Sample #2: Transformation, M/F->Herm
#2 of Writing samples
Sample from a 2k-word story involving a newly married panther couple on their honeymoon night. What was intended to be a mildly stimulating aid to their sexual activities turned into something much more potent, with results that ended up being so much more than they ever dreamed of.
"What does it do?" Triesta pried the vial out with one of her long, manicured claws, her sleek feline tail twitching in curiosity.
"Drink it and see," her newlywed husband, Gabbro replied. "It's only temporary. But if you like it, there's a permanent version, too. It's a kind of..." He put his paw to his chin, searching for a word that wouldn't spoil the surprise. "Transforming magic. I thought it might make our honeymoon night something extra special."
Her eyes went wide. "It won't hurt, will it?"
He had no idea, but the merchant who'd sold it to him had assured him it was perfectly safe, and would he still be in business if he lied about that sort of thing? "Not in the slightest. You'll enjoy it, I promise."
Her brow softened and she nodded slowly, her eyes still betraying a hint of skepticism. But when she looked at Neo and saw the earnest expression on his face, her doubts seemed to melt away. She trusted him, implicitly, and a warm glow bubbled in his chest at the sight of her. She uncorked the vial, tipped her head back, and drank the lot before Gabbro could warn her to take it slowly.
Watching his wife wipe her lips with the back of her ebony paw, Gabbro decided not to say anything. The merchant had warned him the potion's effects could be unpredictable if taken too quickly. But it wouldn't cause any harm, would it? It was going to be fun finding out what happens. For the first couple of minutes they waited with baited breath as nothing seemed to change.
Then Triesta started to squirm.
"How do you feel?" Gabbro asked her cautiously. If the potion was working correctly, her body would soon be flooding with sex hormones. Her clitoris would quadruple in size and he would be able to suck it into his mouth and make her come again and again for hours until his tongue grew tired: the perfect wedding gift. And when he glanced down between her legs, he saw it happening; her clit was growing, doubling, tripling in size. It twitched and spasmed as it started to lengthen, and Triesta's eyes rolled back in her head with a choked, gutteral cry.
"Oh, oh, G-Gabbro... Uhhhn!"
Fascinated, he watched her brow tense in a familiar way, and he realised she was in the throes of a sudden, powerful orgasm. Her own body was accidentally and quite relentlessly stimulating itself, as new nerve endings grew to fill the mass of flesh that was taking shape between her legs. And as it did so, Neo realised it was turning into something else. It developing a bulbous, swollen head that darkened to a shade of cherry-red, and two round orbs sank from her body to form a rapidly expanding sac that hung beneath her like a pair of testicles. Thick veins bulged out along the length of the overgrown clit, and as her hips twitched helplessly on the bed, a slit formed at the head and a milky fluid immediately began to spurt from it.
It was no longer a clit. To Gabbro's astonishment and growing arousal, it had transformed into an enormous cock that was still growing in front of his very eyes, fully hard and leaking, dribbling beads of cum that ran down its length to mix with that of her glistening cunt that was still tucked underneath. The scent of her overpowered him, making his own cock stand erect in response.
He had a sudden, overwhelming urge to taste it.