Investigation

Story by Rheyk Shilamizane on SoFurry

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#2 of The Agudner

Here is part two! Erm, this one is a bit shorter, and is kinda slower, in some regards. But it is a part of the story that needs to be addressed. A fair warning: this may fly in the face of what you may believe is canonical or what isn't in terms of personailty. But this story has also arisen due to a lack of general canon provided by the creator of the world of Vilous. So, a fair warning - this is my take based on what limited info there is and my own personal conclusions and logical processes. So - anyhow, enjoy - and try to keep an open mind! Things are a lot more difficult to discover if one cannot accept the evidence presented.

Anyhow, as always, commentary and feedback is always appreciated!

Of course, the obvious characters are property of their respective copyright owners. I don't usually use another's character - but in this story's case, the story would be completely lacking otherwise.

(and again on the tags - I have "fanfiction" because technically it is. Honestly, I feel this is going to be a strong enough story it could stand on its own without that tag - but you know, gotta CYA and all that fun stuff.

This part is just a smidge under 3,000 words, for those who care to know. The last one was a bit over 5k.


The sun greeted the city of Colthlan in a barrage of cold light, which illuminated and simultaneously polarized the hard, proud fortifications of the northern stronghold. The walls were built from a strange midnight black stone that seemed less like stone, and more like glass - smooth, reflective, and polished. The architecture had the elegance and curves that indicated that perhaps it had been designed, and even potentially built, with the help of the agudners somewhere in the distant past before relations between the two races vanished, or perhaps after the mass enslaving of the agudners in the east that ignited the conflict between the now subjugated east and the north.It was, in a word, imposing. The walls themselves were no shorter than forty feet in height, which kept the city itself from being seen from the outside. Behind the imposing, impregnable walls of the northern stronghold, lay the city itself, and the fortress that jutted into the cold, bitter sky. The roofs were steeply angled, reminiscent of those that were found in the Lyvank Mountains, where the snow fell in thick enough drifts to cave roofs in if allowed to accumulate. It gave a very triangular, exotic look to the dark fortress, which only made it more impressive and imposing in appearance.

_ This was where the General ruled the north and the conquered territories with her ruthless, bloody iron fist. And for that simple reason, Fenicia was filled with a slight sense of foreboding as she entered into the shadow of the fortress, giving a small, sharp nod to the heavily armed guards, who nodded back respectfully and allowed her to pass. She stepped under the tall, sharply graceful arches of the entrance and into the torchlit inside, the firelight casting grotesquely dancing shadows throughout the hall. She stepped quietly through the grim hall unaccompanied, but undoubtedly watched by the elite guard hidden and obscured expertly by the shadows, watching the northern soldier quietly, in the impossibility that she decided to make an attempt on the General's life._

_ The captain quietly paused at the grand, heavy metal door at the end of the hall. After a few seconds' pause, she reached out almost hesitantly, sucking in her breath in quiet apprehension to what lay ahead of her, to give a nervous, but firm knock on the door. How she had come to the notice of General Rain in the first place was nothing short of a mystery to her, and it was inconceivable as to why Rain had summoned her by name. She wasn't remarkable enough by any stretch of the imagination to have caught the general's attention - right?_

_ The doors rumbled slightly as they were slowly pulled open, swinging inward slowly. Fenicia quietly watched the sight, catching the first sight of the General's hall. It was as tall, spacious, and impressive as any cathedral, if not more so. The stained and colored glass filtered in the cold sunlight as various soft mosaics of color splashing across the floor. A pair of guards stood on either side of the doorway, standing straight and at attention. Their pikes were held upright in a rigid grip, as they stood, facing one another in a nearly unblinking stare. Fenicia passed between them, and they stiffened, their pikes pulled slightly more against their chests as they stood at the most rigid attention the captain had seen. She continued into the spacious hall, where the general was seated in an opulent seat, lounging quietly on the thick, soft cushions. A male agudner quietly brushed her fur, clearly taking pains to ensure the job was immaculate. When she had spotted Fenicia, Rain Silves gave a small smile, motioning with her hand for the agudner to pause his brushing, before she stood, her height dominating that of everyone else in the room at an impressive seven feet. Her fur was a dark blue on her back, her belly taking on a white color, the fur evidently thick, indicative of a northerner. She seemed neither to notice nor care the fact that she was devoid of any clothing whatsoever, simply allowing her fur to conceal her. "I am pleased to see you made it," Silves spoke quietly, the room carrying her voice with little effort needed._

_ "Thank you, General," replied Fenicia, her nerves wracking her gut at this point, twisting her stomach into a knot of anxiety. Rain Silves was far more intimidating up close than she had pictured, the northern leader standing a full foot taller than her, looking quite literally down on her as she spoke._

_ Silves nodded her head, her remarkably frightening gold eyes watching Fenicia intently. "I have heard much about you, Fenicia. I have heard you are one of the best warriors under my command, and that you are an ambitious, capable leader, and that your soldiers are some of the most highly skilled fighters this world has seen. That is most certainly worthy of a congratulation."_

_ Fenicia tried to keep a calm, neutral demeanor, but felt slightly disappointed inside. That was why she was brought here? To simply be congratulated? That couldn't be right, could it? Why would someone as busy as the General make such an effort to have her come here for something as simple as that?_

_ Before Fenicia had much time to ponder and wonder about this, the General continued speaking. "Of course, as you no doubt have guessed, that is not the reason - or more honestly, the sole reason - I brought you here." She took a pause, before she took up her seat again, beckoning with a word for Fenicia to come closer. Naturally, Fenicia didn't hesitate to follow those orders - to do so would be imprudent at best. The male agudner quietly resumed his brushing, to the visible satisfaction of the much taller northerner. "You see, I have also heard you are so successful because your intelligence is nothing short of immaculate, and I am in dire need of it."_

_ Fenicia quietly listened, nodding her head respectfully, as she heard the reasoning for her visit._ So the truth comes out this quickly, she thought to herself quietly, musing over the implications of the timing and sheer straightforwardness the General was displaying. "Of course, General," she replied after the briefest of moments. "In what capacity is my intelligence gathering needed to serve you?" she asked, wording it ever so carefully to ensure that they could not be mistaken for disinterest in the mission.

_ The general gave a grin in reply, the features of her face making her look as deranged and frightening as her reputation painted her to be, before she seemed to return back to normal. "I am tasking you to do a search and extraction for me. You are to find the individual that I specify, and bring him back here unharmed. Do you understand?"_

_ Fenicia quietly blinked in surprise at the nature of the orders. This was quite different than what she would have expected. Perhaps an assassination would have made more sense to her. She cocks her head a bit. "Yes, but might I ask why?"_

_ "Why is irrelevant and will only distract you from the mission. If you have no further questions, you are dismissed to await my word."_

_ Fenicia nodded and after a moment began to step away from the General._

_ "If you kill the person I am ordering you to find, or allow him to die," the general said behind her, loud enough to be heard, "I will hang you by your insides on a pike myself. Am I clear?"_

_ Fenicia shivered a bit, a pang of fear rushing through her. However, she forced herself to nod sharply and reply, "Yes, General."_

* * *

Fenicia growled quietly to herself as she sipped on a pint of mead. She was wasting her time here and she knew it. No one even remotely fitting the description given to her by the general was in here, and nobody here had seen him anywhere. Nonetheless, she forced herself to sit quietly and watch the occupants with a hidden scrutiny, and noting with distaste that the majority of them were sergals, a balance between northern and southern, although there were a few who seemed to be of mixed blood. In the corners, there were a few agudners, but they were mainly simply servants that attended to the whims of their sergal masters. Those who did not fit their description mainly flocked together, speaking in hushed tones and occasionally casting a wary and suspicious glance around the room. While she did pay closer attention to them, she noticed their fur was much shorter than what she was looking for, and they were far older as well - old men in the later stages of decline, fearful of the world they were leaving, and fearful to be leaving it. She paid them no further mind than to ensure they were not who they were looking for.

The place she had chosen to look for her target was a tavern and brothel in the heart of the Gold Ring. The fact she was deep in enemy territory did not bother her in the slightest - in fact, it was rather exciting, considering that the locals didn't pay her so much as a second glance, considering how well she had concealed her true origins - leaving behind her armor and weaponry in favor of a locally-purchased dagger, and light clothing to cover her frame. The place was dark, warm, and filled with the smell of alcohol, smoke, and the entwining of people that obviously occurred in this place. It was rather a low place to be at, but she had to be certain she didn't miss a place her target would visit - or perhaps even frequent.

She quietly sighed and picked up her glass again, taking another measured sip and keeping a general pulse on the conversation in the room with an ear. After setting her glass down, she spotted a mangy-looking northerner staring at her. She stared back for a moment, before the other broke eye contact. With a small snort, she took another look around, taking another measured sip, before she noticed the aforementioned northerner making his way over to her, their tail swaying back and forth. "Hello," she said quietly, though in all honesty quite disinterestedly.

"Hello, madam," replied the sergal, who Fenicia quickly realized was one of the males of her kind. She really had hoped this kind of thing wouldn't happen. In her opinion, male sergals were rather stupid, especially northern males. All they cared about was food and sex, and rather more the second than the first.

"What do you need?" she asked rather bluntly, keeping as much bite out of her voice as her slight irritation would allow.

The male's ears folded back ever so slightly at this. "Well, I came to see how I could serve you, ma'am," he said quietly, but flashing the smallest of smiles.

Fenicia did not respond for a moment, in order to refrain from lashing out at him. Couldn't he see she was in the middle of an intelligence operation and that he was blowing her cover by making her noticeable? Of course not, she surmised. All he could think with was his dick. Once she had collected her thoughts, she returned the smile, even though she wanted nothing more than to snap his head off. "Really? Because I might have something you could be of use for."

"Really?" he asked, his ears perking up hopefully as his smile widened a bit. "How might that be, madam?" he asked her, eagerness clear as he waited for her response.

She gave the smallest of grins, before her face returned back to neutral. She took a measured and long sip of her drink, before answering. "I am looking for a specific individual. Agudner, male, young adult, and with periwinkle-blue eyes. Also, his fur is likely to be more similar to ours in terms of length."

The sergal cocked his head a bit at the last part. "Is he partly - like us?" he asked, carefully wording his question, the disgust at the prospect evident in his face. She could also see the slight disappointment at the fact that she didn't respond in the way he had hoped.

Fenicia snorted in amusement. "Some might think so," she replied with a short shrug. "But as far as I know, no. Probably one of the easterners from the mountains that managed to get away when the invasion started." The words simply came out of their own accord. In all honesty, she did not know. But if she thought about it, the more sense it made. The agudners in the east seemed to mostly favor the city, but there was that village in the mountains that she had been to, her first assignment as a captain, and the first time she had ever seen Silves anywhere other than Colthlan... Those agudners had looked frighteningly similar to her kind at a glance...

She shook her head. The memories of that place always left a bad taste in her mouth. That place seemed to have suffered more than others, perhaps by the fact that anyone older than ten years of age was killed, instead of simply slaughtering the fighting aged men and enslaving the rest, as she had seen with other agudner-populated villages. She hadn't ever come to terms with why that would have been the case, but she always wondered. For now, as before, she pushed it to the side. That would not aid in her search for this mysterious person, who she had a feeling would be nothing short of a master of evasion, if General Silves truly needed her to search for him.

The male gave a small nod of his head. "So - you want me to kill him for you?" he asks, cocking his head a bit in confusion.

Fenicia was quick to respond. "Absolutely not. I want you to keep an eye out for him, and report to me on his whereabouts. Try to find a consistency in his pattern that we can take advantage of him. You are not to engage him in any fashion, understood?"

The male's ears folded back at this. "Yes, madam," he said meekly.

Fenicia gave a slightly satisfied nod. "Good. Now go," she said, nodding her head in the direction of where he had been seated previously.

The male nodded, seeming to try to stand at attention, before making his way back to his seat, his ears and tail drooped. Fenicia gave a small snort of disgust before she finished her drink. She had lingered here for far too long. Certainly, the person she was searching for would not choose such a place - far too many northern born sergals were present here, and agudners were not known to associate with northern kin, especially after the invasion of the east which resulted in their people's enslavement.

After a moment or two, she stood up and headed for the exit. She had had more than enough of this place. Her target almost certainly would not visit that place - too dark, dirty, and people far too rough for the likes of him. She had to remember that by all means her target was likely a very normal person, if only for the sake of appearances. She paid the bartender in shells, the average currency for the Gold Ring, before she headed towards the door to make her exit. She swore to herself quietly. That was nothing short of a waste of time. The real killer was that there was going to be an exorbitant amount of wasting time before she had any hopes of finding her ever-elusive target.

I don't even have a name for my target, she realized. If I at least had a name, I'd know who to ask about and could figure this out so much more easily. She assumed General Silves would have given a name if she knew it, but it was understandable that she did not. This wasn't the first time she had heard the General order someone to be brought to her. In fact, it was rather common, come to think of it. The only unusual aspect of this case was that the target was not a sergal who had devoted themselves to the way of Judda, as it was well known that Silves seemed to have a particular affinity for those, but rather an agudner who seemed to defy nearly every description given of a normal person of his kind. Perhaps that was the reason for why Silves wanted him brought to her - another trophy to add to her spoils. She silently snarled to herself. If that were the case, she would be investigating something that a captain of a specialized unit should not have to be investigating. How she knew this person was even real and not a daydream remained lost to Fenicia. She had to investigate this regardless of his existence, and it really didn't matter how the General knew if he even existed or not, nor did it matter why she needed him - orders were orders.

And no sane person ever disobeyed General Silves' orders.