The Time of My Life Chapter 1 (2016 Revamp)
#1 of The Time of My Life (Revamp)
Thought I would post this since I was bored and finally decided to do it. May or may not do more of it. Thanks for reading.
The Time of My Life Chapter 1 (2016 REVISED)
Old Authors note: This is my first story I have ever written, so the plot might be a little misleading or sometihing like that. This is a story series about two best friends and their adventurous and romantic times together.
New Note: This series is being revamped around 2016 to 2017, so some parts may be unedited, worded or laid out in-correctly, or multiple things wrong at once. So I'm sorry about the mess. Anyway, enjoy the story.
I play the Role of Radin Darkflame in this story. (Copyright by Radin Darkflame) (Radin and Daez are old copyrighted characters of Ray HuskyPunk)
"Come on Daez!", I yelled as I ran out of the door and into the awaiting cab. We were getting a ride to Six Flags Over Texas and wanted to get there as early as possible. He ran out of my house, almost forgetting his jacket, and we flung ourselves into the interior of the car as fast as we could.
"I cannot wait!", I said as we were driving towards Six Flags. Daez asked, "what should we ride first Radin?".
I didnt answer him immediately, as I was trying to remember the rides I had gone there to ride before. Jeez, it has been a long time.
He looked at me waiting for a reply, and when I shrugged he went on to say, "well whatever we ride, the lines better be short". After a few minutes of talking, we decided to ride the Texas Giant, one of our favorite rides, at least from what I can remember. We could see the massive park rides approach us in the distance. Shortly later we rolled up to the entrance and got out of the car. I gave the driver of the cab the fare plus a tip. He waved us goodbye and drove off. As we walked up to the main entrnace, my phone rang. It was my mom, making sure we made it alright. I told her we made it and that we would be staying for a few hours, and that I would call her if I needed anything. I hung up and we went and scanned our season passes and walked into the massive park.
We were amazed how beautiful the park was. There were christmas decorations everywhere. There wer elights flashing on and off to the christmas music playing in the background. We forgot at this time of the year, the have a "Holiday in the Park" theme. The park glistened and shined as we walked towards the Texas Giant. We were suprised as there was only a small group in line. So we jumped the rest of the fence behind them and got in line. We got into the front seats of the coaster car. Shortly after the other people got situated in theirs as well. The ride operator spoke the rules and regulations, we fastened down our restraints and rolled out of the station. As we rolled slowly to the top, we put our hands up and kept them there. I looked around as I could see the city around us. We looked all around while keeping our hands up. We almost missed the drop as we felt the cart start to angle downward.
As we approached the drop, I raised my hands again and yelled, "let's go!!!", as we dropped down the 79 degree drop and around the 95 degree turns. We kept our hands up the entire time, even though it was hard because of the G-Forces. It almost felt like I was flyiong As we sped through the spray-tunnels we slowed into the end of the coaster. I yelled to everybody sitting behind us, "is this the best damn ride or what!?!?". Everybody laughed and cheered at my remark. I felt accomplished as I sat back down in my seat. We rolled back into the station, us getting a weird look from the employee running the controls, i Guess for what I just did. As we got out, I almost fell because of how exhilarated and dizzy I was. Daez grabbed my arm and we stopped to calm down for a second. I was fine a few seconds later.
We went to the exit and grabbed a bite to eat at one of the nearby food stands. I ordered both of us the large curly fries. They were $6.00, but there was a lot of them. After I paid the cashier, I went to a table and we sat down. It wasnt the best idea since it was a little chilly outside. But at least the cold wind wasnt blowing. We tried the fries and starting chowing them down. They were warm and crispy, and a few minutes later they were gone. We threw our trash away and discussed what we were going to ride next.
We spent the next hour trying a few different smaller rides and walking around enjoying the scenery of the park. A few minutes later, Daez complained, "geez, can it get any colder out here???".
We had not noticed that the clouds had moved in and covered the sun, making the cool weather a little cold. He was right, because we were standing under a nearby bridge to stay away from the wind. And just with my luck the underside of the bridge became a wind tunnel. The temperature was about 55 degrees or something outside. Luckily, there was an arcade near us. We could feel the heat from inside as we approached it, So we ran to it and ran inside. It was warm enough in there, but we decided to play some arcade games to pass the time. Daez was playing a game called Stackers, while I walked around a little bit and found the game I was looking to play, Guitar Hero: Arcade, which I was also very good at. I could hear Daez sturggling a few times with the prize machines. I had just gotten done with my second song, when I suddenly heard cheering coming from the crane Daez was standing at. I quit out of the game and walked over to him. I swear, I felt my jaw drop so hard from what I saw.
End of Revamped Chapter 1
So what do you think of the revamp? Thought I would try to do this a little bit and see what happens. Thanks for reading!