Commission story- A Gift Horse
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Commission story
A Gift Horse
First off this gets my normal warning. If you are under the legal age in your area, or dont like the tags, then hit the back button now. On another note. This is a commissioned work. I wrote the story, but the idea came from someone eles. Im only taking credit for the work. One last time, If you are under the leagal age, or dont like the tags, then hit the back button now. Thank you.
I had been out walking through the woods looking for wild animals to photograph. I all ways walked the same path through the woods. It was a nice mid spring day, the weather was nice and warm, the sun was nice and high in the sky, and a light breeze was rustling through the woods. I don't know why, or what told me to do it but I decided to leave the path and walk where no other humans had walked.
I keep walking through the woods, the song of nature all around me, the sound of twigs breaking and leaves rustling around me, I couldn't ask for a better sight. Well that's what I thought un till I came out of the woods into a field.
This was a huge field, tall, lush green grass swaying in the breeze. Not a sign of humanity for miles. I smiled to myself, realizing what a find this is.
"Wow." I said to myself, walking out into the field looking around. I got about out to the middle of the field and looked around, not really seeing any signs of any animals or anything. I herd a rustling sound coming from behind me, I ended up chalking it up to the wind, until I felt something nuzzling the back of my hand. I turned around and saw a small fole. "Well hello there little guy." I said smiling and petting his nose. Looking him over, I figure that he might still young, more than likely still drinking his mother's milk. "So where's your mom little one?" I asked smiling at the cute little horse, and then around. I genitally ran my hand over his side and felt, and saw that he was severally under weight. "Ooooh, you don't have a mom do you?" I asked taking off my pack, and looking through it, for something to give him. I had a few apples, and some water, nothing that he would like or be able to eat. "Wait here little guy." I said standing up. "Ill bring you something." I said as I headed back to the edge of the woods, and then started making my way through, back to my house. Thankfully both of us, I didn't live but about ten minuets away or so.
"Let's see here." I said to myself as I looked through my cabinets and found what I was looking for. I pulled a large bottle that was used to feed, young cattle and what have you, and prepared the pre mixed, milk substitute for the fole. I made the trek back through the woods, and found the little fole still waiting for me. "Come on little guy." I said as he came right up and took the plastic nipple of the bottle that I had made for him. He happily drank the milk down. "Awww, someone was hungry." I said smiling and petting the fole's nose. I stayed and petted, and took photos of the little one, soon settling on a name for him, Honey. A fitting name, considering his fur and mane are the color of, well honey.
I spent a good part of the spring feeding the fole, and watching him grow. Documenting the whole thing through the photos that I took. I tried on many occasions to get the fole to come back with my, that way I could take better care of him and give him a shelter. Every time I would come out there, he was waiting, no one eles, not even any other animals. I thought it was a bit odd, but I shrugged it off.
I went back one summer morning, this time I had decided to bring some apples along with the milk. I got there and was greeted by Honey. I smiled and cut a piece of an apple and offered it to him, but like any other time, he would take it. "Ooooh well." I muttered to myself and started to feed him with the bottle. This time as I feed Honey, I felt like someone, or something was watching me. I looked around as Honey keep feeding, and I didn't see anything.
"Someone was really hungry." I said smiling and putting bottle into my back pack and petting Honey, gently rubbing his soft ears. I was hit by the same feeling again, I looked around, this time I saw a large horse standing at the top of the hill, looking down at me. "Oh shit." I said to myself seeing this, realizing that he must be the fole's father. I started slowly making my way to the edge of the woods, but I was too late. I saw the large black horse charging at me, the piercing glare in his eyes freezing me with fear. A strange feeling coming over me as he got closer.
Suddenly I felt my body starting to get hot, my heart beating fast and hard, from a combination of fear and the adrenaline pumping into my veins. My heart beating so hard and fast, it feel as though its going to burst from my chest, my whole body pulsing. As the large stallion got closer, the feelings would keep getting stronger. I soon feel to my hands and knees, breathing hard. "This....this cant b-be from f-f-fear." I panted out one hand reaching up to grab my chest and squezzeing it tightly.
I suddenly yelled out, as I feel a sudden pain in my body, starting in my feet. I looked down and saw that my feet started swell, my shoes suddenly stretching and ripping open, my feet swelling and changing. "What, what's going on." I pant out reaching down and grabbing my left foot, and recoiling in fear when I realize that its hardening and turning into a hoof. I gasped out as I suddenly felt a sharp pain in my lower back. I reach back and touch where the pain is, and shudder as I feel a growth, that's getting bigger, and stretching out, my spine growing out with it. "God this has got to be a nightmare." I cry out as I look back, and gasping in horror, see that the growth is taking the shape of a torso, one that belongs to a horse. "Please let this be a dream." I cried out and turned back to the front and see that the nightmare is far from over. I look down at my chest to see it swelling, breast starting to grow. I look down past my growing breasts, to see that my tattered pants had fallen off, leaving me naked. I looked back again and saw that I now had a fully formed torso, of a horse, fur, hooves, tail, and all that. "What's, happening, why is this happen to me?" I ask my self. I look over myself as the pain slowly started to fade away, my body went from that of a human male to that of a female centaur. My mind racing, wonder why this happened to me, how can I fix this, is this all a dream or what. I looked up at the big dark brown stallion, he was glaring down at me, a sudden, new feeling starting to come over me. A strange want, a feeling of emptiness, a heat flowing through my body.
I winced as I stood up, a small pain shooting through my new body. I stood there looking at the stallion, woppaling a bit as I got used to standing on my four new legs. I looked over what I could see. I retained the human upper body, it was just that of a female. My short dark hair, had grown long, and trailed down my back forming into a mane. I ran a hand over the top of my head, and felt a pair of ears, my ears had changed into that of a horse's. I looked at my back side, seeing that it was that of a horse, covered in a honey colored fur, the same shade as the little fole that was sleeping in the grass. I looked up to see that the stallion had moved around to my backside, and was sniffing around. It was then when I realized what the strange feelings where, I was in heat!
It was sudden, but I felt the stallion jump up and come crashing down on my back. He wasted no time, thrusting, his large, flared tip looking for my wet slit. It took him a few tries, but he found his mark. I let out a loud moan, and winced a bit as I felt the large cock sliding deep into me in one fast movement. He didn't hold back, he started to thrust into me hard and fast, he was following his instincts. I let out a moan from the mix of the odd pleasers, the pain had already faded away. I subconsciously pressed my rump back as he continued riding my hard, my hands ideally squeezing and rubbing my large breasts. I let out a loud moan as I felt my body tense up as I felt an orgasm rushing through my body, my vaginal walls tighten around the stallions cock. I herd him let out a grunt, and felt him biting on my back as he gave one last hard thrust, as then starting to feel me with his potent seed. The warmth from his seed spreading through me as he filled my to my limits, it soon leaking out around his cock. He slid down off of my back, letting his cock slide free from my body, some of his cum leaking out of me. He came up next to me and gently nuzzled me.
I felt the little fole come up and start nudging my lower teats with his nose, stimulating them, and causing milk to start leaking. He stood there drinking from them till he had his feel. A strong feeling of love welling up inside of me as I watched the fole playing around in the grass, that was when I realized that this was my place. Taking care of this fole, and baring more for the strong, dark stallion. I spent the rest of the summer raising and watching Honey grow up, and giving birth to a little sister for Honey. I spent the rest of my life there with Honey, his sister, the stallion, and the rest of our growing family. The life of a female centaur, isn't an easy one, but the rewards that it brings are worth the pain, and difficulties I faced to get here. Raising my family, and watching them grow makes all of that a small, price to pay. I look back, the memories of my old life mostly forgotten. This large grassy field, and the herd that I'm part of is my life. I set here on the top of the hill looking out at the herd, and it makes my hearts swell with pride and love.
The End.
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The idea comes from a commissioner, so it all belongs to them, I just did the work.