Yu-Gi-Oh World Tour Chapter 1.5 (rewrite)
#1 of Yu-Gi-Oh Tour
Okay here's a rewrite of the duel action, that I messed up on misreably. I hope you enjoy.
The champ an artic fox dressed in black pants, white shirt, and white trench coat activated his duel disk, drew 5 cards. While doing this he stared at his falcon opponent dressed in black jeans and white shirt, his brown eyes meeting the artic foxes ice blue eye's. The falcon activated his duel disk and drew the same amount of cards and readied himself. They're life point counters on their duel disks set to 4000.
"Let's duel." They both said in unison
"I'll start." Smith said as he drew his sixth card, "I summon Kaiser Sea Horse in attack mode (ATK/1700 DEF/1650) and set these two cards face down and end my turn* Smith played the cards on his disk and the hologram of his monster appeared with 2 face down cards appeared behind it.
Jon drew his card, "I summon Skilled Dark Magician (ATK/1900 DEF/1700)." Jons magician hologram appeared in front of him. "Attack his monster, now." His magician started to attack, Smith's monster.
"Activate trap, Threatning Roar." Smith said as his trap card revealed itself to Jon, and a loud roar stopped Jons monster attack.
"I set this card face down and end my turn." He placed a card in the disk slot, and a hologram of a card appeared face down.
Smith drew his card and smiled at the card he drew, "I tribute my Kaiser Sea Horse to summon Blue-Eyes White Dragon (ATK/3000 DEF/2500)" His Kaiser shattered and a white dragon took it's place, and roared. "Attack with White Lightning." The dragon fired a white blast of energy at Jons monster.
"I activate Mirror Force." Jons trap card flipped up and a mirrior shield appeared around his magician.
"No, I use Seven Tools of the Bandit." Smith second trap card revealed itself, Jon's mirror shattered, and his monster was destroyed by the blue-eye's attack.
Smith LP:3000 Jon LP: 2900
"I set this card face down and end my turn." Smith set his card
Jon drew his card, "I set two cards face down and summon Magicians Valkyria (ATK/1600 DEF/1800) and boost her strength with Mage Power. She gains 500 attack points for every spell or trap card on my side of the field (ATK/3100) attack with Mystic Scepter Blast." His spellcaster launched her attack, destroying his dragon.
Smith LP: 2900 Jon LP: 2900
"I end my turn." Jon said ending his turn
Smith drew his card, "I play Heavy Storm." A large gust of wind destroyed all the spells and trap cards. "I play the field spell Mountain." A field spell compartment open and he put the card in it, and the holograms displayed a mountain terrain. "And next I summon Lord of Dragons (ATK/1200 DEF/1100) and the Flute of summoning Dragons, I summon Red-Eye's Black Dragon (ATK/2600 DEF/2200) and Tiger Dragon (ATK/2600 DEF/2000) attack." His Tiger Dragon attack first destroying Jon's spellcater.
Smith LP:2900 Jon LP1900
Then his Lord of Dragons attacked bringing Jon's life points even lower
Smith LP:2900 Jon LP:500
"Finish this Red-Eye's, with Inferno Fire Blast!." Smith odered, and the black dragon launched a black fire ball at Jon directly, brining his life points to zero. The crowd in the audiance cheered as Smith's undefeated streak continues, the holograms turned off and their duel disks deactivated. Me a black panther dressed in a black shirt and black pants, and my friend a coyote, who was in a white shirt and blue jeans. Who also goes by the name of Jackie Cypress. We watched the duel and thought it was awesome, then a voice over the tv said the locations on their tour.
Then I heard our city being called on they're list, me and Jackie we're excited to hear our city will be live on television next week on monday night. Jackie got up and said his good bye, and left home. I get up and turn off my tv and look at my clock, "11:30, already, man how time flies." I said walking to my room and get ready to go to sleep. First I looked through my deck when finished, I put them back in my deck box and put it in my dresser. I turned off my lamp and settle in my king sized bed, and let sleep take me.
I hope this first chapter is better than my original, by Vampire Panther