The Shower Scene

Story by Kaydin on SoFurry

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#2 of Raver's World


This is a story me(playing Jake) and a friend(playing Brent) did over Windows Live Messenger, it's not perfect but a fun read. If you all like it we may continue..... This, at least for me, is my first furry/yiff story so be genital and please comment. That being said, please enjoy.

A heavy door opened as the sun began to bleed through the city buildings into the wall windows. "Hey Ja-" DJ came into the room saying but then quickly stopped as he saw Jake and Brent, still in the nude, on the couch unmoving. He quietly stepped backwards with a sexy grin on his muzzle while as he slowly shut the door. Jake twitched as the door latched shut and began to open his blurry eyes. He quickly looked down as he noticed extra weight on his chest. He then remembered as he saw the raccoon laying on his chest. Jake couldn't help but smile as he saw the sexy raccoon there.

He'd always been an early riser, and today had only been slightly different. He had woken up about an hour before the sun was even beginning to rise, but he was too content to move. He let out a satisfied "Hmm..." As he heard the door shut, looking up to see the otter staring down at him. "Morning..." He mumbled, with a goofy smile on his face. "How did you sleep?"

"Good," Jake replied, "how about you?" He then stretched his neck and licked Brent giving a slight giggle.

He smirked, and leaned up at that exposed neck, giving it a slight nip. "Haven't slept that well in a long while, to be honest." He smiled, and just pulled back, sitting up on his haunches. "Your dad peeked in on us."

"Did he now?" Jake asked rhetorically as he propped himself up onto his elbows. "We'll have to deal with him later." Jake continued with a wink. Exposing his entire maw, Jake gave a big yawn and looked over with an eye shut at the window. "So what do you want to do today? We could-' Jake paused a moment to think then continued, 'go shopping to buy you some new shirts. He then leaned up and kissed Brent and said, "or we could....stay here....all....day..." kissing Brent each time he paused.

He turned away from the yawn, sitting back again, startled by the kiss. "Mmm.. we could... question is what do you wanna do? I am the guest here after all-- if you wanna get out, we can." He giggled slightly, as he rubbed some sleep out of his eyes.

"Well, you do need a new shirt and I did promise you I'd take you out to get more. However, staying here sounds like it could be a lot of fun as well."

"I tell you, that's all up to you. I'm up for whatever." Brent said, though he motioned to get off the couch. "Can I take a shower first before anything?

Jake gave a slight chuckle, "Yeah, I guess we should both take a shower if we were to go." After Brent got up, Jake stretched again before he got up. Then proceeded to walk to a door next to the kitchen. He opened the door revealing a fairly large indoor pool with a air mattress floating on top of it all, next to which was a hot tube big enough for six or so other furs. There was also a door with the letters W.C. to the right.

Brent blinked at the sight, staring at the pool and the hot tub. "Oh... wow. All this on top of a club, huh?" He asked, staring around. He stepped inside, staring at the W.C., and he tilted his head. "Okay, so enough showing off. Where's the shower?" He asked, sticking out his tongue.

"Well I told you me and my dads investment in this club paid off very well." Jake giggles, "the bathroom is right there silly." pointing to the door with the letters W.C. "Water Closet, aka bathroom." Jake walked over and opened the door to bathroom with black tiles and black marble countertop. Simple toilet bowl, also black, and a walk in shower. "see?"

"Sorry if I'm not refined enough to know what WC means. For all I know, it's a trap." He said, with a smirk as he headed inside. He headed straight for the shower, turning on the water letting it get hot.

"Why would it be a trap?" Jake laughed. "We'll I'm guessing you'll want your privacy so I'll be in the kitchen making breakfast. Any preference? You name it we got it and if we don't I'll get it immediately."

"I eat just about anything, love. I mean... come on." He said, grinning as he stood there, looking himself over. "Feel free to make anything... or join me. It's all up to you."

"Join you, you say?" The otter's tiny round ears perked up.

"Did I stutter?" The raccoon said back, as he turned around and went under the water. It was the otter's choice then, to make breakfast, or do other things.

The otter stalked up to the raccoon when he went under water until he looked back at him. Jake quickly jumped in, glomping Brent as he giggled. He nuzzled Brent's neck with his short muzzle. "I love you Brent." Jake whispered extremely quiet not sure if Brent he heard him or not.

He blinked, and just smiled as he felt the nuzzle on his neck, rubbing his muzzle back amiably on the otter's. "Mm, I feel the same." He said with a giggle, as he wrapped his tail around the otter, continuing to bathe himself.

Jake reluctantly released his grip on Brent. He brought his hands up to Brent's cheeks and caressed them as he stared into his eyes. Jake's breath caught then simply whispered "wow..."

The raccoon blinked, and blushed. "Wh-what? Come on, you're not helping me clean right now." He mumbled nervously.

"You're just so damn beautiful...." Jake said almost in a trans as we looked into Brent's eyes. "hmm? clean? Oh yeah. Sorry." Jake looked around the shower a little flustered his eyes scanning all the bottles of fur shampoo. "Uhh....what do you want? My dad has all different scents. I, however, just have the Axe body washes."

Brent shrugged, and just grabbed some random bottle of shampoo and started to lather up his front. "You act like you've never been in a relationship before." He joked, as he smiled at the otter.

"Never one I've felt this...sure about." Jake said his cheeks blushing under his tan fur. He then got behind Brent and brought his hands around massaging the raccoon's lathered belly working it into the fur. Then he squirted a handful of shampoo and began working on Brent's back. Massaging his shoulders and back as he worked the shampoo in.

He let out a murr and his hands fell, letting Jake clean him instead of doing it himself-- who was he to complain? He just smiled and wrung his tail tighter around the otter, pulling him closer. "I... see." Was all he said, enjoying the moment.

Jake finished up with Brent's back then slowly walked around, breathing slowly but heavily, passionately. He took Brent's arm and lifted it scrubbing and massaging at the same time. He then move onto the other arm.

Brent giggled as the otter cleaned his under arms, and once one was clean, he wrapped it around him and leaned in, kissing his nose. "Mmm... thanks there, hon."

Jake felt the kiss on his nose and quickly moved in kissed Brent repeatedly.

He giggled, and just let the otter pepper him with kisses, stepping back until he was standing against one of the shower walls. "You're so silly."

"Am I?" Jake said leaning against the shower hands places on either side of the raccoon's head. He then leaned in for a deeper kiss.

He murred at the deeper kiss, just nodding and smiling as he wrapped his arms behind the otter.

"You know,' Jake quickly said between kisses, 'if we...continue...I'm gonna....have to.....start....all over...again..."

"Start what all over again?" Brent asked, tilting his head as he pulled away from the kisses slightly himself.

"Cleaning you" Jake said with a fiendish grin.

He grinned, and just feigned stupidity. "How on earth am I going to get dirty again?"

Jake opened the shower door a few inches as he said, "We'll if you don't want too..." Acting like he was about to leave hoping Brent would show a little more initiative.

"Did I ever say that?" He shot back, grabbing the otter's tail and stopping him in place. "Get back here you insatiable tease." He said, pulling back slowly. "I don't wanna get dirty out there and have to wash up again."

"Then show me how you want to get dirty in here." Jake said with a sexual growl.

The raccoon grinned, and spun the otter around, so that his back was against the shower wall, and he pressed forward pinning him there, leaning in and kissing him deeply again.

Jake hit the wall with an uhf. "Hot..." he managed to say before Brent went in for the kiss. He murred as the raccoon kissed him deeply.

He pulled back and grinned, rubbing himself up against the otter's front. "Mmmh... never had sex in a shower before..."

Jake groaned as the raccoon rubbed against him then said with a slight giggle, "You're in my element now." The otter rubbed the side of the raccoon's hips and stomic. "Ironic, for me to take control out there in your element and you to take control in here in my element. It's hot..."

He smirked and rubbed up a little more, tilting his head. "My element? Hon, we didn't romp around in garbage." He joked, nipping at the otter's neck. "So are you gonna pound me against these walls already, or what?"

"If that's what you want. Your the aggressive one this time around. So....dominate me." Jake said with a cat-like grin.

"That's going to be slightly difficult given all things considered..." Brent said, though his smirk didn't fade. "I want you to pin me against one of these walls, pick me up, and give me the ride of my life, Jake."

"Yes sir." Jake simply said. He then quickly slammed Brent's back against the wall making sure to not hurt him. He reached over and picked up a bottle of K-Y and started lathering his cock up he also quickly grabbed Brent's ass and started lathering that up too making sure to tease the raccoon as much as possible with his fingers.

"Murr..." Brent quietly moaned

Jake leaned in an passionately kissed Brent as he worked his fingers in and out of the raccoon. Then without warning Jake quickly leaned down slightly and grabbed Brent's calves and hoisted them up to his shoulders and hugged him forcing the raccoon into a V shape. The tip of Jake's cock just barely teasing the raccoon's pucker.

"Do it." Brent moaned.

Jake released his tight hug allowing the raccoon to quickly be impaled on his cock.

Brent gasp as the pain was quickly replaced by sheer pleasure as Jake's cock hilted him in one quick motion.

Jake quickly started hip thrusting as fast as he could listening to Brent moan as he thrusted.

Brent grabbed the shower head in order to take some of the weight off of Jake as he moaned. His weight shifted the shower head to spray hot water between them. "Faster...." Brent moaned out

Jake grasped Brent's ass and started lifting him up and letting him drop down. The sensation of Brent slamming down was just to much for Jake. "I'm ssso close." Jake was barely able to mutter.

Brent moaned and released his grip on the shower head and hugged Jake close.

Suddenly Jake felt his balls release sending load after load into the raccoon who in turn moaned in unison with Jake's orgasm. Jake leaned forward and kissed Brent near the end.

Brent released Jake as he brought his legs off of his shoulder and let his feet rest against the ground still his eyes shut soaking in the moment. When Brent opened his eyes to see Jake on his hands and knees with his tail up. His eyes looking passionately at the raccoon's. Brent licked his lips as he kneeled forward with his cock still hard from the experience he looked at Jake as if making sure.

"Please, fill me." Jake simply said still panting from the experience moments ago.

Brent slowly started pushing the head of his member into the otter's tail hole.

Jake squinted his eyes in pain, it had been awhile since the last time he was the bottom.

Brent continued to slowly push as he quietly rubbed Jake's sides. Just then the head of his cock popped into the otter.

Jake gritted his teeth as he felt Brent's tip enter him painful at first but slowly the pain turned to pleasure.

Brent continued to slowly push till finally he was hilted. Slowly he pulled out till only an inch remained then pushed back in. It had been awhile since the last time Brent was a top so he was already feeling it.

The pain Jake was feeling was rapidly turning into pleasure as Brent continued. As the two grinded for a couple of minutes Jake could hear the raccoon start to breath heavily and felt the cock inside him grow ever so slightly. He lightly tried clamp his ass around Brent.

Brent started to breath heavily and felt like he was about to go over the edge when he felt Jake's ass start to clamp around his cock making it tighter then ever forcing him over the edge without remorse. He began releasing himself into the otter.

Spurt after spurt entered Jake and he felt each and every one. It felt like he was being filled completely by the raccoon. Jake sighed as he felt the warmth seep through him.

Brent leaned forward and hugged Jake.

Jake felt Brent lean forward and squeezed him. Jake too weak to do anything collapsed onto the shower floor with Brent.

Brent and Jake were now eye to eye with each other on the shower floor. He leaned forward and kissed the otter as the hot water rained down upon them.

"I love you." Jake said after the kiss.

"I love you too." Brent said with a sigh.

* * *

Jake lead Brent out of the pool room, naked, still rubbing his head with a towel. They both walked over to the coach when suddenly a voice startled them both.

"Well, it looks like you boys had fun." DJ said with a smile

To be continued....