Dragon's Fire on Queen's End

Story by NadiaBlack on SoFurry

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A recent 7-page ($21) commission I wrote about Queen Chrysalis getting her butt burned by a dragon. I'm open for commissions at that rate BTW, if anyone wants to jump aboard

Didn't know about this kink until i wrote it but apparently the commissioner liked it. what do all of you think?


Queen Chrysalis sat in the forest, scheming of her next plan to destroy Equestria. She had been hatching plans for the last couple of years and hadn't succeeded yet, but those failures wouldn't stop her. Nor would her current lack of minions. Nor even would the ever-increasing power that Twilight Sparkle and the other ones would always seem to gain. She was queen of the Changelings, and despite the betrayal of her entire kingdom she had absolutely no plans of allowing her empire to be anything less than massive and resplendent. She walked around the grounds and began to think of the how

"Yes, that would work...I could distract her..." she muttered to herself, trying to articulate her plans. She ran into a clearing "And then Princess Celestia will fall, leaving ME to take her place in Canterlot as queen of all Equestria, and soon afterward the world!" she held her head high and let loose her evil laugh, walking forward without even keeping her eyes open. Then she walked right into a dragon.

"Hey, what was that for?" asked the dragon. He was still in the bipedal state of his development but looked pretty old, old enough that he was considerably taller than Queen Chrysalis, and looked to be heavier as well.

"Silence, Servile!" shouted the Changeling queen, stamping a foot on the ground and holding her head low, aiming her horn directly at the dragon "You have no right to stand in the way of this world's rightful queen! Apologize for slamming your back into me immediately, and I may just allow you to leave here with your life!" she started tapping her front hooves on the ground in excitement, smiling at the dragon.

"You have problems" said the red reptilian biped, walking into her chest first. It seemed like the scales on his chest were pretty hard, he walked straight into her horn and pushed her back rather than finding himself hurt "I suggest YOU apologize for running into me like a laughing idiot before I give YOU a piece of my mind!"

"You dare call Queen Chrysalis an idiot?" shouted the queen, before firing a bolt of magic from her horn, nearly hitting the dragon but not quite since he dodged to the left.

"You Are crazy!' said the dragon, before breathing a stream of fire at her. She flapped her buglike wings and flew above the stream of blazing tongues. "Get down here so I can punish you!" the dragon shouted, pointing up at her

"You punish me?" the queen replied, once again becoming indignant and once again starting to laugh her head off "that is rich! I have done nothing wrong and you know it, you disrespectful dragon!' she turned around and headed for the hills, but she thought she knew more about dragon development than she had. For instance, she had always operated under the assumption that dragons only earned to fly when they reached their quadrupedal stage and found a cave somewhere to live. This was not the case

"Fine, you you asked for it!' the dragon ran on foot for a few paces before jumping into the air and following her on his wings, coming pretty close to her before he let out his first round of flames! They didn't quite touch Chrysalis, but she could feel the heat roasting her hindquarters. This wasn't good, some insane monster was chasing her and she was having a very hard time defeating him.

"Fool, you have no idea what it means to attack a changeling queen!" she said, the dragon at her heels now, he swiped his claw, but suddenly she was no longer there. In her place was a hawk, soaring on thermals at a faster speed than the dragon.

"Oh come on, that is getting you nowhere!" said the red reptile, chasing her again, he started breathing fire around her. Queen Chrysalis opened her mouth to mock his poor aim, "I knew dragons had tiny brains, but I thought they at least had the ability to tell you can't burn something you never even touch!" she said. Then, suddenly, she started to wobble. The thermals weren't; acting consistently anymore, wind was going all over the place, and she was getting pulled toward the dragon.

"You don't know much about birds, do you queenie? I bet you know even less about them than you do about courtesy" he said withs ome venom, flying to intercept her. She panicked for a moment, before transforming again, this time becoming a pegasus and flying right under him before going toward a nearby clearing. That would suffice as a place to hide unless he burned the entire forest down, and he would never do that. She was just looking for a hiding spot now, somewhere she would go to escape the dragon before planning out his punishment. It wasn't her fault that he had so adamantly refused her right and just rulership, but she would make sure that he received everything that he deserved for his terrible series of crimes.

She began cackling at all the tiny evil plots she was already forming in preparation for the day she would get revenge on this inconvenient dragon, before finally getting back to taking over Equestria. In her joy the queen looked back, but there he was. "What, did you think I never chased a pegasus before?' he said in a mocking tone, before coming down heavily on her, grabbing a hoof and pulling to spin the queen in a circle midair. This was bad.

In her panic Chrysalis turned back into her default form and began to repeatedly kick her draconic pursuer directly in the chest multiple times, but that was no good. He just folded his wings in and let them collide with the art, doing his best to slm her into the ground. That hurt, but not badly enough to stop him from approaching her immediately afterward.

Chrysalis didn't look back this time, instead she just ran deeper into the forest in search of some kind of defense against this mad dragon. She could hear his footsteps behind her, and while she considered flying back into the sky again, she realized that there was no way she could possibly best him in her current condition. She went into a wetter are and looked around, before finally finding what she wanted right next to the river. A hollowed out log.

The queen slipped herself in, snug as a bug in the rug as she imagined the stupid dragon coming by and looking right past her. He would do that, the dumb reptile, leaving her as the victor in their little game of cat and mouse. He may not even realize that he had lost until she came many months later and completed her plan for a perfect vengeance! Victory was finally here's to bask in!

"Hey, where are you!" the dragon said, following the marks in the mud. Not quite hooves and not quite pegs, they were completely distinctive to an unchanged changeling. Or so he assumed at least, he had never really had an encounter with one before but they matched whatever it was that hit his chest. He was by the creek when he saw right where the steps ended, at the end of a log. He knew immediately what the deal was, but decided that he could have some fun with this if she wanted to pretend to be a genius, he could pretend to be an idiot until they both admitted what they really were.

"Drat!" the dragon screamed loudly while approaching the log "Guess I lost her!" and in her head queen Chrysalis congratulated herself for her acting as well as her deception. She had completely fooled her pursuer once again proving why she was the only queen worth considering.

"Oh well, may as well just do what I always do when I get bored" he walked right to the log and breathed fire next to one end. Not into it, but close enough that she would feel the heat. Chris Aslys bit her tongue, trying not to scream as she felt her buns warm up. Her flank was definitely being assaulted with some serious heat, but she told herself that she just needed to grin and bear it. Soon enough the dragon would get bored and leave. He didn't even know that she was hiding here, he had literally just said so after all.

He approached after that, looking right down the log. Well, there she was, her butt facing right at him. He thought he'd been burning her face, but those big round cheeks were just as good a target for the heat of his fire. She actually had a nice rear end, he guessed, if you were into ponies or pony-like creatures at least.

Queen Chrysalis kept her teeth on her tongue, feeling the burning slowly become less painful. Her butt was cooling off and, after that happened, she would be able to just sleep in this log until the dragon was too far away to do anything. After that she could...was that more heat?

The dragon smiled smugly as he began slowly breathing fire right into the log. Not enough to roast Queen Chrysalis alive or anything, but definitely enough to bake her biscuits. He was sure she had to be hurting bad, and wasn't quite sure why she was still in the log

Queen Chrysalis knew that this too would pass. The dragon that had been breathing fire on her didn't even know she was in there, she heard him say as much. Beside, even if he did somehow know, why would he be breathing fire at her...why would he breath it back there instead of right at her face or head? Surely a vengeful dragon would go for a dignified death rather than this srt of base and vulgar torment.

The dragion breathed just a bit harder, sending a little ball of flame directly onto her left cheek. It wasn't enough to roast a marshmallow, even, but had always been enough to get a real scream out of mammals and mammal-like creatures. At least it had been in his experience in Equestria.

This time she just morphed her mouth away, her face becoming a blank black sphere affixed with two eyes, each of which was tearing up form the pain. She was sure this form would allow her to keep not only her privacy, but also her regal dignity as she suffered through this temporary setback.

Well if this bug-queen was one thing, she was resilient. He scratched his chin a bit in consideration of what he would do next, while admiring the burning butt. She was shaking it around i n the tight space of the hollow log, no doubt trying to get it to cool faster. He could definitely watch that display for a while, the queen had no idea how undignified she looked, did she?

Chrysalis shook her flanks with all her might trying to ahir them out while remaining completely calm and quiet. She knew she was doing a very good job, as queen of the Changelings, calming herself with the knowledge that she would never have to do this sort of thing in a throne room once she had finally properly retaken Equestria for her own glorious empire! She would have smiled if she had had a mouth at the moment, but instead just waved her front hooves in celebration.

The dragon was considering just giving up and saying he knew where she was, but as he looked into the burning butt he decided to try a different approach. The queen had had a resistance to light heat, but just barely. It had obviously mad her very uncomfortable and needy. But what about heavy heat? Real fireballs? What if he legitimately tried to burn her down?

The queen had just stopped airing off her butt. It would be sore for days and weeks to come, but wouldn't exactly be injured. The dragon had stupidly and accidently hurt her, but she wouldn't have to suffer any real damage beside some slight humiliation that she could heal completely by returning it in kind. It sure did pay to be evil some days. She started shaking her hips again, in excitement this time, before she got hit directly.

The dragon snet in a legitimate torrent of flames this time, enough to fully light up the log as well as the surrounding area, there was no way that the queen could resist this time

There was no way to avoid it now, she morphed back to her basic, mouthed form and screamed at high heaven "AAAAAAHHH!" she ran right out of the log, revealing her location as the dragon just pointed and laughed. That idiot, thinking he could make a fool of her "Silence!" the queen shouted through her pain "You didn't even know I was in there, this is just a lucky accident!' she said, shaking her rump, she looked back and saw...she was still on fire!

The dragon's laughter redoubled as the queen began running around in circles, screaming about her burning body, and finally jumped right into the river, soaking herself wings and all as the dragon looked on. "You aren't planning on sitting down any time soon, are you Queenie?"

The humiliated, soaked queen who was freezing everywhere except her still burning butt just mumbled nd sulked in response.