Roller-Coaster Ride

Story by Tayu on SoFurry

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#4 of Otter Twins

Two mischievous otter brothers decide to do some things that are liable to get you kicked out of an amusement park.


Christ. Talk about speed-writing. I did this in about 40 minutes while waiting for a friend to get back online. This was a suggestion from a friend of mine, Sharu. You can go check out his sexy Ampharos-ass at www.furaffinity.net/user/Sharu.

Hope you all enjoy it! I had a lot of fun writing this. It's a bit rushed, but I just wanted some practice.

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Joseph screamed and kept his eyes shut as he was hurtled into the air. Beneath his silvery-grey fur his skin had paled and his knuckles were white as he dug his fingers into his chest restraint. "I HATE THIS!!" he screamed, chest heaving quickly as fear drove his adrenaline levels high.Besides him, Kaleb had his eyes open and took in the sights of the amusement park hundreds of feet below.

The Detonator was a large tower of a ride that strapped people in and then fired them up into the air almost two hundred feet. The g-forces were incredible to experience, and the drop back down was even more terrifying than the shot upwards. From the top you could see all the park's roller-coasters, the attached water-park, the parking lots, the highway... if you had your eyes open.

Joseph did not like heights, and could barely tolerate some of the roller-coasters, but Kaleb had convinced him to get on it all the same. The grey otter kept his eyes squeezed shut, tears forming in the corner of his eyes as he felt his stomach drop out as they plummeted back towards the ground. He felt a paw brush against his own and he grabbed onto it, squeezing hard.

Kaleb winced as his twin tried to choke the life from his right paw, but he squeezed it reassuringly. "YOU'RE GONNA BE OKAY!" he shouted back through the roar of other screams and the rushing wind.

Joseph wasn't entirely convinced and was just glad that they hadn't eaten anything before coming to the park because it would be all over himself about now.

As the ride finally came back down to earth and touched back down Joseph released Kaleb's paw. There were a few tears on his cheeks and he looked flustered, but smiled weakly at his brother as the restraints lifted off. "Never again. Ever. At all." he said firmly, standing on shaky legs as they followed the others towards the exit of the line.

Kaleb draped an arm over Joseph and gave him a sideways hug as they walked. "Oh alright. Thanks for coming with me," he said, sighing happily.

The twins had graduated from high school the previous week and did well enough that their parents rewarded them with a short vacation out of town. Alone. Two plane tickets to another city and some spending cash to take in sights and have fun. They'd been having the time of their life so far and Joseph had managed to convince Kaleb to come to Tribute Park. They'd done well enough on most of the rides so far, but the Detonator seemed to be a bit too much for Joseph.

"I think I need a moment," the grey otter said, stepping over to a small retaining wall and sitting down. "Oh... my god. I'm not going to be able to walk right after that,"

"Oh please," Kaleb said, rolling his eyes. "You took donkey-boy in the showers before gym and still managed to run the mile faster than I could, and you think a little amusement park ride is gonna make your knees weak?" he asked.

Joseph, glanced around before leaning in and kissing his brother's nose, smirking. "Shut up," he said. "Besides, that was different. I'm used to that. Well, not him specifically, but you know what I mean," he said.

Despite being twins, they didn't look much alike at a quick glance. Kaleb kept his natural brown fur, and his hair cut short in homage of a pop singer he favored. Joseph dyed his fur almost a year ago to a silvery-grey and had it touched up every few months; he's also let his hair grow out until it was a few inches past his shoulders, and kept it in a ponytail. Early in their high school career they'd discovered their bodies, and then each others, and it was no longer awkward, at least to them, for them to wind up in one provocative or taboo situation. Though they retained enough common sense to keep it quiet. Here, at least, no one would know they were related.

"Come on, let's go on that one," Kaleb said, standing up and pointing off at a ride down the path from them. "VIKING VOYAGE" it said in all caps with a heavily decorated font.

Joseph groaned and shook his head. "Come on, I need a moment to relax before you try to kill me again," he said.

"It's a log ride. I don't think you even need a seat belt for it. It'll be plenty relaxing," Kaleb begged, tugging at one of Joseph's arms.

The grey otter acquiesced and stood up, allowing himself to be pulled along towards the Ride's pavilion. There was a sign with all the rules and height requirements as well as a sign showing that it was a five minute ride.

"See?" Kaleb said, pointing at the sign. "Five minutes. No way it'll be stressful if it's that long," the brown otter said as if that proved his point.

Joseph watched as roughly four people were put into each ride and then glanced at the line they were in. It'd be a decent wait, which gave him an idea. "You don't think it'll be stressful?" he asked.

"Nope," Kaleb replied.

Joseph slipped a paw down between them and grabbed the front of Kaleb's gym shorts, fingers wrapping around the otter's shaft through the loose material. "I bet I can change your mind," he said.

Kaleb's eyes went wide and he glanced back and forth to make sure no one saw, but it didn't appear anyone had. "Wh-what, hey, we're in public!" he husked quietly, leaning close to Joseph and looking flustered.

"You didn't seem to care when we were with Danny at the restaurant. Poor fox got all worked up and came all over himself right there in the booth." Joseph made an overly-dramatic cooing noise at his twin as his paw stroked the hardening bulge in his shorts.

The brown otter's face flushed and he grit his teeth together, shuffling forward through the line as his cock continued to stiffen. "Th-that was different," he breathed, eyes narrowed.

"Why, because it wasn't happening to you?" Joseph asked.

"Yes!" Kaleb said. Despite his spoken objections, though, he made no move to pull away or stop his twin, and Joseph took full advantage.

It wasn't long before nearly eight inches of otter cock were pressing against the front of Kaleb's shorts, and Joseph was able to slide his fingers up and down over his uncut head, sliding the foreskin back and forth and teasing more pre out into the fabric. Teasing was a two way street, though, and Joseph had to readjust his own shaft as it firmed up in excitement.

They continued to shuffle through the line until they were at the front of the line. Joseph pulled his paw away and Kaleb pulled his shirt down over the bulge to hide it from view as best he could. The ride had small "shuttles" made to resemble hollowed out logs, and they were ushered into one by themselves and send off down a small river at a decent pace.

As soon as they were around the first bend Joseph made his next move. He grabbed the back of Kaleb's shorts with one paw and used his other to shove Kaleb forward on the bench.

"What?!" Kaleb said in a startled voice as he was forced forward, having to grab the front of the ride in order not to fall completely. His breath caught in his throat and his paws squeezed the edge of the log as he felt something hard press up under his tail. "W-wait! We're on a ride! I don't have lube! It's only five minutes! You can't!" he was saying hurriedly, voice higher than normal and anxious.

Joseph didn't give Kaleb much more time to consider his options before he pushed forward, lubed only by a bit of his own saliva and pre. The waistband of his shorts were tugged under his balls and despite Kaleb resisting his initial thrust, his member pushed in and continued until his hips were flush with Joseph's.

"Fffuck..." Kaleb growled, rolling his head to the side and wincing at the pain. It stung quite a bit, but that didn't stop his own shaft from giving a needy throb in his shorts.

Without lube it stung for the grey otter as well, but Kaleb's passage was squeezing down hard enough to milk more pre from his balls, and soon he found himself rocking his hips back and forth along the bench beneath them.

Time was of the essence, though, and Joseph knew it. He'd been with his brother enough times to know how to get them both off quickly if they were pressed for time, and even on this log ride, he was able to thrust deep into the brown otter in front of him.

Kaleb let his face roll back and forth on his hands and clenched his teeth at the rough treatment. Joseph was good at pushing just the right areas to satisfy them both and his breathing was already erratic. As good as it felt he knew it wouldn't get him off alone, but at the awkward angle he couldn't afford to let a paw move down to tease himself.

Joseph glanced up occasionally to make sure they weren't in any danger of reaching the end already. The downward hills were quite enjoyable as it forced him just a bit deeper into Kaleb's passage, and pretty soon he felt his balls pulling close.

He wanted to get Kaleb off with him, but there was no time for everything, and he sped up his thrusts until he shuddered and let out a pleasured moan, leaning against Kaleb's back while his cock unloaded in his twin.

Kaleb felt the pulsing beneath his tail as they started up a rather large hill. He was so close, too! He scooted back against his brother's cock and sat up, basically in Joseph's lap at this point. He fished his shaft out of the legs of his shorts, pre already dripping liberally from under his foreskin.

Joseph squeezed Kaleb back against his chest with one paw, the other bracing them as they climbed the large hill. His afterglow put him in too much of a haze to really notice that this hill was much larger than the others, though, and that the end was so close.

Kaleb must not have realized either in his rush to get off, and he stroked himself feverishly as the log pitched over the apex of the hill, splashing into the water. The sudden downward force prodded Joseph's cock into his prostate and he cried out as his cock fired ropes of cum across the bench they were sitting on, only to be, thankfully, washed away as water splashed over them.

Joseph saw the pavilion ahead and tugged his cock free from Kaleb's passage, tucking himself away and biding the brown otter to do much the same. "And... you thought we wouldn't have enough time," he said, huffing indignantly at his brother.

Kaleb sat up and winced, reaching a paw back to hold his butt. He could already feel a bit of his brother's seed dripping from his abused tail-hole. "Yeah, but christ that hurt. And you were bitching about the Detonator," he muttered.

"I like my own Detonator," the grey otter replied.

The ride came to a halt and the climbed out onto dry ground and followed the path along the side towards a hut that was labeled "PHOTO BOOTH". Both twin's faces blanched as they saw it, not having suspected there to be a photo frame on the ride. "Do... do you think that it... um," Joseph said, glancing at his twin.

Kaleb's muzzle was hanging open a bit and he walked carefully around the corner to peer up at the monitors displacing different pictures. One of the monitors had been turned off and when the rabbit behind the counter saw the pair she blushed and turned away. "Oh god..." Kaleb whispered.

Before Joseph could say anything in reply a large paw clapped down on his shoulder, turning him around, doing the same to Kaleb. A large, built horse was standing there, glaring down at the brothers, a grave expression on his face. He wore a uniform of dark green and blue with the park's insignia emblazoned on the breast above a nameplate reading "Security Officer Brandon Marshall". "Hello, boys. I think the three of us should go have a nice chat down at security," he said sternly. "We'll be sure to have a souvenir from the photo booth waiting for you,"