Inspection by the Mongoose

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Saunak decides to conduct an inspection at the royal barracks. The elephants that remain are terrified.

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Inspection by the Mongoose

By Draconicon

Prince Saunak of Aparajita knew that the elephants on the other side of the door were not busy once the sun went down. He also knew that they were about to become very, very busy in an attempt to keep him from stealing them away.

He didn't care. It was part of the game.

The mongoose prince, in all his fancy glory, strutted across the courtyard to the barracks of the royal guard. His bare feet danced upon the cobblestones, lifting him up on tiptoe and spinning him to music that only he could hear. His purple vest flared out every time that he moved a little quicker, and his baggy pants flapped and rustled. It was, in a way, his equivalent to a rattlesnake's warning sound. It was the only warning that those with big dicks would get.

"Hmm, hmm, hmmm."

Saunak smiled, the limber, lean monarch stopping at the large door. It loomed several feet over his head, built for the height of elephants, and he chuckled to himself as he could hear the sounds of men playing card games, some of them jerking off in their beds, others complaining about the ones jerking off. There were others, still, that were making food, others that were stealing it, and still others that were diving into their beds, too exhausted to care about what everyone else was doing.

He smiled, tapping his knuckles against the door before calling out in as sing-song a voice as he could muster.

"Inspeeeeection."

Immediately, the barracks went silent. Saunak held up three fingers, and mouthed the numbers.

Three.

Two.

One.

CRASH!

Three windows broke, followed by two more as some of the soldiers did a runner. He chuckled to himself, knowing that the superior officers were going to read them the riot act in the morning. That would leave at least twenty inside, perhaps slightly more. He pushed the door open, leaning forward as he slunk through the gap.

To a one, the elephants stood at the foot of their beds, their hands over their heads in a fist salute. And, to make matters even more amusing, they stood with their balls jammed into an ice cube, or over a cup of water, or anything else cold that they could find. Normally heavy and swollen elephant cocks were pulled up tight, the wrinkles in the shafts that much more pronounced.

Those that hadn't managed to grab something cold stood with their cocks covered by a sheet, or by a jockstrap, or by something similar that managed to compress it down or hide it. They still saluted, but looked more flustered than their chilled fellows.

The prince smiled, casting his eyes up and down the lines of soldiers, and gathered his hands behind his back. He walked down the line, looking up at the men.

"Well, now, it seems that you must all be suffering so much from the heat if you're stuffing yourself into such cold places," he said. "And I so hate to see the men suffering. Why, oh why, didn't you tell me that this was happening? We could have seen to it that you were more..."

He paused at one elephant, whose hefty sac popped out from beneath a blanket. Smirking, he reached out and cupped one ball, his hand just slightly too fine and small to be able to cup the other one at the same time. Bouncing it up and down, he drew a rather aroused reaction from the whimpering male.

"Comfortable."

Shaking his head, he let go, continuing to walk down the line, his smile growing slightly with each elephant he passed until he had perhaps the biggest grin in the kingdom. His eyes were closed to slits, though, hiding the temptation from himself as he made his way down. It would not do, after all, to allow some of them to go unrewarded for being soooooo big.

"Why, I would think that you were trying to hide something from me."

"No, sir, nothing of the sort, sir," the officer of the barracks, a darker, gray-black elephant that stood out from the rest of the group, said. "We're not hiding anything."

"Really? And yet, so many of your men ran off as soon as I knocked on the door."

"They will be reprimanded, sir."

"And they will be told to remain next time?"

"Yes...sir..."

"Veeeery good."

The mongoose smiled, then proceeded to take the officer's ice from him. The elephant's eyes went wide, particularly as Saunak started to roll the big guy's balls back and forth between his palms.

"Now, you certainly shouldn't try and comfort yourselves like that. It will only damage you in the long run," he said, his voice soft, sultry, teasing. He leaned up, kissing the sac, feeling the thin skin against his lips, the inner warmth coming back. "Mmm, I will have to tend to each one of you for this..."

The barracks filled with the sound of groaning, whimpering, of fear and need at the same time. Despite the cold obviously trying to shrink them down, he could see cocks starting to go up, bodies that were trained to enjoy his ministrations responding despite the fears of the mind attached.

Ah, but why should they fear me? he thought, looking at the rising cock in front of him, ignoring the man that it was attached to. I merely take pleasure in their cocks. Such lovely, large things. So full of life, so full of need. And they make me feel so good, and I KNOW I make them feel good.

He dragged the cock down, letting it rest against his cheek. He tasted the tip, giving the little hole down to the urethra a long lick in particular, then allowed it to jump right back up, letting it slap against the elephant's belly. It was quite large, perhaps as long and thick as his forearm, and then a little bit longer.

But it was one that he had taken before. If anything, he would need a little more than just that to get him off.

As he loosened the officer's balls, making them nice and warm again and getting the blood flowing, he dragged the elephant's hand down.

"Keep stroking. I don't want to see your weapon go soft, now."

"But...sir..."

"Stroke, that's a good man."

Patting that broad hand, he walked down the line. Every piece of ice, every cup of cold water was discarded, and he worked on restoring life to those big, heavy, churning balls. Each one was made to start stroking themselves afterward, making sure that they were staying good and hard.

He didn't make it difficult for them, either. As the mongoose walked down the aisle of men, he slowly shrugged off his vest, showing off his own body. His bare feet danced from one pachyderm to another, and all of them stared at him, at every part of his body, as they should. He had made sure to educate them on the pleasures that everything could bring them, from his hands, to his mouth, to his ass, to his soles, to his tail. The prince knew that these men would fight for his father, for his family...

But they would rise up again for him, again and again, if he asked. No matter how tired, he had made sure that their bodies craved him too much to listen to anything else.

He stopped at the end of the line, gently pulling aside the blanket that hid one elephant's cock. Unlike all the others, this one was already hard, and more than that, dripping.

"Oh, you must be new," Saunak said, running his fingers along the elephant's rod, gently pulling it down so that it pointed out ahead of the bigger male. He rested his arm against it, almost like it was but a piece of furniture. "How long have you been in service?"

"Um...three months, sir."

"Three months, now? And I haven't tasted this yet?"

"You...um..."

The other elephants were rapidly shaking their heads, almost like they were trying to keep the new guy quiet. Saunak chuckled.

"Oh, are you afraid?"

"Um...a little...I didn't think royals would -"

"Ah ah." The mongoose leaped up, balancing on the elephant's thick hip, one foot on that throbbing cock as he hushed the pachyderm. "I didn't ask for a reason. I just asked...if you were..."

He slid his foot up and down that cock, admiring it, feeling it throbbing under the arch of his sole. Yes, it was a nice one, good and long, heavy and thick. It would give him a good little ride.

"I haven't given you your first ride. Haven't they told you? I ride all the big guys...even the ones that are trying to sneak away."

The elephants that had been nearest the door paused, frozen in the act of reaching for the doorknob. Saunak turned to face them, lidded eyes and toothy smile getting slightly tighter until they went back to their beds.

"That's better."

He hopped down, looking down the line of beds, the line of cocks, the line of dripping rods. The mongoose licked his lips, and spun in place. Sparks flew from his feet, running up his legs and stripping him in but a second, leaving him in nothing but a loincloth.

"Now...Pair off...Except for you, officer. You, and the new guy. Track down one of the runaways; I'll want to finish this with a triple."

"...Yes, your highness."

As they left, the mongoose looked down the line of beds one last time. The elephants had lined up properly, one sitting, one standing at each bed, their cocks pressed together. He smiled, cracking his knuckles.

"I so love these inspections..."

The End

Summary: Saunak decides to conduct an inspection at the royal barracks. The elephants that remain are terrified.

Tags: M/M, mongoose, elephant, size difference, big cock, nudity, humor, royalty, oral, ball worship, soldier, prince, size queen, power bottom, foot fetish, prince saunak,