Neural Shock

Story by Lapsa on SoFurry

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Does anyone remember when Mass Effect was good? I do, and I was inspired a few months back by someone to write a story like this as we were talking about the Mass Effect universe and lore. Contains a few dark themes, but I tried to dress them up in the bliss and pleasure that supposedly come with having your brain exploded by a sadist shape-shifter.

Also I have a few more stories with even more niche kinks than I normally do coming out in the future; namely a few with scat/filth, vomit, and gore/snuff, as well as one set in the Equestria at War universe with a theme that might get under people's skin a bit! I'll try to intersperse them with other things like this but I have to get them up eventually!

I was thinking of leaving off on one for the year, actually - just because I haven't uploaded nearly any of them yet. The first week of December will be my last scheduled non-game upload for the year! Maybe I should see which of those stories people might want? Comment here or leave a shout or something!

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Neural Shock

By: Lapsa

Warning: Mass Effect/Snuff/Brain-damage

"Hey, you seem pretty interesting." The blue-skinned figure seemed to slide from the shadows, flowing over to the lone vixen before sitting across from her - the pale blue eyes piercing into her soul. "A vulpine, right? Pretty rare to see any of your kind outside of Earth. What brings you here?"

"Oh?" Kristen looked up from her drink, eyes fixing on the Asari before her, brought out of a dull moment of introspection as the pulsing and throbs of the club suddenly returned in full force around her. "Yeah, I'm here on one of the nearby planets - part of an archeological team. Just taking a bit of time off."

"Interesting." The Asari signaled over one of the waiters as she paused, getting a drink for herself.

"I bet you get to see so many interesting things...relics of the past, the remains of ancient cultures long gone - art and history so old that you can't help but feel small just looking at it." The Asari grinned as her eyes seemed to glimmer in the dim flickering lights of the club.

"Yeah, its amazing work. I wouldn't give it up for much. Being there first-hand when a new discovery is made...unlocking the secrets of the past - unearthing entirely new cultures." The vixen's eyes lit up as memories flooded to her of her past endeavors - the smile across her face growing even wider. "I'm really looking forward to this most recent project they've sent us on. It's looking really promising."

"It sounds absolutely fascinating. I find myself drawn to art, especially the older words and ruins - it seems to speak to something deep to you...I bet it gets so boring though even with all of that, quiet and dull after a while. I can't imagine being confined to that kind of life. I need adventure, I need action - danger." The Asari seemed to lean in close as she spoke, waiting for the vixen's reaction.

"Actually..." Kristen chuckled to herself as she took a sip of her drink. "It isn't quite as boring as most thing. I've had my fair share of action - you would be surprised how many slavers and pirates think an Archeological team is an easy target...or how many rival corporations want to steal the effort without putting in any of the work beyond a few 'accidents'."

"Pirates, slavers, and mercs? I guess there is a little spark every now and again...and you must be pretty capable yourself to handle all that." The glimmer in the Asari's eyes flashed with a devious glimmer as her own lips curled into a smirk. "Ever had to kill?"

"An odd question..." The vixen paused as she looked down to her drink. "I've tried to avoid it, we don't get much of an escort in our line of work though. Company doesn't really want to pay for bodyguards."

"Archeology isn't all I do, by the way." The vixen looked over towards the dancers in the distance, most stopping for the night as the few patrons they had were ushered out. "I know how to have a good time when I get the chance. If you had gotten here earlier..."

"I've had my eye on you for a while. You are one of the most...alluring people here tonight." The Asari chuckled, looking around as more and more tables emptied.

"Looks like the place is getting ready to close up for the night. What do you say you come with me to my apartment - it's not too far...I'd like to...get to know you a little better~" The vixen's gaze followed the Asari's own as she stood, drawn in deeper and deeper by the now powerful aura she was putting off, words resounding in her head as she nodded along.

"Sure...I'd love that - lead the way." The Asari tried to hide her grin as Kristen stood up behind her, following along without a moment of hesitation as the two made their way out of the club and through the busy halls, winding further and further down the station until the noise of the crowded habitat seemed to die down - dim lights replaced with bright white.

The walk itself would be fairly quiet, little spoken from the Asari's lips as the vixen felt her anticipation grew with each word and each sly glance of the Asari's own gaze she caught. Her mind barely even knew what was drawing her in, barely even knew why her legs kept moving forward to keep in time as some tickle in the back of her head teased her onward.

"Here we are." The Asari paused before a door - plugging in a few keys as it opened to reveal a spacious living room with a view of nearly the entire habitat's interior.

"Oh wow..." The vixen took a few steps in as her tail swished behind her - greeted by a plethora of artist words and relics. Her mouth would hang open slightly as she looked around; statues of Krogan, paintings of famous and unknown artists from all species hanging from the walls, even some artifacts from her own planet hanging around. She'd be drawn to each one as she slowly walked around before the Asari spoke from the couch behind her now - chuckling to herself.

"Enjoying yourself? Lovely things, aren't they...all gifts from suiters. Some of them are even pretty valuable I hear - I wouldn't trade any of them though." The Asari gave a smug grin as the vixen's gaze caught her own again - the figure's eyes now black as the world seemed to melt away around the vixen. "I'm sure you didn't just follow me here to admire my collection though..."

"Y-yeah...you're lovely..." The vixen found herself moving forward without a thought towards the couch, the Asari's form seeming to shift and shimmer before her with a haze of blue.

"That's right, tell me you'd do anything for me~"

"I-I'd....w-what....is..." Some part of Kristen's mind tried to push back as her ears began to throb, some oppressive force pressing in on her mind with each step forward.

"Hm, a fighter~ I love a good challenge~" The Asari's gaze narrowed as the vixen fell to her knees, gripping at her head - eyes stilled looked onto the Asari's. She could hear voices echoing in her head, feel fingers plucking at her thoughts like strings on a guitar. "Now...tell me you'd do anything for me~ Tell me you'd kill for me~"

"Y-yes...I-I'd...do anything....do anything for you....I want to do anything for you..." The vixen's resistance couldn't last long under the force of the much more powerful mind pushing itself onto her own - rising to her feet again as she walked closer and closer to the couch before sitting down beside the Asari, feeling the words flow through her.

"That's a good girl, you want me, need me - you don't care how much it costs you, don't care what you have to give up~" The vixen was pushed onto her back on the couch as the Asari crawled atop her - keeping eye contact all the while, drawing her further and further in as the world faded into a pale green that slowly drained of all color into an inky black.

"Y-yes...w-want you...need you...I-I--" The vixen's words were cut short by a soft moan as she felt a few smooth fingers push against her soft fur, gliding down before sliding down her pants and panties to rub at her already wet slit.

"You have such a lovely mind, Kristen..." The vixen moaned again as the fingers slipped inside of her, pushing in and out as the Asari continued. "Embrace eternity~"

The vixen's body convulsed with a sudden burst of energy flowing through her mind. It'd be pleasant at first mixed with the pleasure tingling up her spine, but seconds would see it flare into a burning sword that cut across her thoughts. She could do little more than let out screams amid her moans - the pleasure and pain melding together as she felt the oppressive force expanding inside every bit of her mind.

"Just let it happen~ There isn't anything you can do now~" The Asari spoke in a teasing tone as the vixen felt a few bursts of pain in her mind, the warm trickle of blood starting to flow from her nose as her body was locked in place. "Enjoy your last moments~"

The vixen wouldn't be able to respond, or even fight, as the pain grew and expanded outward. Kristen would feel it flowing like water through her mind, explosions rocking her body as it convulsed even more, the pleasure from the fingers still gliding in and out from between her legs only seeming to make it worse as parts of her mind went dark and red as they were overwhelmed by the sheer force of will exerted upon her.

"Mmmmm~" The Asari's fingers would start to go even faster as the vixen felt the pain slowly fading into a sickening pleasure. Each part of her mind that painfully died would cause a chorus of the Asari's own sadistic taunts to ring out, slowly overpowering her own as they tugged at her like a toy. Over and over she'd feel it happen bit by bit - unable to stop it, unable to push away the closing darkness or the growing orgasmic pleasure of the being above her.

"A-aahhh~! C-c..." The vixen's toes curled as she let out a final choked scream - eyes rolling into the back of her head as the blood more freely flowed from her nose. She could feel the pops in her mind, the explosions of crimson that tattered her thoughts to pieces as the last bit of life drained out of her in that moment. She'd fall back lifeless, still twitching as the Asari pulled her now wet fingers from the corpse.

"That was the most amazing I've had in a while." The Asari licked the juices from her fingers as she let out a satisfied gasp, feeling the rush flowing through her mind - listening to her own heart throbbing in her chest with the ecstasy that flooded every inch of her body. "It's always a rush when I find someone quite like you~"

"It's always just too short though." The Asari stood before walking over to the window - watching the lights flickering in the distance before turning back to the still convulsing vixen, blood now pooling on the floor. "I suppose I should clean this up, think I'll keep that pretty tail of yours as a trophy though - I want something to remember this hunt by~"

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