For you, my Heart; for you, my Soul
So, i've finaly found enough self-confidence to post one of my Poems, it is an old one, but it is a poem, i think.
To warn you, this is like a highly concentrated injection of sugar, so be prepared.
For you, my Heart; for you, my Soul
I'd fight for you, age Young or Ol'
In this life or in any other
when you smile t' me, nothing's to bother
You smile for me; you shine so bright
no sadness, ever, shalt be your Plight
For you, my Heart, for you I've been
to leave you alone, it'd be my greatest Sin.
You are strong within, my Heart
know that, forever, I'll be your Guard
Construcitve criticism appreciated. However remember, this was my first Poem EVER so don't tear me into pieces because it is bad or something.
If you actually liked it, .. well .. i doubt someone will like it. But we all have something embarassing in our past, don't we?