Mutual Negation
A short commissioned story touching on some themes I both like and I think aren't used enough. It involves magic, some mind control and transformation of a sort. It also involves shrinking of a number of different body parts.
Funny, this was meant to be more of a revenge story but I thought it was more interesting to leave everyone happen at the end. Oh well, I'm an old softy I guess.
Enjoy the story
Mutual Negation
By Theo Winters
Written for an anonymous commissioner
Leon sank back into the ratty material of the restaurant booth and folded his hands on top of the table. The cheetah looked down at the rabbit that fidgeted in the other side of the booth. He wasn't very much of a bunny, far too thin with a short cropped hair and lop-ears. His eyes were a bright blue and seemed very intense, even if he slouched down to try and look smaller. The fact that he was only twenty-one made that even easier.
"Are you sure about this?" the cheetah asked.
The rabbit nodded, crossing his arms over his chest. "I want them to be as small as they made me feel."
"That won't be a problem. Any place you want to put the... excess. It would be a shame to let it go to waste like that."
A slight blush crossed over the rabbit's face, and he tried to drop his ears over his cheeks to hide it. "Well..."
Leon chuckled and pulled a coin out of his pocket. He placed it on the table and slid it over to the younger man. "Take this; it will make sure that you get some bonus out of this."
The bunny's blush grew even stronger, but he took the pure silver coin and slipped it into his pocket. A moment later his hand came back up, shaking slightly as he placed a check on the table on top of two pictures and pushed them all across the table.
Leon took the check and noticed that the number on it was slightly more then he quoted. He looked over the check at the younger man.
With a blush the rabbit looked back down at the table. "I had a little extra; I thought a tip would be nice."
"It's always appreciated," he said, folding the four figure check up and putting it in his pocket. "It will be done by the end of the week."
"Thank you," the rabbit replied, and then slipped out of the booth. He rushed out of the resturant, his tail buffed up behind him as he went.
Leon sat back and smiled. "A tip, what a thoughtful man, I'll have to give him a bonus," he mused as he looked down at the two pictures. They looked had that grainy black and white look that made it clear that they were cut from a yearbook. One was a well built looking raccoon with broad shoulders, and the other was a perky looking vixen whose large bust was peaking up from the bottom of her picture.
The cheetah smiled and tapped the pictures. "Yes, I need to get him a bonus."
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Jason pushed open the door to his apartment and walked in with a swagger in his hips. With a flick of his leg he kicked the door closed. "Bonnie, are you home?"
The vixen came out from the kitchen, her tight shirt firmly around her large unrestrained breasts which bounced with every step she took. Her nipples were hard under the fabric and carved a circle in the air as she jiggled. She came up and hugged him tightly, nuzzling under his chin.
He reached down to wrap his hands around her perfect waist and kissed her on the nose. They had been dating since high school, when he was on the baseball team and she was a cheerleader. In the two years since graduation they had some ups and downs as they had tried to both go through college, but they finally found a good balance. She worked as a sales clerk to pay for everything so he could go to community college. The vixen nearly worked her tail off so he could stay home in the evening to study.
They slipped apart and she ran her hands over the raccoon's well built chest. "How was your day?"
He shrugged. "Nothing too exciting, one of my professors was a jerk today, but I set him straight."
Bonnie giggled. "You're so smart!"
"How was your day? More jerks hitting on you?" he asked, placing his hands on her shoulders.
She nodded her head, pouty cutely. "I like them hitting on me."
Jason pulled her closer. "Just remember that if they hit on you to hard, I'm going to hit then back."
The vixen giggled and swooned in his arms. "I love when you say things like that."
"What can I say, you're mine, and I'm not going to let anyone else even look at you," he replied and tweaked her nipples. He liked spending time with her, and she was a great fuck, but she wouldn't do anything to keep men from gawking at her. "If you keep getting hit you're going to have to quit. No one hit on you when you were working at the restaurant."
"No one looks good in those awful suits."
He kissed her head. "That's the point dear, now, what's for dinner?" he asked, slapping her hard on the ass.
The vixen giggled and slipped away from him and turned around, flicking her tail at him. "Me!"
Jason chuckled and reached out to grab her tail. She flicked it away and gave him a come-hither look, then ran down the hallway. Her hips shook with each step she took, as her large breasts swung under her shirt to the point that he could see them peaking under her arms.
The raccoon ran after his girlfriend, pulling his shirt off and throwing it behind him as he did so. The pair of them were so wrapped up in each other, and their lust, they didn't even notice the growing feeling of magic hanging in the air.
Bonnie already had her top off and was working on her pants when Jason got into the bedroom. He came up behind her, grabbing the hem of her jeans and her panties and in one quick motion pulled them down off her legs. While he was down there he pressed his nose up against the top of her tail and took in a deep breath of her scent.
The vixen giggled and turned around, pressing her crotch into his face.
He bent down licked at her twat, tasting the sweetness of her juices as they rolled over his tongue and down the back of his throat. He teased his tongue past her soft lips and twisted it a bit, bringing a soft moan from her.
"When did you get so good at that?" she asked. The raccoon had always hated going down on her.
Jason leaned back and smiled. "I don't remember," he said, rising up to kiss her, her taste still on his lips. He reached out to fondle her breasts, feel the flesh overflowing his hands.
She reached down and fumbled with his pants, working the belt free then popped the button in the front, a quick trip around his back opened the button over his tail. Once it was free his pants fell down over his muscular hips too pile on the floor. His cock swelled out under his tight white briefs.
The vixen bent down and nuzzles the tight fabric as he stepped out of his pants; as soon as his legs were free she pulled his briefs down, his eight inch cock snapping up and bouncing in the air.
"I love your cock," she said, licking the head as she reached up and rubbed his sheath back along the base of his shaft.
The raccoon growled softly and stepped back, flicking his tail in excitement, "and I love your tits." He reached out and grabbed her by the shoulders and threw her back onto the bed. She landed with a laugh and spread herself out, her tail flicking between her legs, her pussy wet in excitement.
He climbed onto her, kissing her again and rubbing her breasts, each one just the perfect handful. Her hands ran down, exploring his sides as she felt a fine layer of fat over his toned body.
Carefully Jason placed himself over her, sliding his cock into her pussy. The walls were tight around his thick shaft. He took his time pressing into her, going slow as he felt her sex hug tight around him until his large balls were pressed up against her.
The vixen cried out softly and arched her back, pressing up against him.
He took his hands off her breasts, tweaking the nipples to run down over the slight curve of her waist to her small hips. At the same time he braced himself against the bed, digging his feet in as he pulled back and thrust into her, starting to fuck her with all his strength, his seven inches spearing deep into her.
Bonnie wiggled under him, gasping out as his cock stroked around her sex. She ran her hands over his back and sides, feeling the soft flesh under his fur.
Jason kept fucking her, adjust himself, pulling his legs forward a bit as he continued fucking her, teasing his six inches of cock around her pussy, feeling the warm walls pulling about his shaft with each stroke. He kissed her again, his tongue teasing with hers as they moaned together.
She parted her legs a bit more, enjoying how his cock hit the right spots with each deep thrust that he made, her hands teasing over his arms, his once sculpted belly now flat, his belly button pulling in slightly.
The raccoon adjusted himself again; his feet brushing against hers now as he fucked her, his cock teased her pussy, sliding easily around her pussy juices running around his five inch cock too soak into the fur of his balls.
Breaking the kiss the vixen gasped and arched her back. "Harder, hon! Deeper!" she cried.
He grunted and thrust into her as hard as he could, the head of his cock sometimes teasing just the right spot, but it was rare. At the same time he slipped a hand between them to rub at her breasts, feeling the half handfuls rolling around his fingers.
The vixen wiggled under him, rubbing his back, feeling his slight belly rubbing over her chest as she rocked under him. As he fucked it her it started to feel better, his cock was rubbing the walls of her pussy again, though still not a perfect fit.
"I love you so much," Jason said, working hard as he fucked his four inch cock into her pussy. It would be tight for an average man, but for the raccoon it was a bit on the loose side. He bent down and licked her small nipples, teasing his tongue over the slight swell of her breasts.
"I love you, too," the vixen replied, rocking back up against him, his slightly pudgy body pressing against her thin frame.
He lifted her head and kissed her again, pressing firmly as he wiggled forward a bit more. He ran his hands over her sides, over her lack of waist to the slight swell of her hips. He teased them a bit, as he kept fucking her, feeling her hard nipples rub over the slight sag of his pecks.
Bonnie kissed him back; rubbing the thin layer of fat that covered is whole body, rocking with him and his three inch cock. It sometimes rubbed around in her pussy, but she usually felt it, even though she was so tight that with a normal man she would feel like he was splitting her in two.
The raccoon grunted, and then pulled back a bit too much, his two and a half inch cock sliding right out of her soaked pussy. She let out a sigh at this. "Again?" she asked in annoyance.
He blushed. "I'm sorry hon." He tried to get himself back into her as he spoke, his cock managed to rub over her pussy lips but didn't quite make it inside.
She sighed and kissed him, then pushed him off of her. Sitting up she looked down at him, his shape blurry without her glasses. Her nipples stood out from her chest, perched on top of her small breast. "Just eat me out."
A smile ran over Jason's face. "Of course!" he said, and then he dove between her parted legs. He nosed up at her pussy, licking it firmly as he nuzzled at her clit. His well practiced tongue worked between her wet lips, the slight part from his attempt to fuck letting him in without any trouble.
She cried out softly as his tongue hit the places where is cock never could. She shivered a bit, pressing her legs around his head, grinding herself against him. "Oh, keep that up!"
Jason did as she asked, teasing and licking deeper as she gasped above him. He slowed slightly, only to tease a bit more; he stretched his tongue deeper, nosing her clit as he did so. A moment later she shivered and cried out, her juices gushing over his face as an orgasm flashed across her body.
The vixen smiled and leaned back, panting softly. "You're so good at that!"
"I need to keep you pleased somehow," he replied, slipping out from between her legs and licking his lips clean.
She nodded, and then looked at the clock, the big red numbers visible even to her. "Crap! I'm going to be late to class."
He nodded and slid off the bed, letting her jump off to start gather her clothing. He watched, looking up at her as he rubbed his cock with two fingers. Watching her brought a smile ho his face as he the precum provided some lubrication.
Bonnie saw this and giggled. "Like the show?" she asked, pulling up her red panties and tucking them around her ass. They showed off her slight hips and ass, making them look very sexy.
"Of course, you turn me on," he said, stroking himself a bit faster.
She smiled and pulled her bra on; she hardly needed it to hold her double-A breasts, but it kept her nipples from pressing against her shirt. "Don't go too fast, you don't want to pop before I'm done," she said, then smiled. "My 30 second wonder."
The raccoon blushed at this, hand offered out her glasses with his free paw. "I can go an hour around you!"
"I know," she said with a smile, pulling out a dark brown shirt and brushing out her long hair. She pinned it back and smiled, her narrow glasses framing her face. "But I still remember our first night. One touch and pop!" she said with a giggle.
He blushed at that, but picked up speed, rubbing his cock as firmly as he could.
Stepping into her pants the vixen started pulling them up, bending over as she did so. She wiggled her tail at him, and then looked over her shoulder. She saw him gasp and shiver, then he came, his small balls sending an equally small jet of cum arcing in the arc to splatter at her feet. "Oh, that was a nice one."
"Thank you," he said, blush again.
The vixen fastened her pants and smiled at her boyfriend. "I'll be home late, are you going to be okay?"
"Ya, I'll nap now, I should be fine at work tonight."
She smiled and leaned down to kiss him. He kissed her in return, running his hands over her lack of figure. "It will be worth it when we graduate," he said.
"It will be, now get some sleep my little man," she said, patting him on the head.
"I love you," he said, meaning ever work.
The vixen smiled back at the slightly chubby raccoon. "I love you too," she said, then headed off to her night classes.
He smiled, watching her go, her small ass swishing under her thick tail. He loved to watch her walk, even though no one ever gave her time of day at school, but they were both outcasts. He tried, and failed, at sports, and she hid in the library. It was wonderful when they had found each other. He drifted off to sleep thinking of her.
Bonnie was thinking the same thoughts as she walked through the halls of the local community college, her new life imprinting itself onto her. For a moment she wondered what it would have been like to be a cheerleader, but put that through away, she had a wonderful life. It wasn't easy, but it was constantly getting better.
As she sat down she didn't notice her other change classmate, a rabbit she had once taunted in school who was now reasonably well built with a larger than normal bulge at his crotch. He could remember her though, and was happy to see her new form.
As the teacher came in the pair of them fell back into the familiar patterns of school work. All three of them, the rabbit, the vixen, and the raccoon content with their rewritten lives.
And behind it all, a cheetah who was happy to find creative ways for revenge.
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This story was written and copyright 2009 by Theo Winters, reposting and archiving are allowed as long as this copyright notice and the author's name are not removed. This story cannot be published without permission of the author. Violators will be eaten.