balto vs raven: worst birthday ever!!!

Story by aleuandtaku2016 on SoFurry

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this is my new story let me know in the comments on who you thought should of won and who u like better balto or raven i love to her ur guys thoughts anyway i think i did good with this story anyway enjoy the story and always stay cool bye :33333333333.


after aleu and the pack see balto's return aleu gives the word out that balto is home and to get on with the party. in aleu's cave aleu jenna balto raven and taku have a convasation. aleu looks at the tired out wolf dog as he was siting down skinny and panting from exsaustion aleu breaks the scilence with a so dad how are you why was you gone for so long balto lifts his head up but does not say a word. he then looks at raven then growls loud. jenna looks at balto then tells raven to go so nothing happens. raven gets up to get some food at the party then balto says'' so black wolf how is my ex wife in bed huh you wife steeler''. jenna turns around then growls in a leave him alone face. raven the looks at the wolf dog then says to him in a low but pissed of voice'' first of all we thought you was dead if you knew you was gone for so long its ovious she will find a new mate'' the black wolf turns around the walks with out another sound. jenna gets up in pain alittle because she is pregnet she walks to raven than they both leave the cave without another word or sound. lilac,rose and tatsumo ( aleu and taku's pups) jump on balto saying hi grandpa but nova hides behind his dad taku. balto gets up and growls then walks slowly then gets out the cave then runs to were the party was then starts breaking and trowing things. he growls out jennas name and says" ur dead you stupid red husky!!!!!!!" jenna gets scared then runs into her cave raven runs to her until balto grabs ravens tail then trows him. aleu and taku run to help steele wakes up with his son stormy then sees the chaos then he sees rose then ask the pink wolf dog and says " honey whats going on here??''. rose out of breath tells her mate that balto came home and he is going nuts because jenna has a new mate. aleu howls to the ack there is nothing they can do raven and balto has to fight for jenna the winner has jenna as a mate. thats how it works in the pack the ack and the family watches and jenna seats on a ledge watching them. raven and balto circle each other then balto jumps then grabs ravens neck raven grabs baltos tail then fligs him. balto crashes into a rock twisting his left back leg. raven paints alittle then runs and bits baltos back until the big wolf dog grabs ravens front paw with all his might then trows him into a lake. raven gets out then slashes baltos eye off balto howls in pain then gags out blood raven grabs baltos neck and trows balto into a rock bashing his skull open. balto lays there bleeding aleu looks then runs to her dad then grabs him tearing alittle then ask some pack members to help then they rush balto to nome for him not to die. raven then looks at jenna then falls tierd then jenna was sad about balto but walks to raven licking him but then she saw her party was distroyed jenna sighs but her and raven go into there cave to sleep. meanwhile aleu runs then gets to nome she looks for the vet hospital nome has now then aleu scratches at the door until the doc opens the door then sees her he looks and says " wow i remember you ur um rosy's dogs pup oh ur dad is hurt let me take him''. aleu sighs then looks at the sky then tears alittle then says '' aniu plz watch over my dad if he does not make it''. aleu then walks home sad but happy that her mom still has her love and so when her mom gives birth in 8 more months they will have there real dad.

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