After Match Revenge (Lilypad's commission)

Story by Bluelighthouse on SoFurry

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#2 of Commissions

What happens when a Ravenclaw beater gets in the way of a Slytherin seeker? Why super fun girl-on-girl action that's what!


-After match revenge-

"That's another point for Slytherin!"

A voice boomed over the quidditch pitch. While there were no physical speakers to be seen the announcer's voice magically carried to all corners of the field.

The stands erupted with a series of boos and cheers in response to the recent score.

"Slytherin is ahead 40 to 10, if Ravenclaw doesn't start shoring up its defense it may not even matter if the snitch is ever found!"

As the words echoed across the field a certain snow-white vixen in a Slytherin quidditch uniformed smirked.

Lilian was the Slytherin's seeker. A 7th year at Hogwarts her whole role today was summed up into one simple sentence.

Find the snitch.

Once the small golden orb was captured it was an automatic 150 points for her team and an end to the match.

As long as Ravenclaw remained behind she would scour the field in search of the snitch.

The sooner she found the golden snitch the better.

A glint of gold caught the vixen's eyes which narrowed immediately towards the sea of green grass below.

She cursed herself when she realized she was just seeing things.

Several green and blue-robed figures zipped down the center of the pitch. All of them vying for the quaffle which would help their team score another 10 points.

Much to Lilian's annoyance, the match went on longer than she had hoped.

She kept an eye on the other team's seeker but sadly they were having just as much trouble locating the snitch as she was.

"Ravenclaw scores! It's now 40 to 40, we are all tied up!" The announcer's voice boomed once more.

That's when she saw it.

This time it wasn't the midday sun playing tricks on her.

No this glint of fluttering gold was what she had been looking for the entire match.

The white vixen clad in grin whipped her Firebolt around and aimed right for the snitch.

Lilian dove with such speed that she was sure there was no way the Ravenclaw seeker could catch up. She glanced over her shoulder and grinned, the blue robbed painted dog was several feet behind her.

This was it, there was no chance her opponent would catch up.

Lilian turned back to the snitch, her lips curling into a victorious grin as she put stretched one of her arms.

That's when she heard it.

Something was flying through the air right for her.

It wasn't just the air that alerted her, it was the sound of something grumbling and making muffled screeches.

Frick the bludger!

Lilian turned and her eyes widened in surprise as she spotted one of the black balls flying right towards her.

The vixen hugged her broomstick, causing her to flip upside down.

The usher whizzed over her, had she remained right side up she would have surely taken a blow to the head by the crazed enchanted ball.

As she righted herself she saw the Ravenclaw seeker dash by.

The painted dog reached out and nearly jumped off their broomstick as their paw grasped the snitch.

It was over...

"Ravenclaw wins!" The announcer's voice echoed throughout the stadium to cheers as blue confetti rained down out of nowhere.

Lilian's blood was boiling as her dark green and yellow flecked eyes narrowed on the reason for this upset.

A bunny in a Ravenclaw quidditch uniform was hovering a few yards away. A smug smile gracing her lips as she hefted her beaters club and let it rest on her shoulder.

The seeker and beater locked eyes.

While Lilian's held fire the pair of bright blue eyes looking at the vixen seemed calm.

That bitch!

The urge to dash at the mammal that had cost her the match crossed her mind for just a second but Lilian shrugged it off.

This loss was not the end. There would be other matches to be won.

Lilian turned her Firebolt broomstick and flew towards the ground where the rest of her team was waiting, all of their heads hanging low at the loss.

The Ravenclaw team meanwhile huddled together on their broomsticks and cheered as they hefted their seeker into the air, the canine still gripping the winning snitch.

As night fell over the castle grounds there was still a great deal of energy in the air.

Most Ravenclaw students had a skip in their step as they made their way through the halls.

There were of course a few fights between the younger Slytherin's and Ravenclaw.

However, they were quickly broken up by the older students.

Lilian being a prefect meant part of her duties were to assist in these matters which merely added salt to the wounds.

She nearly tossed a smug Ravenclaw 3rd year into a fountain in the courtyard when they had the nerve to say she was just being spiteful because she lost the game for her team.

Lilian skipped dinner that evening. Walking past the great hall she peeked inside.

The Ravenclaw table was especially rowdy. The victorious team was sitting at the head of the table.

Well, almost the whole team.

One or two of them were missing, most likely celebrating in private with their friends.

Lilian noticed immediately that the beater who had cost her the game was absent.

She had a feeling about where to look though.

Having been attending school for as long as she had you learned a thing or two. Especially when it came to where some mammals liked to hang out.

Lilian slinked away from the great hall, passing a group of Hufflepuff first years who were happily chatting about the upset during the day's match.

The urge to snap at the younger mammals crossed Lilian's mind but she held her tongue.

The fox made her way up a staircase leading away from the great hall. Her nose twitching as she tried to pick up a certain someone's scent.

With so many mammals though it was rather difficult.

Lilian though had a trick up her sleeve.

She simply asked some of the portraits throughout the castle. The magically enchanted pictures whose occupants came to life could sometimes be used to locate fellow students or guide lost students to the correct classrooms.

One portrait of a knight, who had some trouble standing up straight thanks to the many empty tankards of ale in his picture, pointed Lilian in the right direction.

Apparently, Lilian's quarry had been seen loitering in a small alcove just outside the Divination classroom which was located in the North Tower of the castle.

Lilian thanked the knight before hurrying through the halls.

When she arrived at the North tower she was surprised to find several students loitering around the staircases and even some of the alcoves.

Most of them were 6th and 7th years from various houses.

At the sight of Lilian though a few hurried away.

The vixen normally wore her prefect badge proudly but it was still on her school robes which were back in her room. The vixen was in a simple button-up white blouse and black skirt. Her green tie was loose around her neck.

Even in such casual apparel though most students recognized a prefect when they saw one.

Lilian made her way down the hall, the occasional whisper causing her raised ears to twitch.

A laugh caught her attention and she turned in the direction of the familiar sound.

Lilian's green and yellow flecked eyes narrowed as she spotted her prey.

The bunny from the Ravenclaw team was sitting haphazardly on a window sill, one of her legs hanging down and kicking lazily.

She was in a similar outfit to Lilian only her tie was dark blue and her shirt had one or two extra buttons undone, showing off her gifted cleavage.

The doe must have detected Lilian's gaze as her large bunny ears went up and turned in the vixen's direction. The large black tips on the does ears always seemed so odd to Lilian.

While most bunnies had simple black lines this bunny looked as if she had dunked her ears in a bucket of paint.

As Lilian approached several mammals stood up, most of them in Ravenclaw or Gryffindor apparel.

The doe however cleared her throat and raised a paw.

A smug smile on the bunny's face made Lilian's blood boil.

"I got this," the bunny said with a smirk as she hopped from the window sill and strolled over. "Something on your mind Moon?"

Lilian's eyes narrowed at the doe using her last name so casually.

Her family was an old bloodline and deserved far more honor and respect than this simple muggle-born bunny was giving her.

"Rose, You and I are going to have a chat about today," Lilian growled.

"Name the time and place."

"Now, Divination classroom," Lilian barked, nodding down the hall where a trapdoor in the ceiling led to a classroom.

A painted dog stepped between Lilian and the bunny but the doe sidestepped and took a position in front of the larger canine. She grinned up at Lilian and bit her lip for a second.

"Sounds good to me."

"Trish-" someone began to speak up but the doe raised a paw.

"I got this, I'll meet you all back in the common room later," the bunny said confidently.

Several of the students looked at one another hesitantly but the doe seemed determined enough.

One by one the others left.

The brown bunny however sauntered casually towards the step ladder that led to the classroom, Lilian stomping behind her.

The doe seemed almost excited with how quickly she reached the ladder that led to the classroom.

She grabbed one of the rings and scurried up, Lilian close behind her.

Once inside the moonlit room, Lilian watched as the doe took a few steps, her back still turned to the vixen.

That was her first mistake.

With lightning-like reflex's Lilian lunged at the doe and grabbed her from behind, lifting her into the air as one of her arms wrapped around the does waist while she grabbed Trisha's neck with her other paw.

She squeezed down, restricting the doe's airways which made the bunny tense up and instinctively grab Lilian's paw.

"You cost me the game today," Lilian growled, her muzzle close to the doe's cheeks.

"You made it so easy though," Trisha croaked.

Lilian's pupils dilated and her nostrils flared.

"I should punish you," Lilian growled.

"Oh I like that idea," Trisha whispered as she squirmed in Lilian's grasp.

Lilian let out a sigh as she loosened her grip on Trisha's neck.

"I knew you would say that," the vixen mumbled.

The bunny grinned evilly as she wriggled in Lilian's arms till she was facing the vixen. She then wrapped her legs around the lovely canine's waist.

Lilian reached down and held the bunny up by the thighs as Trisha looped her paws around the vixen's neck.

Trisha then leaned up and pressed her lips to Lilian's muzzle, their lips meeting as their eyes fluttered closed.

After a second or two Lilian pulled away and let out a sigh.

"Kanut for your thoughts?" Trisha whispered as she presses her forehead to Lilian's head.

"Just..." Lilian mumbled. "Gonna be even harder to explain to my parents about us now.."

"I mean who says they have to know?"

"Gonna be kinda hard to explain why we are hanging out so much after school ya know."

"And who says they have to know that too?" Trisha giggled.

Lilian let out a sigh as she buries her muzzle between Trishas ears and took in a deep breath.

Trisha let go of Lilian's shoulders for a moment and seemed to be up to something but the vixen was too focused on her girlfriend's scent to care.

"So about this punishment you were talking about," Trisha mumbled in a playful manner.

Lilian opened her eyes and chuckled as she looked down at the bunny before she froze.

Trisha had undone the buttons to her top and was smiling up at Lilian with an enticing view of cream-colored cleavage.

The vixen licked her lips as she stared down at the doe's chest.

Trisha rolled her shoulders ever so slightly which caused her shirt to fall away, revealing her large breasts.

Lilian gave the bunny a toothy grin before tossing her onto one of the large beanbag chairs that were spread throughout the classroom.

The doe let out a squeak as she plopped on the mushy chair before looking up at Lilian who began to undo her tie.

"Going to make you pay for the game tonight," Lilian said huskily.

Trisha watched with her own hunger as Lilian tossed her tie aside and began to undo the buttons of her blouse.

It only took her a few seconds and soon she was tossing her shirt to the floor, puffing out her breasts as she slowly sauntered over to Trisha.

With every step she would lower herself until she was crawling on all fours, her canines bared as she licked her lips.

When she reached the beanbag with her bubbly brown bunny waiting Lilian slowed her movements, even more, lowering herself to the doe's stomach where she planted a gentle kiss.

Trisha quivered with delight as she raised a paw to her lips and nibbled on one of her digits.

Lilian would plant a kiss and then rise up, only to plant another, then another.

When she reached the does gifted chest though she froze and that's when things changed.

The vixen grabbed onto Trisha's breasts and squeezed rather hard, her claws digging into the does fur.

"Ah!" Trisha let out as she shut her eyes and tossed her head back against the beanbag.

Lilian pressed her muzzle against one of Trisha's breasts and opened her mouth wide, taking in one of the does' nipples and nibbling gently.

Trisha whispered into her paw as she bucked her hips upwards.

Lilian responded by releasing one of Trisha's breasts and immediately grabbing Trisha's skirt, she slid her paw under the fabric and pressed her palm against the does' moistening mound.

The doe's breathing became more and more labored with each passing second. The vixen had learned a long time ago what got her little bunny going and was proud to say she was one of the few mammals that could shut the doe up.

As she continues to suck at one of Trisha's nipples her paw beneath the skirt curled slightly before slowly sliding into Trisha's slit.

"Lilian..." Trisha groaned as she groped at one of her own breasts while her other paw ran through the fur on the back of Lilian's head.

The vixen continued her slow probing of her bunny plaything. Slowly pulling a digit out only to slide another one in.

She began to rub at Trisha's entrance with one of her spare digits as the other continued to slide in and out, the white fur of her paws covered in the bunny's juices.

Eventually, Trisha's went erect, the bunny's pants becoming faster as her mouth hung open.

Lilian knew exactly what this meant and kept her pace.

"Lil....oh Gods Lil," Trisha whispered as she grabbed tufts of the vixens fur.

She suddenly tensed up and let out the softest of squeaks as she bit her lower lip.

Lilian smirked and pulled away from the bunny, licking one of her slicked paws as she watched the doe quiver from her orgasm.

When Trisha opened her eyes to look at her girlfriend she had to blink a few times in surprise.

Lilian had stripped her skirt away and was now completely naked. Not only that but she was towering right over Trisha's head.

"Now about your punishment," Lilian grinned.

She then lowered herself so her thighs straddled the does head.

It was Lilian's turn to quiver with delight.

While her bunny had looked surprised at first the moment had quickly passed and now Trisha was working like a mammal possessed.

The bunny's brown paws reached around and grabbed Lilian's rear, squeezing tightly and forcing the vixen closer as Trisha buried her face right into Lilian's soaked fur.

A small tongue licked at Lilian's entrance, lapping up the aroused juices flowing from the lovely vixen.

Soon though that wasn't enough for Trisha who forced her tongue into the arctic fox. Swirling around at the soft insides of the predator who arched her back.

"Ah...ah...ah..." Lilian let out as she fell forward, keeping herself steady with her paws as she looked down between her legs.

Trisha's eyes were closed as her ears played limp on the beanbag.

She wasn't just kicking at the vixen, no she was passionately kissing at Lilian's entrance as if it were the vixen's lips.

The sight alone was enough to make Lilian reach a wonderful climax.

When she did she let out a pant laced with ecstasy.

"Trisha..." she let out as one of her legs began to shiver.

When she tried to stand up she felt Trisha pull at her butt cheeks, forcing her to stay.

"Oh wow...yeah...yes..." Lilian whimpered.

If the doe wasn't done then who was she to stop her?

As the mammal that had cost her to lose the quidditch match continued to eat her out Lilian's mind filled with a pleasure-induced fog.

She would occasionally sit up straight, running her paws up her lovely figure as she moaned out Trisha's name, egging the doe on.

Eventually, Lilian lost track of how many times she came. Time just seemed to lose all meaning and she didn't care how much trouble the two of them would get in if they were caught.

After one last particularly delicious climax Lilian fell to the side, landing on the beanbag.

"Oh my gosh..." the vixen moaned through quivering lips.

Almost immediately Trisha scurried over on the beanbag chair and curled up in Lilian's arms.

The vixen closed her eyes as she wrapped her lover up in a loving embrace, lowing her muzzle between the bunny's ears as she breathed in Trisha's intoxicating scent.

The two mammals laid there for who knows how long, each of them catching their breaths.

It was Lilian who finally broke the silence.

"So about meeting my parents..."

Trisha chuckled as she nuzzled into Lilian's chest.

"...one condition."

"Name it."

"Say the thing," Trisha whispered as her eyes fluttered closed.

Lilian smiled as she held Trisha closer, her muzzle slowly going to one of the doe's ears.

"Pinecone..."


*Special thanks to my friend Lilypad for commissioning this really sweet work. *

I actually hope to continue this one because I kinda wanna see a chapter where Trisha meets the parent's xD