Downsized party (Story commission)

Story by IsaacKonos on SoFurry

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A short story commission based on the drawing I previously posted.

Commission for Jacques DC on Discord. 

Story by me. 

Google drive link:https://drive.google.com/file/d/1KQij3_xpMB6Mo-BiPNhYrgyUZNfwEL5I/view?usp=sharing 

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The music was loud, and the party was booming. The fun had barely started, but everybody seemed to be quite enjoying it, you included. At least until something happened, something that immediately diverted your attention from all the fun happening around you.

It seems to have happened in the blink of an eye. You were trying to walk through the somewhat crowded hallway, but suddenly you find yourself in a very spacious place. If it weren't for the loud music still booming in the background, you would have never guessed where you were. Looking around, all you could see was a large, seeming almost endless plan desert! Yes, that is right! A desert! But it was made of wood. The desert itself was divided by large, imposing canyons that looked like massive geological crevices to make it more impressive.

There were no doubts about it. You were exactly in the same place, in the middle of the hallway. You were just small now! Really small! Your best bet is to assume you were at least ant-size! But, judging by the sheer size of everything around you, one can say ant-size is too much for you now. No, you were even smaller than that!

Immediately, your little heart begins to race! Countless thoughts invaded your mind! How and why did you shrink? Were you the only one to shrank? At this moment, you heard something. Somebody yelling, but too far away. Paying more attention to the horizon, you see the form of another person! And looking more attentive, you see a quite good group of people too! All shrank too! But, if everybody shrank, who is gonna help you out? Will you even be found? Maybe it would be better if you try to regroup with the others and come with a plan.

But unfortunately, you wouldn't have such an opportunity. The ground beneath your paws would begin to tremble, low-intensity tremors that soon turned into more intense, powerful tremors followed by loud rumbling explosions. Both the sound and the tremors were getting closer, soon they turned into earthquakes until finally, the sound source was revealed to you. Two-party goes who were walking nearby and approaching the hallway proved to be the source of the overpowering events that were threatening to turn your world upside down.

To stare at the two boys proved to be a difficult task on its own. The boys towered above you for kilometers! The scale of their bodies immediately put them in the deity category! And they were both heading in your direction! Each one of their bare paws was larger than the area of a city! Their toes alone seemed to be so imposing and gigantic!

Some of the other party goes who ended up shrank, just like you, found themselves underneath the shadow of those two titans. They were trying to get the boys to notice them. A complete waste of time and a deadly action! They were caught underneath the girly-looking boys' paws, utterly destroyed underneath countless tons of their slim body weight. Their bodies immediately turned into tiny red stains that would be easily washed away by the boys' natural sweat. Never to be found!

There is nothing you can do! You'll never outrun beings of such size and magnificence! You felt the powerful air displacement caused by their feet landing down on the wood floor, each time getting stronger. Looking up above again, you find it more and more difficult to make out their faces; you could barely see their bulges far, far up above until finally even that view was replaced, blocked by the view of a pink, dirty paw pad sole. The last thing you saw.