Breaking Point

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Here is a little thing I did for Furinkazan/Ajax of his, normally submissive, rat character Felix.

Both our characters are quite out of their normal character here, but it was something I had planned out for a while and didn't want to just scrap the idea.

On a side note, I have some half-finished things as well that I'm really going to try to finish - mostly things involving impreg and Rodents oddly enough.

Until then, enjoy.

Kiki and story are mine.

Felix belongs to Furinkazan

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Breaking Point

By: Kiki Kalani

For: Ajax

Felix slumped against the hallway wall of the hotel, tears welling in his eyes as he listened to the steady muffled pounding and moaning from the room behind him. This isn't what he expected when his wife had asked to visit the beautiful Pacific island of Rarotonga, but it wasn't the first time. He had been kicked out of his own hotel room, the one he paid for, while his girl spent some 'quality time' with one of her friends on the island.

"Y-yes, h-harder!"

The voices echoed from the room still, growing louder and louder by the second. The rat couldn't bring himself to move from his position though, a sinking feeling in his stomach conflicting with the growing small bulge in his pants. There was something oddly arousing, something that he could never shake when this happened - some part of him almost liking the experience in some twisted way.

He could feel his hand move down to between his legs, teasing himself as he closed his eyes - imaging all the times before, how blissful his wife's face was when another man was filling her. He shuddered with each small jolt of pleasure that shot up his spine, already so aroused by the sounds still filling his ears. It wasn't until a voice called out from down the hall that the rat's brown ears perked up, hands dropping to the side immediately as a look of bright-hot embarrassment came across his face.

"Sir, what are you doing?" A cyan-colored vixen with green and orange hair stood with her arms crossed, eying him with a mix of anger and confusion.

"You can't be here, you have to leave if you don't have a room. We don't let people sleep in the hallways. Come on!" Without waiting for a response to her previous question she walked briskly forward, shooing Felix with her hands.

"S-sorry, I-I-th-this room is mine. I-m-my wife...u-uhh...i-is busy." The rat stammered out a response as he rose to his feet, his blush growing brighter as the vixen's ears perked. She could surely hear those moans as well, hear the muffled voices of pleasure crying out amid the soft pounding.

There was a brief pause after that as the vixen slowly realized what was going on, her eyes darting up and down across the meek looking rat in the meantime before she finally spoke up again - expression shifting as giggles tried to burst forth from the aura of authority she had entered with.

"O-oh, oh...I see..." The vixen covered her face for a second, shaking with suppressed laughter. It hadn't been the first time for her either. It wasn't a common occurrence for adulterous couples to do this, but the vixen found those rare instances amusing. "S-sorry to hear that, you seem like such a nice guy."

Felix's expression grew even more shameful at the vixen's insincere words as he looked down, her laughter finally coming out now as a series of short giggles. He was used to being laughed at by now, the weak lanky frame not giving him much in the way of attractiveness. Thoughts swirled around his head, doubt and shame and fear - embarrassment for his situation. By the time he looked back up the vixen had composed herself once more - just barely.

"You can't stay in the hallway, if your wife is too 'busy' to let you into the room you paid for then you can sleep on the streets like the rest of the rats." She giggled again as she went to walk past him, her hips swaying teasingly as she walked by - a tail even gliding across the front of his pants. "I'm going to send someone up in ten minutes, you better be gone by then."

"F-fine...I-I'll...j-just let me get a few of my things." His eyes fell back to the floor as he watched the vixen walk off, hearing her soft giggles echo down the hall as she slipped out of sight. He'd have to find somewhere else to stay for the night while his wife attended to her own 'business'.

With a sigh, he picked up the small bag he had taken into the hall with him, some of his more technical things - a laptop and some other gear - as he headed back down into the lobby, carrying himself with shame the entire time. Felix's mind still wandered with lewd adulterous thoughts of his wife with that man she'd taken in with her, their moans whispering and weaving around. It wasn't until he reached the bottom floor and the lobby that a few giggles and harsh whispers managed to snap him out of the twisted shameful fantasies.

"I can't believe it...Are you serious?" A female voice pierced through the silent empty lobby as Felix watched the same vixen from earlier talk with two other foxes as she got ready to leave for the night.

"I can't either, some weirdo cuck sitting there playing with himself in the hallway." The cyan vixen spoke again, giggling to herself as she grabbed a large bag. "You could hear his 'wife' all the way from the floor below too."

"He probably paid that guy to fuck her, some weird fetish, either that or he can't...satisfy her...you know what they say about rats, afterall." Another voice joined.

"Hopefully the guard that goes to make his rounds doesn't end up fucking his wife too - the sick fuck would probably get off to it." Again, a rousing chorus of giggles echoed through the lobby. Felix had stayed out of sight, face burning hot. He wasn't as eager to be the butt of their jokes, wasn't eager for the attention as he shamefully shambled across the lobby.

"He didn't try to do anything to you, did he, Kiki?"

"No, he was way too pathetic for that, couldn't even look me in the eyes - too busy thinking about how hard his tiny cock was at hearing his wife get a real man's meat." The cyan vixen stepped out from behind the check in counter with that, waving to her friends. "Anyhow, I'm out - you all stay safe."

Felix stood for a second, unable to bring himself to move. The teases and voices echoed through his head as the memories of all the previous times came flooding back. All the times he'd been beta to another male, all the times his own wife had laughed and teased him. The twisted arousal he felt earlier started to fade away into his shame, which itself started to boil into anger. Something about tonight, something about the way the vixen talked about him and carried herself, set him off. He gritted his teeth as his fists clenched around his bag's straps. Within a few seconds he had darted towards one of the side exits and into the night - mind brimming with new twisted thoughts...at least just for tonight, he would make sure he wasn't the one being fucked.

***

It didn't take him long to catch the vixen walking alone on the beach as he followed her to her, fortunately, secluded house. It was just a matter of waiting after that - thinking to himself about what he was about to do, shaking with excitement as sweat started to pour over his face. He was going to make sure he'd be the last one she made fun of.

A couple minutes after the last light in her house went off, he made his move - carefully and quietly moving up onto her porch and over to the bedroom window of her elevated cottage, peering inside to see the covered sleeping body of the vixen. He could barely believe what he was doing as his hands raised to the window, lifting up as he took deep breaths.

Luckily, it was unlocked - sliding open with a soft creak. He only raised it just enough to slip through, cringing with each soft grunt of the sleeping vixen or ruffling of her sheets. The sweat poured even harder once he was inside, so nervous, still not believing it as his body almost moved on its own - driven by something deeper than the weak thoughts that normally drove his actions.

Felix carefully started to pull things from his bag, a visor, his laptop, a few long extension cables. It was only a few minutes before he managed to set everything up, trying to quiet the laptop's fans as much as he could while the visor flashed with pink swirls that lit up the room. It was just bright enough to dimly illuminate, the rat hoped, at least.

Slowly he stood to his feet, undressing completely right there as he gently tossed his clothes onto the wooden floor - his rather small cock still throbbing with lust as the thoughts of what he was about to do teased at his arousal. He'd barely ever had sex, and in the past couple of months barely anything beyond his own hand had pleasured him. That was going to change though, tonight.

Carefully Felix crawled into the vixen's bed, a few cords in hand as he ever so gently pulled the covers away from her naked body. It took the determination and nervousness batting at his mind to keep from gawking at it for too long, prying himself away to tightly wrap the excess cables around her arms and legs. It wasn't the best bind in the world, but it definitely would give him plenty of time to bring the vixen to a point where he wouldn't even need them.

He carefully crawled off to pick up the visor before returning, hesitating briefly as he stood crouched above her. There would be no going back once he slipped the visor over her face - the swirling pink lights surely enough to wake her from her slumber. He hadn't ever used hypnosis on anyone but himself before, but he was sure he'd be able to put this fox into a trance.

With another deep breath he slipped the visor on, hands immediately going to her shoulders as he put his full weight onto her. The vixen woke up almost instantly, eyes greeted by bright swirls of color that she could barely see past - disorienting her sleepy groggy mind as they burned into her brain.

"W-what...g-wh--"

She tried to move her arms up to remove the source of the distracting lights only to feel her arms tightly held together at her side with cable, same with her legs. She wouldn't even be able to sit up as the weight of the rat on top of her held her down, only barely able to see his face through the visor as his normally shameful expression shifted into a twisted grin of delight.

"Don't bother trying to get up...it'll be much easier if you just relax."

Her ears perked up again as the familiar voice reached her ears - the vixen's groggy mind finally clearing up as the realization and fear managed to help clear her mind. There was little more than a brief pause before she tried yet again to lift herself up, pulling hard against the cables, only serving to tighten them as the grip on her shoulders firmed up.

"H-how the hell did you get in here! L-let me go!" The vixen grunted as she thrashed about, rocking her head from side to side to no avail. The swirling colors still moved like slow lava across her vision - further disorienting her even with her heart and mind racing.

"No way, I-I h-heard what you said in the lobby..." Felix moved his hands to the vixen's chest, pinching her nipples and twisting them painfully as he watched her wince in a mix of pain and pleasure. "N-not so weak now am I..."

"S-stop! G-get off!" Once more the vixen growled, feeling the rubber stretch against her arms and legs as she pulled at them, almost managing to rock the rat off of her with her thrashing - though he managed to stay stead as he continued to molest her.

"Just relax, it'll be so much easier if you don't fight." She felt a hand move from her chest to her throat, holding her head firm in its grasp as the other ran slowly down her body to tease at her slit. "Relax, just f-focus on the pleasure, focus on how good this feels."

"N-n--g-get o-off." She tried to speak, a bit choked by the hand as her eyes found themselves more and more lost in those pink swirls, the rat's voice echoing in her mind as it became harder to focus on struggling against those cables.

"Shhh, relax~ Feeling mind words trickle into your mind..." The vixen whimpered as she felt his finger slip into her slit, teasing around in her slowly as he spoke. "Washing away all that stress...all that worry..."

The vixen felt herself drawn more and more into the swirls, more and more into the rat's words as they wormed into her head, an odd feeling of sickening awareness creeping over her as her struggles started to fade. She tried to fight against it, tried to pull herself away, but the swirls were just so bright and pretty, and it felt so good to just let the rat's words push out all the fear, especially as small tingles of pleasure helped in the assault against her mind.

"Doesn't it feel so good to just relax...to be so calm and relaxed..." Another hairless finger joined the one Felix had already pushed into the vixen's slit, both quickly getting soaked in her juices as he started to thrust them in and out. "You love how this feels, the pleasure as you just sit there, mindless and relaxed."

"N...n-...p-please...s-stop" The vixen's struggles had ceased entirely at this point, a soft moan escaping her as she bit her lips, blush slowly coming across her face as she continued to try to fight against his words and the tingling pleasure growing in her mind.

"So calm and relaxed...so mindless...f-feeling horny as this pleasure continues to creep up your spine." Felix swallowed hard, still in disbelief, it was actually working. His cock still throbbed against her stomach, hand firm around her neck as he looked into her illuminated glazed over eyes. "Only my words, washing over your thoughts, becoming your new reality."

"N-m-mmm...s-so...calm...r-relaxed..." The vixen could feel herself slipping, the pleasure still assaulting her mind helping to crack away at her thoughts, letting Felix's words slip in and take root. It was already so hard to think, so hard to fight against his words. It felt so easy, so right, to just obey and listen.

"Good, so relaxed, so calm, so horny...obeying my words as they trickle into your head, washing away all your fear and stress..." His fingers pulled out of the vixen's slit now as he shifted again, pre from his cock dribbling across her stomach as he moved down between her legs - confident he wouldn't need to hold her steady anymore. "Just listening and obeying..."

"S-so relaxed...l-listen...obeying...n-nn...s-so h-horny..." The vixen's voice trailed off as she felt Felix's cock between her legs, teasing against her wet slit, pre mixing with her own juices as her rocked himself back and forth.

"I bet you feel so good, feeling my cock against your wet cunt...feeling your mind fill with thoughts of how good my rat cock would feel...my thick shaft sliding into your wet needy hole..." Felix kept rocking, a confidence he had never felt before surging through his mind as the vixen submissively moans and whimpered below.

"Y-yes, f-feels...so good, I-I feel so horny...h-horny for your c-cock...p-please..." The vixen whimpered again, squirming beneath the rat. "P-please f-fuck me...I-I'm so horny..."

Felix chuckled, it felt so good to be in control for once - to have someone begging him for something for once. He could barely contain an excited chirr that reached up into his throat. He just kept steadily teasing at the vixen, almost in as much torture as she was as his cock and mind screamed for release.

"A-apologize then, for earlier. You were a bad girl." He heard the vixen whimper beneath him, her toes curling and her tongue lolling out of her muzzle. "Y-you feel so bad, don't you? You barely even deserve my cock."

"N-no, p-please...s-so horny...I-I'm s-sorry, I'm so sorry....p-please fuck me!" Felix felt a few tugs in his chest as he heard the sobbing to her voice, but it was too late to stop now, too late to contain the monster he had unleashed.

"Good, worthless bitch. I'm going to f-fill you with my pups." Felix pulled back again, lining his cock up with the vixen's hole before suddenly thrust forward, hearing the vixen moan loudly as he pushed his entire length into her. It felt amazing, better than his wife ever had, the few times they had fucked.

"Y-yes, f-feels s-so good...s-so horny...p-please...." The rat felt his smile widen as he started to thrust, quickly picking up to a rough pace, shaking the bed beneath him as he found himself unable to hold back any longer.

"Y-yes, t-tell me how amazing I feel. Tell me how good my thick massive cock feels inside of you?"

"Yes, s-so b-big...f-feels so good...I-I love your massive cock...p-please...f-fill me with your pups!" The vixen cried out even louder, ushering Felix on to go even faster as pre shot out into the vixen - teasing her.

It didn't take Felix long to reach orgasm after that, the vixen's walls gripping against his cock as he kept roughly ramming into her - his hot thick load shooting deep inside her womb as he let out a loud moan of his own - mind buzzing with satisfaction as the vixen squirmed beneath him again. It was the first time he'd fucked a girl and left her in nothing but pleasure - the first time not a single complaint reached his ears. All he could hear was the vixen's moans and pants between her mindless repeating of how amazing his cock was.

"You did good, bitch...maybe...maybe I'll keep you with me." He panted as he draped on top of her, cock still throbbing inside of her hole as he drifted to sleep. "Maybe this vacation wasn't too bad afterall."

The End