Awkward Whispers

Story by RoadkillRaccoon on SoFurry

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This was gonna be way more kinky but i have a crush on both of these characters and accidentally got all mushy. Oh well, this probably won't be my only zootopia fic. Hope you enjoy!


Gideon Grey did a lot of paying up for his troubled youth. He saw the way people's eyes broke when they saw him for the first time in years, and he remembered with cruel accuracy what he did to deserve those looks. Those looks were payment enough in Gideon's mind. Yet, whenever the universe dealt him a bad hand he couldn't help but feel like it was some sort of cosmic revenge he couldn't quite wrap his head around. Today was one of those days where he was stumped as to what kinda game those above were playing.

Gideon worked his butt off today at the bakery. An order from that skunk came again, the one who ordered two dozen pies every month or so. He was also short an employee who was home with "senioritis" whatever that was. And the air conditioner was broken, making it hotter than hell on a midsummers day. On top of that, Judy was in town so the Hopps had to order pie to celebrate, and the Hopps kids were picky little critters. Every kid in the family needed a miniature custom pie and while Gideon enjoyed the work, he felt swamped and sweaty to high hell near the entire day.

Eventually, when all the pies were baked, and all his customers were happy, the sweet salute of the moon shone through the bakery windows, and some of the cool air from outside swept inside, cooling Gideon's sweaty fur. Gideon sighed deeply as he turned the lock on the front door. He walked into the backroom, hanging his heavily flour dusted apron neatly on a hook as he did. To his surprise, he was not alone in this backroom, as there was Judy Hopps, sat on an overturned milk crate, eyes closed, lost in whatever music she was listening to on her mp3 player. As if today wasn't bad enough, he had to see those broken eyes again. Judy had been visiting regularly for a couple of months now, so Gideon may have been imagining it, but he saw pain in her eyes every time he looked, which made him feel mighty sorry for himself.

Gideon wrung his hands together nervously, hoping Judy would eventually notice him standing there. When Gideon realized she wouldn't, he walked towards her and gently put a paw on her shoulder. Judy jumped a bit but relaxed as she saw Gideon staring down at her.

"Sorry Gideon, got a little too into it," Judy chuckled bashfully as she took out her earbuds, brushing her ears behind her head as she did so. She had that look in her eye, layered underneath embarrassment and chipperness, it was there though, clear as a star on a cloudless night.

"Aw gosh, no worry, my fault. Not that it 'aint nice to see ya' Judy but uh..." he trailed off, wishing he had an apron in his hands to wring nervously. Judy interjected before the fox could get his thoughts together.

"Came to see a friend ya big goof! How are you Gideon? You look stretched real thin."

"Aw tweren't nothin' just a busy one y'know? Yer lookin plenty pooped yerself." Judy laughed and settled back comfortably, arms behind her head.

"Yeah, family visits will do that, especially with my family." Gideon sat down on a milk crate next to her, hunched over so he didn't tower over her quite so much. "Don't let me keep you, you look exhausted."

"Naw it's alright, I could use settin' down for a spell."

"Gideon, what's that smell?"

"'S a bakery Jude yer gonna hafta be a lil more specific than that." Gideon said. Judy sat up, nose twitching, eyes half lidded. Her nose lead her to the end of her seat, and she leaned forward towards Gideon.

"It's you Grey, you smell incredible."

"Well that's whatcha get when you bake all day!" Gideon chuckled.

"No, no." Judy stood up and got real close, pressing her head into the chest fluff that stuck up above his shirt. "It's you. Like, you, you." Gideon was flabbergasted, he held his arms out awkwardly, not sure what to do with them.

"Yeah, the AC's broke, been sweating up a storm all day. Must smell real terrible."

"No," Judy's voice was light and breathy, "You smell terrific, are you comfortable with holding me close Gideon?" Judy was almost whispering now.

"Well uh, ah, uhm, well alright yeah sure ah'll be familiar with ya," Gideon also managed to whisper, wrapping his thick arms around the small bunny, pressing her further into his chest. Judy decided to get comfortable by straddling his lap.

They sat there like this for a while, Judy inhaling the dried sweat and musk from Gideon's chest. It was earthy and pungent and made her want to melt into liquid. After a while, Gideon started rubbing Judy's back, it just seemed appropriate. Judy moaned in pleasure at the action.

"That feels great Gideon. I'm sorry if this is sudden there's just something about the way you look in those overalls, and combined with that musk I just...gosh I don't know."

"Not to sound uh...", Gideon muttered to himself something about a therapist, "chauvinistic? But are you in heat Judy?"

"That's a very rude thing to ask Gideon." Gideon gulped audibly. Judy laughed.

"Ahm sorry I just don't-" "But no." "Pardon?"

"I'm not in heat. This is what I came to talk about. Didn't think I'd work up the courage to say anything but when i saw you all beat and tired and smelled you, I just decided it might be a nice time." Judy pulled back and looked up in Gideon's eyes.

Gideon was stunned, there was something there, but not the darkness of pain, no hurt, no anger, her eyes were bright and wide. The heat was getting to her too, small droplets of sweat ran down her fur and into the hint of chest that he could see down her little white crop top. For lack of an imagination beyond his industry, Gideon thought she looked prettier than a piece of pumpkin pie.

"A good time for what?"

"Gideon, I think I might feel something for you. I don't know what it is, and I don't want to hurt you if it's not love." Judy's voiced was stilted, as if she wasn't quite sure where she was going.

"What else could it be?" Gideon whispered breathily.

"I might just be getting nostalgic, and here you are a big handsome fox who reminds me of all the comforts of home, or i'm misguidedly trying to escape the hustle and bustle of the big city by dating someone who is far removed from all that," Judy gripped Gideon's chest fur, putting her head against his chest so that she was looking downwards as she spoke. "Or maybe i'm being a dumb bunny who thinks too much." Gideon held Judy closer and lifted her chin up so that their eyes met again.

"Well first off, stop callin' yerself 'dumb bunny' it's negative reinforcement," he said in a way that sounded rehearsed. "And second, all the rest o' that stuff is a little over m' head, but i think if it's love or some other thing. You should try'n figure it out." Gideon gulped audibly again. "Ah sure wouldn't mind." Gideon scratched the small of judy's back gently with his claws as he spoke.

"You know what Gideon," Judy whispered as she leaned up and planted an awkward kiss on his lips. "You are absolutely," she shifted upwards and took hold of his cheeks and kissed him softly and properly,"right." Gideon held Judy against his big belly as close as he could, and they began to make out, soft at first, but it grew rougher as they gained their confidence.

"Gideon," Judy gasped parting lips.

"Yea?"

"The question of whatever this is can wait, I want to make love to you."

"Yes Ma'am." Gideon said eagerly. They went back to kissing, and Judy wasted no time undoing the buckles on Gideons overalls.

"Lemme get off so you can get comfy," Judy said dismounting. As Gideon peeled his overalls off of his sweaty big belly, Judy made quick work of taking off all of her clothes. Gideon stopped in the middle of unbuttoning his shirt at the sight of Judy standing there before him naked and sweating.

"The heat isn't so bad like this huh?" Judy said.

"Guh" Gideon managed.

"Gideon I'm amazed at your self control. This would make most foxes pop out of their sheaths." Gideon looked down to see his fat sheath, cock nowhere to be seen.

"Ahm just uh.... Real nervous Judy."

"Oh jeez Gideon i'm sorry have you never done this before?"

"No I have. Plenty of times in fact but uh..." Gideon fumbled with the buttons of his shirt more "i've never felt the way i do about you with anybody else," he hesitated, "darlin'." Judy strode over and knelt down.

"Really?" she said slyly. "Looks like we've both been keeping secrets hm?" She bowed her head into Gideons thick sheath and balls and took a deep whiff. She was in heaven, his junk was so musky and sweaty, she wanted to lie there and sniff them forever.

"Oh Gideon, sorry to eschew the romance but I'm really gonna need you to fuck me right now."

"Well hold on now, we got plenty of time." Gideon said, easily hoisting Judy up onto his lap. His warm soft belly pressed against her. Gideon knelt down and began lapping at Judy's small (even for a bunny) breasts. His tongue was so big it covered an entire breast and then some. The hot sensation of his wet tongue and cooling breath was phenomenal, Judy felt wholly encompassed by Gideon's massive form; held in his arms, covered in his belly, and nearly drowning in his magnificent tongue. She held his head against her chest roughly, wordlessly begging him to lick and bite and hard as he could.

At this point, Gideon's member began to emerge from its sheath with gusto, and with it, a wave of musk hit Judy, intensifying everything she felt.

"Gideon, lay me down and fuck me right now," Judy moaned.

"Yes ma'am." Gideon proceeded to lay Judy down on the milk crate she was sitting on. He squat down slightly and guided his cock with his hand. He pressed at Judy's soft dripping pussy, a wave of pleasure passing over them both as his tip played at the entrance. Slowly, Gideon pushed further, each push sending a wave of pleasure shuddering through both of their bodies, until his knot was pressing against Judy's vagina. Now that his cock was in, Gideon bared down on Judy, licking and nipping at her breasts and neck while thrusting in and out of her nice and slow, his big gut keeping her down on the milk crate.

They kept going like this for a few minutes when Gideon's speed began to increase.

"Ahm gonna cum!"

"I am too!" Gideon thrust harder and harder as he felt the rush of cum building up in his cock, ready to blow at any second, until he accidentally stuffed the entirety of his knot inside the bunny. This elicited a gasp of pleasure and a gush of cum from Judy.

"Aw geez, I'm sorry Judy, I came inside you. I didn't mean it. It's this darn kn-"

"Gideon."

"What?"

"Rabbits," Judy started, speaking between great huffs and gulps of air, "can ovulate on demand. You won't put a baby in me unless I want you to, and i certainly don't mind being full of you're cum." She lay there in afterglow, head craned back.

"Oh," Gideon said. "Well did you... want me to put a baby in ya?" Gideon began stuttering after saying that. "W-well, I-I, yknow, i don't mean. I was just askin' if-," Gideon stopped talking when judy reached up and held his cheek.

"You're alright Gideon, I know what you meant. Let's take it slow, maybe one day I will want your litter. For now, let's just lie here together, and enjoy each other."

In the hot dark back room of Gideons bakery, in warm afterglow, a fox and a bunny lay silently atop a milk crate, breathing in the scent of sex and each other, wholly enjoying every second of it.