Revenge is covered in blood but tastes so sweet Pt 1 intro

Story by hellboy 616 on SoFurry

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#1 of Revenge is bloody


Revenge is covered in blood but tastes so sweet

Pt 1

This is a short story I have in my head and im bored as ever since I am finished college so Il maybe turn this into a series or try and continue my dragons creed story or both heh I got LOTS of free time on my hands now. Il be making most of this up on the spot as im writing but I hope it will flow together nicely

Warning may include blood violence and dark revenge and a few choice profanities tread your paws and/or claws lightly.

The air was still as everyone froze to see what was unfolding before them in the small quiet shopping centre of Braghan a small quiet town in the highlands of Scotland.

"LET HER GO" I screamed but the dark figure simply laughed and from behind his mask he hissed "you fool what do you think YOU can do to hurt me?".

I snarled and felt something deep within me starting to loosen from chains binding it but tried to ignore the feeling for now as my greatest love was being held with a viciously sharp knife at her throat. "if you dare to harm her in any way I will....."

"YOU'L DO WHAT YOU PATHETIC WORM ATTACK ME? HA NOT LIKELY YOUR NOT EVEN ARMED!" he screamed I snarled as I felt my rage building and build the chains binding something deep within were beginning to snap.

"THIS IS YOUR LAST CHANCE" I roared "LET HER GO NOW!!!!!". He smirked though the mask he was wearing covering almost all his face but you could still see him smirk.

"she owe's my boss lots of money and I WILL take her life for refusing to pay the debt" he suddenly stabbed the dagger through her chest and laughed HE ACTULLY LAUGHED!. I screamed as I looked into her eyes and seen pain and regret in them she was the love of my life and we both tried to live on ignoring out pasts but it seemed that our pasts didn't ignore us.

She had once been a prostitute in one of the nearby cities and owned by a vicious gang she also smuggled money for them until one night she got tired of it and split with the money, This was several months ago now and when I had met her she had been sweet and scared so I had gotten her a drink at the bar and one thing led to another. Oh the joys of her body I loved her in every way, After our first time together she cried so I held to her until she stopped then she apologised and I said its to her that it was ok and when we looked into her eyes we both seen pain from the past but also love and understanding.

I had been a soldier one of the best and I enjoyed it until they started sending us on missions to kill innocents id done a few missions not even knowing who we were shooting but when I found out I left the army and never looked back. It had betrayed me but worse was still to come I travelled around a lot as a mercenary of sorts helping people out for small fees or certain *services* that ranged from buying me a drink to letting me sleep in their house. I never really stayed in one place as I liked to travel ,Then one day I was offered to go to a old woman's house for tea I went since it was the kind thing to do. As I drank my tea I suddenly felt sleepy and tired the last thing before blacking out I remember the woman smiling evilly down at me. When I awoke I was chained to a rack with torture implements lying around I was scared shitless. The old woman then proceeded to torture me and make me drink some vile tasting potions none of which had any affect on me to her obvious confusion one day she was torturing me but my pain was less and it just made me angry after that I blacked out. I awoke much later in the middle of some woods with a bag of my stuff and no sign of the crazy lady I assumed she had ditched me to die and was simply thankful. Turns out I was wrong...

I stared into her eyes as they slowly closed and I fell to my hands and knees, "no she cant be dead" I thought but I knew she would die shortly and no one could save her. People around us were screaming and running but I didn't notice it was as if time froze for me watching the last bits of life fade from her eyes and then she slumped.

My mouth was open in shock shaking my head in disbelief "no... no you cant she cant be gone this cant be happening no... NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO" and as I screamed the man dropped the limp body and laughed his loud maniacal laugh finally reached my ears and my howls of anguish soon turned to fury as I looked up at the man smiling at me.

He had removed his mask and was holding a gun but it pointed at the floor. His smirk made something deep within me stir, I snarled at him feeling more furious than id ever been he had stolen my one true love and he and all his allies would PAY DEARLY.

"YOU...YOUR GONA PAY FOR THIS" I roared at him but as I did my voice suddenly deepened and I was actually ROARING!!. The man stepped back in shock as my roar rattled the ground and walls making glass shatter and people run screaming in fear.

I had just killed my target as the boss requested and was laughing at the young man as he fell to his knees. He looked at me and I seen something in his eyes that made me twitch a little what I saw was pure untamed fury and rage but I squeezed the grip of my colt45 and smiled he couldn't harm me. Suddenly he screamed at me and his scream deepened until his words faded out and he was just roaring at me and boy was it loud I cringed back a little as the walls and the earth shook "fuck me I thought how is he doing that!".

Finally my roar died down and I growled deeply at him as my body slowly started changing starting with my eyes. I felt a little pressure on behind my eyes then it stopped and I realized my vision had just improved tenfold and then the rest of the changes came faster as I snarled my rage at the man who had stolen my love from me. Heat rose up from my body and my hair caught fire vanishing almost immediately into my head where black scales were surfacing on my body.

They spread all over quickly as my rage grew and grew even as the man fell over and staggered backwards. Slowly my mouth pushed out into a muzzle covered in black scales, my teeth lengthened and sharpened and even more teeth grew into my already jammed pack muzzle along with a tongue that was extremely long and forked now. I could feel my power building and by focusing on wanting to destroy the man in front of me I managed to ignore most of the pain as my body underwent a massive change.

My whole body grew larger and more muscular with dark black scales covering it. With a great ripping noise my shirt burst from my flexing muscles and fell on the ground in tatters. My shoes ripped when my large now sharp talons tore through them and flexed along with my arms and hands. The only bit of clothing I still wore was my black jogging bottoms that had stretched almost to ripping point but as I stopped growing they never ripped. I was now about half a size bigger than a large horse but with a long neck. Suddenly with another ripping noise and with a snarl wings and a tail tore free from my back and just above my joggie's.

Slowly the tail lengthened and grew a sharp tip at the end and slow spikes pushed out my back, horns grew from the back of my head and gave me a large crest made from sharp horns. Small flames licked across my body until my jogging bottoms fell to the ground in ashes revealing my apparently smooth lower body. If you looked closer you would see a small slit which contained my male equipment.

I was now a dragon standing at 10 feet tall and 15 feet long including my tail. I was covered in thick dark black scales and rested on my legs and forearms. I had massive wings furled out from my shoulders along with a tail that came from the base of my spine. But the most frightening looking part of me was my eyes, they were a deep dark red and if you looked close enough you could see the fires of hell burning deep within them.

I slowly flexed my wings then furled them across my back and stretched my tail out. My mind was aware of what happened to me but for some reason I couldn't care less and I felt sort of at ease in this form. My sharp talons dug into the ground and flames licked across my body as I growled at the man who was now slowly crawling backwards in terror. "What's wrong?" I hissed "I thought I couldn't harm you".

"Wha...What are you!!!???" he screamed in terror. "what cant you see? I am obviously your destroyer and avenger for my love that you have so rudely taken from me" my voice was deep and tinted with anger. I could smell his terror coming from his body in waves and just then I noticed a small wet patch growing on his trousers, "ha ha ha looks like you've pissed yourself in fear cretin".

I looked down and realized I had pissed myself watching as the boyfriend of my target changed into a giant black dragon was the most terrifying thing I had ever been witness too. I still had the gun lying next to me but I knew it would only make the monster in front of me more angry if it was possible. The dragon slowly approached me flaming drool falling from his menacing muzzle and when his drool hit the ground it made small burning holes through the tiles and concrete. I scrambled backwards in fear looking for a way to escape my fate. Then I seen the gun again and in my terror I grabbed it up aimed closed my eyes and fired until the gun clicked empty.

I looked into the mans eyes and drank in his fear and terror it made me happy as sadistic as that sounds but I knew one thing I was going to make this man regret what he had done. Slowly I walked towards him taking my time to make him even more terrified with the flaming drool dripping from my maw. The man scrambled away then looked franticly around "does he not know how unstoppable his fate is?".

Just then he grabbed his gun and pointed it at my face. I stopped but I somehow knew it would have no effect on me because of my steel hard scales. The bullets simply crumpled themselves against my hide and fell to the ground not even leaving a scratch. His eyes were still closed and I walked right up to him then leaned down n his face and hissed "come on you really think a gun would help you?" he moaned in terror as he opened his eyes to find me staring right into them piercing his very soul.

I reached a claw up and tore a deep cut from his forehead down his cheek al the way to his waist as he writhed in agony, "now you are going to tell me all about your bosses operations and what you know and then I will decide how slowly I will kill you depending on the information do you understand?".

"y-y-yes I'll tell you anything please don't hurt me he whimpered". "il consider your request but it better be dam good information" I lied he had taken her away and I would never be able to touch her again. Love her again. Feel her again. Hear her again...

"now I say we go somewhere more comfortable as your screams might... frighten the locals" I turned around and wrapped him tightly in my tail a few of my spike dug into him so he screamed and pleaded for help from anyone but everyone was long gone. The few that had remained were frozen with fear and out of sight. I could smell the others hiding but had no interest in them after all they never killed my love so why should they suffer.

I walked over to my lovers dead body and looked down in pain at her face, slowly I picker her up in my forearms and carried her limp body outside. my eyes had dimmed a little and tears fell from them i would never be the same again. Once we got outside I spread my wings made sure my prisoner was tighly wrapped in my tail and flew off.

This is the end of part 1 of this short series I will hopefully complete pt and post them it never took me long to write surprisingly and I think it is quite good please give me and feedback you deem appropriate and be nice since this is my first mind to paper story he he please leave comments and if you like this then join my small force of watchers.