Undertale Fanfic comission: Saving a School

Story by Omega Swiftwing on SoFurry

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Toriel finds herself in financial crisis, but one of Asgore's former enemies has a way to fix that.

Comissioned by zdragoon

I do not own any of the characters from Undertale

Brutus, Abigale, and Kar (the Boar) are mine.


Brutus glared at a newspaper that showed the opening of a new school, the paper was a few months old by now, but it still made his blood boil. Humans and monsters were getting along fairly well after the human child Frisk had helped free the underground captives from that accursed barrier, and Brutus, now free of Asgore's reign was able to make a very lucrative business for himself, a strip club that doubled as the area's only legal brothel, it's specialty of course was monster girls. But all this new found money, power, not to mention lusty women all too eager to satisfy their boss however he saw fit was not enough to distract Brutus from his rage. The large, muscular horned viper's tongue flickered in irritation as he gazed upon Asgore, even as one of his employees (and willing slave) worshiped his huge, throbbing cock, her canine tongue lapping along the underside of his shaft as she suckled him, even deep throating him to let her broad tongue cradle his balls. His cock spurt pre into her mouth, letting her know her actions were not fruitless, though she wore a concerned expression as her boss/master stared at the old newspaper with hate in his eyes. How could someone be so angry while getting their cock sucked she wondered. What had the king done to Brutus to make him so mad that literally being worshiped could not diminish the feeling, even temporarily? The brown coated canine sighed around his cock and resumed her actions, though with notably less enthusiasm. Up and down she slurped until whimpering a bit as that cock throbbed and pumped a hot, thick load down her throat. She swallowed it happily before looking back up at Brutus, to see him STILL glaring at the paper.

"Really boss? Really? You came and you are STILL pissed?! You have the money, why don't you just hire someone to kill him?" the girl wiped her mouth off and stood up, going towards a mirror to fix her hair and reapply her make up, she was one of the girls Brutus used to keep guests happy when they couldn't afford to purchase any time in private. She ate dinner with them, jerked them off, gave them head if they had some pocket change. Simple things like that, when he wasn't bending her over his desk. Brutus set the paper down and sighed.

"It'd be a waste of money, the bastard is spear heading a campaign to break some political barriers and give monsters more breathing room. Know what that means? If he succeeds I could double this place's size and get three times the staff, I'm tired of having our girls having to work the grill naked. Nothing sexy about a blister because you were too lazy to put your clothes back on before hitting the kitchen... that being said, how dare he make himself too important to kill! I should have usurped him a long time ago..."

"Great idea boss, then you'd be the poorest politician among the humans instead of him."

Brutus raised an eyebrow at that. "What's that?"

"Yeah, he can't get any backing financially, and our currency is nearly worthless here, so he's slumming off the queen, err, ex-queen, since she actually has a job. But she's having money issues too, hardly any humans are enrolling their kids, and she may have to downsize."

Brutus grinned at that and looked over to the paper. "Hmmm, I may need to make a call tomorrow then, I think I have an idea that will fix the school up, and let me have a decent revenge too."

--The Next Day--

Toriel felt her heart sink as she looked over the bills for her school. Despite getting her teaching degree and having done everything needed become a citizen, she wasn't able to get a job because no school wanted to be the first to hire a monster. So Toriel did what she thought would be the next logical step, she opened her own school, or she dreamed of doing so... for now her school was a rundown building that had been abandoned for decades. With the help of friends and family she fixed up the place and opened the new School's doors to all, but as she had feared only monsters brought their children to learn. Over time some humans started enrolling their children, but not nearly enough to cover the electricity, plumbing, and the bank loan...

Toriel glared over her shoulder at Asgore who snored lazily on the couch, true he had been out campaigning for monster rights to be extended, but he was living in her small apartment for free, eating her food for free, essentially he was another child in the house. At least Sans and Papyrus had gotten jobs of their own and were living in their own apartment. The lazy oaf could at least go and get a part time job. Then it hit her, a part time job! She could work at the grocery store, or maybe at a restaurant... no, she needed a large sum of money, and quick. She sighed and began looking through jobs posted online. As she scrolled through the endless posts that required experience she did not have or could not prove she had, an email popped up, not on her personal account, no, it was her school email, anyone could have gotten it from the school's website. She blinked a bit as she opened it up, half expecting a rant of some kind or threats. Instead she found herself stunned at a paycheck stub from a fellow monster. The dog girl (as far as Toriel could tell, going off of the woman's icon) offered to introduce Toriel to her boss, saying she could be making five figures a month easily, more than enough to save the school. Toriel suspected drugs or some under handed trade of the like, but upon inspecting the pay slip, she discovered that it was legal work, for a man she had heard of before many times, Brutus Vangaur Toriel sighed and looked over at Asgore before hearing another email pop up. She looked over to it and opened it, sighing softly. It read 'Come now, please. Mr Vangaur is eager to speak with you miss Dreemur.' Toriel shut her computer down after jotting all the info she needed onto a piece of paper. She bid Frisk goodnight and said she'd be back before sunrise. She gave a final glare at Asgore before making her way out the door.

It was a long walk and Toriel sat on a bench not far from her destination to rub her feet, sighing before some neon lights caught her eye. She looked up and blushed hard as she saw a large neon outline of a female monster baring herself, beneath her read the very business she was seeking, 'The Snake's Den.' Toriel stared at the sign long enough that the image burned into her eyes for a few moments. She stared at the ground till that after image was gone, frozen in place. She had expected a bar, or maybe some sort of shop. She looked at her body and blushed, Brutus wanted her to work in his sex club, showing off her body? Toriel thought about standing up and storming off, but she couldn't get the email out of her head, five figures a month? She could buy a house, pay for Frisk's schooling, hell she could let Asgore keep the apartment and pay for his rent, if the feeling struck her. She sighed and shook her head, looking back at the club before walking up to the doors. As she pushed them open she looked up and stalled, realizing the doors were between two paintings to either side of a female's spread thighs. Toriel shook her head before making her way inside, keeping her head down a bit to try and avoid attention, she may not be as well known among humans but this place was aimed towards her kind, and monsters all over the underground knew and would readily recognize her. She looked about a bit and was shocked to see there were in fact a good deal of human men cheering and such along with the others as various monster women danced about, stripping or merely dancing nude already. Toriel was about to lose her nerve when a dog woman walked over, dressed in a cocktail dress.

"Hello Ms Dreemur! So glad you took me up on my offer, when I read about the school's problems online I couldn't help but try and recruit you, Mr Vangaur is eager to talk about your possible future here, and to put any fears to rest."

The next few minutes were a blur to Toriel, and before she realized it she was sitting in Brutus's office, with him looking at her as if he were waiting for a reply. Toriel blushed and froze, making Brutus chuckle. "I get that a lot in here. Women uncertain of themselves, wondering if they are making the right choice." He stood up and walked over to the window that overlooked his establishment. He nodded to a woman with tentacles for hair, spinning on a pole. "She needed more money to hire a lawyer, now her and her child live together happily, but they'll never forget their time apart... still her income helps to take the sting away. And that one, over there..." he pointed to a goblin-like woman giving a human a blowjob in his stall as he ate his food. "She was living on the street, scratching a living from the inside of a dumpster, now she lives in a modest estate by the lake. She's the only woman in here that likes to fish..." he nodded to a young human bouncing in a man's lap, naked as the day she had been born. "And her, she's one of my future lawyers, putti g herself through school. Of course I'm the only one besides you and her that knows that, so, Shh." He put a finger up to his lips and smiled, before walking over to his table and opening a drawer, he set several stacks of money on it and looked over to Toriel. "Before you ask, yes this is for you, and yes you'll need to earn it. 10,000,000 dollars, five for you, and five for your school. The price? You work for me, as my new Stockade girl, at least at first." Brutus smirked a bit as Toriel stared at the money. "And you start tonight, if you accept, strip yourself down, and get down stairs, Abigale will get you geared up, you'll be at the full mercy of customers, but you'll leave here an equal member of the team, with a solid head start on your debts, and a steady, substantial income to supplement that head start." Brutus smiled before sitting on his desk next to the money. "If you aren't interested Ma'am, I won't blame you, and I'll even let you take 100,000 dollars home." He offered a small stack of bills to Toriel, but as she reached for it he dug the hook in, his trump card all along. "But 100,000 dollars isn't enough to take care of young Frisk is it? The brave kid'll be ready for college before you know it, and then, who knows? Maybe I can hire Frisk in a few years when the kid is old enough, I certainly won't mind."

Toriel gasped softly before looking up at Brutus, the back to the money before letting out a soft whimper, standing up and slowly stripping out of her clothes. Brutus smiled before she spoke up. "Please, please don't let Frisk find out, my child need not know of any of this.." she said, naked and exposed before him. Brutus smiled again, and nodded silently. Toriel made her way downstairs, expecting to get hassled and whistled at, or shouted at, or any manner of wrong thing to occur. None did, if any recognized her, they didn't show it, she was just a naked woman in a massive room full of naked women. The dog woman from before, Abigale, walked up to her, but the dress was gone, instead she was wearing leather straps along her body, with spikes on them. She grinned at the naked Toriel.

"Welcome to the team Toriel, mind if we call you Tori? It'll help keep your identity secret too. Also you have got one rocking body, damn. If you ever want to have some fun on stage, say the word, we get to keep any tip money the guys throw at us, and the two of us? We could rake in a few extra thousand easy." She gripped Toriel's hand and guided her over to the stockades, before grinning. "Someone's popular." She said as Toriel bent over, putti g her neck into the center indention and her wrists to either side, trembling nervously at first. This was all for Frisk and the School she told herself, but if that were true, why was she so turned on as she lay her neck and wrists into the soft, almost pillowy interiors of the stockade holes. Abigale locked Toriel into place before bending over to whisper into her ear. "You've already got a taker."

Before Toriel could ask what Abigale meant, she cried out in surprised pleasure as a large, throbbing cock shoved it's way up into her waiting, and admittedly wet pussy. Her hands balled up into fists as she grit her teeth, trying to keep her composure. She failed and cried out each and every time this stranger thrust into her, his length was massive, it spread her open wider than Asgore, or any other ever had, she whimpered and panted.

Behind her Brutus stood naked, in his full glory, slamming his hips into Toriel's milf ass, his hips slapping against her over and over, loudly. He grunted and moaned softly, his large cock throbbing inside his former queen's cunt. His powerful body on display caught the eye of a friend of his, a regular. A large and powerful boar who had supported his decisions in the underground, and had even offered to help him overthrow the king. And now he saw Brutus behind the naked queen, rutting her like a common whore in heat. He chuckled and walked over to his friend, shaking his hand, his musky, potent crotch rubbing in Toriel's face. "Hey there B-" Brutus shot him a look before the boar chuckled and continued. "Buddy, mind if I take part I this fun?." Brutus smirked and nodded, much to the Boar's delight. He looked down at the queen and winked. He knew who she was, but he knew better than to flap his lips around town about her, not if he wanted to keep her to himself and Brutus. He fished out his half hard cock and draped it over her face, letting his hairy crotch engulf her face, smirking as his thick, coarse, black hair clung to her soft white fur. "I'm sure you know how this goes little missy, no teeth, and most of all, no spitting." He said before pulling back and prodding his sweaty cock at her lips. Toriel tried to speak up and ask him to be gentle, only to have her mouth filled with Boar cock, her nose buried in his thick pubes, her chin against his large musky balls. With her head and wrists locked in place all she could do was whimper, gag, and suck on the male's cock as he began bucking his hips fast.

Brutus Smirked and doubled his efforts, banging his latest employee hard and fast. He was a paying customer, just like the rest. Only he paid his employees for their sexual services more, directly. He looked over to Anigale who smiled and stood up on her tip toes to kiss him, making the boar chuckle out loudly as he fucked Toriel's face grunting and moaning as she noisily gagged and drooled on his cock, it was a spectacularly messy blowjob. They watched her carefully for signs of distress or denial, but all they could see was her sucking as hard and as well as she could upon the boar's dick, and her pussy drooli g and squeezing Brutus as hard as possible, milking him hard. It seemed the more they fucked her the more she craved, Brutus grinned ear to ear as he plowed his nemesis's former wife. His cock throbbed harder than it ever had, and he felt a thrill unlike any other. This was it, this was the moment he had always wanted, to get one over on Asgore after all this time, and to make it all the sweeter, Toriel was eating it up, getting spit-roast by two men she didn't even know, and she was in pure bliss, in a state of lust and pleasure she had never felt before. He had a new slave in the making, he could tell. He had seen dozens of girls act just like her and fall under his seductive allure, but this time instead of feeling smug and a little flattered, he felt like a god. Brutus slammed his hips forward and groaned out loudly, loud enough for Toriel to hear who it was that was cumming balls deep inside her depths. Her eyes went wide before they rolled back, her body going rigid as she came hard on Brutus's dick, her throat squeezing the boar so snugly that he too bellowed out in pleasure and came.

The boar pulled back, smirking at the sight of his cum and pubes clinging to Toriel's mouth, chin and face. Brutus pulled out of her pussy before stepping in front of her, smirking as she began to lick his cock clean without a word, blushing hard. He leaned down as she finished and smiled. "You just earned yourself a nice million dollar bonus baby. Now be a good girl and keep the customers cumming."