Feno and the Nivala

Story by Matkaja on SoFurry

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#3 of Writing Training and Story Hooks

The lynx Feno and his companions had originally ventured into space to find a new home for their species. However, something went wrong and he is rescued by an alien civilization. Feno wakes up from his cryosleep and meets the nivala Juola. After overcoming his initial surprise about encountering an alien species, she invites him to have a breakfast. During breakfast, the lynx learns a few more things about the nivala. Among other things about their ability to produce eggs and their rather high sex-drive.

This is an introductory story about a sci-fi universe that I've come up with. The creatures all resemble familiar ones, but with twists regarding their physiology and sexuality. The first species I show here are the nivala, hermaphroditic, egg-laying ferretlike beings. I hope you enjoy reading this first glimpse into this world and would be happy to know if you would like to read more about it.


Wait, this doesn't feel like the cryopod, Feno thought. It was the first thought the lynx had after waking up from centuries of cryosleep. He opened his eyes, but didn't see anything but blinding brightness. He instinctively raised his arm to protect his eyes, but that didn't help much. After resting in the dark for so long, it took quite a while for his body to return to normal. Not only was his vision still impaired, but his hearing was a hissing mess, everything was tingling and prickling and his mouth felt like he had been chewing on a used sock.

His eon-long journey through space had come to an end and someone or something had woken him up. He expected that it were his companions, the other lynxes who had traveled with him. Yes, that must be the reason why he wasn't in the cryopod anymore. They had removed him and put him into a nice, soft bed where he now gently regained consciousness. Slowly he began to recognize shapes and forms again. He smiled faintly, he would finally see his friends again, he thought, but he was severely disappointed. There was only one person sitting in front of him, and she didn't look like a lynx at all! Feno squinted and identified the creature as some sort of weasel or ferret. She was completely covered with white, shimmering fur. The other being looked at him with vivid curiosity.

It took the drowsy lynx far too long to realize the obvious. Where he came from, there were no intelligent, upright mustelids, which implied that he was currently facing an alien, a species from another planet! Once the realization set in, it set in hard. The lynx yelped up in shock, jumped and clumsily shuffled away from the alien. "No! What the hell! Where am I?!", he yelled frightened. At least he hadn't woken up inside a laboratory, an examination cell or some similarly terrible place. Feno also wondered if this alien even understood him.

The foreign being gave him a reassuring smile and spoke in a high, clear voice. "I'm glad you're awake, dear Feno. Do not be afraid, I will not hurt you.", the alien mustelid said. The lynx didn't know what surprised him more, that she understood him or that she knew his name. "Why do you know my name? What is this place? What are you?", he cried out terrified. The alien being just sat there, smiled softly and didn't move. She ignored his questions at first, because the lynx simply didn't stop blurting out more and more, and patiently waited for him to calm down. Feno's initial overreaction faded and he eventually managed to control himself. He reformulated some of his questions with a much more collected tone and gave the mustelid enough time to answer them: "Please, can you tell me where I am? Where are the others? Are they alright?"

With a saddened expression she went on to explain: "One thing after another. First of all, you are now on the planet Kirka. As for the others, I'm afraid I can't say anything about them. We only found one person, you, inside a piece of spaceship debris that we discovered in orbit around the planet. Neither do we know what happened to the spaceship, nor do we know where the other parts went. But be assured, we are devoting countless hours and work to find the rest of your spaceship, Feno." Feno had a lump in his throat, that was terrible news! Maybe he was the only one who survived whatever disaster had happened to the vessel. The others might all be dead! The lynx shakily continued: "And what happens now? What happens with me? What is this place here? Who are you? What are you?" "It is only natural that you have many questions.", the mustelid replied, "In time I will try to answer them all. But right now I'd like you to come with me. Let us have some breakfast, because you must be hungry after so long, right?"

Feno stared at her silently for an awkward minute. The lynx felt completely lost and abandoned. After all, he had lost everything, his companions, his belongings and even his clothes. But something about the alien's cheerful, carefree demeanor was strangely comforting. She didn't seem aggressive or malicious at all, it felt to him as if she genuinely wanted to help him. He nodded gloomily and got up to follow the weasel-like creature.

The room she led him into was large and brightly lit. Everything, the walls, the roof, the floor and the furniture, were white or brightly colored. Large parts of one wall were replaced by a gigantic panoramic window. Feno was thrilled by the absolutely stunning view and briefly forgot his worries. By the look of it, he was in an apartment high above the ground in a gigantic, sleek and futuristic looking city. The lynx had grown up in a metropolis, but his hometown looked like a rural village compared to this breathtaking elegance. His mouth formed a silent "wow" and he stood there for maybe five minutes, just staring outside and taking it all in.

As he pulled away from the overwhelming display, he saw that his alien mustelid host had already set the breakfast table. Like the city and everything else in this room, the tableware was white and looked really elegant. The creature sat on the floor holding a cup in her paws, her long, bushy tail happily swishing behind her back. "Please, dear Feno, have a seat.", she offered friendly, "And don't worry about the food. We've processed all the data we obtained from your cryopod, the debris and your body. Fortunately, it wasn't too difficult to adapt your physiology to accept our foods." "Wait, you changed my body?", the lynx stammered warily. The mustelid nodded briefly and continued her explanation: "Like I said, it was nothing major, but it was necessary. To your old physiology, many foods are indigestible, some even toxic. That's not the case anymore. By the way, I don't think I have introduced myself yet. My name is Juola and I am a nivala. And now, Feno, I'd like you to have a tea. It does wonders for your nerves and concentration." "A tea?", Feno stuttered befuddled. Juola determinedly pressed a cup filled with an auburn liquid into his paw and looked at him expectantly. The lynx hesitantly took a sip and was surprised by its taste. The tea tasted amazing, but like nothing he had ever tasted. A warm cozy feeling ran through his body and calmed his mind. "Better?" "This tastes really weird, but I like it.", he replied blissfully.

While Feno continued to sip his cup of soothing tea, the nivala showered him with new things and information. Most of it went right past him, his mind was still busy recovering from his cryosleep, but some things stuck. Apparently what was left of his spaceship had been enough for these beings to piece together a rather detailed picture of the history, the behavior and the language of his species. After interpreting all the information, they had sent Juola to wake him up and to act as his translator and caretaker. In the long run, she would also serve as his teacher and try to accustom him to the language and community of her kind.

Unlike him, who was stark naked because he simply had no clothes left to wear, Juola wore some really fascinating and pretty clothes. However, her species apparently saw clothing more as an accessory than a utility. Juola wore a pair of colorful gauntlets, knee-high socks and a harness-scarf hybrid around her torso, but the rest of her body was completely exposed. Her nudity didn't bother her at all though. While she was talking, something incredibly odd and lewd happened. The lynx had never paid much attention to his host's groin, why would he? But now he couldn't help it, because the nivala casually began to rub herself right in front of him. Feno was stunned at first, what was she doing? The very casual way she did it told him that this was probably perfectly normal in her society. He also noticed that whatever she was fondling there was swelling.

A plump, pink and large cock emerged from a narrow, inconspicuous sheath. It inflated more and more until eight inches of fat meat throbbed between her thighs. It was enthralling and incredibly arousing to watch her grow such a big dick from seemingly nothing. Juola noticed the lynx's totally baffled stare, and then she realized what she was doing. "Oh, I am sorry. Force of habit.", she apologized. "Force of habit?", Feno whispered questioningly. "Give me a moment. I need to take care of something here." She simply carried on as if it were the most natural thing in the world. The mustelid grabbed her bloated member and stroked it with randy relish. She wanked it faster and harder and moaned with lust. Soon after, the nivala's body tensed up and she vigorously thumped her long tail down on the ground. Her ecstatic cries made Feno think that she was climaxing. However, she neither ejaculated sperm nor any other liquid. Instead she pushed out something big and round. A prominent bulge traveled up her dick and a soft jelly egg appeared at her spreading cumslit. Juola hastily grabbed a bowl and held her wang over it. She shot out the egg with a lewd cry, and it landed in the bowl with a wet thud.

"What was that?", the lynx asked astonished. The nivala purred, still huffing with excitement: "Maybe a quick biology lesson about us nivalas is in order. We are hermaphrodites and oviviparous, which means I am both female and male in one, and my species reproduces with the help of eggs. But don't worry, this egg isn't actually fertilized. Ovulation happens naturally once every few weeks, and the body of a nivala then automatically produces an unfertilized egg. However, like many others of my species, I have taken supplements to increase the frequency and yield of production." "Why would you do that?", Feno wondered curiously. "Well, to eat the eggs, of course. Unfertilized eggs are a real delicacy!", she explained happily. Then she let out another loud, desperate moan. "What's happening?" "Another one's coming", Juola wheezed. With a sudden, very naughty grin she pointed at the lynx and purred: "I've got an idea but I need your help for it. What do you say, would you be willing to help me? Your body certainly looks like it." Feno noticed embarrassed that he had gotten rock hard while watching her little show. Since he wasn't wearing any clothes, nothing hid his ragingly erect cock.

"Um, what did you have in mind?", he asked with a mixture of lustful curiosity and hesitation. "I'd like you to use your dick to push the egg back into my ovicock. Trust me, it'll be a lot of fun.", she sighed raunchily. The nivala grabbed her rod and invitingly spread the rather loose opening of her phallic organ. Feno still wasn't sure what he wanted to do. This whole thing had gone lewd a bit quickly and suddenly, he hardly even knew this curious creature and was still busy figuring out where he was and what was happening. But then again, her offer looked really tempting, and slowly but surely the horny part of his mind took over. "Please, it's coming out!", she groaned desperately and the lynx saw an egg-shaped bulge move up her shaft. His own dick twitched excitedly and finally he gave in to his lust.

He slowly moved towards her. She grabbed his stiff wang and nimbly guided him to the quivering tip of her inflated rod. The bump had almost reached the tip when their dicks met. Juola shallowly inserted Feno's glans into her loose eggslit, it was just big enough to plug it and prevent the soft, gelatinous egg from falling out. "Do you feel it?", she gasped raunchily. The lynx nodded in cautious excitement. This was really weird, he thought. "Please, hold me.", she demanded lustfully and pulled him into her embrace. Slightly overwhelmed by this creature's very rampant and excessive horniness, Feno hesitantly followed her request. He carefully grabbed her by her slender chest and hugged the slinky mustelid. He wasn't sure what she wanted him to do next, so he just waited for her next command. Juola salaciously whispered into his ear: "Very good. Now, please, fuck my ovidick. I want you to push the egg back where it came from. And don't hold back, I want to feel your fat cock inside me!"

The lynx slowly pushed his cock into hers, pushing the egg all the way back to the base of her member. Feno sighed, she felt really tight, pleasantly wet and wonderfully warm. It almost made him forget what he was penetrating there. Then his lust took over and his body craved more, regardless of how weird it was to fuck another person's cock that could lay eggs! He grabbed the nivala and began to pound her shaft with a burst of completely unexpected vigor. "Yes, that's it! Keep going!", Juola moaned bawdy. The egg always moved back down when he pulled out, but he made sure to ram it back in again with force. "Ah, harder! Make me feel my egg!", Juola cried in ecstasy. Feno hugged her even tighter and hammered away. Then the egg suddenly disappeared with an audible plop and the nivala made a really loud, squeaking sound.

He stopped and looked at her dumbfounded. "What happened? Are you okay?" The mustelid alien placed a paw on her slender abdomen and purred: "You've fucked me so hard that the egg slipped back into my vagina." "Wait, what vagina?" "Shush! Don't worry about anatomical details right now, stud. Don't think and just breed me harder already!", she moaned and pulled him into a kiss to stop him from asking any more questions. Not that she needed to. Driven by hot and horny lust, the lynx had already forgotten about it and returned to bang the needy creature even harder.

Obviously he couldn't maintain such a relentless rhythm for too long. Caught in a tight, sweaty embrace and getting licked and kissed by the lusty nivala, he fucked himself to orgasm. His raunchy grunt was muffled by her kiss as he came into her dick. Feno shafted his entire length in her welcoming slit. He was balls-deep inside her as his nuts expelled their warm load. His cum was still pouring down the mustelid's cock when he felt her groan and tense up. Her insides became even wetter and her stretched ovicock twitched and pulsed violently. The male realized that his alien partner was cumming too! However, as her phallus was plugged tight, her semen had nowhere to flow, so it just accumulated inside her swelling prick.

They spent a few more minutes in this strange but wonderful embrace. Giving him a last kiss, Juola whispered breathlessly: "Thank you so very much for helping me, Feno. This was amazing. Now, if you would be so kind and pull out carefully? I would like to avoid a mess, if possible." The lynx nodded quickly and slowly withdrew his deflating cock. He sat back and watched the nivala touch herself again, spurting the built-up cum and the egg into the bowl. Watching her jerk off, the lynx almost immediately got hard again.

She looked at him, lewdly sucking on her finger. Her gaping cock was still profusely drooling the mixture of her and his cum. "What do you say, up for more?", she asked him horny. "Absolutely!", Feno replied. Juola dipped her fingers into the bowl, bent over and fingered her ass. She made sure to lift her long tail and present her naked backside to the aroused lynx to offer him a wonderful view. Once she had prepared herself, she groaned lustfully: "Ready to give my other hole some attention? Don't hold back and give me all you got, stud!" "Hell yeah.", the lynx grunted. Without restraint or decency, he mounted the nivala like a horny animal.

His dick slid in almost effortlessly as her ass sucked him in. She was really tight and Feno loved it. He pounded her ass as mercilessly as he had her cock, and the mustelid under him squeaked and howled with pleasure. She desperately pulled his paw down into her crotch. The lynx felt her hard ovipositor and knew what she wanted from him immediately. He wrapped his paw around her sweaty shaft and jerked her off while he plowed her ass. Juola's cries grew more and more desperate and Feno felt something large and lumpy inside her dick. Another egg was coming out! "Please ~ah~ can you keep it in for a bit?", she gasped, "I need ~ungh~ to get a bowl for it."

The lynx gladly helped her out and fiercely choked her cock to keep the egg inside, while he also fetched her an empty bowl. "Aw, that's wonderful. Thank you, hun.", the nivala moaned, "Now, let go. Please. I need to lay an egg." Feno loosened his grip and watched her as her body violently ejected the egg. Juola huffed and moaned like crazy, the oviposition had driven her to yet another climax. This time it was a wet, cummy one and the egg was quickly followed by a large load of milky sperm. Seconds later, another egg traveled through her ovicock and plopped out with a nice splash.

Feno returned to fucking her and rapidly rammed his rigid wang into her anus. The nivala's orgasm made her rectum give him an indescribably pleasurable cock massage. The lynx reached around her chest and groped her taut, tiny tits. They were so small that they were barely noticeable on her slender body. Her nipples, on the other hand, were huge, swollen nubs, wonderful to play with. He squeezed and fondled her nipples and really enjoyed himself until his next climax approached. Another egg slipped out of Juola's cock just a moment before Feno came, giving the feline the push he needed. With a deep, satisfied growl, the lynx unloaded his jizz into the moaning mustelid. "Ah, yes! Give me your potent cum, stud!", she yelled while her anus sucked him dry. His cock pumped rope after rope of fresh semen into her slutty ass. The nivala's member got busy too and pushed out two more eggs.

Juola shoved the filled bowl aside and dropped over from exhaustion. "Whew, thank you for helping me lay my eggs.", she wheezed happily. "Of course.", Feno replied breathlessly. The nivala elegantly turned around on his cock and cuddled up to him. "No, I'm honest. I am really happy that you were willing to do this with me.", she cooed and gave him a kiss. "How often does this happen?" "Every morning." "Why again?"

The mustelid proudly took one of the soft, glistening eggs from the bowl, pursed her lips and lasciviously bit into it. Her entire body trembled and she groaned with endless pleasure. The egg must taste unbelievably good to provoke such a reaction, Feno thought. Juola saved the other half of the egg for him and tried to feed it to him. She pressed it against his lips, but the lynx was still a little hesitant. It had just come out of her dick after all. He reluctantly licked over the smooth, soft surface, but that wasn't enough for the nivala. "Hey, you need to eat it, not lick it, silly.", the nivala giggled and insistently shoved the egg into his mouth. He gave in and took a bite of the egg. It rapidly disintegrated into a gelatinous mass and filled his entire mouth with a slimy but delicious taste. It tasted as alien as the tea, but he immediately started drooling and was already longing for more. "I see you like it too.", the nivala snickered when she saw the greedy look in his eyes.

Next, she took a big sip from the bowl and swallowed some semen with loud, noisy gulps. "We like to call this the wet breakfast. Eggs and cum. Our national breakfast.", she stated with a smile, her lips glistening with sperm. Juola filled her mouth with another load of cum and pressed her lips on Feno's. Surprised and overwhelmed, he accepted her advance and allowed her to feed him the gooey mixture. The nivala then gave him a very messy, sloppy kiss with a lot of tongue. Her jizz tasted surprisingly good and he swallowed it with relish before returning her favor with a wet kiss of his own. While making out, the mustelid sneakily pulled her loose cock over his chub and humped him with saucy moans until he was fully erect again.

Stuck in a tight, affectionate embrace, he and Juola enjoyed each other a little longer, but with much less wildness. They interrupted their long, lavish kisses whenever they took a bite of another egg, lustfully sharing the delicious treat between them. After all of the six eggs were eaten and the last drop of semen was drunk, breakfast was over, and Feno asked with lusty curiosity: "Tell me, Juola, is this something you guys do regularly. Or is this just some weird fetish of yours?" The nivala gave him a really big smile and purred: "This is one of the tamest versions of a wet breakfast, my dear. It can get a lot lewder and messier! Especially with more than just two participants. But don't worry. I'll introduce you soon enough to the wonderful things our society has in store for you. But first, I have teach you a few more things." Juola didn't specify what she meant. For now, he and the nivala indulged in a little more gentle sex, while they basked in the warm, lewd afterglow of this very special kind of breakfast. Feno was already looking forward to the next one. This had been a wonderful, welcoming way to get to know an alien race, he thought happily, and he was eager to learn even more about Juola, the nivala and their society.