Jungle Loving (Commission)

Story by idontwantthis on SoFurry

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This was a commission for an anonymous who wanted a story based on his RPG session NPCs.

Please do inform me of any mistakes or slights in the writing, as I do hope to improve.


It was louder than thunder and brighter than the sun. It happened all at once. What you had expected to be a long and bloody battle against the bloodthirsty apes ended in an ear-splitting flash. You were the sole volunteer of the allied tribes to join the hyena amazons in an attack from the sidelines, even going as far as to dress, or rather undress, to match the nude musclebound women in appearance before the battle as to impress their hulking woman of a tribe leader. Even though you were the tallest of your bat brethren, a height which your off-world obsessed sister said to be five feet, you still only met chest height of the shortest of the hyenas and could only meet at the waist of their leader. Such an image seemed comedic, but you wanted to do everything you could to impress their leader and ensure a strong alliance with the tribe, especially after your sister informed you of recommending you to their tribe leader to ensure good faith. However, the attack was ultimately pointless in the end. Your technology obsessed sister, Jee, held her faith in the off-world technology and acquired firearms for the tribe to use in the war. Perhaps you had misjudged their use as you stand in the now barren fields of the battle littered with the numerous corpses of dead apes. Not a single one stood a chance as your sister and other tribesmen fired down upon the foes from afar, as each fell in an instant. You were awestruck.

You look off in the distance as the smoke clears and see your sister raise her arms, where she is met with the others doing the same. As the ringing continues to fill your ears, you see the gang of hyenas begin to make their way towards her and decide to follow along. The leader says something to your happy sister and the two begin speaking to one another, but your ears still fail to capture any of the words they say to one another. Finally, as your sense of hearing finally began to return to you, you hear the gruff voice of the tallest hyena faintly growl out to your sister, "...Your brother is the only man here who was willing to fight with us with honor."

A sense of pride and honor filled your body as you hear those words, knowing that your brave, yet potentially foolish decision had won over the battle-hardened warrior. Your sister stares far up at the towering amazon and grins.

"Hhh... I hope you treat him with respect, tribe leader Zalashisa."

You're not quite certain what your sister means by that as she speaks to your soon-to-be wife. True, the beast of a hyena towered above not only you but even the huts of your old tribe grounds, requiring you to bend your head back fully just to look her in the eyes; has very visible muscles all across her body that's decorated with scars, a mouth filled with fangs long and sharp enough to easily be mistaken for spearheads or knives, and leering eyes aimed at your comparatively miniscule bat sister that demand respect and admiration. Such monstrous qualities would send you fleeing for home in a heartbeat, but with those qualities belonging to a woman who desires you and even wants to have your children? You feel blessed by Lunar herself for your sister to grant you audience with such a woman. Though, you try to keep your excitement in check, especially as you stand naked before both your sister and future mate.

As you crane your neck to look up at her, you see her head far in the sky nod, before she eventually kneels down and grips your body and legs. Without any effort at all, she sweeps you off your feet and lifts you up to her face in an exhilarating rush, then starts to slowly make her way through the bullet-riddled tribal grounds towards the caves. Your member is quick to stand to attention as she holds you close to her sizable chest in her sturdy arms, but you try to hold onto your decency by hiding your arousal, hoping to at least preserve your excitement until after your blessings were received from Lunar with her as your wife. Zalashisa's dark orange eyes gaze down at your naked form and she gives a menacing grin, once again showing her many rows of teeth as she studies you like a piece of freshly cooked meat. Your body feels cold being in the sights of the threatening behemoth, yet your penis continues to swell at the promising thoughts of mating with the hyena. The hot air of the sunny day was soon replaced by the welcoming chill of the dark cave as she carries you deep inside. You look down from your towering perch and see various cloths, leather, and even fruits and vegetables stored throughout the cave. At one seemingly comfy pile of piled furs, Zalashisa unceremoniously drops your body upon the soft material in a quiet pomf.

"Wah!" you cry out from surprise, your hands leaving your genitals to brace against the animal pelts as you fall. Before you could ask what she was going to do, the answer was immediately given to you as she laid herself against the wall atop the furs and spread her legs out, revealing the pink insides of her vagina. Still maintaining that malicious grin, she beckoned one clawed finger towards herself and rumbled in a deep, sultry voice, "Come. Breed me, brave warrior Dea."

"Hnn! Wait!" you shout as you jump back from the pelts and hyena.

Her excited and lustful look diminishes into that of disappointment and annoyance. With a huff, she barks, "What is keeping you?"

This is all going far too fast for you. You weren't entirely sure what to expect as she carried you off, but certainly not to mate this soon. "I- I want to marry first!" you stammer, only to be met with confusion from the hyena.

"Marry?" she asks, a tone of annoyance still in her voice as she crosses her legs and leans forward, still somehow overshadowing him even while sitting down.

"Y-yes. I want to get blessings from Lunar," you choke out, nervousness now wracking your body as your chances of success dwindle as you explain yourself to the hyena.

"Lunar? That is your god, right? Why do we need blessings from 'em?" she grunts.

"W-w-well... I want to make you my wifey before we- W-well... Make children," you squeak as her powerful eyes continue to burn holes in you as she glares at you.

"... And what is a wifey?"

"A- Ah, w-well... L-lifemate?"

Zalashisa's expression of agitation is quickly replaced by surprise at your words. "Lifemate?" she asks incredulously, giving silence in pause as she thinks over your words. Within moments, her sadistic grin returns in full and she once again speaks in a passionate tone as she asks, "So you will stay mate? Not leave?"

"Y-yes? I mean, yes!" you responded, confidence returning to your voice and enticing further excitement from the hyena.

"And you will keep mating? Keep giving strong children?!" she exclaims, her powerful voice echoing off the stone walls as she gets louder and eyes get wider.

"Yes!"

Her muscular arms reach across the furs in a blinding speed to wrap around you and press you close against her sturdy chest as she laughs out in thunderous enthusiasm. The vibrations of her laugh shake you to your very core, but such excitement was infectious, and you begin to grin much like the hulking hyena. "So... What we need to do to get blessings?"

"We need to do ceremony!"

"How soon?"

"We can do it tomorrow!" you chirp, only to be met with a drawn-out groan from the hyena.

"Tomorrow? Hnnnnn...," she grumbles, releasing you from your tight, yet comforting hold to fall back against the pelts. "Ffffffine. But we make it fast!"

"OK, wifey!" you beamed before crawling up to her face to give a quick kiss to the side of her face, once again being met with confusion.

"What are you doing?" she asks.

"Kisses?"

"Is this also something bats do?"

"I think so... But it shows I love your pretty face!"

"Hnn...," she mumbles, turning her head to look you in the eyes. Without warning, she places a hand behind your head and pushes you towards herself, where she then begins to mash your cheek against her lips and lick at the fur. "Like that?" she grins.

"Kinda... You use lips and suck, like eating fruit," you advise, unsure of how to teach something as simple as kissing.

"Hm... OK," she responds, a grin still decorating her face as she leans back into the pelts. She once again uses her powerful arm to bring you close to snuggle against her tough, yet soft fur covered body, nearly fulfilling every single fantasy you've had ever since you were young. "They will not expect us for a while. Let us rest," she says, before taking a deep breath in and sighing out as she closes her eyes. Despite not achieving much today due to how quick the battle was, you found yourself quick to desire sleep as well. Besides, with such a comfortable bed and the woman of your dreams resting by your side, you found no reason not to.

"I love you, wifey," you say as you rest your head against her arm.

"Hn... Love you, wifey," she responds back. As much as you wanted to correct her, the call for sleep was too overwhelming, until it eventually took you.


A bright orange burned into your eyelids. Opening your eyes only allowed more of the strong light in, so you tried to shift yourself to one other side to try and face away from it. However, two things became apparent to you: the first was that you weren't able to budge much at all and the second was that there was no way the light could reach that far back into the cave. You rub a hand over your eyes and see the formal ape tribal grounds bathed in the early morning light, specifically from a very high spot. Turning your head, you quickly discover that you're once again in Zalashisa's strong arms as she carries you through the tribal grounds towards the huts. "Good morning," she coos as she approaches one of the entrances, quickly brushing aside the cloth blocking the outside light out to peek her head inside. You hear her huff and enter with you in tow, revealing a sleeping figure resting in a bed for a being far, far larger than it. Before you could ask her what she was doing, Zalashisa barked out, "Jee! I want to do ceremony to make Dea lifemate!" The figure in the bed scrambled around blindly, tossing the cloth aside and revealing your belligerent sister.

"Hhhhh! What?! What do you want?!" she screeches out.

"Did you not hear me? I want to marry Dea!" Zalashisa responds, clearly not caring for waking her up so rudely.

"Hhhhhhhhhhh...," Jee hisses out as she rests her head in her hands. "Fine! Fine, just leave! I'll have sista Eff prepare it all later today..."

Your body could feel Zalashisa's threatening growl before the sound reached your and Jee's ears. "No, I want it done NOW," she demands, baring her sharp teeth for good measure as she speaks.

If such threats were registered by your sister, you couldn't tell, as your comparatively infantile sized sister responds with a scowl. "Hhhh... That is not how that works. You will wait," she snaps back.

Zalashisa growls once again, now more deeply and loudly. "How soon?"

"In a few hours. Hhh... Be fortunate it will not be held during the night," Jee hisses, standing from her bed to reveal her own lack of clothing. Out of embarrassment, you turn to look away from your sister's nudity.

Zalashisa huffs in frustration and leaves the hut, then carefully kneels down to put you onto the ground. "Hnn... I am going to go get something. I will find you later, wifey," she murmurs, standing up and storming off before you could attempt to correct her again. With nothing else to do, you try to find your sister Eff to prepare the marriage, as well as finding the resident cook to try and make a gift for your future wife that Jee had previously tipped you off to.

Several hours pass by and the time for the ceremony has come. Zalashisa returned moments before it started, yet refused to divulge where she went or what she was doing, other than that she was "fetching something". Preperations for the ceremony were shortlived, as there was no time for ceremonial garb to be made for either you or Zalashisa, though you doubted she would wear one regardless. The most that could be done was asking for Jee or Eff to pass the blessings of Lunar onto you and Zala and being declared lifemates. The only audience to gather were your mother, father, two sisters, and a few hyenas who watched on in interest. Eff, the priest of the tribe, stood between you and Zalashisa to give blessing, all the while trying desperately to not look at both your and Zala's privates.

"Brotha Dea, do you want to be lifemate to Laughing Jaka Jaka tribe leader Zalashisa?" Eff asks her brother as she focuses intently on his eyes.

"Yes. Very much so, sista," you answer eagerly.

"And tribe leader Zalashisa, do you-"

"Hnn... Yes, yes. Can we make this go faster?" Zalashisa grumbles impatiently. Her foot taps rapidly against the ground and she clenches her hand irregularly, seemingly praying for the ceremony to end as soon as possible. You're unsure, but you think you could see sweat beginning to bead around her body, particularly around her legs.

"Hnn... Lunar, bring blessings upon Dea and Zalashisa. Make fruitful relationship and beautiful love. May the two live long and well," Eff continues on, closing her eyes just before finishing. After a few seconds, she opens her eyes and says, "You are both now lifemates."

Any cheers you may have heard from your family or anyone else quickly faded away, as in a heartbeat Zalashisa threw you over her shoulder, blurted out "Good great thank you bye," then stormed towards the hut you had previously claimed for yourself and Zalashisa. The only noise you could hear was your new wife's heavy breathing as she once again dropped you down onto the bed. Sitting up to look far up into her eyes, you could see her powerful eyes twitching and staring down at you with incredible desire. From the bare light peeking in from the corners of the cloth covering the entrance, you can see the sweat glistening off of her thighs. "Hah... It took way too long, Dea... Hah...," she panted out, running one hand around her naked crotch as she tried to catch her breath.

Before you could come to the realization as to the source of her "sweat" on your own, it was spelled out to you as she kneeled down ever so slightly, gripped the back of your head and pushed you face first into her burning, soaked crotch. Your senses were assaulted from your mouth, nose, and even to your ears as she smooshed your face into her groin. Her scent was like nothing you have ever experienced before. Undeniably feminine, but powerful. Were it not for the lack of air you were currently experiencing, you would have found it hard to breathe regardless of where your nose or mouth may be. Past the wet squelches of your nose and mouth against her folds, you could hear her lovingly purr, "Hah... S-see what you have done? N-now... You're going to h-help me... Put a baby in it, lifemate."

It was those words that you felt something suddenly click. That with everything going on at this current moment: it was right. It was good. She was your wife. And you were her husband. And as her husband, you were going to make her feel just as happy as she was making you. You push your head back against her hand to take a deep breath of air, taking in even more of her scent, then you press yourself back against her folds and reach as deep inside with your tongue as you could. With reckless abandon, you dart your tongue across the burning hot flesh of her insides, randomly swabbing the tight muscles with your tongue as your mouth takes in her feminine nectar. As it smells, it tastes powerful and musky, yet ever so faintly sweet. With no other option, you swallow and continue licking your wife. Her hold against your head tightens as she presses you deeper into herself, loudly moaning without care for the whole tribe to hear.

The fur around your face was drenched at this point, possibly even threatening to leak down your mouth and begin to soak your chest and arms as you continue to orally pleasure your wife. Even with her vast height difference, you could feel the vibrations of every moan and the tightening of her snatch with every move you make. However, your exploring was cut short, as your wife pulls you away from her pussy and drags you with her onto the bed.

"Oh Zill... Hah... Hah... You are the best wifey, Dea," Zalashisa pants out as she lays down on her back.

Finding yourself similarly out of breath, you breathe out much like her, "Hah... I am not your wifey... I am your husband, Zalashisa... Hah..."

"What... is a husband?"

"It is me... Hah... Hhh... I love you," you huff, crawling across the bed to meet her face and kiss her lips.

Zalashisa returns a warm and tender smile, her usual maniacal grin and threatening teeth hidden by her look of contentment. "I love you, husband," she coos. "But...," she says, kneeling up to tower above you once more, "You still have a job to do." She reaches across you to the side of the bed and pulls up a small leather pouch. She reaches inside and pulls out a wooden bowl filled with something you're unable to see from such a height up, then drinks whatever it might have been down. Not soon after, she lowers the bowl down to you and affectionately commands, "Drink."

You're still unable to tell what exactly was in the bowl from the dim light, but trust her and take the bowl to drink the rest of the fluid down. Its taste was a sharp contrast to what you were previously tasting, her essence now replaced with a burning spice that nearly makes you gag from the first taste. As you hand the now empty bowl back to Zalashisa, you feel something beginning to flow through your body. It starts off warm but turns into a liquid fire that courses through your veins. But it's nothing compared to the heat you feel collecting at your groin. Though it was erect before, you could feel the pumping hot blood making it painfully hard with each passing second. And from what you could tell, it was affecting Zalashisa very much the same. Her eyes were half-lidded, her breath even heavier than before, and you could feel the heat emanating from her now flush flower even from the far distance between you and it. No words were exchanged. No comments of baby making, love, or teases. She had only one goal in mind as she towered above you, and it was to fill her womb to the brim with your life making seed. By Lunar, you wouldn't want it any other way.

After a tense moment of slowly teasing your penis along her snatch, she dropped down. In an instant, your dick plunged as far as it could go inside of her and a majority of her weight was pressed down upon your waist. Of all of the tasks you were assigned in the tribe, from lifting heavy logs for future fires to carrying massive beasts for feasts, it all pales in comparison to the massive pressure your body feels as she takes your entire length fully within. Both you and Zalashisa moan in unison, though you moan in a mixture of pain than strictly just pleasure. Still speechless and panting heavily, your wife slowly lifts herself up, at first giving you relief from the weight of her body, then quickly lowers herself back down upon you. She repeats this and quickly begins to pick up speed until she begins to take on a thunderous tempo of slamming herself down on your pole. She loudly moans out with each motion of her body, completely drowning out every other sound within and outside of the hut.

Your body is screaming out various mixed signals and messages, wanting her to both give pause to her relentless assault and continue to relieve this increasing pressure building up within you that begs for release. Eventually, your desire to breed outweighs your want to survive, as you now try to quickly douse the fire burning within you by thrusting up into her, embedding yourself deeper into her folds each time she rises up. It's only moments later that the familiar signs to release begin to well up within you, but what used to be a simple desire to cum during lonely nights of masturbation was replaced with a painful need to spread your flowing rush of seed deep within her womb. You let out a pained whimper as you feel your balls tighten and leg muscles cramp. You wanted to tell Zalashisa you loved her, but all you could do was mimic her loud cry of pleasure as the dam was finally broken. The burning desire in your veins was replaced with thunder as shot after shot of your precious semen was sent deep inside of her, and it took all of your strength to not collapse into unconsciousness after it eventually came to an end. Similarly, Zalashisa cried out and her folds tightened into a death grip around your member, leaking burning hot fluids down onto your fur and her legs as she cums not soon later. With no strength left, the mighty tower falls; unfortunately, directly atop you.

Where you not already struggling to cling to consciousness, you would have assumed that this would be the end of your life if you were to see that as your last sight before falling unconscious. Her breasts thankfully cushioned some the impact as her chest landed directly atop your head, though it still feels as if you were buried under an entire jungle's worth of fallen trees. Through muffled shouts and yelling, you discovered that she was in no position to move off of you. Lifting her off of you was definitely not an option as well, as you could barely lift her arm. The most you could hope for was to either worm your way out from underneath her while in your exhausted state or patiently wait for her to move off of you. Thankfully, your prayers must have been heard by Lunar, as she slowly but surely flopped over onto her back to finally give you room to breathe. You greedily take in the warm but refreshing air, as the sores and pain of the colossal woman riding atop you beginning to show their presence.

However, with each breath of air, you feel that familiar burn beginning to rise in your body. Your member was quick to arouse as the heat began to course through your body, the desire masking over the pain you once felt in your waist. Though your body had previously called for rest, something was pushing you to rise back up and breed her again. With newfound strength, you rise onto your knees and crawl towards your still wife, who takes notice of your rejuvenation.

"You... You're still up?" she asks tiredly.

Just like before, you're unable to form any words as you make your way to her splayed legs. You grip her thick, muscular thighs in an attempt to gain purchase of the furry mountain in front of you and thrust into her depths with reckless abandon, quickly interrupting any words that left your wife's mouth with loud moans of pleasure. Her passage was already slick with a mixture of your and her cum, leaving no resistance as you pumped in and out of her with increasing speed. Though your wife laid quite a distance away, you could see that her face was wracked with pleasure as the mysterious substance gave you the energy to keep on going. As you slam your hips against her tight folds, you look across her muscular and scarred canvas of a body, spying her sizable chest far out of your reach. Though you could not even dream of meeting her chest from where you are, you decide to return her earlier talk to her. You briefly let go of her leg to run your hand over her solid abs and belly button, then you yell out between ragged breaths, "I... Cannot wait... To see you... Swell with our... Strong child... My lifemate..."

"Hah... Huh-Husband...," she weakly calls out, before moaning out loudly once again. "Give... In... Me- Aah!"

Wanting nothing more than to fulfill your wife's wishes, you pick up speed and continue thrusting into her. Finally, you feel that familiar urge, and after a few more thrusts send another wave of cum deep into her flower. The strength now leaving your body, you collapse forward onto her body to catch your breath.

"Hah... Hah...," Zalashisa pants out, "Are... You finished... Yet?"

Before you could answer, the surge of heat begins to rise through your body again. The shackles of exhaustion are thrown off of you once more and your penis once again becomes painfully hard. Whatever substance your wife had given you, it affected you far more potently than herself. With your insatiable need still needing to be resolved, you once again reenter your wife. Then again. Then again. Then again. It wasn't until the sun had fully set and the white light of the full moon had begun to shine inside the hut that your energy finally dwindled down. With one last thrust and one last mind wracking release, you and Zalashisa cry out before collapsing in an exhausted heap and sleep.


"Imma be a father, sista Jee!" you cry out excitedly. The day was bright and colorful, especially so after hearing the news from Zalashisa. You aren't quite sure why your sister was speaking to an off-lander, but you feel that it doesn't matter as much as the news that she will be an aunt. Though, you aren't quite sure yet as to if it will be a bat or hyena yet. Either way, you're excited, and Zalashisa shares this excitement alongside you. You look up at your towering wife, noticing the numerous wads of clumped, dark-colored fur around her legs and groin from your many hours of love, and reach up to hold her clawed hand.

She squeezes it as she looks down at you and your sister, then lovingly and pridefully says, "And a great one he'll be."