Not in Public

Story by Calico64 on SoFurry

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#33 of Writings

A Commission for Zerig and That_Cat_Enigma

Zerig is quite the unique raccoon in many ways. However, his flamboyant, and dangerous dress habits get him into quite a bit of fun, and quite a bit of trouble when he runs into Noah.


After living in the town for God knows how long, what is left to do? Zerig often went to the mall, which promised the opening of a gaming store soon, but it wasn't coming soon enough. He just went to the smoothie shop to pick up different flavors every week to give himself some kind of variety, but even that was starting to become mundane, and repetitive. There he sat on the edge of the mall fountain, which hadn't been working for three whole months became of a problem with the pipes, and he sighed.

He could have taken the hour long walk over to the ZOOM game store, but what was the point? It would be another five days before anything came out, and even by looking at the titles, they didn't seem like anything he'd want to play in the first place. The mall indoor courtyard was bustling, as it was a Friday, and it was the boring populace of a dreary city that had outstayed its welcome in his life.

Zerig rolled his eyes, and tossed the empty smoothie cup into the trash beside him. He got up from the fountain and began walking. There was a certain zest he added to his life, though. The skirt he wore was rather short, only coming down to his mid hips. It was a pretty purple skirt that went with his raccoon markings on his face, a purple fur patch that went over his eyes on top of his gray fur. His purple striped, gray tail swished from left to right as he walked. Now, this was not a tail that came out of a tail hole, oh no, this was a tail that came up from underneath the skirt.

With the right pair of eyes, and the perfect angle, you could clearly see that he was not wearing any sort of underwear. That's right, exhibition, that's what he was driven to do in such an aggressively boring town as this. The length of his penis did not go underneath his skirt, but it certainly wasn't exactly far from the under rim. Yes, he was a gay raccoon who loved to go commando in a skirt, don't judge.

Being in public places like that gave him a thrill like none other. Even when he sat down, he had to make sure the skirt didn't ride up too far, or stay open too wide. That small possibility made Zerig harder than a diamond among feathers. Of course, becoming erect was also somewhat of a danger as well. How would he look with a mushroom head poking his purple skirt straight up? That's not to say he was wearing much in the first place. All he had on was a white spaghetti strap tank top, one that showed off his slender, yet firm arms and torso. It was almost like he was wearing nothing at all.

Then he remembered something, the movie theater! It was Friday, and rather early. He could possibly catch a matinee! Then again, he didn't really know what was playing this week, but at the same time, it had to be better than this stupid place.

He walked at a hastened pace, and made sure that he wasn't going to wait in too long of a line. If it was anything like the last Star Wars movie, he knew that time was of the essence. Then he passed by the lingerie store, and a nice, slim white rabbit man caught his eye. He was checking out at the counter, and had two full bags of merchandise. The silver colored ring shined on his finger, and on the left hand of all places. It was a shame, he was well built, and if race was any indication, could fuck to the moon and back. Such a shame he had to be taken. Perhaps if Zerig swayed his hips just right, he could tempt such a--

The whole time staring in the store, and he didn't even notice he wasn't looking where he was going. He was too taken by a nice pair of blue eyes on a such a fine rabbit, that he walked right into another mall patron. He hit his cheek on something very hard, and was taken off guard. Zerig fell on his ass, and a bag from the fragrant store fell onto the ground.

"Oh, God, I'm sorry!" Zerig said as he rubbed his cheek and looked up to see that the solid mass he hit was, in fact, the chest of a husky man. The bunny man was fine looking, but this dog, this guy was a mass of tamed, but beautiful muscles. He wasn't like those body builders with the spandex and the shiney coats, oh no. This guy knew how to wear his muscles with pride without the use of massive steroids. He wore a blue tank top, and red gym shorts, and the manly musk was heavy in the air.

The husky, however, wasn't looking at Zerig in the face, he was looking more downward. Zerig looked down to see that his skirt was all the way up, and his hardening dick was in full view. His eyes widened, and his face turned beet red as he pulled the skirt down to hide it. He studied the area to see that no one seemed to notice, and the only bystander that saw them was a little panda girl behind him. She was out of the view, so it seemed he was in the clear.

"Umm... I... uuhh... well, you see... hehe..." Zerig's palms became sweaty, and his cheeks burned with massive blood flow as he became completely flushed. The embarrassment was immeasurable, and he looked up to see the husky was wide-eyed, but he certainly seem overly offended.

The husky reached down and Zerig took his hand as he helped him up easily.

"Well, that was something." The husky said with a sly grin creeping over his face. "Are you alright?"

"Umm... well, in a manner of speaking, no." Zerig could almost die right then and there. He didn't know how this guy was going to react. He never got a feel for him, he didn't know that flirting with him was barking up the wrong tree, or even if he was one of those tight ass catholics that always threatened gays with hell and spiked whip lashes.

"Well, you did hit my chest pretty hard with your cheek, here, come on, I'll get you something cold to put on it." That was when the husky took his hand and began to pull him along after grabbing his bag from the ground. That moment in his strong, bold hand was surprising at first, but somehow being man-handled by a stranger like him was stimulating in a way he couldn't describe. It was like if electricity could pleasure you in its raw form.

"So ummm..." Zerig finally spoke as the embarrassment was wearing off. They were halfway across the food court already, and all he could do was stare at the husky's white furred hand. "I'm Zerig."

"Noah, nice to meet you, Zerig. So, what have you been up to today?" The sly expression was warranted, in fact just about anything was warranted at that point. Noah could have burned him at the stake at that point and it would be understandable.

"Oh, you know, just walking around the mall, looking for something to do." Zerig looked off at nothing in particular, innocent as ever.

"Something, huh?" That sly grin persisted, and all the sudden, Noah's eyes started to undress the raccoon. Zerig needed to be careful, if he got any more aroused, his cock would start pushing against the skirt, and the embarrassment that just happened a moment ago wouldn't be the only one he'd have today.

They walked to the smoothie store that Zerig had already been to, though the fact didn't really matter anymore. This wasn't just some stupid smoothie he could get himself, it was one he was sharing with his new... friend. They sat at a food court table across from one another, and Noah held the cold smoothie against the raccoon's cheek.

"Is that good?" Noah asked, and Zerig leaned against it.

"Yeah..." He smiled at the husky, and they shared a little chuckle.

"So, I'm guessing this is kind of a little thrill ride for you." He brought the smoothie back to himself and took a little sip through the straw. Then he held it out to Zerig, who also took a sip.

"You could call it that. I also happen to think I look quite smashing in a purple skirt." Once again they shared a chortle. "This city is so damn boring they don't even have a gaming store in the mall, and the other one isn't even worth walking to, unless it's tuesday."

Noah shrugged. "It's not so bad, it's got a nice gym that I frequent."

"Oh, I noticed, it's kind of hard not to." They shared big smiles from that little comment, and continued to share the smoothie. "I mean, I have nothing against working out. I just need something more... you know... more."

"I hear you on that. I go to conventions sometimes, and whatever event catches my fancy, but for the most part, it's just me and my two roommates playing video games in our room."

"No kidding?" Two roommates, Zerig was thinking, now things were getting really interesting.

"Yeah, in fact, speaking of which..."

Zerig's tail was already swishing from side to side in anticipation at this next statement, because it gave very promising pretenses. Anything involving this hunk of a man and two of his friends sounded like fun on an astronomical level.

"Well, there's this game we like to play. The rules are very simple, but may or may not be a little hard to pull off." Noah said, the grin on his face very similar to his former grin he gave Zerig after seeing his naughty bits. "It seems like a game you like you would play quite well."

Then there came the rules. As the husky dog explained the rules, more and more, Zerig's jaw widened along with his eyes. The two of them leaned in toward each other as he got to the good parts of the game, and Zerig's jaw dropped to the floor.

There came a point in explaining the rules that Noah's foot came up from underneath the table and pressed against the front of Zerig's skirt. The raccoon couldn't have been more flabbergasted than he already was, but at the same time he knew that he couldn't look down, lest he be seen by passers by. They were in a moderately well hidden table, the fountain in the middle hid them from one half of the mall walkers, but the other half were still very prominent.

The husky's foot studied the length and girth of Zerig's member as he slid his foot up and down that skirt, almost lifting it up to bring it to full view, but it was obvious he was being careful. The raccoon's member was very stiff, and if he go up, it would probably be rather easy for everyone to see. Noah very gently pinched his cock between his big and pointer toes, sliding them up and down and drawing a deep breath from the gray furred bandit.

"So? What do you think?" Noah asked, his head propped up by both of his hands as his elbows were on the table.

"Are you kidding?" Zerig said, and pushed his crotch a little into Noah's foot, and got closer to him, face to face. "You're on."

The husky licked his lips, and brought his foot down to the ground. He got up from the chair and picked up his bag. As he threw their smoothie cup into the trash, he looked back at the raccoon.

"Alright then. I'll leave you here to get 'settled down' and I'll see you when I see you." He leaned to the side a little bit to see that, judging by the raccoon's skirt, he had a lot of settling down to do. The tip of his cock was extremely visible poking out of the fabric. He smiled and walked away, turning his head to Zerig. "The game has begun."


Noah always looked at the old goth store for some of his favorite band shirts. The good old days of classic rock, and some of those super hero shirts he'd always been partial to were in great commodity. The wolf girl sat at the counter, and put away her cell phone as he walked in. She greeted him as they always did, and assured him that she could help him in any way he needed. Thankfully, she got onto the register computer and began checking the long list of barcodes she had beside the till.

He looked up the wall at all of the options they had displayed, seeing some that he liked, but not really seeing any that he wanted to buy straight away. There was a decent sale of buy one get one half off, but was that really enough of an excuse to get two? The answer was usually no, and it looked like this time was no exception.

Then he remembered that he should probably keeping a lookout for someone. He knew at any moment, that sly raccoon could pop up. Beyond anything, he couldn't let his guard down. The husky never really considered himself competitive, but Enigma and Dacre would have disagreed wholeheartedly. Sure, he had a few fits of rage when he was beaten at a video game, and he had been known to pass up runners on the track in a less than civil manner, but hey, who didn't?

His left ear turned toward the door, and he looked out toward the entrance to the store, his eyes scowling toward it. He could have sworn he heard something, but he didn't see anything, even with his shifty, keen eyes. He continued to look around at the merchandise, but he did so in such a cautious manner.

The shirt rack was easy too look at from any angle, so it was a definite vantage point that he could keep.

"Finding everything okay?" The dark furred wolf girl said from the counter, looking at him with some dreamy eyes.

"Um, yeah. Looking good so far." He said, and looked down at the shirts. There were a hundred black shirts, maybe three blue shirts, and one red one which was an old Flash design before that TV show even came out. That was when a hand sprouted out of the side of the shirt display and grabbed the rim of his gym shorts, pulling them straight down to reveal his partially erect cock flopping up and down.

He gasped a little bit, and before he knew it, there was Zerig grabbing onto his shaft with his whole hand, and pulling him toward the wrack. He gave the raccoon a mean look, but was still greeted by Zerig's mouth engulfing his whole shaft, and beginning to lick all around the base, near his balls.

"You okay over there?" The wolf lady asked, clearly responding to him gasping.

"Oh... oh yeah, I just found a really good shirt." He said, looking at the shirt that was showing which was... a band he'd never heard of, nor had any interest at all.

"Yeah? What is it?" She said as she started to walk toward him.

"Oh, it's..." He picked up a random one close to it and showed it to her. It was a shirt for the band, Electric Circle.

"Duuuude, that's rad! I love Electric Circle!" She said, and went back to the counter. "Rockin' shirt, bro. You should totally get it."

"Y-yeah." He chuckled a little bit, but then drew in another breath as the raccoon began to concentrate his tongue on the bottom of Noah's glans. After a good working on the head, he took the shaft in again, and started bobbing his head back and forth on it. Noah would have been mad that Zerig got him, but his technique was so damn good, he could do little more than accept it. The raccoon even lifted up his penis and started licking his balls.

"Oh, you son of a-- mm." He whispered as low as he could. Noah suddenly found it hard to stand up straight. Every lick on his balls made him lose more mobility than he was comfortable with. Beautiful streams of pleasure ran down his legs as he put his hand on Zerig's head. The real hard part was trying to keep a straight face through the whole thing.

Zerig kissed Noah's cock down the side of his shaft, licking little bits of it and then began jerking him off.

"You sure seem to love those shirts." The wolf girl said, and Noah looked at her.

"Oh, I'm just so indecisive. I have the Electric Circle shirt, now I need another one to do the deal with."

"Ah, yeah, I gotcha." She was already back to playing on her phone at that point.

Zerig put his whole cock back in his mouth and slobbered all over the shaft as quietly as he possibly could. Then he stopped, causing Noah to cringe. He gave Noah's tip a little kiss, then winked at him.

"You're it." The raccoon whispered, then made his way through the shirt rack, exiting the store without being seen.

The husky cursed under his breath, pulled his shorts back up and grabbed the shirts. He tried his very best to hide the protrusion sticking out in the fabric. Walking up to the counter, he pulled out his wallet.

"Alright, some nice choices here. Anything else I can get you?" The wolf smiled at him, and he shook his head.

She checked him out and bagged his shirts. He put the bag in the bag he already had, and smiled at her.

"Got any plans for the rest of the day?" The wolf woman leaned over onto the counter toward him.

"Yeah." He turned and went for the exit. "Going hunting."


Zerig decided to get out of the main mall stores and head for one of the branch clothing stores. Mallards was big enough to hide in, and had plenty of sections to sneak into without being noticed. He had vantages on everything, he could even keep an eye on who entered where if he timed his movements right. So, he decided to go ahead and look at some clothes, maybe even a new skirt.

He scanned the area between clothing sections, and snuck into the lady's summer wear. The schoolgirl bit was a great gig, so he figured he'd get one of those skirts, and pair it with a t-shirt of his own choosing.

A figure walked by in his peripheral vision, and he turned, ducking down quickly. However, it turned out to be the same white rabbit guy he saw in the lingerie store. He rolled his eyes, figuring that guy was old news. He took some cute looking skirts off of the rack, and made sure to duck low, scanning the other clothes racks, and all of the displays with the mannequins. Though, that seemed pretty stupid, Noah was a pretty big guy. Thankfully, that made him easy to track.

Zerig grinned and strode over to the t-shirts section. There were some very good ones, and ones he wouldn't touch with a ten foot pole. He picked out some choice ones that they had in his size, then ducked down low, scanning once again.

Then he swiftly shot over to the dressing room area. The changing area would give him plenty of time to try on some clothes, and remain hidden for a little while. He looked around one more time before going into the changing room, and closing the door, locking it. He sighed in relief, and put the clothes on the bench mounted on the wall.

He sorted through them, and picked out a few of them that would actually go quite well together. He held them up to his body and and looked in the mirror. The next changing room had a new patron, but Zerig was comforted by the fact that whoever it was, had brought in their own change of clothes, putting them on their own bench. Him climbing up on the wall to look in on them would probably land him a good spot in jail.

He pulled off his skirt, placing it to the side as he scoured the skirts he got. There was another solid purple skirt he'd picked up with two little metal hoops on the front of it. He put his tail more between his legs as he slid the skirt on. It felt pretty good. He turned back to the mirror, and saw that it fit him rather well, and it was the same color purple as his stripes. He may actually get this one.

Then he saw a looming shadow over him, and looked up in the mirror to see a thoroughly naked husky dog man with nothing more than a choke collar around his neck. His eyes widened to their max capacity as the dog jumped down right behind him and grabbed him before he could run.

"Gotcha." He whispered in his ear and pushed him up against the back wall. He lifted up the raccoon's skirt and clutched his ass cheek tight in one hand, rubbing it and making the raccoon go cross eyed with ecstasy. He had already gotten rock hard from the husky playing footsy on him, but he had to admit the head he had given Noah was almost his breaking point.

Now he was being manhandled by a big hunk of a dog, his hand slid over his rock hard dong, and over his balls, which he gently squeezed. Before he could give a lustful cry, Noah covered his mouth. That didn't stop him, though. His fingers traced along his shaft, and then back over his scrotum, up his taint, and to his little rosebud.

As one finger put pressure on his asshole, he moaned into the big husky's palm, even drooled a little bit. He looked over at Noah, but he didn't seem to mind a little saliva, in fact, he pulled his hand off of the raccoon's mouth and slid the spit over his cock to get it nice and lubed. That was when he really pushed Zerig into that wall, pinning him to it.

Zerig felt so very helpless, his hands flat against the wall, looking back at Noah as he slid his cock deep into his asshole. He held his moans in, knowing that these walls were paper thin, but he could not keep his breath down to a level he liked. At that point, the dog did not seem to care. His dick went to work inside Zerig, and pistoned its way deep into him. The musk could be smelled for miles.

He moved with such amazing regularity, so smooth in how he pushed in and out of the raccoon's anus. Noah made sure not to slap against his ass cheeks, but he was still banging him like he owned him. His head swelled up inside Zerig, widening his asshole in order for his knot to get all the way in. The raccoon's eyes bulged a little and his mouth opened wide as he sucked in a generous amount of air. He clenched his teeth hard and looked back at Noah, who was smiling. With the base of his dick thoroughly penetrating the raccoon's asshole, he began to rock him back and forth.

That was it, both of them knew that with the knot ballooned up inside of the raccoon, Noah couldn't pull out even if he wanted to. With his increased momentum, he started to rock the raccoon, sending shock waves through him. After just a few of those, Zerig dug his fingernails into the wall. The tip of his cock shot one huge stream of semen into the wall, followed by three smaller shots, and then one more large wad of cum. The rest dribbled from his dick as he gasped for breath. He still enjoyed the feeling of a large dick in his ass as Noah continued to pound him as quietly as he could.

"Excuse me?" A female voice said from the outside of the door, and both of them widened their eyes, stopping cold!

"Um, yes, ma'am?" He said, but cringed as he felt Noah's cock go off like a firehose! It poured into his ass, filling it up to the brim in just a few squirts.

"Oh, I was just making sure you were still there. We've had a rash of thefts lately. Take your time, no rush."

"No problem m---ma'am." He glared at Noah, snarling. How in the hell was he STILL cumming?! "Thank you!" He pressed his head against the wall as hard as he could to keep from crying out as the semen ran down his taint, over his balls and dribbled down to the floor. The last few drops finally came, and his knot softened to the point of pulling out.

"Holy God, how much was in there?" He whispered back to Noah, who snickered.

"Well, you feel it more than me now." Noah went back onto the bench and sat down, panting for breath, and gasping for air. Zerig slid down the wall until he turned and sat on the floor, against the cold surface of the changing room back wall.

"So... Question." He said between breaths.

"Yeah?" Noah asked, looking down at the raccoon as he sat on the floor. His skirt was completely up, and his cock, now limp and dangling, was totally exposed. The raccoon opened his eyes again and turned over slightly to see that the jizz he left on the wall was now all over the skirt he was trying on. He rolled his eyes, figuring he could buy it later.

"So, you never really went over this scenario. We both caught each other once and we both got away. Who wins in this case?"

This caused Noah to laugh a little louder than he should have. "Honestly, there's a lot of scenarios that were considered in the rules, but if you'd like, we could have a tie breaker."

This perked the raccoon's ears up a bit.


The photobooth in the mall hadn't been used for some time, it seemed. With all of the cell phone technology today, what was the point of it? Well, Noah and Zerig walked into it and sat beside one another and started playing with the options on the screen. For a machine that had little to no upkeep maintenance-wise it actually wasn't working too bad. The screen pretty much needed more force than normal to touch, but the camera seemed to be working.

Noah pressed the button to have their colors embellished a little bit, then pressed the button for them to smile in front of the camera. As the camera started snapping, they made all of their silly faces, tongues sticking out, covering one another's eyes, and kissing.

Noah smiled at him, and then kissed him once again, this time their kiss lasted longer. He opened his eye to press the button again, and they began to lick one another's tongues as the camera kept snapping shots.

They tilted their heads and their kiss became deeper. Noah leaned into him and forced him to submit, and tilt his head back. Zerig moaned a little into the kiss as the husky's hands ran over his back, and down to his tail, grabbing it through the fabric of his skirt.

Soon the camera stopped snapping, and they broke the kiss, slowly. They gazed into one another's eyes and smiled at one another.

"Press it again." Zerig whispered, and as Noah complied. The purple raccoon stood up and lifted his skirt for the camera, showing off his very erect penis as it snapped a picture. Then he bent over and showed off his ass from underneath his skirt. Then Noah joined in, wrapping his arm around Zerig's waist and grabbing his asscheek.

For the next picture, Noah stuck his tongue out and gave the raccoon's balls a little lick. For the next slew of pictures, it was the husky grasping holding onto Zerig's penis and milking it with a spit lubricated hand.

Both of them watched outside from underneath the curtains to make sure no one was approaching the booth, though they were sure that no one would.

Noah continued to jack Zerig off with a steady hand, and the raccoon leaned over and kissed him once again, up until the photos stopped snapping.

"My turn." Zerig climbed onto the bench in that tiny booth, and Noah stood up. With no time for hesitation, the raccoon tugged down his gym shorts, and pressed the button. Not lacking gusto, the raccoon gagged on the husky's cock. He sucked with twice as much pressure as he did in the other store, and this time his finger trailed up and invaded Noah's butt crack, tracing along it, teasing him and making him look down at the raccoon, who was already gazing up at his eyes.

The vulnerable look on Zerig's face, and the speed he was sucking was almost too much for the dog. He found himself fucking his face before too long, and the purple and gray mammal taking it like a champ. The photos finally stopped snapping just in time, Noah was mere seconds away from throwing in the towel.

After a small breather, it was right back at it. Noah licked his finger and drilled it into Zerig's asshole as he bent over with his hands on the back wall. The photos began to snap, and the dog began to crank his finger in like a jackhammer. Zerig gritted his teeth and closed his eyes, his breath becoming labored as the husky ravaged his ass with just one finger.

Neither of them really worried about how much they were paying for mediocre pictures. At four dollars a pop, it was still well worth it for such an amazing thrill as this. None of it mattered while the raccoon found himself clenching his cock in order to keep from cumming.

It was almost too late, but the photos finally stopped. He let out a huge sigh of relief, and dropped his ass down onto the photo bench. The vibrating still rumbling through his sphincter.

"Almost had you, didn't I? I think it would just take a kiss to make you cream your skirt. You want a kiss, Zerig?" He grinned as he sat beside the raccoon.

"A kiss? Stop being a fag." He slid down and pressed the button after tugging his gym shorts down once again. This time, he took hold of the husky's dong and began to jerk him off, softly licking his balls as he stared him in the eyes.

It was crunch time, for sure. The husky's leg began to fidget and twitch back and forth as he tried not to look into the raccoon's eyes. It was just so tempting! He was so cute, and now he wasn't playing fair on any front! Being so damn good with his technique, and the raw pleasure of having his balls licked was driving him absolutely crazy!

The photo snapping stopped! The husky was sweating at that point, and the raccoon cringed, cursing under his breath.

The button was pressed once again, and there was nothing holding the doggy back anymore. With a spit lube, Noah pulled Zerig on top of him, and lodged his cock deep into the raccoon's tight ass. With no time to lose, he started fucking the slutty skirt boy with a momentum that would drill through stone! The raccoon had no time to hold back, and was taken way off guard, and his cock burst with a gigantic load onto the view screen. Even after he came, the dog did not give in! He pounded the raccoon's ass without mercy, holding onto his ass and pulling him into the husky's thrusts!

The raccoon couldn't help but give yelps and moans louder than he should have. It didn't take long at all for Noah to spurt, cumming deep into Zerig's ass, and he thought the first time was a long cum. The huge dick pulsed inside of his ass, and everytime it did, he gave a small mewl of satisfaction.

Even after flooding his ass, Noah's orgasm did not end. It kept going until he'd coated his own cock with semen. Finally, Zerig was able to rest for a moment.

"Dear God, how much protein do you consume in a day?" He gasped, sweating as he stared back at the mutt.

"Hey, gotta keep up them guns, right?" He flexed his enormous, almost pointed bicep.

That was when Zerig's ears perked up as he heard a frantic woman from outside. He peeked out the curtain. He widened his eyes as he saw she was pointing at the photo booth and talking to mall security.

"Shit! We gotta go!" He jumped off of Noah's cock, and grabbed their photos from the little bin. Noah hiked up his gym shorts and both of them exited through the other side of the booth, hauling ass the other way from the mall cops.

"So!" Zerig said as the two of them kept pumping their legs on the ground, running at lightning speed to beat two overweight, under qualified men with heavy utility belts on. "Are your roommates this much fun too?"

Noah laughed out loud as they made it to his car.