The mysterious, primitive killer Chapter 1

Story by Seductive Dragon on SoFurry

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The mysterious, primitive killer

Now here is a funny but hilarious kid named Ven, his name was Ven because it stood for Vengeance, which explains his growing hatred towards his dad. His dad was an eccentric individual, his name was Carver, he's an anthro wolf with black fur, red marks and one who always wears his favorite shirt, a shirt with details and words made of real blood. Ven always wondered for what, legit reason he could always wear that shirt, especially on every Friday. Ven lived in a large but lively house, with great and bright colors surrounding him and lots of huge screen TVs in most rooms. He had walls with frames and mostly in the living room it was hard to walk with all the displays and expensive objects in your way. It was a great home to have with a mysterious and anti-social dad and no mother, Ven wondered what really happened to his mother and he always had the feeling the blood on his dad's shirt was his mothers and he wore it to remember the interminable pain he inflicted on Ven's mother. Ven doesn't even really know if it's his real dad, Ven was a short but pretty strong kid for his age of 13, a handsome anthro puppy with blue and purple fur, along his side was spots of yellow. He had long hair that usually hanged over his eyes and he had slightly glowing orange eyes and a nice figure, always ran around his house a lot or swam in a nearby river. For three years he wondered what was all the chaos that occured in his past, he was always very confused and could hardly sleep with all these realizations and exaggereted thoughts. Ven was scared of his dad and sometimes his dad would try to talk to him but usually to say something rude or insulting about his hair or the clothes he wore. He loved wearing white or bright shirts and dark pants. Ven was still trying to attempt his mission for the true discovery of his dad's secrets.

It was a nice morning, the shining sun cast shadows outside and indoors, the brilliance of red and yellow covered the colors of the house. Ven woke up and saw his dad eyeing him as he passes by his open door, Ven was curious and jumped out, slowly following his dad, but his ignorance of slyness almost made him get caught, his dad looked back as Ven bended down. Carver continued through the hallway and walked down the noisy stairs of their house, Ven stopped and didn't take the risk, he stood behind a statue and carefully observed Carver's actions. Carver walked in a small circle and then went to the kitchen which was visible from Vens field of vision. He watched the strange things his dad took with him, he grabbed a chef knife, 100 calorie bar and with his tail he took a match with him as he left. Ven ran down but quietly down the stairs and slipped on the last step, making a banging noise and then he darted behind a large TV and a PS3. He watched through an open space and saw his best friend Carl. The sight of his nice, shining dragon body made him excited and hyper. He was just about to run to him but knew his dad was still out there, he saw his shadow and he saw Carl walk quickly into the house, seeing him as he looked frightened. He approached the TV and Ven popped out scaring him. Carl was covering his face and sat down, he was a glittery red-orange dragon, he was 11 but very smart, had small wings for his size and a gorgeous face that always gave him attention, with glowing green eyes and long stripes going from his cheeks down to his tail in black. "What the heck? I though you were a killer" He said. Ven nodded and snickered, slowly getting up and hugging Carl. "I'm damn hungry, you have a cake or something?" Carl said gazing at Ven, he was pretty skinny for a kid that eats a lot, some fat kids would stare at him funny. Ven walked up to the kitchen and looked in a jar, offering some cookies to Carl. *Want some? They're the best with awesome chocolate", Carl nodded fast and ran to Ven, snatching the cookies and eating them as if he was starved, dropping lots of crumbs. "Don't make a mess bud, my dad will kill me and I think he really would". Carl looked at him with a confused look, chewing his last cookie and swallowing while he tries to say something, "I think...hesh..kkkill...m..muh..nothin.." Ven looked at him funny and laughed, hugging Carl and waiting for him to finish, "What the heck are you saying? Heheee your funny" He giggled and saw Carl about to speak, "I said, I think your dad killed someone, maybe your mom" Ven stood still and blinked a little, leaning on a kitchen counter, "I...I think he did too, but I got to watch him and get proof". Carl took his paw and ran outside, Ven was pulling back but Carl was too strong for him, he pulled him out in their own parking lot and saw his dad's black Edonis, a long and flat car that was an exotic, he had two cars but the other one was not there. "Umm...Carl, how could that be my dad's car when he can't afford it for more than 5 months?", Carl shrugged and ran over, touching and feeling the texure and smooth and sharp desighn of the vehicle. "Carl, don't touch that!" Ven ran and threw his clawed hand off, looking at him with a worried look. "Sorry, it's so damn cool and hot look at the interior! This car is the best I've seen! I can't believe I touched it". Ven looked around slowly and said "Well, doesn't matter I need to find my dad, he didn't even tell me he was leaving". Carl usually notices things like this, but he was surprised at what happened when he didn't know. "He did? Wow I feel bad, why don't you just go to my house and live with me?". Ven smiled with the bottom of his face but frowned with his eyes "Because I have to stay here", Ven looked down and shook his head, walking around the car and studying the car, thinking of the possibilities of stealing it "Hmmmm, maybe if we took...nah that would go wrong..very wrong", Carl glanced at Ven and stared at the car with awe "What you thinking? Man I want to steal this car myself!". Ven loved doing the most stupidest of things just for laughs, but his antics were uncontrollable most of the time. "Cool, I could sleep on this car, it's fun up here, Carl was looking at him with a smile and his smile would be visible from a mile away, it was cute to most that saw it. "Well...let's take it!" Carl quickly pretended to steal it and ran to the door, about to punch through the window and laughed, that's where Ven's paw was and he just looked at Carl "No! Stop! Carl?" Carl laughed and stopped, slapping his paw when Ven flinched "I was kidding bud, wow you thought I would do that?", Ven noded "Yes, you do things like that a lot duh!", Saying duh Ven made a funny face with his tongue out, it always made Carl laugh or giggle "Haha! Stop that, anyway what we gonna do about your dad? He could be doing anything right now", Ven watched the sun slightly go down and the sky became bright blue with a touch of teal. "I don't know, he must be far right now", Carl nodded fast and smiled, "So let's take the car, I know how to drive, my mom taught me!", Ven shook his head and eyed Carl with a surprised look, "What?! No fair! Your younger than me and my dad didn't teach me, hmm". Ven crossed his arms and weeped, standing up and front flipping off the car, "Whooaa, that was cool, I can't do that but you can, so let's steal the car" said Carl with haste, Ven blushed a little and smiled, then played with the door and went to hit something under the car, crawling otu from under it the door opened, Carl watched with his maw open and looked around as if he won money, "OMG! Sweet! Let me drive, let me drive!", he pulled out the door open roughly and banged it closed, turning the Edonis on and performing the preparation that adults do before they drive, moving the mirror, turning a nob and pushing a button, then adjusting the seats. Carl smiled like he never did before, then accelerated quickly but proffessionally, Ven sat back and nodded slowly, putting on black shades that was on the car's gear shifter, "Aren't I cool? Boy you do know how to drive, you gotta teach me later! Ven sat leaning to the front and turning on the AC, looking around as if he robbed a store, "Okay Carl, now be quick but careful, also don't be too fast, too slow, stop at the red lights, be concious or your environment and...Carl pet his head and giggled, spotting a police car driving by, "I know how to do the things, now sit back and watch the master...", Ven looked at Carl with wide open eyes as Carl spoke with the voice of an adult, as is his voice deepened and fell down his throat. Ven blinked a lot and tilted his head "Your creepy and scary, but I like it" Ven then laughed and looked at all the cars in the road as if he owned them, laying back with his arms behind his head, "Dude we got the best car on the streets, we rock with this baby", Carl smiled and laughed, turning around a supermarket and passing a beer store, seeing pedestrians stare at his car with ooos and awes, the car was glowing white from the rims. Carl kept his head low to avoid being spotted and Ven did the same as more police were congesting the streets. Carl stopped behind a honda accord with great distance between the cars. Ven poked Carl and said "Your good, but try not to get spotted okay?", Carl nodded coolly and sucked his teeth, "I got this dude, just ride smooth and low and enjoy the ride", Ven was still shocked of how accurate Carl's driving was. A cop car passed by them, slowly driving by as a police officer eyed the car with a scorn look, wrote something down and then drove off. Carl stook his head up, seeing the cars go and he drove again, at about 12 mph, since the road was filled with people and police. "Man, damn cops ruin everything, hey is that your dad in there?", Carl pointed to a drug store and saw two, beefy, old and grey haired doberman, walking out the store while smoking a huge cigar. Ven leaned on Carl's lap and looked in the store, then nodded and looked at Carl quickly. "Okay park it near here and stay in the car okay? I have to watch him", Carl nodded and moved the car between a red Porche Boxster and a white Mitsibishi Double shotz, turning the car off he leaned down as if he was melting to give Ven a better view of his dad. Ven held himself up from one arm on Carl's chest, observing the every move of his dad. He heeded what his dad said since he had the car window slightly open, and his dad was near the exit and he always spoke loudly, but Ven wasn't used to hearing his dad's voice. Carl listened as well and looked at the reactions of Ven as he heard his dad say, "Yes yes, little brat he is and what a useless child, he can never make a living for himself and get a good job if he was older", Ven grunted and sat back in his seat, "He better not be talking about me" he said stubbornly, Carl nodded and listened more, then turned the car on when his dad dropped a lighter and walked past the car, ignoring what went past him except where he was walking to, an alleyway. Carl slowly followed Carver as he walked with haste to his destintion without any delay. "Omg, now where is he going? Carl shrugged and drove out onto the clear road, after a while it was a little congested but now clear which he just noticed. Ven sat back looking at Carver and squinting, looking at him light a match and placing it in under a Toyota, he hated Toyotas but Ven didn't know why. The car began smoking and eventually when they went past it got caught on fire, but the fire was a small one and looked more like a candle lighting up, people were careless and some weren't aware of a burning car, the front of it slowly melted and finally a kid noticed it, his mom held his hand and pulled him to where she wanted to go. The kid was angry and hit his mother, then her mother glanced at him inward, the kid stood quiet, then they just took off in a taxi. Ven hated the city that he lived in, it was filled with careless people, rude pedestrians and many ghetto areas where people were known to be killed or shot. Ven shook remembering how horrible the area was then he grabbed Carl's shoulder, "Let's go back home, now", Carl looked at him and took a short cut back to Ven's house. When they got back it was already noon and Carl had photographic memory, so he parked the car in the exact same spot as if it was untouched. Ven smiled a little and Carl got out quickly, looking around curiously and Ven jumped out, shutting the door and walking in the living room, Carl followed without a word. As they used to PS3 to consume time, Ven sighed a lot and Carl just ate some crackers hsi head in his pocket. They remained silent awaiting the arrival or Carver.

The sun finally set down below the city scape and it became darker with a hint of light from the sun's rays. Ven was sitting on a couch and Carl was laying down near him, they were talking about how many things they would do if they were the last creatures on earth. "Well...I would do that but only if you would too" Ven said as Carl nodded to his reply. They jumped and ran upstairs when they heard a car drove by the parking lot, when Ven looked there were four more cars there then there was before the left. He wondered why was that as he headed up to his room, Carl layed on his bed trying to sleep and Ven took his books out pretending to read, they heard footsteps up the stairs and Ven shook a little, knowing what they did behind Carver's back and hoping he wouldn't find out eventually. "Be quite and pretend to sleep, quickly", Ven's voice was diminishing as he finished his sentence, then Carver stood at the door and leaned on the wall, throwing a cigarette on the ground, then he eyed Carl and glared at Ven, as Ven turned around his ears were flickering and his tail was hitting the ground, trying to hide his feelings. "Why is your friend in our house?" His deep voice scared Ven and his head was down, looking away from Carver and slowly said, "Umm...he just wanted to sleep somewhere since his...bed was broken", Ven looked at Carver and his dark eyes were fiery with brown and it had a revenge look in them, Ven was biting his lip and hid the scared look on his face, slowly getting back to his book. "Well...next time you ask me first, and make sure he doesn't eat all our food, I ain't in the mood to..." Ven interrupted with a light voice and said "Okay I know, he's fine I'll make sure he doesn't", Carver tilted his head and stared at Ven, as he moved his head back and cracked his neck, slowly walking away as Ven shook again and nodded, looking at Carl and dropping the book, whispering in his ear, "He's gone for now, you can stop buddy". Carl flinched as Ven's breath warmed his ear, then he slowly got out of the soft bed and looked at the TV, "Why did he say that? Is he mad at something?", Ven shook his head still shaking and slowly turned on Ven's TV, seeing that George Lopez was on. Carl wanted to envy George and he wanted to become a funny actor like him, that's why the show made it's way on Carl's favorite show list. Ven watched and relaxed more as the night outside his window became dark and spooky, he ignored the usual noises he hears such as a girl screaming, guns being fired and a guy calling someone name in repetition. He was used to those disturbances as the area got worse in the dark and long night.

The TV was off later that night, Carl was sleeping under Ven's bed and Ven was sleeping on it, covered by many layers of thin blankets and slightly snoring. He was dreaming about his dad being the best in the world and being the happiest kid ever, though that could be Carl since his parents spoil him, make the best of him and help him with a lot. Ven was always jealous of his friends's parents. But when he woke up, he was in some pain devoloping on his back, then his saw a strange object on the floor and the door was closed which he left open, he got curious and got out the bed, punching his back as he walked over to his dad's room, seeing it empty and slowly entering it. He never saw his dad's room before as it was always locked or guarded by Carver, he was always having an eye on his room. Ven wanted to look through everything but all he could do was take a paper that had Carver's writing on it, then he ran out and bumped into Carver, holding a wine bottle. Ven stumbled back and put the paper in his back pocket quiklcly, pretending he hurt his back and started rubbing it, looking at Carver's mean eyes. "Watch where your going! It makes you look stupid to run into someone like that, don't do it again you hear me?" Carver said with a stern voice, Ven grunted and growled and ignored Carver, passing by him and having a huge need to punch him in the stomach, but he was smart enough not to as there would be many variables of catastrophic fiasco falling down on him, he knew he might even be killed. As Ven looked over his shoulder he saw a knife sticking out Carver's pocket and he gasped, running to his room and locking the door. Shaking Carl he slowly awakened back to concious reality. Ven was terrified of the sight that he feared involving Carver. Carl yawned and slowly looked at him with lazy looking eyes, then blinked, shook his head and rubbed his eyes. "What happened bud? What's wrong..?" Ven looked at him and kept biting his lip, "He...my dad had a knife in his..p..p..p.p...pocket", Carl woke up quickly from the alarming news and woke up. Then Ven was shaken and pulled Carl, he was scared and needed to run out the house to get a break from his vindictive and rebellious dad. Carl retained his energy again and followed Ven as he lead the way down the stairs, he then saw the car surrounded by what seemed to be blood and he spotted four guys surrounding the black Edonis that they drove yesterday. The sun shining on them made them look bigger and more frightning, from the sight Ven screamed and bumped Carl, then gasped and choked on his own saliva as he saw Carver with his knife drawn in his hand. He was greatly surprised and Ven felt his jaw shiver and his eyes wide open, as for Carl his was stood so still he looked as if he died with his eyes open standing up, he then heard the guys talking but he still stared up to Carver and felt his eyes water. Ven was as still as if he was frozen alive and Carl was there stuttering trying to say something..."H...ugh...uh...umm...doh...u..heee um...whoo...what? Are you..?" Carl stood silent as continued to stare up at Carver's dark eyes, Carver's head was moving down forcing his eyes to look at Ven and Carl, he saw them shook and tightened his grip on his knife, then slowly walked up to the boys with an evil frown on his face, looking like a real killer. As much as Ven and Carl wanted to run or just die or be paralysed from the moment, they both stood there staring with their jaws open, with there eyes not moving at all as they stood at the focused sight, Carver...they wondered what would happen next but then, Carver cut himself on the cheek, holding the knife in front of Ven's face and his fist in front of Carl's, Carl had his foot up as if he was going to step back, but didn't and Ven changed his sight to the knife with his dad's blood on it, they both were shaken and then Carver...Carver was going to do something Ven never though he would do before....

To be continued on chapter 2, hope you guys liked this story. Worked pretty hard on it and boy does it sound great to read it myself. So yeah don't worry folks chapter two will be coming soon, sooner than soon since I'll have time for the rest of the story so stay put and patient. Thanks for reading!

Seductive Dragon