Commission 01

Story by Furry Sith Lord on SoFurry

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#1 of Commissions

Commission Written for Leotoefinger


"The Family Visit"

Written By Furry Sith Lord

"Ahh It's good to be home because I thought we'd never return. Why are the flights to the states so damn long?" Natasha complained as she carried armfuls of luggage as she entered their simple cottage. She opened her arms widely and let the luggage fall to the floor but not before making sure they would not be damaged by the impact.

The silver coyote gestured and suddenly the vulpine sisters appeared in front of her with their heads bowed.

"Greeting's mistress," they replied in unison as the 3 imps fully materialized with a light purple colored smoke dissipated as they took form.

"See to these and get everything put away, Sam and I are tired from our trip." Natasha ordered and the imps began to obey her orders. Natasha went and sat on the couch and she held her head. It had been a whole month since she last entered her den and she had missed it greatly. What made things difficult was that she was so close to being able to enter it that the last few moments before she could enter it became excruciating.

Samantha entered carrying a single bag and her necklace made of three ruby colored teardrops still glistened as the light reflected off it. Her lush purple hair delicately curled on her shoulders as her red sequin gown accentuated her bosom and stood out as her black fathers made them seem to shine as brightly as the necklace did.

Her body was so delicate and beautiful that any of the boys around could fall in love and serve her paw and foot. Lucky for Natasha that Samantha was only interested in women.

"Why don't you take that thing off and we can both get comfortable." Natasha urged but Samantha was too busy being lost in thought.

"May I take your bag mistress?" Auram asked as her fur shone its natural beautiful golden color. Samantha absentmindedly handed it over without saying a word.

Natasha ran her paw through her blue hair and let it seductively fall to her shoulders. She felt hurt that Samantha's mind was elsewhere. Natasha had been longing to spend some intense quality time with her but she was too distracted to realize it.

"You're a disgrace and an abomination!" The words stung as Samantha remembered her father telling her that.

"Why did you even come here?" Her mother had asked her. She knew why she went and she knew she had done the right thing even if they had not seen it that way.

"Sam, SAM!!!!" Natasha was calling her and she finally snapped out of her daydream.

"What?!" Samantha replied her voice held her annoyance but she was not really mad at her lover, far from it. No, just the further insults of her so-called family is what was setting her off.

"I was hoping we could talk for a bit. You seem really distracted and I thought we'd talk about it." Natasha replied.

"I need a shower first," Samantha replied as she made her way towards their bathroom and Natasha sighed deeply. She had hoped they could put all of this behind them and move on with their lives.

"Do you need my help? I can help you become more comfortable by getting you outta that outfit and let you be yourself again." Natasha was anxiously waiting to place her lover on her bed and pull that necklace off so that she would return to normal.

Natasha found that her lover was more irresistible like this and longed to taste her secretions. Samantha fed her with a love that she never knew existed and she wanted it all. Though Samantha feared that she was just a drug Natasha was hooked on, she just couldn't deny the fox and desperately wanted to share the unspeakable pleasure Natasha gave her.

Samantha remembered the day her sister had called her trying to reconnect after they had not spoken in so long.

"Hello?" Samantha replied into an earpiece and microphone attachment that connected to her Ipad and allowed her to make phone calls. She was not wearing her necklace, which was safely locked up by Natasha, so her weight surrounded her like a little person stuck in a mountain of blubber. Her arms and legs stuck out like little nubs and made her legs unusable but at least she could use her wings.

They reminded her of the little nubs the boys in high school had. They always used to brag about their penises but when she had faced them teasing her about her weight. She was just turned off by them.because if she was to ever sleep with someone, they had to love her for her and not love her because they thought she was an easy score. Many of the girls talked about the guys they slept with and nothing but disappointing stories and how kissing a boy was like kissing a dead fish.

Natasha was the first to change all that and Samantha discovered that Natasha could please her in ways she never thought imaginable. It was like Natasha knew every inch of her body and knew every sweet spot. When they touched the unspeakable rapture made her squirt in ways that no boy could ever do. It was then that she realized that her only true love was Natasha.

"Sam? Is that you? It's me." the soft voice replied and she felt her beak drop open as she suddenly recognized that her sister was the one calling her. This was a surprise since Anita and her parents had not spoken in three years when her parents disowned her. She suddenly felt a pang of fear that something had happened and she was just finding out about it. It wouldn't surprise her that she was the last to know because her family lived in the states and that was almost on the other side of the world.

"Anita? Is it really you?" Samantha asked then she used her stubby arm to feed herself her favorite snack. Something about her comfort food helped relax her slightly but she could only guess why her sister decided to call. Her father's last words made it very clear what the family thought of her.

"Sorry to call unannounced but I've missed you. I was hoping we could talk like we used to." Anita said. Like a giant weight had been lifted Samantha felt better and was glad to know that her sister still wanted her in her life.

"I'm going to take a shower to help me relax, then I'll fulfill my promise." Samantha said trying to remain optimistic but knowing Natasha, she would not be able to take another shower for a while after she started fulfilling their promise.

"You don't need to do anything special for me, I love you just the way you are. The real you, not this pretend you." Natasha said. She rose from the couch and used her snout to nuzzle Samantha's neck.

"I've never loved someone the way I love you. Remember the night we first met? I saw you and it was like... magic. Something I had never felt before and when I first looked into your eyes, I knew you were the one for me." Samantha replied weakly as Natasha touched her breast with her delicate paw lightly feeling it. The touch was explosive and it sent jolts throughout her body that made her flinch uncontrollably.

"Let's skip the shower right now because I've been longing to touch you." Natasha replied and tried to lead Samantha towards the giant mattress that had a large indent in the center.

"Ewww, gross, I'm all yucky. I promise it will be a quick one." Samantha said and she forced herself to break away but she knew if she didn't, then the last of her resolve would make her give in to Natasha's demands.

The truth was she still needed to clear her head after everything that happened. She entered the bathroom and undid her clothes and they fell effortlessly off her then she started the shower and entered letting the refreshing hot water caress her plumage.

"Hey Anita, I'm gonna be live streaming my game play for Halo 2. Are you gonna join in?" Samantha asked as she answered her sister's call about a month ago.

"Sam, I got some bad news and I'm not sure who to talk to about it." Anita replied her voice sounded on the verge of breaking down into tears.

"Anita, what is it?! You know you can tell me anything." Sam began to panic and she heard her own heart beating so loudly that she was afraid she'd wake Natasha as she slept in her den.

"It's mom, the doctor found a lump on her breast and they had to biopsi it. With any luck it's just benign but mom is busy writing out her will and has given up any hope. Dad believes it's God's will and we must be patient and wait on him." Anita replied.

"Stay safe sis, because I'm on my way home. I don't care if they don't want to see me, I'm not gonna let things end the way they did. If cancer is involved then I at least will be the bigger person," Samantha looked down at her blubber and had to stifle a laugh because if only they saw how she had really turned out then they could easily see that she was the bigger person.

"Natasha, I need a favor, my mother may have cancer and I need to go see that she's alright." Samantha said, hoping her lover would understand.

"I get it, family comes first. No worries, when do we leave and for how long?"

"There's a flight in a couple of days but are you sure you want to come along? You know my family hates you." Samantha asked, stunned.

"Of course, I know what those people are like and I'm not leaving you to face them alone." Natasha replied and Samantha tried to reach out and grab her paw. Natasha slid her body against Samantha's using the sweat she had to help her glide effortlessly over Samantha's blubber and gripped her stubby little wing. The smell was intoxicating and Natasha knew there was no way that she would just be able to leave her.

"I did some calculations and I'll be... we'll be gone for about a month."

"A month! That long?!!!!" Natasha released her stubby wing and slid off her.

"I'm sorry but if this is the last chance, I get to be with my mother I need to make every second count." Samantha asked and she felt her heart pounding again because she feared Natasha would decide she no longer wanted to be with her. She knew she was asking for much and even bringing her along to face her family.

"Am I gonna be able to enter the den?"

"I'm afraid not, In the states their construction is very fragile so I have to wear my amulet the whole time." Samantha replied.

"The whole time!!!"

"I know, but I promise I'll make it up to you."

"How?" Natasha asked skeptically.

"I...um... when we get back, I swear for a month solid I'll let you eat and rest in the den uninterrupted."

"So, you won't argue that I'm in there too long or try and force me out?!" Natasha asked.

"Yes, I promise! I know I'm asking a lot but..."

"Deal," Natasha summoned the vulpine sisters and set them about packing their luggage.

"You don't know what this means to me." Samantha exclaimed and Natasha smiled and looked at her.

When they finally arrived at Samantha's old house Natasha piled up the luggage on the sidewalk then gripped her wing as Samantha pressed the doorbell. A shorter raven, that looked to be the same size as Samantha was when Natasha first met her, answered the door. Natasha guessed this must be her little sister Anita.

"Ooooh girl, it's so good to see you. Come here." Anita said. They instantly hugged, hesitating to break apart. Natasha felt herself smiling again because it's been too rare since she last saw her do that.

"I can't believe you keep telling me you gained so much weight and bla, bla, bla, but you look better than you ever did." Anita replied then looked and saw Natasha for the first time.

"Hello, I'm Natasha." she said, trying to not sound awkward. Anita stepped over and hugged her, welcoming them.

"Anita, what's going on?" a male voice and a large black bowerbird appeared in the doorway. He looked at Samantha and Natasha and squinted his eyes.

"Can I help you?" he asked. Samantha blushed as the feathers on her face turned a light shade of red. The male had his gaze fixed on her as he looked at her with more hatred than Natasha knew a parent could feel for a child. He ignored Natasha entirely and she immediately stepped in front trying to block her out of his view.

"It's nice to meet you, sir. My names Natasha and I am..." Natasha paused mid-sentence because he continued to stare at Samantha as if Natasha was not even there standing in front of her.

"Dad, this is Samantha." Anita said, trying to ease the situation.

"And you're here because..." He replied emotionless and Natasha put her paws behind her back in order to resist slapping the color out of him.

"Dad, I came to see mom. I heard she may have cancer." Samantha finally replied. And the bowerbird grunted then went back into the house. After a long pause a female raven appeared. She looked frail and haggard as if had not slept well for the last few days.

"Samantha? Isn't this a pleasant surprise." she said, having to force the words out.

"Mom are you alright? I heard it might be cancer." Samantha said and she leaned in to try and hug her mother but she instead waved her off.

"Your father has been praying every day and we won't know for certain until the results come back in. Maybe by next Friday we'll know." She replied.

"Oh, so where are you guys staying?" Anita asked deceptively hoping to push things along despite how terrible it seemed to be going.

"Actually, everything looks different since I was last here. Can you recommend a hotel Natasha and I can stay at?" Samantha asked. Her mother in the meantime was looking at Natasha as if she were a rattlesnake about to strike.

"You're her," she asked but couldn't bring herself to say the words.

"Yes, I'm her lover." Natasha said bravely. Samantha's mother tried to look calm although she looked as if she just swallowed her tongue.

"We still have your old room set up. We were hoping you'd settle down and meet a guy and give me grandbabies. I'm sure it can fit... both of you." The matron raven replied.

"Here let me get your stuff." Anita said and walked over to the pile of luggage. Natasha went to help and asked Anita where to bring the bags.

Samantha entered her old room and the flashback of memories was overwhelming. She remembered playing horsey with her father when she was little and the times they went on vacation. She remembered how much she hated going to church with the pastor squawking about how she was supposed to think and what she was supposed to think.

Natasha brought the last of their luggage into the room and sat on the bed next to Samantha. Natasha reached out and held her wing as tears filled her eyes. An unspeakable message passed between them.

"You did what?" They heard the sound of Samantha's parents arguing. Samantha suddenly remembered how thin the walls were. Neither wanted to listen in but in addition to feeling it might not be a good idea to leave the room. Natasha was interested to see what it was like for Samantha growing up. The room had everything a young female raven would have and Natasha was glad that Samantha had covered up the crosses while they were moving the bags in. There was enough religious paraphernalia in the house that she could feel her skin crawl. Natasha was suddenly wishing they had decided to go to a hotel.

"Calm down,"

"Don't you tell me to calm down! How could you bring that sin into our home?" He shouted and Samantha began to silently sob. Natasha rose and began to pace and wondered if the bowerbird would like to know how thin the walls are when she pushed his head through one.

"Stop it! You know the Lord would approve of us reaching out to help his wayward child." The matron raven responded and Natasha quickly noticed that they were only referring to Samantha because nothing in what was said seemed to indicate her.

"Some things even the Lord wouldn't stand for."

"But blessed are the peacemakers! We owe it to help guide her on a path away from hell but we can't do that unless we first try and reach out to her." The matron raven replied.

"But we can't have them committing that abinination under our very roof!"

"Just be patient and let the Lord take hold of the situation." she replied and the room fell silent. Natasha froze as she was examining the room because she somehow feared any little noise would cause the whole thing to blow up again.

"I love you; you know that and nothing will change that. Don't let the foolishness of two silly old bigots rob you of your own happiness." Natasha said and she hoped that Samantha's parents were able to hear what she said because their plan to break them up was not going to work!

The next day Anita offered to take Samantha and Natasha sightseeing and Samantha got a chance to see how much things had changed in the last three years. The governor had started a beautification project and many of the old dilapidated buildings were torn down to bring in new clients and help make the city look as great as it once did.

Samantha's father seemed to be staying away from the house as much as possible and they only heard him leaving very early and returning home very late in the evening. The Matron raven blamed it on his job plus he was going to church in the evenings to pray. Both Samantha and Natasha were skeptical but remained silent to keep the peace.

Samantha even set up some live streams with her sister while Natasha went back to examine the bedroom to see if there were any details she missed. She did not want to get in the way of the quality time between the sisters and she really wasn't that much of a fan of video games. Her whole life was like one giant video game so why did she need to play them, she would ask herself.

Natasha's vampiric side could barely tolerate the religious symbols throughout the house so she tried to remain in either Samantha's bedroom or outside where they could not affect her.

The matron raven was passing by and stopped as she observed the coyote and entered to find out what she was up to.

"Lose something, dear." she asked Natasha skeptically.

"Huh? Oh no sorry, I'm just fascinated by Sam's room. It tells me a lot about what it was like for her growing up." Natasha replied and the motherly raven sat on the edge of the bed and motioned the coyote to join her.

"I hate to say it, but these kinds of relationships are unnatural. That's why they never work out and in the end, you'll be all alone trying to find another person to fill the void.

I'm sure you don't want to admit that I'm right, but something to think about is that now that she's home with her family it would be the best time for you to end it so we can take care of her and pick up the pieces." she told Natasha and then she rose and left the room as Natasha struggled with a way to respond.

Every day felt like a pressure cooker building up steam and Natasha slowly began to suggest they find a hotel because her presents was antagonizing the situation. In addition, she was tired of the religious stuff pricking at her whenever she walked by them.

Finally, the day of the results came in and Anita and Samantha's parents met with the doctor to go over the results. Later that night everyone, including Natasha was asked to join them in the kitchen.

"So, your mother and I met with the doctor today and the results showed that the lump is benign. Thank the Lord." he replied.

"God works in mysterious ways and I'm glad He stole the victory that the enemy was trying to get." The matron raven said and Natasha listened, not having any clue what they were talking about. Who was this enemy? Why was he attacking her, other than the fact they were hate filled bigots, and had they asked her she could have found the demon and not only saved Samantha's mother but made sure he suffered horribly before she killed him.

"So, what happens now?" Anita asked.

"He's gonna watch it but he says usually these things take care of themselves." the matron raven replied.

"I've ordered some food to celebrate and will you be joining us to thank the Lord for all He's done when we go to church on Sunday?" he asked as he stared at Samantha.

"No dad, I'm not comfortable with churches or religion. I'm good." she replied bashfully and the look of scorn now filled his face.

"Honey, maybe they have their own things to take care of." the matron raven replied but she stared at Natasha as if to indicate that she was to follow her previous demand in Samantha's bedroom.

"I realize we haven't spent much time together, how about if I take you shopping and maybe to a movie? We'll have a girls night out." Samantha finally asked, hoping to break the uncomfortable silence that hung about.

"I'm too old for all that, why don't you take your sister instead? Which reminds me, how long are you planning on staying?" The matron raven asked.

"The earliest return flight tickets I could book are set for a little over a week away. Can you put up with us till then or have we overstayed our welcome?" Samantha asked and Natasha already knew the answer even though she knew little about these people.

"It's fine dear." the matron raven replied sourly.

"Well, though I usually hate to disagree with my wife. Perhaps it is a good idea if you found your own lodgings. It would give you the chance to be yourselves, God knows what that is." he replied and Natasha turned to face him, her own face full of fury.

"So, what's for dinner? I'm starving." Anita replied hoping to change the subject.

"We've been awfully patient trying to keep the peace while you two fools keep trying to get your digs in." Natasha snapped as her last button was pressed.

"Well, this is a family matter, so if you could see your way out of it." he said.

"Well, I am family, at least to Sam and I've been better to her than you have been to her in her whole life!"

"Preposterous!" He screamed.

"This is the type of person you bring into our house? To insult us? Why did you even come here in the first place?" The matron raven said as she used her wings to make Samantha look at her. Samantha sat there dumbfounded because she agreed wholeheartedly with what Natasha was saying. She had hoped they could have a fresh start and start over but at every chance they kept ignoring Natasha and pushing her away.

"Listen you damn bowerbird, if you change your tone with me, I'll knock you on your bower-ass!" Natasha got up real close and they locked eyes until he finally looked away.

"I think you both better leave." he said quietly then turned and left. Natasha grabbed Samantha's wing and led her to her bedroom to pack.

Samantha was startled as the water suddenly became cold against her plumage. She had been daydreaming about the incident longer than she wanted to. She turned off the water and quickly shook off some remaining water droplets on her feathers.

She did not want anything to remind her of this disaster. She was just glad to be home again away from all the drama her family put her through. The way Natasha just stepped in and put them in their place made her realize how much more she loved Natasha.

Natasha was on the couch rubbing her forehead while Samantha was in the shower and as the vulpine sisters finished putting away the luggage Cerulean was the first to notice that Natasha seemed bothered and carefully approached her mistress to find out what was troubling her.

"I'm fine, I just haven't been home in a while and it's taking its toll on me." She told the imp. Cerulean looked at her and tilted her head in confusion as the two other sisters joined.

"But we are home now so everything should be better, right mistress?" Auram replied after contemplating the little she heard and trying to make sense of it.

"No, I don't mean this place, I mean my real home." Natasha replied feeling her headache getting worse. Although they did not mean to, their questioning was annoying Natasha. All she wanted was to enter her den and although Samantha had said her shower was going to be quick, it seemed to be taking longer than it should have.

"Maybe our mistress is referring to the castle?" Viridian replied and the other two sisters pondered this and found themselves agreeing that the castle was what she was talking about. Natasha huffs as she stares at the imps wondering how they can be so clueless but her gaze was drawn to Samantha as she stood nearby and her blushing face matched perfectly with her red dress.

"I got this, why don't you finish up and leave us be." Samantha told them and they quickly bowed and scurried off. Natasha's eyes were practically glued as Samantha seductively walked by her and used her wing to gently stroke the underside of Natasha's maw.

Samantha sits in the center of a large indent of the mattress. She screads her legs then pouts her face.

"Ah this dress is in the way, if only I had a way to remove it." Samantha continued to pretend to pout but she looked knowingly at Natasha, who was scrambling over to her. Natasha starts trying to remove the dress but the longer it takes the more impatient she becomes until she uses her claws to cut the remaining bits away.

"Does my dog want to go back into her den?" Samantha teased and Natasha was so overcome with emotion she passionately kissed Samantha with her tail wagging rapidly.

"I'm gonna need a few days there to help me recover after everything that's happened." Natasha said then she began to use her tongue to caress Samantha's breast and she was getting more turned on as Samantha giggled from excitement.

Natasha felt herself being lifted as Samantha removed her special necklace. As soon as the clasp was unlocked a thick purple smoke began to emulate from Samantha's body and she began to swell up as she returned to her normal weight and size.

In mere moments Natasha was laying on a mound of fat and feathers. Even though she had just showered, her feathers were becoming slick with sweat and the smell was intoxicating to her. She climbed her way to get close enough to kiss Samantha again. Her heart beating rapidly now that she could be with the real Samantha not the fake slim one the amulet created.

"OK Love, you can go into your den now." Samantha said and Natasha grinned as she nuzzled the layers of fat on Samantha's neck.

"You're the best." Natasha replied as her tail continued to rapidly wag. She slid down the oversized gut of Samantha then looked back up at her and smiled as her eyes were shining with the love she felt for her.

She carefully lifted Samantha's stomach and crawled underneath it then lets the undercarriage land on top of her with the blubber vibrating as it hit the mattress and as the mattress shook so did the fat.

At first the only part of her that stuck out was her tail but slowly it was pulled in the undercarriage that it too disappeared. Natasha feels invigorated as the sweaty undercarriage drives her into a frenzy from the musky smell and glistening feel of it against her fur.

Samantha asks one of the minions to bring her her Ipad so she can check up to see if she missed anything online. The tablet beeps showing she has a text message and when she opens it she sees that it was from Natasha! This was unusual for Samantha because she had never done something like this before. She quickly read the text to see what her lover wanted.

Today

1300

Its me

Can I grab a snack?

Or are you tired from our trip?

Of course

Please eat babe

You were so good to me

On the trip

Bon Appetit

??????

Samantha was shocked that Natasha was actually asking permission. She wondered if Natasha had realized that the reason why Samantha was so anxious was because of how her parents had treated her and she was now a little bit more sympathetic towards her. She tensed her legs as she waited for her lover to begin.

Natasha read the text in the undercarriage with the musky juices enveloping her and the temperature rising that it was like being wrapped in a giant hug or comfy blanket. The smell was setting her on edge and she could not get enough of it. But it was more than mere sweat but the natural juices from the raven's privates that saturated itself into her fur filling her with ecstasy.

Samantha was on edge waiting and suddenly she felt the tongue of her lover begin to probe her. The raven began to purr like a cat as she tightly gripped the mattress and leaned back as far as she could under the feeling, she wished it would never end.

Natasha was completely soaked as she continued to bring her lover to climax. The secretions covering and matting her fur brought her to her own climax and she wished this moment would never end. Even when Samantha passed out from the intense feelings Natasha did not want to stop because she knew her lover could still feel her and she wanted to continue to please her.

Natasha also set about restoring her den to how it was before they left because she had a certain way, she liked it and as she returned it to her favorite style she suddenly realized.

"It's good to finally be home." She thought to herself.