Of Mice and Men: Part 1

Story by EeveeMaster10 on SoFurry

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#1 of Of Mice and Men

An Eevee finds himself in some trouble when he stumbles into his new position as leader of a Rattata pack. As the new alpha male of the pack he has the right to mate with any of the females in the pack. He is hesitant at first to fully accept his entitled role, but let's see if a desperate female in heat can convince him otherwise.



Disclaimer : I do not own Pokemon. I created the characters Alex (The Eevee) and Rebeca (The unnamed Rattata). Also this is the first work i have ever posted before. if you could leave me a few comments giving me some helpful advice that will be nice and thank you. (not sure if this disclaimer is good enough. also if i screwed anything up in the tags.)


In an open field lay a male Rattata on the ground . His opponent, a mere Eevee, stood over him looking almost as banged up as the alpha that lay before him.

The Eevee refers to himself as Alex. Earlier he was wondering the woods in search of the source of a strange scent in the air, turns out that scent lead to the mating grounds of the local Rattata pack. Each pack has one alpha male Rattata and many females. The alpha's highest priority at this time is to attend to the all of the female's heat and to fight off the other competitors and kill them if possible. This unlucky Eevee had stumbled upon the area where the alpha appropriately greeted him with hostility. However, Alex was still lucky enough to have managed to fight off the alpha with his wit and his limited inherited psychic powers from his mother.

The fight was over as the old alpha lay dead on the ground. The females were shocked. Their teachings stated that they had to accept him as their new alpha regardless. Alex had fainted soon after he was sure that the fight was over. The females then quickly took him to his new hut and nursed his wounds. After his wounds were cleaned and bandaged, they started to dress him in the alpha's tribal wear.

His new attire consisted of the skull of the first ever alpha of the pack and a tribal necklace with a tooth from all of the old alphas who have passed since the founding of the pack. The most recent alpha's tooth was now in the middle of the necklace. Also stated in the pack law, the most recent alpha's primary female was now to be his devoted slave and caretaker to do whatever he wants to whenever he demands it. This is another trophy he has claimed by surviving the harsh battle to the death.


Alex woke up to the setting sun's rays shining in through the top of the strange hut he was currently occupying. As he tried to sit up to get the light out of his eyes, he felt something fuzzy in his paws. He realized that someone was on top of him resting. He looked down without moving his body and saw a female Rattata resting the top half of her body on his stomach. He could tell that she was a rare variant of Rattata that was not indigenous to this area. With the minimal amount of light shining through the hut could he just barely make out that she was an Alola region variant of Rattata. Her dark colors kept them both warm as the sun shimmered off of her fur. He shifted his weight as he felt his loins stir while he basked in her beauty.

Alex was completely enthralled by the cute little yawn she took as she cracked her eyes slightly open. After she rubbed her eyes with the back of her paw, did she realized where she was at and who she was with. As she meet Alex's gaze he began to blush and turned to look away. He tried hard not to be conspicuous, but his member was betraying him and peeking out from his sheath. The way that her body was positioned caused the tip to poke her right under her chin. When she felt it, she turned her head to look down at it. This action caressed the sensitive length with the whiskers on the side of her nose. After staring at it for a moment she positioned her lips to the tip causing a bead of pre to emerge through the tip.

The Rattata fem sniffed his sheath as she made eye contact with him as he tried to glance back at her. He immediately blushed and broke eye contact again in embarrassment. She took that as a sign to continue and took a lap with her tongue at his tip and moved down to his musky balls. Alex let out a soft moan of pleasure rewarding the Rattata fem for her efforts. She closed her eyes becoming immersed with performing her new duty to her king. The thin taste of his pre slipping out of his tip combined with his strong musk drove her senses wild.

It was the first time a female other than a family member had ever shown him any kind of indication of mutual attraction back. Most of the other Eeveeloution females that lived around his home played a game where they would just flirt around with random males to see how far they could control the male without having actual sex with them. The way that she was treating him was different. All of her attention was on what she was doing right then and there.

She studied how he responded to each technique she had learned over the years and been told and taught about since she was a child. She noticed that the gland at the head of his dick was the most sensitive when rubbed with the tip of her tongue. She could also tell that he received the most pleasure when her taste buds ran backwards along the head of his member when she pulled back.

The Rattata fem could tell he was close by the way he let out a shot of the tasty pre each time she pulled back. It was also rather apparent he was close by his knot swelling up at the base of his shaft.

Alex was on cloud nine at that moment. He did not really understand what he was doing with this random Rattata female or the feelings he was experiencing, but he knew that this was one of the best feelings he had ever experienced in his life and that this Rattata female was willing to give it to him unconditionally. He could feel the buildup in his loins as his climax was approaching. He had never experienced an orgasm before. These feelings he was experiencing was like she was scratching an itch that he never knew existed before and that kept getting better and better the more she scratched it. This intense itch was now reaching a peak where his body was telling him that if she kept scratching it he would explode.

When she saw his legs tense up in her peripheral vision and felt his cock throb violently in her mouth she knew that it was her cue that he had reached his peak. She immediately took him all the way in her muzzle, wrapping the knot around her lips as she rhythmically squeezed her throat in a constricting motion. She could feel his knot lock up in her muzzle as the first shots of her tasty treat and his essence travel down her maw into her stomach.

Alex did not think the sensation could become any more pleasurable, but again the Rattata fem set out to prove him wrong. She tugged lightly on his knot to simulate a tie causing his squirts to intensify in volume. Her goal was to drain her stud of his seed before the night ended and prepare him for his duties as the alpha breeder of this pack. Alex was panting heavily as he felt a release of pressure inside his balls as each squirt of seed shot from his member. With each pulse from Alex's cock the Rattata could feel her pussy react with an intense burning itch deep in her womb from her heat.

As Alex's throbs died down from the milking he had received from the Rattata female did he finally detect that the scent that had brought him here was stronger now. When he caught his breath he leaned over the female stuck to his breeding shaft and touched noses with her. Now it was the Rattata fem's turn to blush. None of the males she had serviced before had shown affection of any sorts. Most of them just indulged in their pleasure and left her alone with the results from their pairing.

Alex could feel the blood rush to her face around his phallus. He moved his muzzle right next to hers allowing him to stick his nose into her puff of chest fur to get a whiff of her smell. He then move up to her cheek and gave it a nice long lick all the way up to her ruffled ears so that he could savor her taste. Satisfied, he connected foreheads with her as they stared into eachother's eyes with blissful affection. He gave her a lick on her dark forehead in a show of appreciation for the experience she had given to him.

Alex could tell from the smell that she had her own itch that needed to be scratched and made it his current goal to return the given pleasure by scratching her itch. The only problem he had come across was that he had no idea where to go to scratch her itch. So he explored where he could reach. Her cute rounded ears were sensitive but did nothing but give her a taste of what was to come. Next he moved to her neck. It caused her to freeze up and remain still for him. He could tell that it had caused a sign of submission rather than a sign of pleasure.

Now that the afterglow had worn off and his knot shrunk out of her muzzle could he motion for her to roll onto her back so he could explore what this female had in-store for him. She obliged his desires but continued to polish his seedy pleasure tool as he moved down her chest to investigate what she took pleasure in.

When he reached her nipples with his cool nose she froze up in anticipation. He took that as a sign to pay extra close attention to all of them. He took his rough tongue and ran it across each nipple as he made his way down her body. Each one he could feel her exhale with pleasure as he licked around the tip. His ears were graced with her yips of pleasure when he nipped at the tips with his teeth. With each tit he conquered he could smell her scent of need intensifying greatly telling him that he was scratching her itch.

After spending a great deal of time working to find the itchy spot on her did he finally come to the conclusion that the true itchy spot was between her hind legs and was the source of the scent. He also determined that in order for her to feel that peak he experienced he would need to itch that spot. This realization brought about his resolve to take a lap at her lips and he was greeted to a savory one of a kind taste. It reminded him of the taste of a Kasib Berry, both sweet and not that juicy since it did not make him that messy as he ate her out.

With each lap of his tongue the female below him pushed her loins into his mouth needing him to explore deeper into her depths to scratch her intense itch. He dug into her pussy at her request and had her moaning with each lap of her clear juices. At a particular lap he caused her to shutter and let her release an intense moan of relief as he hit just the right spot. He was now 100% sure that that was the itchy spot on her and began to focus on it with vigor. And boy was he right, it was not long before she was gushing in his face with her juices spilling out everywhere.

He thought he was finished when he finally scratched her itch and returned the same feelings he had received from her. He was proven wrong again as not even a minute later was she finally able to release his cock from her mouth and get up into a presenting position for her current mate. She showed off her needy dripping pussy just a foot away from his nose. Whatever he did earlier just fueled the burning itch inside her and multiplied the need for his seed in her womb tenfold. There was no way he was going to get out of pleasuring her, even if he wanted to...