Comic Script - Ratchet & Clank: Emergency Power

Story by Gideon Kalve Jarvis on SoFurry

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Commissioned by BLADEDGE, a comic script with everyone's favorite lombax, Ratchet, and Sasha Phyronix, who is...sort of a cat.

I like kitties! ^.^

Apparently so does Ratchet. O.O!


Ratchet & Clank: Emergency Power

A comic script by Gideon Kalve Jarvis

Commissioned by BLADEDGE

Author's Note: Ratchet & Clank and all associated characters are © copyright Insomniac Games. The author makes no profit from this work.

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Information on Ratchet (http://ratchetandclank.wikia.com/wiki/Ratchet/Re-imagined) and Sasha Phyronix (http://ratchetandclank.wikia.com/wiki/Sasha_Phyronix) is based on their original game appearances.

Page 1

Panel 1:

Scene: the starship _Phoenix_from space (http://ratchetandclank.wikia.com/wiki/Starship_Phoenix), looking pristine from an extreme distance.

Panel 2:

A closer look as we zoom in. Now wrecked alien ships (http://ratchetandclank.wikia.com/wiki/Thugs-4-Less_attack_ship) are visible, all of them rendered into space debris in various states of destruction. The Phoenix now has visible battle damage, with sparking parts. We can just barely make out a tiny Ratchet-shaped figure in the cockpit.

Panel 3:

We zoom in even closer, so that we can see Ratchet sitting in the cockpit, looking unhappy, his ears lowered, as he looks out at the ships he's blasted while piloting the ship.

Panel 4:

Ratchet turns his head, ears snapping up, as a word bubble comes in from offscreen (behind him).

Sasha: Ratchet!

Page 2

Panel 1:

Ratchet in the background, Sasha Phyronix in the foreground, looking at a panel with "Damage Report" on the screen. Sasha is looking at a panel, her expression one of concentration, while Ratchet's is apologetic.

Ratchet: It's the engine, isn't it? I'm sorry I couldn't shoot those attack ships fast enough...

Sasha: You did your best, Ratchet. This just means we have to rely on the backup power to get us home.

Panel 2:

View from the side. Ratchet's ears are tilted slightly down in confusion, which also shows on his face. Sasha has just entered the panel, while Ratchet looks at her.

Ratchet: Backup power? I didn't know the Phoenix had...

Panel 3:

Ratchet's ears and tail both perk up, his fur standing up, his eyes wide, his cheeks flushed, as Sasha kisses him.

Panel 4:

Sasha has just broken the kiss, leaving Ratchet standing there, mouth agape, looking stunned, but in the very best way. She has hold of Ratchet's hand, and is smiling at him, her smile small and shy, her own cheeks flushed as well.

Sasha: Follow me.

Page 3

Panel 1:

View from the rear, as Sasha leads Ratchet by the hand through a door, which is in the process of opening for them with a "voosh!" sound effect. Ratchet looks slightly confused, and is still blushing, while Sasha is blushing even harder, and not looking at Ratchet in her embarrassment.

Sasha: The Phoenix's makers knew something like this might happen, so they fit her with a bio-converter when she was built.

Ratchet: An engine that uses organic material to run - yeah, I worked on a few of those. So we just need to toss hair and spit and stuff in it?

Sasha: It's, well...it's a special kind of bio-converter.

Panel 2 (extra large):

Still viewed from the side. Inside the room, as the door closes behind them with a "shoop!" sound effect, Ratchet frowns in puzzlement as he looks at the odd contraption in the room (it is obvious he doesn't get what the device is for), while Sasha approaches it, having released his hand to pick up a datapad resting on a futuristic-looking table with the words "Deposit Clothes Here" printed above it.

The bio-converter (which is the contraption in the room) is a somewhat complicated looking bit of machinery, with glowing lights and futuristic doodads sticking off the side. It looks much like a cross between a milking machine and a large, sleek engine block. Protruding from the side closest to the entrance, where Ratchet and Sasha are located, are three suction devices, which are mostly transparent, but have tiny bits of circuitry across their surfaces, which glow in pretty patterns when they are active. Two of these suction devices are like enlarged suction cups, large enough to fit more-or-less over a woman's breasts, while the third is very similar to a fleshlight, made to accommodate a penis, both these suction apparatuses allowing a viewer to see the body part being stimulated inside, thanks to their transparent material. On the machine are two gauges, with "Empty" and "Full" clearly marked.

Ratchet: Never seen a bio-converter like this before.

Page 4

Panel 1:

Side view, set so that we can see just below the pelvises of the two characters. Sasha hands Ratchet the datapad, and though Ratchet seems to have recovered from their prior encounter, Sasha's cheeks are still deeply flushed - she knows what's going to happen, but Ratchet is as clueless as always. The sign saying "Deposit Clothes Here" is visible in the background, as is the table.

Sasha: The _Phoenix_is a lot more powerful than most ships, so they had to use something with a little more kick to get the emergency engine running.

Panel 2:

Sasha is walking past Ratchet, heading offscreen, only parts of her back and her tail visible onscreen, her voice bubble coming from offscreen. Ratchet briefly looks back at her, the datapad in his hands.

Sasha: Just read the instructions. They'll tell you all about it while I get ready.

Ratchet: Get ready?

Panel 3:

Visibly shrugging, Ratchet turns his attention to the datapad. Sasha is now completely offscreen except for some of her tufted tail.

Panel 4:

View looking at Ratchet's face as he looks down at the datapad, his face lit up with the glow from the pad. Behind him, obscured somewhat (convenient censoring) by Ratchet's ear, and/or possibly his word bubble, Sasha is bending over, pushing her pants and panties down her legs.

Ratchet: Hmm..."Instructions for using the reproductive biomass converter." Better read all the instructions first before doing anything - that's just good sense.

Page 5

Panel 1:

Until further changes are noted, the following panels are seen from Ratchet's point of view, looking down at the datapad's screen, while to the side can be seen the bench where clothes are supposed to go, with a part of the sign reading "Here" still visible to one side.

On the screen are shown a naked lombax male and a naked cazar female (the species of Ratchet and Sasha, respectively), facing toward the reader, their appearance simplified and idealized much like diagrams from basic sex ed classes. A pile of clothes is resting to one side of the drawing, on top of a table much like the one visible to the side of Ratchet's field of vision. As he reads, Sasha's pants land on top of the real-world table.

Datapad text: Step 1) Remove clothes.

Panel 2:

Sasha's panties have joined her pants on the table, along with her boots and gloves.

The datapad, meanwhile, displays the next page, which shows the two tiny naked figures facing away from each other. The stimulation/suction devices are attached to the breasts of the cazar and the penis of the lombax figures.

Datapad: Step 2) Attach suction/stimulation devices.

Panel 3:

Sasha's uniform jacket is now on the top of the heap of clothes.

On the datapad, little lightning bolts can be seen around the devices attached to the breasts and penis of the two figures. The figures, meanwhile, look very happy, with obvious squirts of liquid bursting from the affected body parts. The cazar's output, however, is much less than that of the lombax.

Datapad: Step 3) Activate suction/stimulation devices.

Panel 4:

Finally, Sasha's brassier joins the pile, the last of her clothes except for her golden tiara (she doesn't take that off - she likes it).

As for the datapad, it shows the little lombax figure now free of the device, and standing behind the little cazar figure, mounting her and using his hands to stimulate her breasts, which are still otherwise inside the suction cups (which, as it turns out, are quite flexible). The cazar's milk production has increased significantly.

Datapad: Optional Step) Partners may stimulate each other for increased output.

Page 6

Panel 1:

Still Ratchet's point of view, but now Sasha's hand covers the datapad, pushing it down. The little naked figures are still barely visible at the bottom of the panel, but most of the focus is on Sasha herself, visible from a little below her waist on up (the datapad and her hand pushing it down conceals the rest), obviously completely naked as she stands before Ratchet, blushing deeply, but with a flirty smile on her face.

Sasha: Come on, Ratchet. Don't you want to get the ship moving?

Panel 2:

Now seen from the side again, showing the full bodies of both Ratchet and Sasha. Kissing Ratchet again, Sasha lifts his shirt, exposing his muscled belly.

Panel 3:

Sasha has Ratchet's shirt in her hands, having just neatly folded it (unlike her own clothes, which she tossed aside carelessly) and is half-turned away, bending over as she sets it on the table, her tail lifted, exposing her sex. Ratchet, meanwhile, is bent over, pushing his pants down his legs, one leg slightly lifted, his erect penis visible, though obscured by his raised leg and arms and his angle, which is slightly away from the viewer, to allow his cute butt to be clearly visible. Ratchet, as the games have repeatedly hinted with their innuendo, is very big, even disproportionately so compared to his overall size, though not quite to ridiculous levels. His eyes are on Sasha's butt, but he has a boyish eagerness about him, rather than adult lasciviousness - he's excited and interested, but he's not a pervert.

Panel 4:

Sasha has turned around, and has Ratchet's underwear (blue boxers with little stars and planets) in her hand - the rest of his clothes are now on the table next to hers. Her eyes are very wide, and fixed on Ratchet's penis, which is now clearly visible as Ratchet stands before her, an almost innocent smile on his face, apparently completely unaware that anything might be amiss. Sasha's other hand is covering her mouth, and she is blushing deeply, her nipples as erect as Ratchet's penis.

Sasha: I...um...we'd better get started, then.

Page 7

Panel 1:

The scene has shifted, so now the bio-converter is in the background. Ratchet has the suction cups for Sasha's breasts in his hands, while Sasha is just lifting the penis suction tube from its holder. Both are blushing, though Sasha is obviously blushing a _lot_harder than Ratchet, and avoiding looking directly at him.

Ratchet: You want me to put these on you?

Sasha: I think it will be easier if we help each other, yes.

Panel 2:

Focus on the upper halves of the two characters. Ratchet is gently pressing the suction cups over Sasha's breasts. His mouth is slightly open, his expression almost awestruck that he's touching a beautiful woman's breasts. Sasha's own mouth is also open, her eyes heavy-lidded, as she is obviously gasping in pleasure, her body trembling a little. Despite the focus being on their upper halves, Ratchet's penis should just barely be visible, to drive home his size.

Sasha: C-careful. They're sensitive.

Panel 3:

Extend the focus a little, to make Ratchet's penis fully visible. Sasha has her breasts pressed against his back, and is sliding the penis suction device over his shaft, much like she might apply a condom, both of them facing mostly toward the viewer, at a slight angle to let Sasha's breasts be visible. Ratchet is already spurting precum, and is staring down with that same awestruck expression. Sasha is biting her lower lip, obviously going crazy just touching Ratchet's penis, her sex flushed and wet, her inner thighs visibly soaked as her legs continue to tremble.

Sasha: Just...just a little more.

Panel 4:

A closeup of Ratchet's penis, the suction device now slipped firmly over its length. He's already dribbling quite a bit of precum. Sasha's hands are caressing his sizable sac, and her word bubble comes in from the upper part of the panel.

Sasha: Now let's get the machine started.

Page 8

Panel 1 (smaller):

Ratchet hunches over, almost enough that he could fellate himself, intense pleasure obvious on his face, his mouth open, eyes shut tight. The suction device's little network of circuitry is glowing brightly, and Ratchet's penis is leaking copiously as the pump sucks his precum away.

Panel 2 (smaller):

Sasha is gripping the side of the bio-converter (perhaps using small handles provided for this purpose), her chest outthrust as she trembles all over, beads of sweat on her smooth brown-furred body, her teeth tightly-clenched, her eyes just barely open, the strain of erotic tension obvious on her face. She has just started to leak milk from her nipples.

Panel 3 (extra large):

Side by side, both facing slightly away from each other, so their angling is roughly toward the corners of the panel, both Ratchet and Sasha have their backs arched, their mouths open as they cry out in pleasure, both of them showing their kitty-sharp teeth. Ratchet is very productive, but Sasha rather less so. The gauge for Ratchet's side of the machine indicates that it's now "full." Sasha's is a little below halfway, however.

Text Block: Far too soon...

Page 9

Panel 1:

Focus on Ratchet, one hand pulling the tube off his cock. He is very gooey, though he tilts it forward so he doesn't spill much. He has that thoughtful afterglow expression, looking down at the device.

Panel 2:

Shot from slightly behind Ratchet's head, so it's in the picture, but most of the picture is taken up with Sasha as Ratchet looks at her. She's leaning with her back against the machine, gripping it with her hands, her chest outthrust, her eyes closed, her mouth still open, gasping for breath. Despite her orgasms, she's still not producing much milk.

Panel 3 (smaller panel):

Focus on Ratchet, full body, eyes looking upward, with a thought bubble above his head showing the picture from the datapad, Page 5, Panel 4 - the Optional Step. His penis might have a "throb" sound effect next to it, to demonstrate what he thinks of the mental image.

Panels 4 and 5 (smaller panels):

Closeup on Sasha, her eyes just barely open, otherwise just like she was in Panel 2. Then, in Panel 5, she has her head turned, Ratchet's hand on her cheek, her eyes now open, her expression needy.

Page 10

Panel 1 (larger panel):

Ratchet and Sasha kiss, deeply and passionately. Her breasts, still in the glowing suction cups, press against his chest. There may be hearts and flowers around them, to show the intensity of the moment.

Panel 2:

This and the next three panels are smaller. Closeup on Ratchet and Sasha's heads as they break the kiss, looking into each others' faces.

Panel 3:

Focus on Sasha's face and she smiles up at Ratchet.

Panel 4:

Ratchet's hand is now on Sasha's opposite shoulder. Sasha's eyes are a bit wider now, her lips pursed into an "o" as she realizes what Ratchet wants.

Page 11

Panel 1:

The first three panels should be a bit smaller, to make room for the fourth. Sasha is now turned around, slightly bent over the machine, gripping it tightly, while Ratchet is running his hands down her stripy brown-furred sides. She's looking back at him with a combination of nervousness and excitement, while Ratchet's expression is intent and a little thoughtful.

Panel 2:

Focus on Sasha's butt from the rear. One of Ratchet's hands is now cupping her bottom, while the other is holding his cock, rubbing it against her very juicy lower lips, just slightly parting them.

Panel 3:

Slight pullback of the picture, so both characters' faces are visible, though Sasha's may be less so if necessary. Both of Ratchet's hands are on Sasha's rear now, while motion lines indicate that he's just thrust himself into her. They both have their mouths open now, Ratchet with his head leaned slightly forward, his belly and butt tight, tail slightly lifted, obviously moaning over Sasha.

Panel 4 (larger panel):

Scene is a Dutch angle from the front, to let us see beneath Sasha as Ratchet just lets himself loose, pounding the cazar woman with everything he's got, while she's giving back just as good as she gets. Sweat and juices are flying everywhere, and Sasha's milk production has gone way up, visibly squirting into the suction cups.

Page 12

Panel 1:

A shot of the two gauges, both showing full, and glowing slightly. The entire engine is glowing now, and obviously up and running at full power.

Panel 2:

The shot slides down, to show Ratchet and Sasha on the floor of the room, Ratchet spooned up behind Sasha, both cuddled close together, happy and satisfied and spent. Neither are wearing the suction devices anymore.

Panel 3:

Focus upward slightly, more on Sasha's head, one eye a little bit open, the smile on her face more obvious now.

Sasha (thought bubble): The auto-pilot will need at least three days to get us back home.

Panel 4:

Scene of the _Phoenix_out in space, its engines now working as it flies off into the distant starscape.

Sasha (thought bubble from ship): I only wish it was longer.