginal muscles contracted and she howled and Joe felt wetness running all
over his balls. A couples of minutes later, he felt a build up in him and he yelled and released in her.
"That was different" Joe said to her. "Give me a little while and well go round two." He looked over to
Shelly, who was laying in bed next to him.
Then all of a sudden, Joe felt his hand starting to throb then a very sharp pain inside him, it felt like his
insides were in a blender. Then his skin felt very hot like it was being touch with a flame. Through the haze
of pain he looked over to Shelly, she stood up and looked down at him and said, "looks' like your going to
change". The last thing Joe's human lips felt was her warm kiss and she stuck her long tongue down his
throat.
Then she watched as Joe changed. Joe looked at his body, saw hair growing every were. Then he
watched as his stomach flatten. Then he looked at his pubic region as it grew long white hair. Joe felt
something grow out of the base of his spine, and he saw a brown and black with a white tip tail grow.
Then he felt his face lengthen and his teeth change. Joe felt his arms and legs shorten some inches and his
muscles harden.
Joe must have passed-out. He started to get up but Shelly stopped him. "You don't want to stand up for a
few minutes til the dizziness passes." She looked at his new body, "you look a little like me but you
seem to have a smaller build, and you are tan, dark brown and black with some white patterning. But your
muzzle is shorter than mine."
"From what you described, I must of turned into a sable colored, Shetland sheepdog or commonly known
as a sheltie." Joe said holding up a hand examining it.
The dizziness passed, he got up and walked to her bathroom and looked into the mirror. Joe saw a
sheltie looking back. Joe saw that he still had his green brown eyes. Joe's human hair was gone, he had
black triangular ears that were perked forward. Joe's face coloring was like lassies from the movies. But
he had a 1/4 inch white stripe on top of his muzzle that went to the back of his head. Joe looked down
there and saw that his penis and testicles were completely covered in white hair. Joe must have lost five
Inches in height, Shelly walked up behind him and started to rubbing his crotch and pressed her breasts
behind his back. "Can I try out your new body?" Joe looked down and saw his eleven-inch new penis
unsheathing.
"So that's where my missing five inches of height went." Said Joe as Shelly leads him to her room.
He laid down and she grabbed his penis and stuck it in her vagina. He watched as it disappeared in her
body. They had a round of sex on her bed.
"What do think is going on Joe?" Shelly asked.
"I don't know. Let's turn on the news, and find out." Joe said and walked to the livingroom.
He turned on the TV. Most of the stations were off the air. One station had the bar code showing. It was
running an audio track only.
"From what we know is that roughly half of the worlds population just suddenly died, from unknown
causes. The other half was changed into anthropomorphic beings, feline and canine types. The White
House has not replied to our requests for interviews. We will keep you up to date as we try to get some
answers." The audio track repeated it self a minute later.
Joe walked into the bathroom to look at himself again. Everything was out of focus. He reaches to the
medicine cabinet. He removed the extra contact lense cleaner kit he stored there. He cleaned his contacts,
He was going to put them back on. He noticed everything was sharp and focused. "Well it looks like I
don't Need these anymore. Just think, I was thinking about getting that laser eye surgery with the lawsuit
money." He thought to himself. "Shelly do you have a minute?"
Shelly walked in the bathroom. "Shelly how is your eye sight without your glasses?" Joe asked looking at
her naked body.
"I am near sighted, just like you. Wait one, everything is sharp and focused know. Every thing is normally
Unfocused without my glasses. This is strange." She was looking around.
Joe tried calling his relatives, he got no answer. Shelly was trying the same thing, looked like she got a hold
of somebody.
"Shelly, I didn't get a hold of anybody. How were your tries?" Joe looked at her.
"The only person I got a hold of is my aunt. She was changed into a white wolf." Shelly answered.
Joe started to leave. Shelly stopped him. She got him in her car witch was a light blue Honda civic. She
drove to the mobile home park where Joe's parents lived. There were police cars and large trucks. One
police officer stopped the car. He was a cougar.
"Mam, you don't want to go in this place. So far everyone is dead in this park. He has to go to the naval
base in Everett, for burial detail. Be there at 9:00 a.m. orders from the president. If he bolts, tries to leave
the state or go to Canada, he will be arrested on the site. You miss. You have to go to the federal building
in Bellevue." He walks off. Shelly snarls at him.
Shelly looks at Joe, he has his head between his knees. She was going to touch him. She hesitates. He
looks up at her. "I guess you are the only person I care about." Replied Joe.
She drove home. They walked in her place. It was late. Joe was going to sleep on the couch. Shelly
grabbed His hand and lead him to her room. Joe laid down to sleep, she got in bed and wrapped her arms
and legs around him. She heard him sob. She rested her chin on top of his head. "Why you people have
him do something so sickening of cleaning up the dead. After all he's been thru, you people have him do
your dirty work. I better keep an eye on you Joe, so you won't hurt yourself." Shelly thought to herself as
she falls asleep.
Well one down three to go. I like this a lot better. It tells of Joe's and Shelly's relationship. It also
tells how Joe became a Berserker. I think there is more background in this version. I hope you
guys and gals like this better than the old version. I hated the point of view, that's why I don't
write that way.
Raven Fox