The Fall Of Max
The Fall of Max Chapter One: Starting Out
Story © Michael .B ( Max The Wolf [YS] LT_Max_W_Charger [FA] )
Disclaimer: This story contains some mature content and is not to be viewed by those under 17, 18, 21 depending on where ya live.
Authors Note: This was my VERY VERY first story I ever started writing back when I first came to Yiff Star... there is no remodeling in it...I am sure there is grammar and Spelling errors...but this is a sample of my OLD work to show just how far I have come in my writing skills. There is actually a small bit of remodeling but its so minor it don't matter. I do hope ya like it.
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Story Theme: Perfect Insanity - Disturbed
Max's Theme: Indestructible - Disturbed
Story Started: 8-10-2005 Finished for site: 9-4-2009
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A young wolf walked through the door of a dock side Bar and Grill on a cold dark rainy night. His black, white, gray fur only showed on his arms, face, ears, tail, and chest. The rest of his fur was covered by his blue jeans, white V-neck Tee shirt with cut off sleeves, and his black work boots. His ears twitched slightly as his ice-blue eyes scanned the bar slowly, then he made his way to the bar. He noticed that the place was full of demons, foxes, canines, vampires, felines dragons, and other Wolves like himself but ranging in different fur, eye, and hair color. His eyes fell upon a Beautiful red Vixen with pink hair, and Green eyes. He slowly walked up to her, then held out his hand. " Hello. The names Max, and you are.?" he said slowly.
The young Vixen took his hand softly, and giggled. " I'm Vixy." she replied slowly.
Max smiled softly. " Such a beautiful name for a Beautiful lady like you." he said.
Vixy smiled with a light blush. " Thank you." she said as she tried to hide the blushing.
" Would you like to join me for a drink?" Max asked as he glanced at the bar slightly, but kept his eyes on hers to see what she would do. " Sure. Sounds good to me." she spoke as she stood up from her chair.
"Great." Max said as he took her to the bar, and ordered a glass of Red Wine, and a glass of Vodka. Max handed the wine to Vixy as he picked up his drink, and smiled. " Cheers." Max said softly.
"Cheers." Vixy replied with a smile, and took a drink of the wine.
After a few hours of talking Max's cell phone rang. "hmm...who is it at this time.?" he said slowly as he answered the cell. A little time later he hung up the phone and put it back in his jacket pocket.
"Who was that if you don't mind me asking?" Vixy said slowly as she looked at him.
"The boss....look Vixy....I have to go...I do hope we can see one another some time later on." Max said slowly with a smile.
" Sure sounds fine...sides...what do you do as your job?" she replied.
Max made his way to the door and smirked softly. "I'm a Cop. I work for the Miami Police Department." he said as he walked out the door.
Later that day in the low run down parts of town in a old apartment building a Russian gang sat at a table talking. "So what's so dangerous about a stupid kid?" said a strongly built man who's name was Kane.
"Because he was able to take out a fully trained attack team." said the leader that was named Pat Penske. "Also he's a lose cannon at times." he said once more.
"Okay so how do we get rid of him? Walk up to him and ask him to stand still and say cheese so we can pop a cap in his head.?!" Kane said slightly amused by him self.
" No we wait for the right time to strike." replied Pat Penske as he looked through Max's profile.
"Do you think it'll work sir?" said Kane slowly as he leaned back in his chair, and messed with the clip of his Desert Eagle magnum.
"Yes I'm sure it'll work. Do you take me for a fool?!" Pat Penske snapped as he glared at Kane.
"No Sir it's just that... Never mind we'll do it your way." Kane slowly said as he stood up and walked out the door. The rest in the room stayed silent as they watched Kane leave.
Over the time Max was walking around a where-house crime scene, his duel 9mm Custom Berettas at his side. "So... what happened here Captain.?" he said slowly as he looked around at the bloody body's on the floor in pools of blood.
A young gray female Wolf stood behind him wherein blue-green jeans, a pink tee-shirt, a black wool vest, and a pare of white sneakers. "I don't know, but who ever done this was a professional." she said as she looked at Max.
He slowly sighed as he turned to her. "This is going to be fun.. What next. A horde of clowns out to kill my ass?" he spoke to her sarcastically with a laugh.
She laughed lightly with him "Maybe.. you never know now days." she said. Max slowly looked around once more, and growled under his breath.
"So do you want the case?" the Captain asked slowly.
"Yes I want this case... who ever did this is the one that killed my sister." he replied sharply.
She slowly nodded as she crossed her arms behind her back. Max slowly walked out of the where-house, and over to his Black Ford F-250 4x4 pickup truck with a 5 inch lift kit, and mud tires on it. He slowly looked back at the crime scene once more, remembering the bitter memory of seeing his sister's lifeless body on the kitchen floor, still in her white night gown, a bullet hole in her chest, laying in a pool of her own blood, her blue eyes staring blankly at the roof, her gold blonde hair with white highlights stained with blood. The memory making his blood boil, he clinched his fists, and growled. "I'll find who ever did it to you Teria.. I swore I'll make him pay." he said as he opened the truck door, and got in.
That night at a club called The Den Of Inequity, Pat Pensky was sitting at his normal table in the back with a bottle of Scotch. "That fool Kane. Always trigger happy, and never thinking. Soon he'll get us all in jail or killed." he said as he watched Kane stand at the dance platform watching the pole dancer. "Why did I hire him any ways?" he said under his breath.
The time passed slowly, then the club was closeting, Pat Pensky, and Kane were the last one's to leave. The night was a bitter cool, the breeze light and soft, the moon shined brightly in the dark sky. Max was walking home from the Police HQ, his gold badge was clipped to his belt, and the light from the light poles shined off the finely polished gold. He always seen the police work as doing the right thing and fallow the rules, but he was different. He was the reckless kind, always shooting first, and takeing names last. His ways were different than the other PD officers, one was his wild and crazy ideas of fun. They say once he tackled a suicide bomber off the edge of a sky scraper. No one knows where he or his sister came from. Max was always devoted to tacking care of Teria, and also working to keep the rent on the house paid, wile Teria stayed home most of the time, and visited Max at the PD, and bringing him lunch. Over time they have become inseparable. After Teria's death he went past a mental breakdown, and was put in a rehab center for two years.
Max stepped up to the front door of his house, he fumbled through his keys looking for the right one. "Damn it.. where is it?!" he growled as he found the key and opened the door. He made his way to the stairs, and then went to his room, then laid down on the bed, and laid his keys on the table near the bed. He closed his eyes slowly and rested his head on his arm and sighed. The memories of Teria laying by his side sleeping peacefully, snuggling him like a big teddy bear. Shortly after he laid down he fell deep asleep, his Berettas under his pillows, and his tail hanged over the edge of the bed limply. Hours passed through the night to the morning. Max slowly waked up , and looked at the alarm clock as it glowed red saying 6:00am. Mean wile back at the apartment Pat Pensky was sitting in the livening room with the rest of the members of the mob. "It's official... Max is looking in to his sisters death more." Pat Pensky said slowly
"It was great seeing her on the floor slowly dieing.. I enjoyed every moment of it." Kane said as he laughed lightly.
"You know she had no part in this!!" Pat Pensky growled at Kane.
"So?! Did it matter?!" Kane smirked.
"Yes it dose. You and your damn trigger happy ways are pilling more and more shit on our heads than what we need!!" Pat Pensky yelled as he slammed his fists into the table. All of the people at the table jumped slightly, but Kane stayed still.
"Yak yak that's all you do old man. My family nor I are going to take orders from any one!" Kane simply said still with a sick twisted smile on his face. " I'm goanna do as I damn well please, so you can Screw off!" he said once more.
"GET OUT!!" Pat Pensky yelled as he pointed at the door.
"Your going to regret this Pensky!" Kane growled as he stormed out of the apartment.
Max was walking down the street slowly, his eyes on the cold gray concrete, the sight of his sister still fresh in his mind. " I should have been there Teria.. I'm so so sorry." he said softly as he made his was to the park where they spent there time at the lake, and played. " Reports say a black BMW M-5 was seen accost the street. Only Rocky from the Yakusaka gang owns that car, and Pat Pensky also." he said as he stood at the lakes edge. "Time to pay my old friend Rocky a Visit." he smirked as he made his way to Rockies hide out in a abandoned mining company, his Berettas fully loaded, and ready. After a few hours he stepped up to the gate of the mining company, he looked around seeing no one around. "Hm I wonder if they wouldn't mind if I let myself in." Max smirked with a grin as he opened the gate, and stepped inside. As soon as he stepped in, the gat slammed shut behind him, and a horde of Rockies armed thugs came from out of no where. "Nice welcoming committee." Max said as he dived behind a car as the thugs opened fire. " Oh shit it's party time.!" he yelled as he jumped out and fired back.
After the last thug dropped, and the last bullet casing hit the floor, he was standing at the front of Rockies door. He kicked the door open and looked at Rocky as he sat at his desk. " I liked the welcoming party. But a few people got hurt." Max said as he reloaded his guns, and walked over to Rocky. Rocky sat in his chair dressed in Black slacks, a blue shirt, a black jacket, and beside him stood a large Wolf demon standing at lest 8' 11'', and was dressed in Green jeans, and a gray tank-top. The demons eyes burned blood red, all of his fur was solid black.
"Ah glad you had fun Mr. Connor. Is it? Although I'm sorry to say that my Friend here has to break every bone in your body." Rocky said as he snapped his fingers, and the demon slowly made its way toward Max.
"Um. who's going to get busted?" he said as he kicked the demon in the chest sending it out the window and to the ground below, impaling it on some spikes.
"Hm maybe I was wrong. What do you want to know?" Rocky said.
"I want to know why you killed my sister." Max said as he pulled the hammers on his guns back.
"Whoa!! Hold on a second kid. I didn't kill your sister." Rocky said.
"How can I trust you Rocky?" Max replied slowly, as he started getting frustrated.
" Try Pat Pensky." Rocky said as he reached for the Uzi-9mm Sub Machine gun under the desk.
"Sure." Max replied.
Rocky grinned as he quickly drew the Uzi, but before he got off a shot 6 rounds from Max's Duel Berettas hammered into Rockies chest.
"Thanks." Max said as Rockies gun fell to the floor, and Max made his way to Pat Pensky's place. Max got in his truck and drove down the street with the Sirens on his truck on. By now night had fell upon the city, the blue and red lights from the sirens reflected off the finely polished paint of the truck. It only took him a half an hour to reach Pat Pensky, and make his way inside to where he was. The room was cold, as the night air blew in through the open window. "This is really getting old." Max said as he drew his guns.
" I know why your here... it's about your sisters death. Well it was all Kane's doing. I swore." Pat Pensky said as he held his hands up.
" Last person that said that tried to kill me." Max replied as he kept his guns aimed.
" What I tell you is the truth," Pat Pensky said.
"Fine." Max said as he walked out of the apartment.
Kane was sitting down town near the Town Hall watching Vixy work at her desk. Kane grinned as he walked into the building, his Desert Eagle under his jacket. "Vixy." Kane slowly said as he drawled his gun.
Vixy slowly turned around, her eyes landing on Kane's gun. "Y-y-yes?" she slowly said, her mind racing as she stood there shaking.
"Play time." Kane said as he pulled the trigger. The bullet hammered into Vixy chest, ripping a hole through her heart. Her eyes widened as she fell to the floor slowly then fell to her side dead. Kane grinned as he walked out, and disappeared into the darkness.
A little later on Max stopped in to the town hall to look at some files. Max slowly opened the door and saw Vixy body on the floor, and rushed over to her. "Vixy." he slowly said as he kneeled down next to the body. He called in to the Hospital , and to the police HQ, then slowly walked out and growled. " It's time to end this." Max said slowly as he got into his truck. " I have a good idea on where he's at." he said as he drove to the ship yard.
Lucky for him the Highway went over the water to the island on the other side of the bay, and was next to the Docks. "Risky Antics." Max said as he drove his truck off the side of the highway. As the truck's tires left the road he knew that if he missed he would be part of the ship's side hull. He smirked as he felt the front tires of the truck hit well on the inside of the ships edge, but the force sent the back of the truck up into the air, making the front of the truck slide across the ships deck. The truck slowly flipped all the way over onto its roof, and slid at lest 200 feet into a stack of box's. "well.....that was fun." Max said as he slowly crawled out of the truck and stood up slowly as he wiped the glass off his jacket and pants. "Now to find Kane." he said as he drew his guns, and made his was down into the ships Cargo Hold.
As he got into the holds he looked around at all the crates that was filled to the top with boxes of vast and powerful weapons. "Whoa....never in my life have I seen so many weapons in one spot before." Max said slowly.
"Glad you like my little collection." Kane said as he stepped out of the darkness behind Max.
"Yeah.....but not the point....why did you kill my sister.?" Max replied slowly.
"Just for the fun of it. Sides it was fun seeing her die. It almost made me cry." Kane said with a smirk.
"Your a sick twisted freak!" Max snapped as he aimed his Berettas.
"Ah....Thank you for the nice comment." Kane said slowly. Max opened fire, the gunshots sounding like close range Tank Cannons firing, the sounds ringing in his ears. Much to his surprise Kane stood untouched.
"Hmm....so...your not the same like others." Max said slowly as he lowered his guns.
"Right...I was one of your fathers Students for this power..." Kane replied as he drew his gun and fired.
Max dodged the bullet quickly with ease, and smirked. "Is that so....did he teach you how to defend agents this.?!" he grinned as Black lightning surged around his hands. Kane remained silent, and unsure about what has just happened. Max growled as he made a black ball of lightning form in front of him. "Cya in hell Kane." he said as he unleashed the strong ball of energy at Kane.
Kane was caught in a tight trap as the ball struck him in the chest engulfing him in flames.
" I'll be back just you wait.!" Kane said as he degenerated into nothing.
" Yeah yeah yeah....that's what they all say." Max smirked as he walked out of the ship.
Max laid in bed sleeping, since he decided to sleep in today, it was now the 21st of October Year 2368A.D. Strangely Max would get a rude wake-up call soon. A small Earthquake ran through the city quickly on a scale of 0 to 1 only causing small damage, but was strong enough to knock Max out of bed. He hit the floor with a thick thud, then jumped to his feet, and looked around.
"That was strange. I don't remember Earthquakes this time of year." he said slowly as he walked to the closet and grabbed his cloths. He quickly got dressed, he put on a pare of Black jeans, a black Tee-shirt, his jacket, and boots. He then made his way to the front door, as he checked his guns, and clipped his badge to his belt. "Lets see what the hell happened out here." he said slowly as he opened the door and stepped out into the street. As he looked around nothing was damaged but strangely that wasn't even half of his problems. He soon found out that no one was around. "What the fucks going on here?!" Max said slowly as he walked down the street. He spent about an hour walking around on the empty streets looking for any one, but found no one. "Oh god.....this reminds me of that move called 28 Days Later....fffffrrrrreeeeeeaaaakkkkyyyy..." Max said slowly as he walked to the park. Some thing hit him on the nose softly and he looked around. "Hm?" he slowly thought then looked at what hit him on the nose and saw a small flake of snow. "What? Snow?! This time of year...no way...this can't be..." he said as he stared in disbelief as it started to snow. "Good thing I have fur." Max smirked as he walked down the paths in the park.
Nothing seamed to be going right for Max as he made his way to a small diner. He slowly pushed the doors open, and stepped inside. At this time night had fell, and Max had seen no body around all day, not even any kind of life step for him self of course. Max made his way to the counter, and looked around at the empty place. " Great...just Fuck'n GREAT!!" Max snarled then a shadow in the back of the kitchen caught his eye. "Hm...what's this?" he said slowly as he made his way to the kitchen, as he kept his eyes on the shadow that looked very strange. Max then crouched low to the floor as he though of a way to over take this thing, then lunged at the shadow full force, but much to his surprise the shadow retaliated for his actions. The shadow sent a heavy slap to the left side of Max's face, fallowed by a uppercut punch witch sent him crashing into the side of the stove. "WHAT THE!?!?!" Max yelled. Then the shadow smirked as it stepped over to him then leaned down.
"Is that how you greet your own sister Max." the shadow said slowly.
"My own Sister.......?...Teria?" Max slowly said as he looked at the shadow, and saw Teria looking at him.
"Yep. It's me." Teria said softly.
"How did you know how to fight.?" Max said once more.
"I did a little training on the side wile you worked." Teria smiled.
"Great....my own sister kicked my ass." Max smirked then stood up slowly and dusted his cloths off.
" I won't tell." Teria said as she watched him.
"So where have you been all theses years....last I remember you died." Max said as he looked at her slowly.
"What you saw was a fake." she said softly. Max stayed silent then looked back to the front door.
"Lets.....not talk about that....besides.....I'm...glad your here..." he then said slowly.
"So why are you still here in town.?" Teria slowly asked as she crossed her arms.
Max looked at her slightly then sighed. "I don't know." he slowly replied.
Teria watched him slowly, then took his hand in hers and smiled. "At least we're together again." she said.
"Yeah." Max replied. "You know. I can't get over our parents just leavening us." Max said once more as he looked at her.
"Yeah...still confuses me too." Teria replied.
Max shook his head slowly then looked at her once more. "Lets forget about it....all that matters is us...Brother and Sister." he said softly as he started toward the door. Teria nodded as she fallowed him closely.
Max pushed open the doors, and stepped onto the street, the moon shined brightly in the night sky, the stars marking there spots. "Such a beautiful night." Teria smiled as she looked at the sky.
"Yeah....I just wonder how long it will last." Max replied as he walked down the street.
"What do you mean.?" Teria asked slightly confused.
"Never mind. it's nothing to worry about." Max said slowly.
As they walked down the street nothing had changed. The snow was falling heavier now as if to get it all out before the end. Max slowly sighed as the snow now covered both him and Teria.
"Max....why is it snowing this time of year?" Teria asked him as she looked at all the snow.
"I don't know. Your guess is as good as mine." he replied slowly as he kept her hand in his. "Do you think this is the end?" Teria slowly said as she looked at her hand in his.
"We won't know that till it happens Teria....Lets...just hope it don't come to that. okay?" Max slowly said as he glanced at her. Teria nodded slowly as she smiled softly.
"Okay." She replied. Max looked at his watch slightly and sighed.
"I wonder if any one's left.." he slowly said as he shot a glance at his Berettas.
Teria looked at him slightly. "Maybe...you never know if you don't look.... so ....lets look around for some one." she said with a giggle as if it was going to be fun. Max only smirked then smiled.
"Sounds good. Lets go." he said as he broke into a jog.
Teria laughed as she followed him at the same pace. The night air was a bitter cold, the snow covered the streets, and buildings. Things were different now, more like a second chance in life. Max was going to make the most and best of it.
Some where in the city a dark Creature leered, in search for a certain person with a rare power. The Creature stood at lest 5 foot 7 inches. Strangely enough the Creature looked like Max all the way down to the Black Dragon witch was burned into his fur when he was young. On the creature's gold collar was the name Mark engraved in the finally polished metal. The creature walked out of a dark alley in front of Max and Teria, and looked at them slowly. Max slid to a stop and looked at the creature with wide eyes. "NO FUCKN WAY!!! MARK?!?!" he yelled as he pushed Teria behind him.
Mark grinned with a nod, then snarled. "Time to die brother." Mark said slowly.
"Bring it on Mark.!" Max replied as he held up his fists. As they both stared each other down Max smirked. "Teria. You might want to move back a safe distance. This is going to get ugly." he said slowly as lightning surged around his arms. Teria nodded as he moved back. Both Max and Mark ran at one another, then struggled in locked fists as they fought to bring one of them to there knees. The gold collar on Max's neck glowed softly , then white lightning surged through it. " Time to AMP! IT! UP!" he smirked as his body was surrounded by white light, then Mark moved back and did the same.
"LAST STRIKE!!!!!!" they both yelled at the same time unleashing a bright beam of white light, with black lightning spinning around it. Both beams hit at the same time in the middle making a small ball in front of them. Both of them increased the power they put into the attack, and the ball slowly grew bigger and bigger till it engulfed both Max, Mark, and Teria. A loud explosion roared through the air as the ball of light and lightning flashed and disappeared into nothing, but no one was left.
5 days passed in witch felt like only a short time, Max was laying on his back in the middle of some grass-lands, he slowly opened his eyes, and looked up at the blue sky.
"Wha-Wha-What? Where....am I?" he slowly said as he sat up and looked around. "TERIA!!!!!" Max yelled as he looked around not seeing her any where. Max slowly stood up and made his way through the grass-lands. He walked for at least 4 days with out food or water, he reached a town at around 3 in the morning. By this time his body was so weak that he could barely keep walking, Eventually he fell into a back alley of the busy city passed out cold. A short time later a young Vixen came across him, her blue eyes looking at him slightly. She took Max to her house in the woods out side of the town, and laid him down on the bed softly and nursed him back to health. another 2 days passed slowly before Max slowly came around from his comma like state. He could hear 2 people talking in the background , and he felt a hand on his fore-head, and he could make out that the voices were from both a male and female.
" His fever has went away...witch is a good thing... lets hope he wakes up soon." the female voice said.
"He will... Sides you did all you can for the moment...let him do the rest." the male voice said in reply.
"Ugh......" those were the first words that came from Max as he slowly opened his eyes. His vision swam into focus, and he saw the 2 people standing at the side of the bed looking at him. "Where.....am. I? Who...are you?" Max said slowly as he found his voice.
" I'm Vixy." said the Vixen witch found Max in the alley.
"And I am James." the second person said slowly. "You were out for at least 2 days. I'm amazed you made it past the high fever you had...and also from the near starvation." James said as he looked at Max with his arms crossed.
"How. did I end up here?" Max said slowly.
" I found you passed out in a back alley." Vixy said softly.
Max slowly struggled to sit up and looked at the Black dragon burned into his left arm then looked back to Vixy and James. "What's today's date?" he said slowly.
"It's July 3rd 2,370AD." Vixy said slowly. "Why.?".
"....2...years...has passed.......since...." Max stopped dead, and bowed his head.
"Hmm...so...its true....your names Max right?" James said as he stepped up to Max.
"Yeah.....yeah I am... why do you want to know?" Max replied as he looked at James.
"People have been talking about you over the years. some say you have been abandoned by your family along with your sister.. Teria I be leave was her name." James said as he slowly uncrossed his arms.
"How did you know about all of that?!" Max said completely surprised that some one he didn't know or at least thought he didn't know have known so much about him.
"I know what you are Max.. You are a Dragon Of Heaven." James slowly said.
Max sat there silently before slowly getting out of the bed. "Hm.. Well that makes as much difference as mud." Max smirked as he made his way to the bathroom. James watched Max slowly as he crossed his arms once more.
"There's some spare cloths you can use in the closet that might fit you." Vixy said as she walked to the door of the bedroom.
"Err...thanks......but....can you tell me one thing Vixy.?" he replied as he took off his shirt and looked at his collar around his neck in the mirror and sighed.
"And what is that?" Vixy said slowly as she turned back to him.
"Why am I here.? Dose "this" have any connection to all of this?" Max said as he ran his finger over the black dragon.
"That's for you to find out on your own Max...you just might find your family." Vixy said with a soft sigh as she walked out of the room. James fallowed her slowly and closed the door silently behind him.
Max slowly glanced out of the bathroom then looked back at his reflection. "I have no family.... I'm all that's left....or.....at least I think so." he said slowly as he then undressed and took a much needed shower.
Half an hour later Max walked down the stairs to the livening room of the house slowly, wherein blue jeans, a gray long sleeve shirt, and his jacket. He slowly made his way to the front door and opened it slowly.
"And where are you going?" James said as he stood behind Max from out of nowhere.
"I'm moving on...I need to find out my past. And about my family...if I even have one." Max replied slowly.
"Stay here till you get your feet back on the ground.. Sides...we need some company after our son's went traveling the world two years ago." James said as he stepped up and placed his hand on Max's shoulder.
(To Be Continued....Maybe.)
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Ending Theme: Forgot About Dre - Dr. Dre and Eminem (I'm getting sloppy I know. Lol. -'- -_- -'- Eat Me. )