Astraifort Estate 0.9
#9 of CYOA - Astraifort Estate
The next episode in Astraifort has been released.
This time there are no kinky scenes. It's all about character development for this episode.
I would have released this earlier but I held it because I wasn't liking how the story was playing out. I gave it several revisions. Also I wanted to make the text and dialogue to flow as smooth as possible.
I am sure that there are still parts that aren't flowing as much as I would like to, but I think I reached the point where I need others to point out the flaws.
Anything you have to comment about the game I'll be more than happy and grateful to read it and comment when it's possible!
==============================================================
June 15th, 2018 (beta 0.9)
Codename: Ghost riders in the sky.
Added Ballroom section
Added ending #37
Grammar errors from beta 0.8. corrected. Credits to meheggs from Sofurry
===============================================================
Play at http://cyoa.whitepython.net as usual :>
Play at http://cyoa.whitepython.net as usual :>