So it is Rewritten Episode 8

Story by MasterYubelMarik on SoFurry

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Can the ponies hold true to their word that they won't fall asleep too early while at Sparkleworks' house for a slumber party?


Early to Bed

*At the Cotton Candy Café...*

"Look what came in the mail. It's an invitation to a sleepover at Sparkleworks' house," said Pinkie.

"We've never been to her house before," said Minty.

"Says there will be fireworks and fun games too," added Pinkie Pie.

"Let's go then," said Cotton Candy.

"We can bring dessert over too," added Sweetberry.

"Good idea, Sweetberry. We'll have to be quick about it, though," agreed Pinkie Pie. *Later that day...*

"What a nice house, Sparkleworks," remarked Pinkie Pie.

"Thanks. I decorated it myself. All set for tonight's slumber party?" replied Sparkleworks.

"Absolutely, dahling. We've even brought goods for later," answered Rainbow Dash.

"So what're we gonna do first?" asked Minty.

"I thought we could tell scary stories before bed," suggested Sparkleworks.

"Bed? Do you even know how a slumber party works?" giggled Pinkie Pie.

"Yeah, we're not supposed to go to bed early, silly," added Minty.

"Oh I know. That's why it's for later, like after fireworks," assured Sparkleworks.

"What games do you have here?" asked Pinkie Pie.

"Pin the Pony Tail sound good?" asked Sparkleworks.

"I love that game," said Minty.

"Me too," agreed Pinkie Pie.

"We can let the pony that went choose next but it has to be someone different," added Sparkleworks.

"That sounds fair to me," remarked Pinkie Pie.

"I'll go first," said Twinkle Twirl.

"Alright and then you can pick afterwards," replied Sparkleworks before setting up Twinkle Twirl.

"Am I ready yet?" asked Twinkle Twirl.

"All set. Just start moving around and we'll tell you whether you're closer or further away from the proper place," explained Sparkleworks. *That night....*

"Anyone tired yet?" asked Minty.

"Not me. I feel I could be up all night," replied Pinkie Pie.

"Me too," agreed Minty.

"Me three," said Desert Rose.

"Especially with hot cocoa," added Sparkleworks with the drinks.

"It is pretty cold tonight," remarked Coconut Cream.

"The fireworks are starting," noted Star Catcher.

"They're so pretty," remarked Pinkie Pie.

"Are they yours, dahling?" asked Rainbow Dash.

"No. I just planned my slumber party the night they were going to happen. It's a yearly thing," explained Sparkleworks. *Later that night....*

"So tired but I must stay awake," yawned Pinkie Pie.

"Cannot....give......up...." stated Minty.

"No.....sleep.......for me," added Twinkle Twirl before all but Sparkleworks fell asleep.

"Goodnight, everyone," whispered Sparkleworks.