"Revenge" part 1-introduction

Story by Anthronium on SoFurry

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(this is my first story, so bear with me..)

April 5th, 2035, New York City

It was another rainy night, the city was in a more relaxed and calm state than it normally was, a black mustang pulled up to the curb by a large warehouse. out stepped a tall wolf, jet black fur, about 6'1", deep brown eyes. He wore a gray worn out looking trench coat. He approached the warehouse and stripped the coat, under it he wore a skin tight poly-carbon suit. he whispered "no turning back now.." he clicked a small button on the forearm, and his car went up in a ear-splitting explosion. He took off running, any guards and personell would've been distracted by the explosion.

he jumped swiftly over an old chain-link fence, he looked over to see a rusted out vent about 20 feet from the ground "my way in.." he whispered again. he clicked another button on the forearm, the suit clenched around his legs, he jumped the height he needed and ripped the vent from its weak casing. now inside of the duct system he snaked his way through until underneath him, in a nearby vent, he saw what he was looking for "there you are..". he looked around and so no-one, he could hear mumbling in the distance "how'd that car just blow up?" a scared woman said.

he giggled and burst into the empty room. he got up and turned around, in front of him was a red suit of plated armor, the jet black visor on the suit reflected his own visage "my turn.." he said as he clicked a button on the shoulder of the suit. every joint of the suit seemed to open, like a large wolf shaped door "Scan host" he commanded and spread out his arms legs and straightened his tail. i deep blue beam scanned him from head to paw "thank you, Rhell. welcome back" the suit said in a monotone voice. "thanks" he mumbled back. after the scan the suit shifted a little, to suit Rhell's body shape. "here we go..." rhell mumbled as he slid back into the suit. with a loud *nnnrrrrooooOOOOWWWW* the suit sparked to life and shut around him.

seconds later a burly pitbull guard busted the door down "whad th' hell you doin!" he screamed as he pulled out a taser. the suit slowly moved up, and rhell looked at the taser and laughed "get out of here fatt ass" rhell sad through the vocoder, making his voice deeper. the pit bull charged at his, and with a swift punch he knocked the guard out cold. he walked out into the hallways, in his gleaming red armor. "this is a warning.." he said, workers and scientists looking at him. the suit whirred, all of the open joints glowed, and rhell disappeared.

Rhell was an old worker for "Satots" a weapons manufacturing company, he created a suit that was able to travel through time itself, he was deemed mad, his suit put in storage, and he fired. this is his story, this is the story...of "Revenge"