Pretty rave girl

Story by maxsasha on SoFurry

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#1 of furry


By max-sasha

Raymond on his way home from school his phone starts ringing *around the world, around the world, around the world * he pulls the phone out of his pocket and flips it open

"Yea?"

The guy says "Hey Raymond, Theirs a Huge rave tonight at this new club you wanna come?"

Raymond replies "Yea let me get home and I'll call you back to get the info, K?"

The guy says "Alright Raymond, talk to ya later." *click*

As Raymond stops at a red-light in the convertible next to him he sees the most beautiful Black Wolf , Her gorgeous blue eyes, her ears flicking and her shiny black fur ruffling in the gentle breeze. As the light turns green and horns behind him blow he finds himself still starring at her, until she drives off.

As he pulls up into his driveway still thinking about the Black wolf he saw earlier, Unlocking his front door he picks up his phone and calls Jackathan *Enn, Enn, Enn*

"Hello?"

Raymond asks "Hey Jack I'm home you got the info on that rave?"

Jack replies "Uh Yea, It's at the Funky Fox on Main Street tonight at 9-5am, the address is 9120 Main"

Raymond Says "Ok I'll be there"

Jack replies "Alright the see you their"*Click*

Raymond walks over to his computer checking his Email and his Myspace

He mutters to him self 'Hhhhh Nothing as usual'

As he clicks the Spam button on his email he notices the time is already 6:45 and he mutters 'Guess I should go get dressed'

As he closes FireFox and walks to his room stripping off his clothes, the cool air hits his Soft reddish orange fur a sigh of relief 'Ahhh' as he un-does his pants throwing them in a cloth hamper as he walks over to his closet, looking in the mirror at his naked body he mutters 'I really should work out more' looking at his gut, that's not as slim and hard as it once was. Opening the door to his closet and turning on the UV light on the ceiling Random pieces of clothing start glowing Neon colors, as he walks past the clothes he spots a pair of Neon green Cyber pants with LED wire, a sleeveless neon green net top and a pair of goggles with the radioactive symbol on the lenses, as he picks up the cloth and walks back towards the door he stops and looks at his boot collection 'hmm which ones to wear' looking at 5 different pairs of boot he reaches down and grabs a pair with a 4inch platform, outer steel toe, and a UV reactive radioactive symbol on the out side of each boot.

Opening the door he clicks off the light the tosses the cloth out on his bed and walks over to his bathroom to cleanup.

As the water starts running out of the shower head and quickly steaming up the room.

Raymond looks in the mirror his fur slightly frizzy from the humidity; he grabs a bottle of conditioner and steps in the shower.

As the hot water runs over his fur he mess's with his fur getting it all wet, after his fur is wet down to his skin he puts some of the conditioner in his wet black paw and lathers up with it, While the conditioner sits he brushes his big poofy Reddish orange and white tail getting any knots out and making it nice and silky for tonight, Rinsing of his Fur Raymond cant help but wonder what The new club is like pausing for a moment muttering 'I hope its not some gay club' as he turns the water off and steps out of the shower thinking to himself (Nahh Jack wouldn't tell me about a gay club)

He wipes off the mirror and grabs the blow-dryer out from under the cabinet, and drying himself off.

As he opens the door the cold air rushes though his fur, he shivers little and mutters' Burr' as he walks over to the cloth on his bed, looking at them he mutters 'Humm I hope no one else is where this' as he picks up the pants and slips into them and Buttons the front and back over his tail, looking in the mirror at the baggy Neon green pants against his reddish orange fur, he reaches over and grabs the net top and slips it on, His white chest fur makes the green stand out even more on him, thinking to himself 'Hmm I guess that's not to bad, hmm.' As he looks down at the lower right pocket and mutters 'I wonder if they still work' reaching into the pocket he pulls out a small LED controller and turns it on '1' and the LED lights on his pants start flashing randomly

He kind of laughs a bit and mutters 'Hmm I guess so' as he turned them off and stuck the controller back in his pocket.

Sitting on his bed fixing to put the boots on, he looks over at his clock "Gahh already 8:27" as he zips up the back of his boots and slips the goggles over his head 'Guess I'd better leave now' Walking out of his bedroom over to check his Email once more before he leaves *Sigh* 'still nothing'

As he locks the front door and closes it his phone starts ringing * around the world-world-world, around the world-world-world *

"Yea Jack?"

Jack asks "You still coming?"

Raymond replies "Yea I'm leaving now" as he gets in his Explorer

Jack says "Mmk well hurry up"

Raymond replies "Alright, I can only go so fast Jack..."

*Click*

Raymond starts up his explorer and drives off.

As he pulls up at Funky Fox, as he gets out of his car he sees Jack leavened up against his mustang waiting for the doors to open, Jack the crazy hyena Anthro a stubby little tail, pointed ears, orange-ish fur with black circles, He was kind of buff but not the disgustingly large muscled type He was wearing a PVC Chipset top, PVC pants, boots that had to have at least a 7inch platform, Some Neon blue Elbow gloves, a Black/blue Fall, and a pair of skull and cross bone goggles around his neck

Raymond walks up to Jack and asks "That a new outfit? I haven't seen it before"

Jack replies "The boots and the goggles are new"

Raymond says "Hum, Looks good on ya Jack"

Jack replies "Thanks... I hope Jessica likes it to"

Raymond looks at Jack Oddly "Jack Come on you're still trying to get back with her?"

Jack looks at Raymond seeming a little pissed off "Ah Shut up Fox, just cuz you can't find love doesn't mean everyone else should be the same"

Raymond looks at Jack "Come on Jack you know I don't like being called that, and I'm not saying you shouldn't have a mate you're just trying to hard for this one girl"

Jack falls back on the hood of his mustang "Huuhhhh... Alright"

Just as Jack closes his eyes Jessica walks up next to him

Jessica looks at Jack and shouts "WAKE UP!!!!"

Jack flinches he looks up at Jessica the cute little otter in here purple PVC skirt, Black Net to with nothing on under it, Shiny purple PVC boots with a 5inch platform, a purple Dread Fall, and At least 30 unused glow sticks around her neck, says "Hey, Jess how'd you get here?"

Jessica says "I had Sammy bring me; she's right over...uh."

Jack looks around the parking lot and says "She already go in?"

Jessica looks back at Jack "I guess" and looks at her phone "Hmm 9:06, guess we can go in now"

Jessica watches Jack as he flips of the hood of his car and says "Wow, Jack that was pretty cool"

Jack looks back at Jessica as he walks away and says "Thanks....now are you coming??"

Jessica runs after the two as a Blue Suzuki SV650 pulls up in front of Jack and Raymond

Jack looks at the bike then looks at Raymond and says"Hmm Rogue"

The women gets off the bike pulling her helmet of asks"How'd you know Jack?"

Jack Replies"Oh just smart I guess."

Rogue is a Grey wolf with a perfect body for someone her age wearing a red PVC bustier, a back/red PVC miniskirt, and Glo-boots

Raymond asks "Eh skimpy much?"

Rogue Slaps Raymond's muzzle and says "Why you looking?"

Raymond whimpers holding his muzzle "It's kinda hard not to...." As he ducks back expecting another slap

Rogue looks at Raymond "I'll take that as a complement...."

Jessica walks up behind Jack and asks "Hello, who are you?"

Rogue looks at Jack and replies "I'm Rogue, and who might you be?"

Jessica looks at Rogue in here skimpy PVC and says"I'm Jessica...."

Rouge turns around and says "Okay then" as she walks off looking back she asks "Well are ya'll coming?"

Jack, Raymond and Jessica take off after Rouge in to the Club.

As they enter the door their bodies are blasted by the amazing bass in the music, at least 100 LED, UV, and strobe light moving and flashing, making it hard to see until their eyes adjusted.

Raymond leans over to Jack and says "WOW, THIS PLACE IS HUGE"

Jack nods his head as he walks off into the crowd of people with Jessica.

Raymond mutters 'Shit I forgot some Glo-sticks'

As he runs over to Jessica, he taps her on the shoulder and leans up to her and asks"CAN I BUM A FEW STICKS?"

She nods and pulls 4 glow sticks from around her neck and hands them to Raymond

Raymond says "Thanks" in her ear

Jessica just nods and continues dancing.

As Raymond walks off he looks down at his pants "Damn I forgot to turn them on" as he reaches down in his pocket to turn his pant LEDs on he looks over at the bar and to his amazement The Black wolf from this morning Sitting at the bar in a Rainbow LED Skirt, a Neon pink tube top with LEDs wrapped around it, and UV reactive Pink boots.

Raymond looks around no one with herm so he walks over to her and sits down next to her

"You here alone?"

The Girl looks over at Raymond "No I'm here with another girl"

Raymond looks down and says "Oh."

The Girl sits there for a moment "OH. No not like that"

Raymond lightly laughs and says "Oh, So what's your name? If you don't mind me asking."

The girl looks up with a smile "Not at all. It Sammy"

Raymond Replies "Nice to meet you Sammy, I'm Raymond. So would you like to dance?"

Sammy replies "I'd love to!"

Raymond hands Sammy a glow stick "Awesome" as they both walk out to the dance floor under all the Neon and UV lights And start Raving

Not long after they start dancing someone walks up behind Raymond and whacks him in the head "Ouch, What the h----" as he turns around "Rogue?"

Sammy Shouts out surprised "MOM?!?!?!!"

Rogue says "Yea, What are you doing with Sammy, Raymond?"

Raymond holding the back of his head whimpering "God I was just dancing with her" Raymond turns around looking at Sammy "Wait... WHAT She's your mom!???!!?!?"

Rogue grabs them both and drags them over to the bar "Now Why are you Sammy"

Sammy with her head hung low replies "I'm here with Jessica"

Rogue Says "Alright. And why are you dancing with her Raymond?"

Raymond replies "Well I thought she was pretty and she was sitting over here all by herself"

Rogue Slaps Raymond on his muzzle again "Gah you don't even know her"

Raymond Holding his muzzle "So You come out here and dance *Cough*Fucking*Cough* with random dudes" Ducking expecting another slap but She sill managed to slap his muzzle again "I know your move Raymond.... And so what if I come out here dancing with random men I'm a grown women, Sammy is only a Teenager"

Raymond replies still holing his muzzle "Gahh That really hurts you know, And its not like I'm some old perverted dude.. You know I'm still a teenage"

Rogue Yells at Raymond "Yes I know, But that's not the point"

Raymond looks at Rogue as if he was waiting for something "Well what is the point?"

Rogue replies "She shouldn't be running around doing like I do.."

Raymond looks at Sammy then at rogue "Isn't that kinda hypocritical?"

Rogue Slaps Raymond on the muzzle "God didn't your parents raise you to respect and not argue with adults?"

Raymond looks at rogue disgusted "Oh course they did, but....Nevermind" and he walks off into the crowd of people.

Rogue looks at Sammy and says "You know I'm just trying to protect you right?"

Sammy looks up at her mother "Yes but what if I don't want to be protected?"

Rogue says "Alright. Get up where going home"

Sammy Refuses Saying "But I don't want to, I want to stay.."

Rogue interrupts "I don't care your coming with me, now get up and come on"

Sammy reluctantly gets up and fallows her mother home.

Raymond hunts down Jack in the crowd and grabs him by the arm dragging him away from the mass of raving people and over to a table.

Jack pulls his arm away from Raymond "What the hell man?"

Raymond says "Sorry about that, I'm just a little pissed"

Jack sits in a chair muttering 'Oh god here we go again.'

Raymond sits down across form him "What the hell is Rogue's problem?"

Jack looks at Raymond confused "What do you mean, she's always kinda a bitch, but in a good way..."

Raymond Shacks his head "No not like that." He looks up at Jack "You know she has a kid?"

Jack still starring at Raymond "Um Random much, But yea didn't you?"

Raymond replies "Yea sorry. No I had no clue she had a kid, I just found out..."

Jack looking at Raymond, his head now cocked to the side "You just found out how??"

Raymond's head fall into his hands "Well you know how when you see a really hot chick you act out on it?"

Jack's head still cocked to the side"Yea. But what's that got t..... NOOO!?!"

Raymond looks back up at Jack "Would you straighten your head up? But yea she saw me dancing with her and started scalding us both for dancing."

Jack straightens his head up and asks "What's wrong with Raving with her?"

Raymond replies "Exactly, it's not like I was having sex with her in one of the backrooms."

Just before Jack says anything Jessica runs up to them with something in her hands "He-ey h-have you gu-uys seen s-s-ammy?"

Jack looks over Jessica "What have you been drinking Jess?"

Jessica stumbles over and sits next to Jack "I-i do-on`t kno-o-ow so-ome gu-uy gav-ve it to me"

Jack rolls his eyes and asks "Let me see one of those" as he takes a bottle from Jessica "Gahh what the hell is this pure alcohol?" Raymond laughs at Jack "What can't drink?"

Jack hands the bottle to Raymond "Why don't you try some?" Raymond takes the bottle "Sure...." As he takes a glug of the drink, as a disgusted smile comes over his face "Mmmhhh Yea that's good..GOD what is that shit" Jessica looks over at Jack "I T-hing th-e g-guy sa-aid i-it was l-yke E-ver clw-ear"

Raymond just shakes his head

Jack looks at Raymond "What?"

Raymond replies "Nothing"

Jessica Shouts "Yay!!!????"

Raymond and Jack look at her saying at the same time "Drunk?"

Raymond looks at his watch "Mhh 1:30, we should probably get her outta here eh?"

Jack nods his head "I guess"

Walking out of the door with Jessica hanging on Jack, Raymond start walking over to his truck as Jack shouts "Hey!"

Raymond turns around "Yea?"

Jack says "Sorry Raymond" and he puts Jessica in the passenger side of his car

Raymond keeps walking Throwing his hand in the air "Dun worry bout it Jack, See you later" as he climbs in his truck.

Later that morning as Raymond walks in the front door, going straight to his room to get some sleep. As he strips off all his cloth throwing them in the corner, and flopping down on his bed 'I guess I should call Rogue later to apologize' not but a minute later he falls asleep.

Saturday morning 9:15Am Raymond rolls out of bed and walks into his bathroom to get ready for day, Brushing his teeth He thinks about last night and what he's going to say to rogue.

As he stumbles over to his computer his sits down in the chair playing with his phone, He lays back dialing Rogues number *Enn, Enn, Enn, Enn, Enn, Enn*

Rogues pick up the phone "What do you want!"

Raymond replies "I was just calling to say I'm sorry about last night."

Rogue sighs saying "No I'm sorry I guess I just over reacted, and I had a few drinks of that shit Jessica had"

Raymond Says turning on his computer "That was some potent shit eh?"

Rogue Replies "Yea I don't remember leaving with Sammy, So Lets just forget that whole thing oka?"

Raymond says "Huuhh...Okay so you won't kill me if I talk to Sammy will you?"

Rogue hesitates ".......uh...No I wont kill you Raymond"

Raymond asks "Okay so where cool?"

Rogue Replies "Yea..We cool"

Raymond says "Ok good, Gotta go now Bye"

Rogue Says "Alright See ya later" *Click*

Raymond puts his phone back on the deck and turns on a Gwar CD, and he walks off to fix something for breakfast.

Looking though the fridge he grabs four eggs, some fresh Deer sausage, some green onions, and some Asparagus. As he turns around kicking the door shut, he sits all the stuff down on the counter and grabs a small cast iron skillet and turns on the stove and clicks the oven on Broil-low.

He leans down getting a Small mixing bowl and cutting board out of the cabinet.

Just as he cracks the eggs into the bowl he hears a knock on the door, so he throws away the empty egg shell and walks to the door still in just a pair of neon green Boxers and the Gwar CD still playing.

As the door swings open he Stutters "H-h-h-hey Sammy."

Sammy looks at Raymond laughing a bit "Hello Raymond, How are you this morning"

Raymond looks down at his boxers "Opps Sorry I wasn't expecting any visitors this morning...Oh um would you like to come in?"

Sammy Replies "Um sure." As she walks in Raymond closes the door and says "I was just fixing Breakfast would you like to join me?"

Sammy Replies "No that's ok"

Raymond walk back in to the kitchen "Have a seat Sammy, I'll be right out"

Sammy seats down at the Bar watching Raymond cook

Raymond Chopping up Green onions and asparagus asks Sammy "So how'd you find me?"

Sammy replies "Oh um Mom told me, I hope you don't mind"

Raymond Mixing the Eggs and veggies up in he bowl says"Oh no not at all, so what did you want?" as he pours the mixture in to the skillet with the sausage

Sammy Replies "I just wanted to talk with you, since we didn't get to last night"

Raymond turns around looking at Sammy "Oh" and throws the skillet in to the oven as he turns the stove off.

Sammy Asks "So um tell me a little about your self"

Raymond Scratches his head "Hmm Well My Real name is NOT Raymond its Ambroise Darcy Dartagnan, I'm from France, my parents are Royalty, um and if you haven't noticed I'm a fox, and the reason I go by Raymond...and its easier to say"

Sammy looks at him and says "Wow so your real name is Ambroise Darcy Dartagnan, and your parents are French Royalty?!?!?"

Raymond Replies "Yea......Shouldn't have told you that" as he takes the skillet out of the oven and asks "Sure you don't want any? It's yummy and it's got Deer in it"

Sammy Replies "Mmm sure I'll try some"

Raymond says "Ok" as he cuts it into two Large Pieces and hands a piece to Sammy on a plate.

As she takes a bite "Mmmm, What is this?"

Raymond Replies "It's a Frittata, one I saw Alton Badger make"

Sammy asks "So how'd you end up in Louisiana if your parents are French royalty?"

Raymond Swallows his food "Hm, Well I'm not real sure.. I was sent here to live with a relative when I was Six and I haven't seen my parents since, Nor have I figured out Why I was sent here"

Sammy Replies "Oh wow that must really suck huh?"

Raymond says putting his empty plate in the sink "Eh well kind but since I didn't really know my parents I guess it hasn't affected me that much."

Sammy says "Really?"

Raymond replies Picking up her plate "Yea...But enough about me what about you???"

Sammy replies "Well you know my mom, I have sporadic Sex fits, and I've been told I'm fun in the bed"

Raymond shakes his head and asks "Wha-Wha-WHAT??"

Sammy closes her eyes and replies "SHIT, Sorry didn't mean to say that"

Raymond Wraps his arm around her "It's ok.."

Sammy looks up at his smiling face "Really?"

Raymond nods his head "Uhm"

Sammy says with a sly tone in her voice "You know what would really piss him and my mom off?"

Raymond's smile fades as he asks curiously "No...What?" with his head tilted

A devilish smile runs across her face as she replies "If I fucked you."

Raymond looks shocked as he stutters "WHAT?!?!?!"

Sammy turns her face in shame "God I knew it you think I'm ugly don't you?"

Raymond replies "What.. No you're not ugly by ANY MEANS!!!"

Sammy looks up at Raymond with puppy dog eyes and asks "So why not?"

Raymond replies "Ahn puppy eyes... Its just that I've only known you for not.." as Sammy puts her finger on his lips and says Devilishly "Oh come on you know you want to."

Raymond pulls her hand away and replies "Yes I Want to but you know your mother would kill me"

Sammy shakes her head and says "Not if anyone tells her"

Raymond Asks her "A-Are you sure Sammy?"

Sammy lean over and kisses him "Yes I'm sure"

Raymond takes her hand "Fallow me" and he starts walking her back to his room as Raymond hears *KNOCK, KNOCK, KNOCK* "Straight down the hall and the last room on the left" and he walks up to the door and opens it "Jack?!?!"

Jack looks at Raymond in his green boxers and asks "Am I interrupting something?"

Raymond replies "Uhh.....YEA kinda"

Jack peeks in the door asking "Who is it???"

Raymond slaps the back of his head and says "You'll find out soon enough, Now get outta here for a while"

Jack replies rubbing the back of his head "Yea, Yea, Yea Ok" and he walks off

Raymond quickly closes the door and runs back to his room to see Sammy Laying Naked on his bed "Hey Raymond you want some of this??"

Raymond stands there in his doorway Flabbergasted by the beautiful young black wolf naked on his bed.

Sammy looks at him "OH Raymond, come here I have a secret for you!"

Raymond shakes the shock off and sits down on the bed next to her

Sammy grabs his shoulders and leans up to his ear "I'm in heat and I'm so horny Raymond"

Raymond turns around and flops on top of Sammy "That's all I need to know" as he slips off his boxers, as he kisses Sammy.

His Cock extending out of his Sheath and asks "Ready Sammy?"

Sammy nods her head as Raymond slowly slides his hard dick in Sammy`s Wet pussy as he enters her moist hole, Sammy moans softly as she digs her claws in Raymond's back.

Raymond Thrusts his self against Sammy as she lifts her hips up off the bed,

Her slippery twat all hot and tight, his cock hard and throbbing

Raymond thrust his entire hard dick in her hot twat and she Screams "Ahhooo YESSSSS"

Raymond pumps his cock in and out of her juicy twat as his knot starts to swell, she shouts "Not That PLEASSS"

Raymond strokes her soft ears as his thrust become more erratic

Sammy moans as he squirts his hot seed in her tightening tube.

As she shouts "Ahhhwww i`m coming" as her Vulva squeezes on Raymond's cock

Sammy goes limp and Raymond falls down on top of her

Their panting heavy and their hearts pounding.

They lie there motionless for what seems like hours.

Sammy breaks the silences "Oh god Raymond that was...WOW"

Raymond rubs her sides "Mhhmmm" as he rolls over next to her and licks her face

Sammy flips over on her side and gazes into Raymond's loving yellow eyes and snuggles up against him.