Quick to judge
#1 of Sunbaked
Well I FEEL as though I need to post instead of just constantly yapping at Miralage (although it is fun) and I have read some pretty good ones recently but I am still new at this and be practical about your comments and I will TRY to write often but good feedback from readers would be nice (might also get me to post more as it would help over come writers block >-<).
Yeah shutting up now K (BTW I use parentheses A LOT). (Adults only please)
Gave stepped into the clearing, admiring the perfectly clear day, how the
sun sparkled off the pristine lake nearby, when he suddenly got the feeling
that someone was watching him. He got that funny prickling sensation on the
back of his neck that most people called the sixth sense, which supposedly
told when someone was watching you.
He acted casual, as if he hadn't noticed anything, nonchalantly walking over
to the lake, trying to see who was following at him even though his body was
screaming at him to take to the air and fly.
After glancing over his shoulder, under the pretence of nibbling as itch in
his wing, he caught a glimpse of something blue out of the corner of his
eye. He fought the urge to look at it directly while he conjured a small but
potent ball of paralyzing energy.
He didn't feel threatened in any way by whatever it was.
Gave stood seven feet tall at the shoulder, with a two foot long neck and
ten inch long head, and two perfectly sized horns on his head, all dragons
were very sensitive about the size of their horns, and Gave was quite proud
of his, not to big, but large enough to gore any animal stupid enough to
attack him.
His green scales were tougher than most armour, and could provide adequate
defence against most attacks.
Gave's face was triangular, like most male's of the species; his penetrating
red eyes were placed under his firm, scaled brow. Their gaze seemed to be
enough to piece the best steel. His eyes stared down his long, scaled,
ridged muzzle.
His talons, sharpened daily, were strong enough, and more than sharp enough
to tear apart anything foolish or desperate enough to attack him. All of
these features combined created a very imposing figure, which most animals
steered clear of.
After a few moments of deliberating what to do, constantly fighting the
fight or flight reflex, his curiosity slowly overcame his fear. He had two
massive, emerald wings, which, with their fifteen-foot wingspan, could
safely get him out of any danger.
* * *
She had been following him for several hours, keeping out of sight,
following him by following his aura. This still left big doubts as to what
he really looked like, as a dragon's aura only gave a very vague picture of
what someone looked like.
She had caught up to him when he had circled a mountain a few kilometres
away. She had landed several hundred metes away, careful to keep out of
sight, spending five endless minutes laboriously sneaking towards him.
She wasn't scared of him seeing her. Only female dragons had the aura sight,
so she was safe as long as she stayed out of his physical sight. She came
upon him in the clearing, just as he was admiring the view.
She admired him from her position. She couldn't see much of him from her
angle, but she liked what she saw.
She wasn't all that bad looking herself. She was a deep azure blue, five and
a half feet at the shoulder, with an extra foot and four inches of neck. She
had lovely, deep sapphire eyes on her squarely shaped head. She didn't have
any horns, like all female dragons. Her twelve-foot wingspan matched the
colours of her body. She had a long smooth body, with a flat chest shading
into her long shapely thighs, which in turn led down to her strong feet,
claws spread wide to balance her weight on the balls of her feet.
She realised too late that she had left herself exposed as he started to
move. His aura changed subtly, as if he were relaxing.
Gave was sure that he had seen something, and he was also pretty certain
that it was BIG, so he subtly fed more power into his paralyze spell.
He tossed the green ball of energy over his shoulder, perfectly on aim,
hissing as the spell accidentally brushed against his wing, causing a numb
sensation to slowly spread from the area.
She gave a gasp of surprise as the ball of blinding light caught her square
in the face, sending her reeling backwards into a tree, crushing the fragile
wood like a man would crush an ant.
After a few feeble attempts to move, she realised that he hadn't sent a
light spell at her, but rather a paralyze spell, and a powerful one at that.
She gave up trying to move, and gave up any hope of getting away in the
process, images of the dragon raping her as she lay helpless playing through
her head. Instead of filling her with fear, it filled her with a lust that
rivalled the need she felt during her heat, and she realised that she
*wanted* the dragon to rape her, which wouldn't make it rape would it?
The way she had landed meant that she was stuck staring straight at him as
he just stood there staring at her, as if he were the one under the
immobilising powers of the spell.
Gave knew he had seen something big, but he hadn't expected this. He could
only stare at the fine piece of female dragon as she lay in the leaves,
unwittingly stuck in a highly revealing position.
Gave could only stare, aware that he was becoming highly aroused, before he
snapped out of his daydream about what he could do to a such a beautiful,
helpless female dragon. God she was hot!
Just then he realised that he had one of his own kind with a VERY powerful
stunning spell. He started to apologize profusely, focusing his magical
power on creating a spell to counteract the effects, while trying to hide
his raging erection with a wing. This was no mean feat, as his cock was very
long, and very hard.
She was actually disappointed when Gave started to prop her up while
conjuring the counter spell. She blushed as the fine hunk of male dragon
propped her up, her azure cheek scaled turning a deep violet as she caught a
glimpse of his seventeen inch dragon cock, only half hidden by his wing.
She realised that brutal, mind-numbing sex wasn't the last thing on his
mind, and that he was really quite turned on by her as she started to regain
some movement in her neck.
Instead of making up some feeble excuse for her stalking of him, she just
leaned forwards and planted a deep kiss on his muzzle. He was tense at
first, not expecting the kiss at all, completely caught off guard by the
females advances, but he quickly relaxed, letting the females still
less-than-nimble tongue explore his mouth as she tried to get out her lust
with only her tongue.
She broke the kiss, needing air, feeling content for some reason, not
realising that she had orgasmed while being pressed against the male.
Gave was shocked, he had been leaning in to cast the counter-spell, when she
had kissed him full on the snout! He quickly started enjoying it though,
puling her closer and letting her tongue explore his mouth. She was rubbing
against him, completely by accident, the lips of her sex gently brushing
over the head of his cock. Being so hard, the gently touch was all it took
to make him cum all over her stomach, while she came as well, spilling her
feminine juices across his legs.
They both collapsed onto the rock beneath them, sunbaking in the
blisteringly hot day, each others juices baking into their scales.