[Commission] Don't Tempt a Queen

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Final word count : 3072.

No, you're not dreaming. I am indeed posting a new story.

Oh god, I don't even want to remember when the last time I finished one was, but it was probably like... two years ago. Phew. Well, life has been rough and motivation scarce, but I'm trying to get back into it, so cross your fingers if you want to see more !!

This one was commissioned by my pal Swirlyvee, whom I always enjoy writing for. Coral and Omni go to the beach, and... well, I'm sure what happens won't really surprise you. The two of them tend to get frisky ! ;)

Hopefully you enjoy reading it, I think a lot of it turned out pretty good, and I'm glad to not be feeling rusty. I'll be striving to improve my writing even more over the next stories though, I feel like I can do even better !


Just like the weather forecast had announced, only a handful of thin clouds were there to block off the gentle spring sun ; the Vaporeon couple's beach escapade promised to be as pleasant as it possibly could. Carrying bags and picnic, umbrella and towels, they made jovial chit chat while nearing their destination, sand beginning to be felt under their steps. The first of the pair was Coral, a short Vaporeon, though her unusually long tail seemed like it could beat her height of four feet. Her colours were uncommon as well, her body two shades of bright pink rather than blue, with her fins, tail tip as well as belly of a cream colour, though that last area was covered by her beach attire, a white top and black shorts that outlined her luscious curves. The outfit was completed by the timeless straw hat, of which the beige elegantly echoed the Vaporeon's inner shade, and a black band tying a pink heart to the front of it. The second Vaporeon, Omni, was as tall as her girlfriend was little, standing almost twice as high ; despite that difference, she shared the property of an excessively long tail, again taller than she was herself if it was held upright. Omni's colours were a Vaporeon's more traditional blue and white, though her looks were unique in quite a few ways, such as predator-like fangs, prehensile claws and a reptilian forked tongue. One might think of these as intimidating, but the threat was dulled by a velvety gaze, the Pokémon's very being radiating a comforting and reassuring aura. Her regal allure was further reinforced by apparel of gold and star-spangled onyx : a collar, bracelets, and even a sapphire-encrusted crown that floated nonchalantly over her head. As for her clothing, she was already in her swimsuit, a skintight one-piece, of a blue that was deeper than her eyes, but lighter than the tone of her paw pads.

Eventually the pair made it to the top of the dune, greeted with the view of the beach below them. Though they were not the only ones having decided this was an ideal day to spend at the beach, neither the seaside or the water were crowded. The Vaporeons had no trouble setting up their little space, with ample space between them and the next towel on either side. Small talk and giggles were exchanged while the two Vaporeons unpacked what they had brought, deploying the beach essentials like their towels and sun umbrella, getting out a couple of toys such as a volleyball and, of course, a bottle of sunscreen. The couple sat in the shade of their parasol and Coral took off her clothes, under which she was already wearing a thin two-piece swimsuit. She was to apply the sunscreen to herself first until she needed Omni's assistance with covering her back, and until then the larger Vaporeon checked on the picnic to ensure everything was there and did not get roughed up in the trip. A quick glance seemed to confirm that nothing was missing, though Omni's inspection was cut short by a distraction... In the corner of her eye she caught a glimpse of Coral in her rather revealing swimsuit, turning her back to her wife and incidentally giving a good view of her rump, generous cheeks under an equally thick and alluring tail. In something of a dazed stupor, the queen watched her partner for a short moment, until she subconsciously let out a low purr of contentment. Hearing it, the subject of Omni's admiration turned around :

-- Hmm ? Did you want to say something, hun ?

Normally, Omni would probably have played innocent and deflected the remark by making a comment on Coral taking her sweet time to apply her sunscreen, but here, being faced by her pink darling had her stunned. The Vaporeon had pulled on her bra, most likely when she took her shirt off, resulting in it slipping under her left breast and completely revealing it, the pink of her nipple exposed amidst the soft cream colour of her chest. By the looks of it, she had not even noticed her slip, but Omni had no way of missing it... Since Coral was waiting for an answer, the larger Vaporeon tried to not let her spike of excitement show, innocently replying :

-- Oh, nothing... I was just wondering if you were ready for me to apply the sunscreen to your back !

-- Yeah I'm about done, you can go ahead.

The smaller Vaporeon turned her back to her wife, tail pushing the bottle of sunscreen in her direction. Though she could not see it, Omni was licking her lips in excitement... She squeezed a bit of sunscreen onto her paw, and began rubbing it across Coral's back. But by the time it was evenly spread, the Vaporeon's touch began drifting... The pink Vaporeon gasped as she felt the large paw of her wife slipping under her underwear and groping her butt, while the other slid to her front and placed a touch on her exposed nipple, rubbing it in circles under the softness of her digit's bean.

-- Wwh... O-Omni !! What are you... Was my bra down the whole time ! You should have told me, people are gonna see us--stop iiit !!

But the larger Pokémon had no intention of stopping there. More than even she expected, the touches she ventured and the reactions of her little girlfriend had kindled in her the powerful fire of lust. When Coral turned around to try and put an end to her wife's risqué advances, she was met with the sight of Omni's swimsuit stretched by her tapered member slipping free of its slit, the regal Vaporeon placing a hand behind her subject's head and pulling her into it, huffing as she watched her petite partner blush against the hot need pressed against her face. A smirk in the corner of her face, Omni's voice boomed with authority :

-- You would dare give your Queen a show and not follow through in pleasuring Her ? You would ignite a fire in Her and not take care of putting it out ?

-- O-Omni, really I did not know... Listen, we just can't here, this can wait for later at home, we'll--eek !!

The support of the towel disappeared from under Coral as she felt herself lifted up by her bra. She looked up in surprise, completely unprepared for her gaze to fall into the rings of colours Omni was staring at her with. Hypnotic purples and blues were poured into her mind as she watched completely stunned, the cycle of colours occasionally broken by a pulse of pearlescent white, each of these interruptions taking her a level deeper under her Queen's charm, blurring reason and clouding her judgement...

-- You will know your place, subject. You will know to break beneath me, to embrace my authority. You shall do all that I ask of you, with no question, with no hesitation. Do you understand ? Nod.

Coral obeyed. Transfixed on her Queen's eyes, she nodded, unable to speak, only letting out a low moan that could hardly be perceived. With the paw that was not holding her girlfriend suspended before her eyes, Omni reached down and slipped a digit under Coral's bikini, rubbing against her sex. Much like she suspected, the little Vaporeon too was rather excited. Omni knew what buttons to push to have effect on her partner, and that showing merciless dominance always got Coral all worked up. And with the irresistible power of her hypnosis as well, it was no wonder the smaller Pokémon no longer showed any sign of inhibitions... Omni lowered her lover between her thighs, and watched amused as Coral instinctively placed her weight on her Queen's belly, too drowsy to hold her own, finding herself in a perfect position to start nuzzling and licking along the bulge in her wife's swimsuit, needy to nurture her heat...

Although Omni could have just spent the afternoon watching her dizzy girlfriend get busy worshipping, she needed to handle the matter of privacy. Though Coral's concerns had been swiftly suppressed, it was true that they could not simply indulge in such intimacy completely exposed to prying eyes, especially not with the plans the Queen was beginning to form for her little girlfriend. She analysed the surroundings while Coral whimpered and licked the outlines of her cock ; their towels were rather far from the water, which put them in the back of the other visitors. No one seemed to have noticed their endeavours yet or they would likely have been staring still, and with a simple way to break line of sight with the shore, it could stay that way, hmm... That was it. With a triumphant grin, Omni placed her paw on the sun umbrella's rod and pushed downward, lowering it almost to the horizontal. It worked out in such a way that they still retained a good cover from the sun's bite while also being concealed from others on the beach. This left them exposed from behind, but it was unlikely that anyone would come from the dunes there and not the dedicated path further away. However, the parasol did leave a small gap just above ground, but only a glimpse of the scene could be seen through it, not enough to make out the indecency of it. Overall, though it was sufficient for now, the couple's cover was not perfect, and presented some flaws that could reveal their plot. Omni smiled. She enjoyed the risk.

With that matter handled, the Queen turned her attention back to her adorable little prize. Coral seemed to be frustrated, moaning in unfulfilled need as she tried to close her lips around Omni's tip, not finding a good enough grip through her swimsuit, her confused mind not managing to solve the problem of exposing the object of her temptations. Omni slipped a claw under her bra and carefully undid the latch, growling in anticipation as she watched the only item of clothing protecting her partner's chest yield before her prestige. With Coral's breasts revealed, the Queen could play to her heart's content, noticing that her toy's nipples were now pert to the touch, showing just how eager she had gotten in the span of just a couple of minutes. Grunting from the sheer impatience that came with her arousal, Omni leaned forward and pushed her plaything onto its back, pinning Coral down with a single paw on her belly and watching as she clumsily waved her paws in the air, trying to find the support of her Queen's crotch she had been torn from. She was however comforted by the half-lidded, pulsing eyes of the greater Vaporeon looming over her, benevolently sharing their reassuring charm with her, sultry words hushed through the Queen's smiling lips and rolling off her softly hissing tongue :

-- You've got work ahead of you today, slut... You're going to serve your Queen, hmm~? And you're already doing so well, trying so hard to pleasure me... But you're not stopping just there, no no no... In fact, watch, what you have been waiting for~

Omni's second paw had been working on undoing the shoulder latches of her swimsuit, and just as she punctuated that last sentence, the last one gave, causing her single article of clothing to freely fall down, and with that, her heat neatly landed on top of Coral. The little Pokémon whimpered at the sudden and much craved for contact, her legs flailing in a burst of excitement, while the larger Vaporeon adjusted herself, rubbing her member on her toy's belly and pushing it up between Coral's breasts, whom immediately jumped on the occasion to begin suckling needily on its tip.

-- Hrrrmngg, oooh, very good... Your devotion still manages to surprise me sometimes, hummf~ Now keep being so good, and you will be rewarded in turn... Don't you want your Queen to properly breed you ? To fill you to the brim, until you are perfectly numb and satisfied ? Show me how much you want it~

With her mouth full, the smaller Vaporeon could only mutter a few muffled sounds of enticed begging, but her actions were more than enough to show Omni just how much the speech had resonated with her. Her little paws placed themselves on that long rod and rubbed along its hot, smooth surface, massaging it and coaxing it into its full rigor as well as attempting to push it closer to her face. It followed her pull only because Coral's ruler allowed it, even beginning to hump lightly on top of her, most elated to feel her girth hugged between those pillowy mounds and fervently serviced by those lips... But Omni realised that, somewhat to her regret, Coral was doing a bit too good of a job, the Queen's cock beginning to dangerously throb under all of that attention. She pulled back, watching Coral desperately try to hang onto the object of her worship, whimpering in distress as she was deprived of it. Omni closed her eyes and attempted to collect herself, containing her shudders of excitement during her next speech :

-- G-gosh you... Arhmm... What a good job you've done, slut. Humphh, a reward is in order, is it not ? Stay still, you're going to like what I am about to make of you~

The Queen sat on her knees and began to move her tail under the smaller Vaporeon, chuckling as she was once again reminded of just how much she dwarfed her. With great care, Omni spun three coils around the neck, belly and waist of her little prize, trapping Coral's legs between the pudgy loops. At the mercy of the huffing giant, she was lifted above ground and had her rear pressed against Omni's belly, tail lifted and slit teased by the press of the Queen's heat along its length. Just feeling it toying at the edge of her sex was enough to make the pink Pokémon moan out in pleasure, forcing Omni to silence her by placing her tailfin on her toy's mouth.

-- Now now, I can't have you be so loud already, can I ? You wouldn't want someone to come investigate and interrupt us while I try to pump you full of eggs, hmm ? Be a good girl, and stay quiet~

For a moment, Coral seemed to calm down, the few whimpers she produced easily contained by the press of the tail on her lips. But this silence was short-lived... Omni crossed her arms and watched confidently as she moved her toy with the sheer strength of her tail, lining the pink Pokémon up before pulling her in, pushing Coral's sex down her cock. The sudden sensation caused both of the Vaporeons to vocally express their pleasure, the larger biting her lip and grunting as quietly as she could manage, while the smaller let her tongue loll out and cried her bliss out with no restraint, as loudly as her gag let her. Omni tried to hush her, but neither of them was going to stop. Coral was pushed back and forth, Omni's arms remaining on her chest as she so agilely used her tail to hump her partner. The blue Vaporeon's girth gently spread Coral's lips as it was pushed into her, each inch of the tapered member becoming thicker, forcing Omni to be gentle and slow. And she knew she had to stop and find a way to keep Coral more quiet, but she simply ignored the responsibility. She could not stop, she needed this, and she needed it now. She was not even pushing herself all the way in yet, and already it seemed like too much stimulation to handle. Feeling how the progress she made hump after hump brought the small Vaporeon ever increasing pleasure, how her lover was stretched to fit her much larger partner, her body begging to be brought to its limit... Omni felt her erection throb inside of her pink darling, her instincts wild and pushing for more. She had to lean forward and grab onto the coils she held Coral with to find better leverage, pressing the smaller Pokémon down under her chest and locking her in a desperate mating press as the Queen used her arms to push her lover back and forth with renewed strength. Her own pleasure and desire encouraged by the half-muffled gasps and moans of ecstasy she hoped no one else could hear, she worked to satisfy the both of them. It was not about reaching a climax, it was about them as a couple, it was about the moment, it was about...

-- Gnnggh... I-I love you, Coralll..!!

Omni felt it then, and her eyes closed in response, teeth clenching as she gave a decisive thrust, pushing herself in as deep as she could before her pleasure spilled out. She placed a paw on Coral's mouth to hold in the ever so resounding cries of pleasure she made as thick, hot seed was spent deep within her. The difference in size between the Vaporeons translated into this as well, Coral's belly swelling after just a few throbs, continually bloating up throughout Omni's orgasm, to the point the larger Vaporeon was forced to loosen her tail to allow her partner more room to take it all in. Omni herself was too overwhelmed to keep silent, sighing loudly as she found the satisfaction she so dearly seeked, feeling her lust progressively fade now that it was fulfilled. Coral was full and leaking ropes of seed by the time her wife's orgasm reached its end, and when Omni pulled out after a long minute of absent afterglow, the towel under them was definitely ruined. The blue Vaporeon rolled onto her back, still slightly out of breath, but the pink one could only roll as far as her overfilled belly allowed before coming to a stop. The two shared this intimate moment of where time almost seemed suspended, too precious to compromise with matters of checking if someone had caught them in the act. Omni looked to her lover, smiling as she saw some remnants of hypnotic rings in her eyes, and pulled her into her arms, rubbing a paw over her good girl's head, giving her a gentle lick. This day might not have gone according to their original plans, but it could not have flourished into something more beautiful.

-- Well... I don't suppose you have room left for the picnic ?