What A Vacation (Commission)

Story by Ralan165 on SoFurry

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#12 of Commissions

Audrey and Caleb start their summer vacation with a bang.

A commission for Elberik. Characters belong to their original owners.


Florida had a certain mystery to it. Audrey found herself pondering it as she watched the clear blue sky from the passenger side of their rental, her girlfriend driving along the highway with a smile across her face. The squirrel hadn't been to the state before, having only heard of it through various memes on the internet. While memes weren't true, most of the time, part of her expected to see some chaos unfold when they left the airport.

"Nervous?" Caleb asked, the orange furred fox's eyes peeled off the road toward the grey squirrel's form. Audrey shook her head, laying against the faux-leather seat and breathing in its heavy scent. "Why would I be? It's just a week-long vacation."

"Yeah, but you're always nervous. Like your face is stuck that way."

Audrey rolled her eyes, "I am not."

"Remember prom?"

She remembered prom. Her face turned red whenever it came up. "To...to be fair," Audrey gulped, "You had my tits out during the photo."

"And your mouth yanked open with a ring gag." Caleb smirked, "God, you were so frisky after that. You kept me up all night when we got back to your mom's."

Audrey curled up into a ball, hiding her burning pink face as they continued off down the highway. Every so often she peaked out, scouring the long Floridian coastline stretching across the horizon. While they had been dating since highschool, and spent plenty of time together, one week of being at the beach had her brimming with excitement.

Until they reached the gate. Audrey's eyes went wide at the black iron gates situated between two cobblestone pillars. The squirrel rubbed her eyes, swearing to herself that they weren't going past them. The chubby schnauzer in the front booth smiled as they pulled up, "Welcome to Camelhoof Cove, staying long or just visiting?" Audrey looked him over, trying to piece something about him that felt off. His collared shirt flowed loose, but she saw no seam of pants for him to tuck in underneath the countertop.

"Week long stay," Caleb said as she pulled out a card, "Under Stevenson."

"Oh, fun." Swiping the card, the gates opened and with a warm smile underneath his beard he continued, "Well enjoy your stay."

"Caleb, we can't be staying here, right?" Audrey's confusion didn't waiver even as the gates closed behind them. She figured they'd be checking into a small beach house, maybe one owned by a family friend. Not something deep in a gated community.

"Course we are. My aunt has a timeshare here. Plus I saved up a year for this."

"Your aunt?"

"Don't worry, she's not using it this year." Through the white stone bridges and palm tree filled forests, Audrey watched the clay tiled roofs enter nearing them as well as furs with sunglasses, wide brim hats, loose shirts and...Audrey blinked, her eyes staring directly at the heavy balls of a pantless stallion walking around casually.

Caleb chuckled, "Like what you see?" She asked, "Didn't think I'd send us to some normal resort did you?"

The thought had crossed her mind. Audrey gulped as she spotted more naked furs dotting the landscape, some even waving at them as they passed. She hadn't even realized her smile until she noticed the squirrel staring back at her in the window's reflection. "And yeah, I think we're gonna be out a lot," Caleb said as they drove up the driveway, "I didn't pack an xbox."

She marveled at the three story square house standing between two others. White paint covering it entirely with a tiled roof and windows at every floor. The second floor and third floor carried balconies with lounge chairs to watch the ocean from. Taking her strangely light bag up the front steps, Audrey paused at the keypad by the door. "Advanced stuff," Caleb explained, imputing the number, "They like to beef up security. Not sure why, not like they get crimes in a gated community."

"What's the passcode?" Caleb answered her question with a cocky grin and stepped inside. White painted walls and hardwood floors filled her view, with marble countertop islands around the kitchen and stairs stabbed into the wall rather than built along them. She followed her girlfriend up the steps, stopping at the third floor master bedroom. A king size bed awaited them, with white floral sheets and shells dotting atop the dresser.

"Best view in the house," the fox said, dumping her bag against the bed. She opened the sliding door, letting the ocean air breeze through and filled Audrey's nostrils with the salty scent. Not as strong as the squirrel expected, but noticeable, among other things such as her girlfriend standing in the sunlight. She gulped, watching Caleb lift her sunglasses up and lean into the wooden railing with the confidence she carried just about everywhere.

She shook her head. Audrey could watch later, now was the time to unpack. She started with Caleb's clothes first, and only her clothes. The fox had a separate bag for their toys, one she preferred to remain a surprise for the squirrel. Like always, Caleb hadn't packed a single feminine thing: Baggy shorts, swim trunks, loose shirts, everything that screamed tomboy despite being an adult.

But when it came time for hers, she found it empty. "Hey, honey? Where's my clothes?" She asked, staring into the empty case as if it'd reveal its secrets to her. Caleb shut the door behind her, cutting off the seagull cries and sorting through another bag with her confident smirk plastered across her face. "Caleb, you did pack me clothes, right? I mean, I get that this place is a bit out there, but I do need clothes for some things."

"Course I did, babe," She said, pulling out a neon pink string bikini, "I'm sure they're in the car, but we can get them later. Right now..." The fox pushed the exposing swimsuit into Audrey's hands, leaning in to whisper, "You get to be my slutty beach babe."

Those words made her legs weak. Audrey clasped the swimsuit tight, her breathing growing heavy as Caleb's face twisted to a delightfully sadistic grin. She nodded, heartbeat pounding in her chest. "Yes, Mistress."

Every step to the beach felt like a nip slip waiting to happen. Audrey's string bikini left little to the imagination, with her top only covering her nipples and strings tightly looping to her bottom, slipping between her cheeks while the small patch barely covered her crotch. The squirrel's grey face burned pink underneath her facial fur as she followed Caleb, keeping apart with a mental leash and staring down at her girlfriend's tight ass.

At a glance, or at least from a distance, Caleb could have been mistaken for a boy and likely was the look she wanted. Instead of a bikini or even a thong, Caleb wore blue swim trunks and a loose open buttoned hawaiian shirt with nothing else to cover her flat chest. Despite being in charge, she opted to carry most of their equipment, hauling a folded beach chair and towel in one arm, and the parasoul in the other. Audrey wanted to help, but the fox insisted she walk with as little burden as possible.

In hindsight, it made it easier for everyone to see her. Even for a nudist friendly resort, Audrey earned a few head turns from locals and visitors. Glimpses of crotch wiggling and burgeoning erections flooded her peripheral gaze. What could they be whispering when she passed by? How they'd take her, maybe? How men and women might form a line to ravage her breasts before pushing her against the burning sand and pounding-

"Earth to Audrey," Caleb whistled and snapped her fingers. Audrey blinked, hearing the calming crash of waves hit the beach and the feral gulls cawing over them. Looking down, she saw the fox sitting underneath the parasol's shade with a towel laid out on the sand, her hand firmly planted on it. "Lay down. Get some sun."

From Caleb's look, there was more to it than that. Not that Audrey didn't follow, laying flat on her back and letting the sun's rays bombard her. With closed eyes, she listened and waited. Shifting sands, hushed whispers, laughter, how much of it was directed at her? Her folds grew wet, the urge to toy with herself stronger with every second.

Then there was a digging sound. Audrey peered up, seeing Caleb off of her seat and digging into the sand with a small shovel. "Babe, what are you doing?"

"Digging." Caleb continued unhindered.

"Uh huh..." She could see that clearly, "Why are you digging?"

Caleb stopped and turned, sporting her oh so smug little grin. "You know, I think I saw a concession stand down the beach. Can you get me a lemonade? You can just use the house number for the tab."

"S-sure, I can-" Caleb grabbed her ankle as she got up, still sporting her soft smile, "Turn around and point your butt to me. I wanna add a little something." She did, biting her lip as her vixen girlfriend uncapped a marker and pressed it against her backside, writing something that everyone but her could see.

"Keep your tail up, make mine with ice, and don't make a scene." Audrey felt a sharp slap across her behind, sending her forward down the hot sands and slipping a nipple from her bikini, which she promptly put back into place. What did she write? The urge to check clawed up her spine but she suppressed it long enough to wait in line. There she waited, fingers moving about in anxiety as the furs before her ordered.

Another slap struck her backside. Audrey yelped, but held her ground, earning a chuckle from someone passing by. Each step forward met with another spanking across her backside. Some were a light pat, more in it for the thrill of touching. Others cracked their palms like thunder against her backside.

When she reached the bartender, her ass throbbed and burned red from every hit. "One..." Audrey labored her breaths, "Actually..." She held up two fingers, "Two lemonades please, both with ice."

The barkeep smiled, "Need an extra bag of ice with it?" The squirrel couldn't look him in the eye. Drinks in hand, she thankfully didn't meet any more beachgoers eager to slap her backside. Caleb looked pleased, both of the hole she dug and of Audrey's blushing smile as she took the lemonade from her hand. "Long line?" She asked.

"Too long...sorry."

"What for?" The fox smirked, "I made sure you stayed entertained." She pointed to the hole, and, like she'd been trained, Audrey put her drink aside and laid back into it, biting her lips as sand piled against her reddened cheeks. "Hold up, hold up," Caleb said, grabbing a second towel and putting it under the girl's cheeks, "There. Can't have you too uncomfortable. And keep your head up." She started tossing sand atop the squirrel, burying Audrey up to her neck.

"Perfect, just perfect," Caleb said. Pulling away her swim trunks, the fox crouched down over the trapped rodent. Her lower lips braced Audrey's tongue, with a hand tight against her scalp and keeping her steady. "Get to work, bitch," The fox growled, "Earn your air."

With no bondage except the weight of sand and Caleb's grip, Audrey buried her tongue against her girlfriend's cunt. The swimsuit was too much, the spanking overkill, but now no one had an excuse to ignore her. In her mind's eye, the squirrel imagined everyone at the beach watching, their heads turned at the sight of the shameful slut buried up to her neck and face deep against the fox's cooch.

Caleb pulled off for only a second, letting her slave gasp for hair with the fresh taste of fox juice before bracing back against that tongue for more. "God...you're so much better in public..." The fox grunted, claws digging into Audrey's scalp. "You try in the bedroom, but outside where everyone can see? It's either you or me, but it makes this so much better." She knew it was her. Audrey wanted everyone to stare at her body, despite every bit of evidence to the contrary.

The sand held her steady, leaving the squirrel's hands squirming and unable to toy with herself. Caleb kept grounding against her tongue, shuddering at the first wave surging through her body. She didn't stop, intent to ride her slave's face until exhaustion took her. After four, the fox fell back, her drenched cunt open wide before her girlfriend as her chest heaved with each breath.

"Fuck, that was good..." Caleb muttered, staring up into the clear sky. Audrey arched her gaze up to see her mistress, her own mouth sore and strained. For a minute, they stayed still. The taste of Caleb's juices still fresh on her tongue, strengthened by the smell emanating from the open cooch. She saw curious smiles and lustful blushes from the corner of her eye, added with the erections popping from all the nude beachgoers. Her shame burned hotter than the sun.

Getting up, Caleb grabbed a bottle of water and pressed it against Audrey's lips, who happily lapped away at it. When emptied, she grabbed the lemonade and placed the straw to her lips, then stepped behind the squirrel to rummage through their bags. Not a second later after Audrey tasted the refreshing tang of lemons, did Caleb plant a signpost right next to her.

"Caleb what's that-" A wide ring gag cut her off, locking around the squirrel's head and keeping her mouth open. "Phase two, that's what," The fox whispered, planting a kiss atop her head before waving down furs passing by. To her lusting terror, an array of bare, sandled, or flipflop wearing feet started to line up beside the sign.

"No paying?" Asked the hippo lady in the front, naked from the waist down. One quick nod from Caleb and the woman's mounds blocked out the sun, the crushing weight of her cunt pressed down upon Audrey. She started licking without prompting, searching and lapping at whatever she could to get her precious air again. Any cries or comments made were muffled through the hippo's folds.

Her orgasm came quickly, returning light to the squirrel's gaze as she lifted up and let her breath. A wolf stood next, his cock already raging. "Can we take the gag off?" He asked, pumping the average sized cock with glee.

"Gag stays on. No knotting her mouth."

"Words for me." He got down on her knees and grabbed her head, pushing it upward so his cock could dive straight into her throat. He growled and grunted with every thrust, using her throat like a mere cocksleeve while everyone watched. "Yeah...you like nuts you fucking slut? Well take my nut. My big...fat...nut!" It twitched before the seed shot down her throat. Laughs echoed behind them, either at Audrey's predicament, the wolf's attempt at shameplay, or both. Either way, his seed wasn't the only one in her gullet tonight. She lost count of how many cunts and cocks braced her tongue. Cocks too big were told to either get eaten out analy, or, from crowd chants, cover her face in seed. Some came just to have their ass eaten, and everyone had something to say. Whether it be a gasp and cry before orgasm, an insult to play up their dominance, or the rare few sweet words telling Audrey what a good girl she was.

By the time the sun started to set, Audrey's facial fur was matted in cum, her jaw ached, and the line hadn't died down. "Ok folks, show's over," Caleb said, pulling the sign out and waving everyone off. Audrey let her head hang backwards, her ears deaf to all the moans of disappointment as everyone else walked off. The gag came off first, finally letting her close her mouth and spit seed or juice that lodged in her throat.

The fox wasted no time in digging her out, careful not to hit anything with her shovel while making her way through a solid foot of sand. Audrey dug herself up where she could, hands clawing from the ground as if rising from the very grave. If Caleb had any zombie movie comments, she kept them to herself as she pulled the squirrel out. "Let's get you cleaned up." Caleb hooked Audrey's arm around her neck, helping the squirrel across the beach.

Her swimsuit had fallen off when they reached the open showers. Caleb had stripped out of her hawaiian shirt before turning the knob. The two girls shrieked at the cold blast of water raining down on them, hugging each other tight for warmth as it dosed the muck off of Audrey's fur. "How are you feeling?" Caleb asked, her confidence replaced with concern and a shaking grip against the squirrel's sides.

"Tired..." Audrey whispered, too tired to care about the stares, "Pretty fucking horny too." Caleb smiled, relieved to hear her girlfriend's arousal remained despite it all. "Haven't seen this many people play with you since prom," The fox added.

"Glad we didn't need condoms this time."

"Hey, I packed some. Who do you think I am?" Caleb said.

Cleaned up and dried off, the two packed up their stuff and walked back to the beach house. Neither girl put their clothes back on, finding no point in covering up after that fiasco. Besides, without the string swimsuit, Audrey felt freer. Being naked was less humiliated than the strings.

"Streaming passwords are on the remote. I'll order pizza while you pick something," Caleb said as they entered the house. Audrey had nothing of interest in her mind, flipping through random rom coms until she found one that seemed the least offensive. Or the most, whichever the girls could riff on. Caleb returned with a heavy blanket and together they cuddled against the leather couch as the movie played.

"Hey, so whatever happened to my clothes?" Audrey asked.

"Your clothes? Oh, right, duh." Caleb smacked herself, "Yeah I forgot them."

"In the car?" Audrey asked. Caleb smiled. "In the car, right?" She asked again.

The doorbell rang, "I think that's the pizza guy," the fox said, patting Audrey's cheek, "Why don't you go get it? I left tip money on the counter." With a dutiful but dreadful nod, the squirrel got up, hiding her smile and biting her lower lip at the upcoming week ahead of her..