A Vengeful Action

Story by Lunar Creations on SoFurry

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#2 of Revenge


As the night continued, silent as usual, a coated figure would be seen walking near a house, his orange tail revealed him to be a fox, medium height, wearing black gloves, black boots, and a mask, covering half of his face, the mask designed with a sinister grin, a hunter's knife in one hand and a shotgun in the other, As the figure crept to the house, he went to the side.

And as he put down the gun, he opened the power box, which held the power that came to the house, as he opened it, he cut some wires, cutting off the homes communications and electricity. Then with a grin, he picked up his shotgun and made his way to one of the windows and wasn't surprised as it was unlocked. As he opened the window with complete silence, He realized he was in the kitchen of the home.

As he put the knife in his pocket, he made his way throughout the home and as he came to one of the bedrooms he opened the door and discovered the parents, As he grabbed some tape he stalked the sleeping parents and began to go to work, taping both the fathers and mothers mouths shut, and as he saw the father open his eyes, the fox whacked the father across the head with the butt of his shotgun, knocking the father out cold, and then as he finished wrapping the parents up in tape, restricting any movement or communication from them, he left the room and made his way to one of the other rooms.

He then came to another room and slowly opened the door, discovering it was the daughters room, the family were deer, and their daughter was about 18 as was the fox, he had an idea and walked in and still having possession of the tape, He taped the young doe's mouth shut, and then taped together the doe's wrists and ankle together, then as the doe opened her eyes, he looked at her with an evil look in his eyes, She widened her eyes and began to struggle, then as she realized she was bound she stopped struggling. And with a smile, he pet her head abit and then left her room.

looking for his prime target, the reason he was actually here in the first place. Then as he walked he stopped at another door, and grinned, taking out and gripping his knife as he opened the door and then he looked around. Noone was there, as he stepped back. He got a bad feeling and then as he turned his head, he felt something hit him, as he was lifted off of his feet, he let go of the knife and hit the ground hard, and as he looked he saw his target ontop of him, the deer. No wonder he could tackle.

He was one of the stars of the football team, anger and revenge ran through the fox and as he looked, he lifted one of his fists and watched as it connected to the jaw of the deer, as the deer flew to the side, the fox got up quickly and lifted the deer up, then with a huff, he punched the deer again hard in the jaw, again and again. Then as he dropped the deer and grabbed him by the back of the head as he ran and then drove the deer hard into the wall, causing some of the pictures to fall to the ground and break, Then as the deer began to spit out blood.

The fox grabbed the deer by his antlers and pushed him in, driving his knee into the deer's face hard, he did this again and again and then dragged the bloodied deer into the daughter's room, as he walked in, he threw the male into one of the chairs that were in the room and then taped his wrists down against the chair along with his ankles and then began to tape his head in a way that would force him to watch what the fox had in mind.

As the fox then turned to the doe, he took off his coat and laughed abit. The male then spoke "Who are y-you??" The fox then loked at the deer and took off his mask, revealing who he was. The male then went wide eyed "S-Shadow!" Then the now confirmed shadow spoke in angry tone as he threw the mask to the side and took a bow

"Yes I am the Elkwood Killer. And Now, didn't expect this did you! You must be stupid, now your going to finally pay for what you did! Remember when you and all of your little buddies, killed my loved girlfriend maria!?" the deer looked at shadow and quivered "I-I am sorry, we were drunk..."

Shadow snarled "Oh excuses, excuses.. I don't care either way, the moment you snapped her neck was the moment you sealed your fate, I killed the others with ease and the police are still scratching their heads like the retards they are! And Even you and the others when they were still alive were baffled 'Who is it?' 'Who is it?' 'It couldn't be shadow, he is just a scared little weakling! He couldn't harm someone if he tried!!'"

then shadow leaned his head up and laughed, and gripped his own hair and grinned as he then spoke again "It was to easy... each of you fell so easily, and you're the last one, and im not going to kill you yet, Oh noo I have a much better idea for you, you took the thing I loved most, the person I held most dearly, so Now I am going to take the thing you hold so close to your heart." Then he turned his attention to the doe "You always did say you loved your sister Jane, saying how devastated you would be if anything were to happen to her...."

He then made his way to jane and felt the softness of her fur "You know what I think is worse then death, rape because the victim has to live with it and they never recover...." He then unzipped his pants but first took the tape away from the doe's mouth, and the first thing she said was "Please stop!" Shadow then gripped her hair and got onto the bed, as he spoke "Shut up! If you want to blame anyone blame your brother..."

Then he flipped her, and tore away her clothing wildly, cutting the clothing away as he grinned at dave, the male. "I will rape her and then I will kill you.." he said and as his sheath let out his cock, he groaned and lifted the doe's legs over his own shoulders, as the doe was helpless, he spat on his cock to lubricate himself and then pushed himself inside of jane, and as dave struggled more, shadow began to wildly thrust inside of her and grip her breasts in his paws as he licked up the doe's cheek, as he thrusted more violently, the bed began to shake with his impacts and then out of the noise, jane let out a moan.

Shadow smiled as he looked at her and spoke "You enjoy that don't ya girl.." and out of pure pleasure from the wild fucking, jane nodded and began to cry, she couldn't believe she was enjoying this, she was being raped and was enjoying it. Watching as her brother continued to struggle and as shadow continued to thrust and take away her purity, she then spoke out in direct of her brother "this is all...your...fault...." Then shadow grasped her lips and pushed together her cheeks forcing her to pucker her lips as he forcefully kissed her, and seeing as she could do nothing else, accepted the kiss and the brutal thrusting, and then as Shadow came, he didn't cum outside of her but inside. As she gasped out, she fell back to the bed.

Shadow then exited her and got off of the bed as he gripped the knife, but first looked at jane and put a pillow over her eyes figuring she didn't deserve all of this, as she sighed and let out a faint "thank you...." He said "Uh huh." And then went back to dave and as he spoke softly "Now die.." he drove the knife right into the deer's throat, and as he witness the deer become lifeless, he sat down on the ground and sighed as he looked up.

"Maria......" then as he looked at the bloodsoaked knife, he nodded to himself "It's time.." then as he drew a piece of paper from his backpocket, obviously a note of some sort He gripped the chair which held the dead deer and dragged it across the floor, he walked out of the room and went to one of the halls of the house. Then as he looked at the plain blue wall, he put the chair right up against it with the dead deer still held down, and began in the deers blood two letters taking up the entire wall "E.K" for Elkwood Killer as he took the note and put it to his side, he sat down under the two letters and looked up again and raised the knife high, then with a single word "maria...." he drove the knife into himself, beginning to cough up blood as he leaned back, killing himself.

Eventually sirens could be heard closing in on the house, a nieghbor having heard strange noises coming from inside, as the officers got inside, they released the parents and the jane who had been raped from their tape bounds, as they went to the wall they were shocked, the mother broke out crying and then father covered janes eyes from the butchered body of her brother, then an officer picked the note by shadow's side and opened it as it read.

"Dear people of Elkwood and my parents.

Please forgive me of my crimes, I am the Elkwood killer,, my real name is Shadow Burlon and The motives for all of this were one of a crime of passion and honorable revenge, see. before all Of this I was suicidal, and then I met maria who is buried in the cemetary... I loved her, so dearly... I was such inlove with her as she was with me, I finally found joy in life and then it was all taken from me when the dead teen beside me and his friends whom I killed were coming home from a football game and saw me walking maria home, as they stopped, they began to mess with me as they always did but then...this man killed maria by snapping her neck... then I set out on revenge because I know the cops here, they sit on their fucking ass and do shit! so I killed them all, ever single one of them..please before you judge mem think, your in my shoes and the person you dream of spending your life with and love her, dies....what would you do? their was no evidence, if I went to the police it would be my word against 5 others...if their is a god, then why has he made me suffer so greatly.."

~L.C