Commission: First Time for Everything

Story by InkblotFox on SoFurry

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#1 of Commission Work

A commission for FA: sylver~tsuki of their characters Omni and Sydney! After a lovely night of ice cream and sweets, Omni decides its time for a much sweeter desert!

You can see the awesome artwork this was based off of here, done by the amazing and talented FA: McPippyPants http://www.furaffinity.net/view/21046239/

Please note that this submission contains graphic sexual scenes and should not be read by anyone under the age of 18!


Omni gave a soft gasp as he pressed her to the bedroom door, her breath taken as he seized her muzzle in a deep kiss. She could still taste the ice cream on his lips, almost as sweet as he was. She reached up, tangling her fingers in his mane, murmuring a soft moan into his lips as his hands dared to cup her breasts. Part of her protested, flushed with embarrassment, begging for her to flee. More of her ached, longing, needing more from him. Her lips broke from his, breath short, panting.

"Sydney." Her voice was a whisper of need, face glowing with equal parts arousal and shy desire. It was only one word. It was all he needed to hear.

His hand reached down to open the door, too caught up in the heat of the moment to remember they were leaning on it until they had tumbled into the room. She lay stunned under him for a minute before a series of giggles escaped her, her arms wrapping tightly around him as she kissed at his neck. Sydney took advantage of the moment, adjusting himself to kneel above her while his hands worked to unbutton her blouse.

"Just tell me if you want to stop, alright?" he murmured in her ear, her response lost in a low moan as his hands pushed under her bra. She couldn't help but giggle and coo as his fingers played along her sensitive nipples, impeded by her stubborn bra until she shyly removed the garment. Being so exposed to him in the dim lamplight was equal parts exciting and terrifying. But Omni found her terror put on the run by the reverent way Sydney's muzzle nuzzled into her bust, lips kissing their way across until they seized her left nipple. Her hands pulled him tight against her as he nursed her breast, moving only to give the other the same treatment.

He moved to go lower, but her trembling hands stopped him, guiding his muzzle back up for another loving kiss.

"Maybe, we should take this to the bed...?" Her shy words made him grin, the sight making her blush harder at her own suggestion. But she wanted- no, needed this. He helped her up, and her hands went to his shirt, pushing the garment up and away to reveal his chest, her own lips pressing butterfly kisses to his exposed body while she still had the momentum of the moment. He guided her hands to his waistband, helping her unfasten the clasp, dropping his pants to the floor in a forgotten pool of fabric. His boxers soon met the same fate, leaving Omni to marvel at his nude form in the dim light. She had never considered just how big he must be, despite the differences in their heights. But seeing his tapered length, the tip already drooling pre just for her, send a wave of desire through her stronger than any she could recall.

In her distraction, she didn't notice Sydney's nimble hands tug her skirt off, hooking her panties in the same motion to leave the last of her modesty on the floor with his own. She nearly squealed with the realization, jumping back and tripping over the edge of the bed in her shock, putting her hands between her legs at first as instinct overtook her. But Sydney's gentle hands calmed her, and slowly Omni relaxed on the plush sheets, letting him press her legs apart to better admire her form. His lips met hers again, and she let herself be lost in his touch. She loved him, trusted him. She wanted to give him this, wanted him to give her this.

"Are you sure you're ready?" came his gentle voice, and she could hear the tremor barely concealed. To know Sydney was nervous too was somehow calming - as if this were an adventure they were taking together.

"I trust you," she whispered, parting her legs just a bit wider for him. His hands ran down her body, reverently admiring her every curve, her body trembling like a leaf in the wind as his fingers traced down her hips. Her hands came to meet his as he teased her thighs, guiding him gently where the pleasure peaked highest. Omni thought she'd burst when she felt his gentle touch against her petals, the first to touch her there aside from her own hands.

"Hnn.. Sydney... Oh..." Her voice was lost to soft moans as he touched and teased her wet sex, her hands guiding him every so often to where she most needed his attentions. His caress against her clit made her gasp, but when that first finger sunk into her depths it was all she could do not to wail with pleasure. Her tight walls clamped down around him as he worked in and out of her, picking up speed while her copious nectar ran down the curve of her rear. She never would have guessed it was his first time the way he worked her up, bringing her to her first shuddering climax as she sobbed his name into his shoulder.

He pulled his finger away gently while she clung to him, shivering and cooing and trying to catch her breath. She felt his weight shift, felt that tapered shaft brush against her sensitive pussy as he moved into position. Some part of her still wanted to shriek in embarrassment, wanted to run and hide. That part of her made her legs tense, clamp down around his waist, made her heart race as she for a moment considered stopping. But Omni looked into her lover's eyes, her shy little heart swelling with emotion for the man she loved. He waited patiently, watching her. When he started to pull away, her hands held him fast, her body relaxing once more.

"I'm ready."

Omni would never be able to describe how good it felt to feel his shaft spread her for the first time. His paws held her legs apart, comfortably holding her just below each knee as he eased himself into her, and for a moment she swore she saw stars. Her arms were braced against the bed as she tried to relax, blushing furiously as she watched him sink in to the hilt. She had feared it would hurt, that he would make her bleed, but nothing but pleasure came from their joining.

He seized her muzzle in a loving kiss as he started to move, a slow, deep rhythm that left her moaning into his maw. Slowly, his hands left her legs as she clamped her thighs around his waist, her own arms moving to cling tightly to him. The otherwise quiet room slowly filled with a chorus of moans and grunts from the pair, the wet slap of their meeting flesh a lewd baseline to their passionate chorus. Had she been able to think straight she might have worried about the neighbors hearing. But in the moment, she could only think of her lover, of how good he felt snug inside of her. Each time those ribbed spines ground into her it sent a shock of pleasure through her system, each withdrawal leaving her empty and craving more. She felt her climax building again, closing in as his pace became more and more frenzied. Her arms tightened around his shoulders, whimpering, pleading.

"Sydney, I need you," she whined, clenching tightly around his shaft to drive the point home. Her face burned with the lusty plea, but she had abandoned her fears to his embrace. She ached for that last little mark, to feel him hit that same blissful high, and he didn't keep her waiting long.

The bed shook with his last thrusts as he drove them both over the edge, their voices a mingled cacophony of moans as they came together for the first time. Each rope of hot seed he shot into her was met with a strong contraction as her body sang with the pleasure, her eyes staring sightless for a moment as she was overwhelmed by the sensation. Omni found her voice was ragged when she came back to herself, breathing hard as she held Sydney tight against her trembling form. She gave a small 'oof' as he collapsed on top of her, his softening cock slipping free of her messy sex as he settled more comfortably over her.

"I love you," he murmured, snuggling her close. She had no voice to answer, but she pressed her lips to his neck as her own little acknowledgement. She couldn't recall who fell asleep first, only that it was the most satisfying sleep she'd had in a long time.