Soul Shattering Collapse - medium poem

Story by Fane_Vulpesaur on SoFurry

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This was an interesting one to write. I wrote it after remembering moments in my life when I thought I'd never recover from certain events. It feels like it's been awhile since I posted something with weight, so I was glad I popped this out! Written on 7/20/16.

Written by me.

Title suggestion by mapleplayer013.


How do you move on When your dreams have become flawed? You've watched them build up. Nurtured the fields of success and hope Just to watch it burn and decay With the smallest wrong breath, The one wrong question.

How do you move on When the one closest to you is no longer perfect? You got so close, shared many secrets Just to watch the golden image Become twisted and blackened With the smallest piece of hidden info uncovered, An unforgiving truth that cannot be fixed.

How do you move on When your life is threatened? You've done so much to improve, to keep yourself safe. Just to watch if blow up in your face With a whoosh and shout You're back to square one, the beginning, To the place where you're a danger to yourself.

Written by: Fane Star