Land of Discord Prologue: A Bizarre Adventure

Story by seraphor12 on SoFurry

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#1 of Land of Discord

This is my another attempt on using a first person perspective in a story. Enjoy!


"Segara, shoot that thing, now!"

Segara shot a sharp laser beam through that abomination. He had one hell of an accuracy to shot it through the head, with a simulated gun fashioned from clawed hand of Mythar.

Liza quickly stepped aside and jumped over the monster's body to get a good start before she opened her wings. It was enough to propel her up some inches to attack the flying giant bat and sliced it in half with her sword on hand. She was too pre-occupied on that particular monster that she didn't notice another monster trying to attack her. When she realized it too late, Hal stood it and breathed fresh fire from his mouth, incinerating that...thing into crisps.

"Thanks for the save, Hal."

"Well, thank me later, Liz, there's more coming. Daddy needs help."

Liza rushed to her father, occasionally making a spin to hit some of the smaller mutants that were trying to separate her from the rest of the group. The mutants were also in the mercy of Kleiser with his bazooka and assortment of techs.

The star of this fight, however, was Argeloth. The undead bone dragon was blasting away many oppositions that came, especially the bigger ones that the smaller races weren't able to fight. Still, it was disturbing when he was shooting rainbows instead of a proper laser shot. Those rainbows were deadly.

But then, before long, they couldn't continue. The group soon became exhausted and were surrounded by a horde of mutants, monsters, abominations, etc. Even Argeloth started to feel exhausted and was struggling to keep the spiritual magic that bind his body together.

"Guys," said Hal. "Any ideas?"

"We should've had one when we were surrounded like this," said Rohn. "Subterfuge won't help us this time."

"Okay...we're fucked."

Let's stop the prologue here, alright? I don't really want to spoil everything that is supposed to be the climax of this story. Not to mention you guys (yes, you!) don't happen to know what leads to this part of the story. The writer just want you to see the action the first moment you read it, but continuing that can spoil the rest of the story. So be patient, okay?

Some of you might be wondering why this story has a lot of weird, non-fantasy stuff. What is a Mythar? Why is a bone dragon shooting rainbow laser? Why is there even someone using a bazooka? What's weird, why is Segara shooting lasers through his fingers? Who is even narrating this story and talking to you guys while the scene paused (just imagine you are watching a crappy action fantasy movie...in your head!)?

Guess you need to know more, huh? Let me tell you this, though. This may look like a typical action fantasy story you are reading, but it is not contained in any of the established universe this writer has made. No, it's not in a world where dragons and humans live together or a furry and scalie space opera. This is an entirely different universe!

But what makes this no different than the others? You'll be surprised how wacky and bizarre this adventure can be, especially if you are hearing this from me.